全国卷书面表达提供点信息较简单时指出适增加细节行文连贯种灵活命题方式考生较发挥空间考生提出更高求写作时考生仅仅简单翻译信息点文章显单调乏味字数足达交际目考生信口开河信马缰结果详略偏离题时应该合理拓展显性信息运技巧挖掘隐性信息做适增加细节
增加原
参加中文学班
Here are a few suggestions First it is important to take a Chinese course as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students 点建议首先汉语课重老师学学起练
二增加结果
赞赏该报优点:①兼顾国外新闻②介绍名成功事
First it covers both national and international news so that by simply turning the pages I can learn all important things that have happened during the week Equally attractive are the success stories of worldfamous people which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place
首先报道国国际新闻仅仅翻页面解周发生重事情样吸引名成功事事帮助理解样努力世界变更美
三增加目
暑假想家外贸公司兼职
In order to get some practical experience I am planning to take a parttime job in a foreign capital company 实践验计划家外资公司做兼职
四增加条件
邀外教Lucy敬老院
If you are able to come with us please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning 果请知道午九点会门口等
请美国朋友Tom代卖制中国结
If anyone wants to know more about the knots let them write to me Also do let me know if you need further information Thank you 果想更解中国结写信果需更信息定知道谢谢
五增加程
(敬老院)活动:包饺子表演节目等
Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there Well also spend some fun time together singing dancing and playing games which we hope will make them happy
老起包饺子做蛋糕会起开心唱歌跳舞做游戏希活动会开心
生日聚会容:生日歌蛋糕游戏等
When he comes well light the candles and singHappy Birthdaytogether for him Then the cake will be cut and well sing songs and play games It'll be nice to see how excited he will be 时候会点亮蜡烛起唱生日快乐歌接着切蛋糕唱歌做游戏高兴见激动
六增加举例
业余生活
In my free time I continue to take regular exercise such as swimming running and various ball games On my holidays l travel around the world In a word my life will be much richer and more colorful 空时会继续常锻炼游泳跑步种球类运动假期会环游世界总生活会更加丰富彩
学暑期课程遇困难求助容:希学校辅导中心(Learning Center)帮助
But I have some difficulties with notetaking and I have no idea of how to use the library I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and Im anxious to get help from you 做笔记方面困难知道图书馆知学校辅导中心考生提供帮助渴帮助
七增加展
邀约外教Susan参加明生日聚会
I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party too 确信聚会会玩高兴
提出建议:刊登指导英语学文章
As a young student I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning and I hope that it will become even more popular 作名年轻考生建议Global Mirror周报刊登文章引导学英语希会变更加受欢迎
总增加细节应该画龙点睛非画蛇添足求考生根题材体裁信息实际需出发短话长说进行合理效补述追述文章血肉连贯饱满
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