Section Ⅵ Writing
太湖中国第三淡水湖需
·环卫工全职6月1日9月30日
·江苏省锡市太湖
·监测该区藻类船工作清水中藻类
·工资面议提供食宿
·欢迎申请潜水资历者优先考虑
*详细职位描述请访问网站
假定李华校学生会需招聘名留学生做英语学顾问请短文形式写招聘启事容包括
1母语英语汉语流利者优先
2解答英语学问题协助组织英语活动
3周4时报酬面议
4联系李华(电话15011223344)
注意
1词数80左右
2适增加细节行文连贯
3参考词汇英语学顾问English study adviser
写作指导
招聘启事单位面社会公开招聘关员时种应文书包括公司者部门简单介绍需学历职责范围等通常招聘单位址电话等信息通常包括方面
总述招聘职位基信息
句话总述招聘职位涵盖招聘基信息包括三方面容招聘单位招聘象(男女留学生外国志愿者兼职等)工作容求语言简洁词精准
二详细展开岗位职责求
岗位职责(responsibilities)工作容具体化分述岗位职责时注意条理化避免杂乱遗漏岗位求(requirements)招聘象履行岗位职责具体条件求
三介绍招聘单位联系热线联系址电话号码简历投递邮箱等
审题谋篇
词汇储备
1 main responsibilities职责
2oral English口语
3organize activities组织活动
4applicant申请
5native土
6fluency流利
7what＇s more更重
8payment报酬
词汇运
1学生会决定邀请位留学生学期英语学顾问
The Students＇ Union decides to invite an international student to work as an English study adviser next term
2顾问职责包括帮助学生练英语口语解答问题协助组织英语活动
The main responsibilities of the adviser are to help students practice their oral English answer their questions and organize English activities
3顾问预计周工作4时
The adviser is expected to work 4 hours per week
4感兴趣话请拨15011223344找李华面试
If you are interested please call Li Hua at 15011223344 for an interview
5服务报酬议
The payment for the service can be negotiable
句式升级
include动词ing形式作宾语改写第2句
The main responsibilities of the adviser include helping students practice their oral English answering their questions and organizing English activities
串句成文
The Students＇ Union decides to invite an international student to work as an English study adviser next term The main responsibilities of the adviser include helping students practice their oral English answering their questions and organizing English activities
The applicant should be a native speaker of English Fluency in Chinese is preferred What＇s more the adviser is expected to work 4 hours per week
If you are interested please call Li Hua at 15011223344 for an interview The payment for the service can be negotiable
阅读面短文根容写篇60词左右容概
The way of Chinese people＇s life has been changed through China＇s four new great inventions What are the four new great inventionsThey are highspeed railways bicyclesharing service online shopping and Alipay
What do the China＇s four new great inventions bring to us
Highspeed railways—Modern transportation makes everybody neighbors The invention of the highspeed railway makes it easy to travel thousands of miles a day Today China＇s rail transit technology is the best the China＇s daily average of 4000 trains sending about 46 million passengers
Bicycle sharing service—Short walks become more convenient and faster and carbon emissions are reduced which is friendly to the environment You can download the app about shared bikes pay some money and then you can use bicycles everywhere in the street The Chinese shared bicycle programs have been becoming more and more popular
Online shopping—You don＇t need to go out to find the needs for living Online shopping as the name implies is to pay money online Purchases(购买物) can be sent home China has 751 million Internet users and 724 million mobile phone users total transactions (交易) on November 11 and December 12 hit a record high every year Online shopping lets Chinese Internet users enjoy the shopping carnival every day
Alipay—A software which can replace cash payment With smartphones＇ popularization AliPay has become an indispensable (缺) app Through scanning the QR code AliPay wants to realize the ambition of replacing cash payment gradually On 11 November 2018 both the mobile payment account and the transaction reached 2135 billion yuan
There is no doubt that China has already used its own power of the four new great inventions to become a great powerful technological country showing the power of China once again
Step 1 通读全文理清结构
旨意通阅读知文章7段总—分—总方式介绍中国新四发明
文章结构全文分五部分
第部分(第二段)China＇s four new great inventions
第二部分(第三段)The invention of highspeed railways
第三部分(第四段)Bicyclesharing service
第四部分(第五六段)Online shopping and Alipay
第五部分(第七段)China has already used its own power of the four new great inventions to become a great powerful technological country
Step 2 合改写润色升级
点1China＇s four new great inventions—Highspeed railways bicyclesharing service online shopping and Alipay have changed Chinese people＇s life (原文bringto us语义转换)
点2Highspeed railways make trips faster than before(faster than before代easy to travel to thousands of miles a day)
点3Bicyclesharing service lets short walks become faster more convenient and environmentally friendly (environmentally friendly 代friendly to the environment进行语义转换)
点4Online shopping creates many business opportunities on the Internet and Alipay will gradually replace cash payment(many business opportunities代total transactionsreplace cash payment义概括)
点5Without doubt the new four inventions contribute to a great and powerful technological China(contribute to a great and powerful technological China代become a great powerful technological country)
Step 3 复查誊写
串句成文进行仔细检查方面进行重点检查①写概覆盖全部点信息点表达相独立②语言没语法词错误文章结构紧凑句连续通③标点符号单词拼写正确④符合词数求检查误初稿誊写答卷保持书写规范字迹清晰
China＇s four new great inventions—Highspeed railways bicyclesharing service online shopping and Alipay have changed Chinese people＇s life Highspeed railways make trips faster than before Meanwhile bicyclesharing service lets short walks become faster more convenient and environmentally friendly Online shopping creates many business opportunities on the Internet and Alipay will gradually replace cash payment Without doubt the four new inventions contribute to a great and powerful technological China
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太湖中国第三淡水湖需
·环卫工全职6月1日9月30日
·江苏省锡市太湖
·监测该区藻类船工作清水中藻类
·工资面议提供食宿
·欢迎申请潜水资历者优先考虑
*详细职位描述请访问网站
假定李华校学生会需招聘名留学生做英语学顾问请短文形式写招聘启事容包括
1母语英语汉语流利者优先
2解答英语学问题协助组织英语活动
3周4时报酬面议
4联系李华(电话15011223344)
注意
1词数80左右
2适增加细节行文连贯
3参考词汇英语学顾问English study adviser
写作指导
招聘启事单位面社会公开招聘关员时种应文书包括公司者部门简单介绍需学历职责范围等通常招聘单位址电话等信息通常包括方面
总述招聘职位基信息
句话总述招聘职位涵盖招聘基信息包括三方面容招聘单位招聘象(男女留学生外国志愿者兼职等)工作容求语言简洁词精准
二详细展开岗位职责求
岗位职责(responsibilities)工作容具体化分述岗位职责时注意条理化避免杂乱遗漏岗位求(requirements)招聘象履行岗位职责具体条件求
三介绍招聘单位联系热线联系址电话号码简历投递邮箱等
审题谋篇
词汇储备
1 main responsibilities职责
2oral English口语
3organize activities组织活动
4applicant申请
5native土
6fluency流利
7what＇s more更重
8payment报酬
词汇运
1学生会决定邀请位留学生学期英语学顾问
The Students＇ Union decides to invite an international student to work as an English study adviser next term
2顾问职责包括帮助学生练英语口语解答问题协助组织英语活动
The main responsibilities of the adviser are to help students practice their oral English answer their questions and organize English activities
3顾问预计周工作4时
The adviser is expected to work 4 hours per week
4感兴趣话请拨15011223344找李华面试
If you are interested please call Li Hua at 15011223344 for an interview
5服务报酬议
The payment for the service can be negotiable
句式升级
include动词ing形式作宾语改写第2句
The main responsibilities of the adviser include helping students practice their oral English answering their questions and organizing English activities
串句成文
The Students＇ Union decides to invite an international student to work as an English study adviser next term The main responsibilities of the adviser include helping students practice their oral English answering their questions and organizing English activities
The applicant should be a native speaker of English Fluency in Chinese is preferred What＇s more the adviser is expected to work 4 hours per week
If you are interested please call Li Hua at 15011223344 for an interview The payment for the service can be negotiable
阅读面短文根容写篇60词左右容概
The way of Chinese people＇s life has been changed through China＇s four new great inventions What are the four new great inventionsThey are highspeed railways bicyclesharing service online shopping and Alipay
What do the China＇s four new great inventions bring to us
Highspeed railways—Modern transportation makes everybody neighbors The invention of the highspeed railway makes it easy to travel thousands of miles a day Today China＇s rail transit technology is the best the China＇s daily average of 4000 trains sending about 46 million passengers
Bicycle sharing service—Short walks become more convenient and faster and carbon emissions are reduced which is friendly to the environment You can download the app about shared bikes pay some money and then you can use bicycles everywhere in the street The Chinese shared bicycle programs have been becoming more and more popular
Online shopping—You don＇t need to go out to find the needs for living Online shopping as the name implies is to pay money online Purchases(购买物) can be sent home China has 751 million Internet users and 724 million mobile phone users total transactions (交易) on November 11 and December 12 hit a record high every year Online shopping lets Chinese Internet users enjoy the shopping carnival every day
Alipay—A software which can replace cash payment With smartphones＇ popularization AliPay has become an indispensable (缺) app Through scanning the QR code AliPay wants to realize the ambition of replacing cash payment gradually On 11 November 2018 both the mobile payment account and the transaction reached 2135 billion yuan
There is no doubt that China has already used its own power of the four new great inventions to become a great powerful technological country showing the power of China once again
Step 1 通读全文理清结构
旨意通阅读知文章7段总—分—总方式介绍中国新四发明
文章结构全文分五部分
第部分(第二段)China＇s four new great inventions
第二部分(第三段)The invention of highspeed railways
第三部分(第四段)Bicyclesharing service
第四部分(第五六段)Online shopping and Alipay
第五部分(第七段)China has already used its own power of the four new great inventions to become a great powerful technological country
Step 2 合改写润色升级
点1China＇s four new great inventions—Highspeed railways bicyclesharing service online shopping and Alipay have changed Chinese people＇s life (原文bringto us语义转换)
点2Highspeed railways make trips faster than before(faster than before代easy to travel to thousands of miles a day)
点3Bicyclesharing service lets short walks become faster more convenient and environmentally friendly (environmentally friendly 代friendly to the environment进行语义转换)
点4Online shopping creates many business opportunities on the Internet and Alipay will gradually replace cash payment(many business opportunities代total transactionsreplace cash payment义概括)
点5Without doubt the new four inventions contribute to a great and powerful technological China(contribute to a great and powerful technological China代become a great powerful technological country)
Step 3 复查誊写
串句成文进行仔细检查方面进行重点检查①写概覆盖全部点信息点表达相独立②语言没语法词错误文章结构紧凑句连续通③标点符号单词拼写正确④符合词数求检查误初稿誊写答卷保持书写规范字迹清晰
China＇s four new great inventions—Highspeed railways bicyclesharing service online shopping and Alipay have changed Chinese people＇s life Highspeed railways make trips faster than before Meanwhile bicyclesharing service lets short walks become faster more convenient and environmentally friendly Online shopping creates many business opportunities on the Internet and Alipay will gradually replace cash payment Without doubt the four new inventions contribute to a great and powerful technological China
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