Section Ⅵ Writing
黑暗中餐
黑暗餐厅吃饭里完全黑暗环境吃饭盲服务员服务想解失明历认吃东西困难活动
吃顿饭难见东西里朋友翻杯子弄掉食物味觉嗅觉变更加敏感吃慢努力猜测吃食物什倒水困难直朋友杯子喝水
叉子叉食物时五分钟失败告终决定手俯身想吃米饭蔬菜相反手伸进碗热浓汤里道菜勺子服务员耳边说帮忙时已晚勺子部分汤头溅衬衫没感尴尬
服务员建议盘子碗举着面部然更加意识盲面挑战旧饿着离开餐馆
假定李华聋哑学校做助教请根点英文写篇作文讲讲助教历
1位失生活信心失聪女孩Jean帮助重拾生活信心
2时遇困难沟通障碍
3克服困难学什
注意
1词数80左右
2适增加细节行文连贯
写作指导
描写次历属记叙事容叙述表达方式文体写作时交代清楚时间(when)点(where)物(who)事件(what)然进步叙述事件(what)原(why)程(how)
1写作时应注意问题
(1)正确运时态常时态般时进行时注意灵活运时态
(2)常第称参者角度进行叙述
(3)重视句子衔接渡词
2写作般步骤
(1)交代次历发生时间点相关物
(2)推动情节发展
(3)介绍历结果谈感想
审题谋篇
词汇储备
1embarrassed adj难堪尴尬
2delightful adj令愉快讨喜欢
3companionship n友谊友交
4upset adj心烦意乱烦恼
5nevertheless adv然
词汇运
1总帮助Jean重拾生活信心次愉快历
On the whole helping Jean restore her confidence in life is a delightful experience
2面困难沟通障碍
The biggest difficulty I faced was the communication barriers
3外切努力建立友谊互相信
Furthermore I made every effort to establish companionship and mutual trust with her
句式升级
1it作形式语改写句(1)
On the whole it is a delightful experience to help Jean restore her confidence in life
2句(2)改强调句
It was the communication barriers that were the biggest difficulty I faced
串句成文
(meanwhile等恰衔接词)
On the whole it is a delightful experience to help Jean restore her confidence in life In my memory the first time we met she was always upset making me embarrassed Meanwhile it was the communication barriers that were the biggest difficulty I faced Nevertheless I made it First I advised her to gather courage to confront the difficulties instead of escaping from them Furthermore I made every effort to establish companionship and mutual trust with her
Fortunately what I got from this experience is that confidence and determination can really contribute to our success and that everyone should be confident about life
阅读面短文根容写篇60词左右容概
Life is filled with challenges As we get older we come to realize that those challenges are the very things that come with friendship
When we are faced with a challenge we usually have two choices we can try to beat it off(击退) or we can decide that the thing presenting the challenge isn＇t worth the trouble and stop doing it Although there are certainly times when stopping is the right thing to do in most cases all that is needed is commitment(投入) and communication
When we are committed to something it means that no matter how painful or how uncomfortable something is we will always choose to face it and work it through instead of running away from it Communication is making space for discussion and talking about how you feel instead of just saying what the other person did wrong If you can say to a friend I got my feelings hurt instead of You hurt my feelings you are going to be able to solve the problem much faster
In dealing with many challenges that friendship will bring to you try to see them for what they are small hurdles(障碍) you need to jump or get over on your way through life Nothing is so big that it is impossible to get over and hurt is only to serve to make us stronger It＇s all part of growing up and it happens to everyone and some day you will look back on all of this and say Hard as it was it made me who I am today And that is a good thing
写作指导
Step 1 通读全文理清结构
旨意文章四段述面挑战迎接挑战身成长益处基确定 challengecommitmentcommunication关键词
文章结构
第段生活中充满挑战挑战伴着友谊出现
第二段面挑战时会做出两种选择勇敢战胜选择逃避更时候需投入沟通
第三段投入工作迎接挑战意味着面问题解决问题沟通意味着讨留出空间避免指责
第四段战胜挑战会更加成熟强挑战帮助成长
Step 2 删繁简提炼点
第段Life is filled with challenges and challenges are the very things that come with friendship
第二段In most cases all that is needed is commitment and communication when we are faced with a challenge
第三段We will always choose to face it and work it through instead of running away from it Communication is making space for discussion and talking about how you feel instead of just saying what the other person did wrong
第四段It＇s all part of growing up and it happens to everyone and some day you will look back on all of this and say Hard as it was it made me who I am today And that is a good thing
Step 3 合改写润色升级
点1Life is full of challenges that come with friendship(原点语义转换)
点2In most cases when dealing with such a challenge commitment and communication are what we need (状语句省略what引导名词性句)
点3Commitment means facing it and working it through while communication means making space for discussion and avoiding blaming others
(choose to face改mean facingsaying what the other person did wrong改blaming others)
点4Remember that challenges actually do us good for they are part of growing up making who we are today (do sb good)
Step 4 联句成篇复查誊写
通读初稿容进行仔细检查方面进行重点审查①写概覆盖原文全部点信息点表达相独立②全文语言没语法词错误文章结构紧凑句连贯通③标点符号运准确单词拼写没错误④词数符合求总词数60左右(少40超80)检查误初稿誊写答卷保持书写规范字迹清晰
Life is full of challenges that come with friendship(点1)In most cases when dealing with such a challenge commitment and communication are what we need (点2)Commitment means facing it and working it through while communication means making space for discussion and avoiding blaming others (点3)Remember that challenges actually do us good for they are part of growing up making who we are today (点4)
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黑暗中餐
黑暗餐厅吃饭里完全黑暗环境吃饭盲服务员服务想解失明历认吃东西困难活动
吃顿饭难见东西里朋友翻杯子弄掉食物味觉嗅觉变更加敏感吃慢努力猜测吃食物什倒水困难直朋友杯子喝水
叉子叉食物时五分钟失败告终决定手俯身想吃米饭蔬菜相反手伸进碗热浓汤里道菜勺子服务员耳边说帮忙时已晚勺子部分汤头溅衬衫没感尴尬
服务员建议盘子碗举着面部然更加意识盲面挑战旧饿着离开餐馆
假定李华聋哑学校做助教请根点英文写篇作文讲讲助教历
1位失生活信心失聪女孩Jean帮助重拾生活信心
2时遇困难沟通障碍
3克服困难学什
注意
1词数80左右
2适增加细节行文连贯
写作指导
描写次历属记叙事容叙述表达方式文体写作时交代清楚时间(when)点(where)物(who)事件(what)然进步叙述事件(what)原(why)程(how)
1写作时应注意问题
(1)正确运时态常时态般时进行时注意灵活运时态
(2)常第称参者角度进行叙述
(3)重视句子衔接渡词
2写作般步骤
(1)交代次历发生时间点相关物
(2)推动情节发展
(3)介绍历结果谈感想
审题谋篇
词汇储备
1embarrassed adj难堪尴尬
2delightful adj令愉快讨喜欢
3companionship n友谊友交
4upset adj心烦意乱烦恼
5nevertheless adv然
词汇运
1总帮助Jean重拾生活信心次愉快历
On the whole helping Jean restore her confidence in life is a delightful experience
2面困难沟通障碍
The biggest difficulty I faced was the communication barriers
3外切努力建立友谊互相信
Furthermore I made every effort to establish companionship and mutual trust with her
句式升级
1it作形式语改写句(1)
On the whole it is a delightful experience to help Jean restore her confidence in life
2句(2)改强调句
It was the communication barriers that were the biggest difficulty I faced
串句成文
(meanwhile等恰衔接词)
On the whole it is a delightful experience to help Jean restore her confidence in life In my memory the first time we met she was always upset making me embarrassed Meanwhile it was the communication barriers that were the biggest difficulty I faced Nevertheless I made it First I advised her to gather courage to confront the difficulties instead of escaping from them Furthermore I made every effort to establish companionship and mutual trust with her
Fortunately what I got from this experience is that confidence and determination can really contribute to our success and that everyone should be confident about life
阅读面短文根容写篇60词左右容概
Life is filled with challenges As we get older we come to realize that those challenges are the very things that come with friendship
When we are faced with a challenge we usually have two choices we can try to beat it off(击退) or we can decide that the thing presenting the challenge isn＇t worth the trouble and stop doing it Although there are certainly times when stopping is the right thing to do in most cases all that is needed is commitment(投入) and communication
When we are committed to something it means that no matter how painful or how uncomfortable something is we will always choose to face it and work it through instead of running away from it Communication is making space for discussion and talking about how you feel instead of just saying what the other person did wrong If you can say to a friend I got my feelings hurt instead of You hurt my feelings you are going to be able to solve the problem much faster
In dealing with many challenges that friendship will bring to you try to see them for what they are small hurdles(障碍) you need to jump or get over on your way through life Nothing is so big that it is impossible to get over and hurt is only to serve to make us stronger It＇s all part of growing up and it happens to everyone and some day you will look back on all of this and say Hard as it was it made me who I am today And that is a good thing
写作指导
Step 1 通读全文理清结构
旨意文章四段述面挑战迎接挑战身成长益处基确定 challengecommitmentcommunication关键词
文章结构
第段生活中充满挑战挑战伴着友谊出现
第二段面挑战时会做出两种选择勇敢战胜选择逃避更时候需投入沟通
第三段投入工作迎接挑战意味着面问题解决问题沟通意味着讨留出空间避免指责
第四段战胜挑战会更加成熟强挑战帮助成长
Step 2 删繁简提炼点
第段Life is filled with challenges and challenges are the very things that come with friendship
第二段In most cases all that is needed is commitment and communication when we are faced with a challenge
第三段We will always choose to face it and work it through instead of running away from it Communication is making space for discussion and talking about how you feel instead of just saying what the other person did wrong
第四段It＇s all part of growing up and it happens to everyone and some day you will look back on all of this and say Hard as it was it made me who I am today And that is a good thing
Step 3 合改写润色升级
点1Life is full of challenges that come with friendship(原点语义转换)
点2In most cases when dealing with such a challenge commitment and communication are what we need (状语句省略what引导名词性句)
点3Commitment means facing it and working it through while communication means making space for discussion and avoiding blaming others
(choose to face改mean facingsaying what the other person did wrong改blaming others)
点4Remember that challenges actually do us good for they are part of growing up making who we are today (do sb good)
Step 4 联句成篇复查誊写
通读初稿容进行仔细检查方面进行重点审查①写概覆盖原文全部点信息点表达相独立②全文语言没语法词错误文章结构紧凑句连贯通③标点符号运准确单词拼写没错误④词数符合求总词数60左右(少40超80)检查误初稿誊写答卷保持书写规范字迹清晰
Life is full of challenges that come with friendship(点1)In most cases when dealing with such a challenge commitment and communication are what we need (点2)Commitment means facing it and working it through while communication means making space for discussion and avoiding blaming others (点3)Remember that challenges actually do us good for they are part of growing up making who we are today (点4)
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