高考英语复备考：关书面表达6条建议
假定李华正教英国朋友Leslie学汉语请写封邮件告知次课计划容包括：
1 时间点
2 容：学唐诗
3 课前准备：简解唐历史
注意： 1 词数100左右
2 适增加容行文连贯
现根书面表达阅卷情况考生提出六点建议
审题仔细
审题写作中关重步笔者阅卷程中发现少考生分数低审题仔细偏离题篇书面表达设置情景：假定李华正教英国朋友Leslie学汉语请写封邮件告知次课计划少考生写成李华次Leslie课回顾评价考生写李华Leslie介绍古代中国汉唐宋等代现代中国发展积极意义类作文6分甚考生写李华邀请英国Leslie中国教李华学英语类作文低档次
考生特重视审题审题时认真仔细题目求少阅读两次划出题目关键词句次书面表达李华名写封邮件告知Leslie次汉语课计划体时态应该般时李华节语文课讲唐诗笼统概括中国文化
二容完整
考生审题仅准确容完整性阅卷老师评判分数重标准然相部分考生容完整点齐全失分严重甚降低分档次次书面表达考生漏李华提建议：Leslie次课前需简解关唐历史考生丰富句型写容差时间点没体现阅卷老师遗憾降低档次分考生全文写题关容者全盘抄试卷中阅读部分容类作文零分类学生写部分题关容中间插部分关容作文中类作文题相关容酌情分
笔者建议时写作训练中考生做容完整点齐全遗漏点写作容完整语言功底差点作文分少第二档次（610）果遗漏中点降低档次考生句子写出会写time place Chinese Tang LiBai history等题容相关单词者短语have a plan learn Chinese in the classroom prepare for等效信息类考生6—10分抄袭试卷整段关容罗列单词短语总零分强次书面表达容应包括：
1 开头问候语写信目
2 李华Leslie次汉语课时间点
3 李华Leslie次汉语课容唐诗
4 李华Leslie建议：课前简解唐历史
三单词拼写准确
考生考卷中普遍出现单词拼写错误writing误写成writting poem（诗）误写成poemerpoet poet（诗）误写成poempoeter Tang 误写成Tanpreparation误写成preparetion brief误写成 breif等
考生语言掌握情况写作中犯单词拼写错误会少影响考生取作文分考生时学中功夫强化单词短语记忆应写作夯实基础
四中式英语避免
次书面表达中少考生受母语影响英语句子结构没完全掌握导致考生作文答卷中常常汉语语序翻译英语句子想告诉次课计划错译 I want tell you next class plan时间点周三午三点学校附咖啡馆 错译Time and place is next Wednesday afternoon 3：00 school near cafe计划学唐诗 错译I plan let you learn Tang poem课前简单解唐历史错译You before class brief learn Tang history期回复错译I looking forward to you reply等
针种汉语式译情况考生写作训练中求掌握运英语五种基句型英语句子种句型扩展延伸准确掌握五种基句型追求句型样化
五扩展效
果考生写作容翻译成英语短文话达100字数够阅卷中部分考生文提容点3学唐诗进行扩展扩展信息够效太宽泛前信息匹配 We are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynastywhich helps China developWe are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty Li Shimming was a great emperor
该点信息扩展考生定想象空间利优秀考生拉分差距笔者容点3学唐诗提供扩展方仅供参考
1 We are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which were written by famous Chinese poets
2 We are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty such as Chun Xiao Jing Yes and Chu Say
3 We are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty representing one of Chinese civilizations
六行文连贯
巧妙渡语行文紧凑连贯渡然次课计划中包括三点firstto begin with secondwhat’s more additionally thirdfinally等
First it is scheduled to begin at 3：00 in the afternoon next Wednesday in the café near your school which will last two hours as usual Second what we are going to learn in the following lesson is relevant to poems of the Tang Dynasty representing one of Chinese civilizations Third in order to understand poems of the Tang Dynasty better you’d better learn something about the history of The Tang Dynasty in advance
参考范文
Dear Leslie
How is it going recently？ I’m writing to inform you of the plan of our next Chinese lesson First it is scheduled to begin at 3：00 in the afternoon next Wednesday in the café near your school which will last two hours as usual Second what we are going to learn in the following lesson is relevant to poems of the Tang Dynasty representing one of Chinese civilizations Third in order to understand poems of the Tang Dynasty better you’d better make brief preparations for the history of The Tang Dynasty in advance By the way it is in the National Library or online that you can get more information related to the lesson
I am looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Hua
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假定李华正教英国朋友Leslie学汉语请写封邮件告知次课计划容包括：
1 时间点
2 容：学唐诗
3 课前准备：简解唐历史
注意： 1 词数100左右
2 适增加容行文连贯
现根书面表达阅卷情况考生提出六点建议
审题仔细
审题写作中关重步笔者阅卷程中发现少考生分数低审题仔细偏离题篇书面表达设置情景：假定李华正教英国朋友Leslie学汉语请写封邮件告知次课计划少考生写成李华次Leslie课回顾评价考生写李华Leslie介绍古代中国汉唐宋等代现代中国发展积极意义类作文6分甚考生写李华邀请英国Leslie中国教李华学英语类作文低档次
考生特重视审题审题时认真仔细题目求少阅读两次划出题目关键词句次书面表达李华名写封邮件告知Leslie次汉语课计划体时态应该般时李华节语文课讲唐诗笼统概括中国文化
二容完整
考生审题仅准确容完整性阅卷老师评判分数重标准然相部分考生容完整点齐全失分严重甚降低分档次次书面表达考生漏李华提建议：Leslie次课前需简解关唐历史考生丰富句型写容差时间点没体现阅卷老师遗憾降低档次分考生全文写题关容者全盘抄试卷中阅读部分容类作文零分类学生写部分题关容中间插部分关容作文中类作文题相关容酌情分
笔者建议时写作训练中考生做容完整点齐全遗漏点写作容完整语言功底差点作文分少第二档次（610）果遗漏中点降低档次考生句子写出会写time place Chinese Tang LiBai history等题容相关单词者短语have a plan learn Chinese in the classroom prepare for等效信息类考生6—10分抄袭试卷整段关容罗列单词短语总零分强次书面表达容应包括：
1 开头问候语写信目
2 李华Leslie次汉语课时间点
3 李华Leslie次汉语课容唐诗
4 李华Leslie建议：课前简解唐历史
三单词拼写准确
考生考卷中普遍出现单词拼写错误writing误写成writting poem（诗）误写成poemerpoet poet（诗）误写成poempoeter Tang 误写成Tanpreparation误写成preparetion brief误写成 breif等
考生语言掌握情况写作中犯单词拼写错误会少影响考生取作文分考生时学中功夫强化单词短语记忆应写作夯实基础
四中式英语避免
次书面表达中少考生受母语影响英语句子结构没完全掌握导致考生作文答卷中常常汉语语序翻译英语句子想告诉次课计划错译 I want tell you next class plan时间点周三午三点学校附咖啡馆 错译Time and place is next Wednesday afternoon 3：00 school near cafe计划学唐诗 错译I plan let you learn Tang poem课前简单解唐历史错译You before class brief learn Tang history期回复错译I looking forward to you reply等
针种汉语式译情况考生写作训练中求掌握运英语五种基句型英语句子种句型扩展延伸准确掌握五种基句型追求句型样化
五扩展效
果考生写作容翻译成英语短文话达100字数够阅卷中部分考生文提容点3学唐诗进行扩展扩展信息够效太宽泛前信息匹配 We are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynastywhich helps China developWe are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty Li Shimming was a great emperor
该点信息扩展考生定想象空间利优秀考生拉分差距笔者容点3学唐诗提供扩展方仅供参考
1 We are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which were written by famous Chinese poets
2 We are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty such as Chun Xiao Jing Yes and Chu Say
3 We are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty representing one of Chinese civilizations
六行文连贯
巧妙渡语行文紧凑连贯渡然次课计划中包括三点firstto begin with secondwhat’s more additionally thirdfinally等
First it is scheduled to begin at 3：00 in the afternoon next Wednesday in the café near your school which will last two hours as usual Second what we are going to learn in the following lesson is relevant to poems of the Tang Dynasty representing one of Chinese civilizations Third in order to understand poems of the Tang Dynasty better you’d better learn something about the history of The Tang Dynasty in advance
参考范文
Dear Leslie
How is it going recently？ I’m writing to inform you of the plan of our next Chinese lesson First it is scheduled to begin at 3：00 in the afternoon next Wednesday in the café near your school which will last two hours as usual Second what we are going to learn in the following lesson is relevant to poems of the Tang Dynasty representing one of Chinese civilizations Third in order to understand poems of the Tang Dynasty better you’d better make brief preparations for the history of The Tang Dynasty in advance By the way it is in the National Library or online that you can get more information related to the lesson
I am looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Hua
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