读续写
写作重点步骤
写作重点
1重描写(画面感)
描述程应加入更具体动作描述情感描写具体动作代抽象表达学较擅长写结性语言She felt really nervous and cold样句子然没错误直接形容词表达会导致续写指呈现抽象结没画面感
[例]天学校I go to school every day
扩写：With the sun rising from the east I together with Tom and Jerry ride to school at 600 every morning laughing and talking
2关注语言
避免句型结构单否会显种句型掌握充分应意识非谓语形容词做状语虚拟语气等
3注意衔接
清晰逻辑衔接明确时间线索承接文
4正结局
设计结局应正化险夷
八步成文法
(注意：八步固定序省略环节)
1 情绪：情绪描写 & 2 细节：进步解释描写
细节描写
实例
笑
直升机Jane高兴笑起
(1)At the sight of the helicopter Jane beamed with wild joy
(2)Seeing the helicopter Jane beamed with wild joy
(3)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter Jane’s eyesface lit up with delight
(4)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter a bright smile lit up Jane’s faceeyes
①The smile on her face shone like a diamond脸笑容钻石样闪闪发光
②A smile of understanding flashed across his face脸露出种理解微笑
③She wore a shining smile on her face脸带着灿烂笑容
高兴激动
知道考试结果时兴奋极
(1)When she knew the result of the test she felt excitedthrilled
(2)When she knew the result of the test her eyes twinkled with excitement
(3)When she knew the result of the test her heart was pounding with wild joy
(4)When she knew the result of the test a wild excitement took hold of her
(5)Knowing the result of the test she felt a surge of excitement
(6)Knowing the result of the test she was overcome with excitement
①A ripple of excitement ran through them阵激动声穿
②Laughter lingered around the room笑声房间里萦绕
③His eyes twinkled with pleasure眼睛闪烁着快乐
④A wild gaiety took hold of her种疯狂快乐控制
⑤Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile
令难忘眼睛钻石样闪闪发光嘴角保持着稳定微笑
⑥I was wild with joy欣喜狂
⑦I was pleased beyond description高兴难形容
哭
哭
(1)A lump came to her throat哽咽欲哭
(2)Her eyes were red from crying双眼哭通红
(3)Her eyes brimmed with tears眼里满含泪水
(4)Tears coursed trickledstreamed ran down her cheeks眼泪着面颊流
伤心痛哭
伤心已
(1)She felt extremely sad
(2)A sadness came over her
(3)Her heart ached tears streaming down her cheeks
(4)Numb with grief she became speechless
(5)Feeling a surge of sadness she couldn’t help crying bitterly
(6)Sadness surging within her she burst into tears
①He stood silently tears rolling down his cheeks静静站着眼泪着面颊流
②I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness漂浮悲伤海洋里
③Her hands were shaking She was on the verge of tears手颤抖快哭
④Hearing the news so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine听消息绝悲伤淹没酒里
⑤She burst into tears and ran out of the room突然哭起跑出房间
⑥ She sobbed hiding her face in her hands掩面哭泣
⑦I tried to fight back tears My eyes were filled with tears努力忍住眼泪 眼里充满泪水
⑧A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face皱起眉头
⑨They sat there with glum looks on their faces坐里带着脸忧郁
⑩The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face消息脸蒙层阴影
害怕
感害怕
(1)I felt very frightenedscaredpanicked
(2)I was in (a) panic was full of fear
(3)I stood rooted to the spot brimming with fearfilled with fear
(4) I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak
(5) I froze with terror too scared to move
(6) I was seized by a strong sense of honor my palms sweating
①He turned to me with his eyes full of horror转身眼里充满恐惧
②Fear slowly creeps upon her恐惧慢慢蔓延身
③She was struck with horror when感恐惧…
④She was choked by fear恐惧窒息
⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tonguetied脸色苍白站里舌头结
⑥A flood of fear welled up in him Fear flooded over him心中涌起阵恐惧 恐惧淹没
⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated心跳厉害窒息死
⑧She shook all over feeling like sitting on pins and needles 浑身颤抖觉坐针毡
生气愤怒
Sam感非常生气
(1)Sam felt very angry
(2)Sam stood rooted to the spot his eyes blazing with anger
(3)Sam felt so angry that he stormed out of the room slamming the door furiously behind him
(4)Boiling with rage Sam shook his fist at me
(5) fulled with fury Sam was unable to utter a single word
①I was seized by anger充满愤怒
②He was fuming with rage气发雷霆
③His anger boiled over愤怒爆发
④He could hardlyscarcely contain his rage控制住怒火
⑤He was breathing fire and fury充满着怒火
⑥His voice trembled with anger声音愤怒颤抖
⑦He gave me a look of burning anger愤怒眼
⑧He glared at me with burning eyes灼热目光怒视着
⑨He flared up at the word听字勃然怒
⑩His face clouded with anger气脸色阴沉
感动
①Touched deeplyimmensely we…深深感动…
②Tears filling her eyes she offered her heartfelt gratitude热泪盈眶表示衷心感谢
③With tears streaming down her face she 泪水着脸颊流
3 转折：努力助外界
解决途径：物然(突出谐时间成长)
解决突具体方案基：
1encouragement(某鼓励) 2comfort(某安慰) 3inspiration(突然灵机动) 4effort(努力训练)
5calm(冷静思考) 6kindness(某善良) 7courage(勇敢)
8love(爱心需move(感动)patience(耐心)等适结合) 9help(时帮助)
(然解决方案限某种种方式结合)
鼓起勇气鼓励
pluck uptakegather one’s courage (to do)
毫犹豫
(1)sb could hardly wait to do sth (2)without a second thought (3)without even thinking (4)without delay (5)without hesitation
4 转机：事情似转机抱希感欣慰
似
(1)It was like doing sth (2) It seemed as if that
希
(1)hoping that (2)seefeel a glimmer of hope (3)trying hard to do sth
欣慰
(1)breathed a sign of relief sighed with relief松口气
(2) (a wave of) relief flooded through washed over sb
(3)to one＇s relief 欣慰放心
5 失：问题未解决出现新问题
幸
(1)but bad luck for sb (2) but in vain (3) but without success (4) but no use
知道做什
(1)sb did sth wondering what to do next (2)sb did sth not knowing what to do next
(3)sb did sth unsure of what to do next (4) sb was at a loss what to do
(5)sb was in a dilemma about whether to do sth or not
6 想法：突然想法（句话说明想法）
某想明白 意
(1) It suddenly occurred to sb that + 句 It hitstruck sb that + 句It dawned on sb that+句
(2) (an idea thought) occurred came to sbcameflashed into one’s mindcrowded in one’s mind
(3)one’s mind began to race
7 结局：段时间事情转折
段时间
(1)not long after thatshortly afterwards before long
It didn’t take long before+句It took some time before +句
(2) for an instantmoment
事情转折
(1)To one’s surprise (delight) Strangely enough it turned out that +句
(2)But no second thoughts
(3)But what happened next was pure magic
8 总结：点题呼应前文
直意识
(1)倒装句：Not until+时间状语+did sb realizenotice that + 句
(2)强调句：It was only +时间状语+ that sb realized that + 句
记某话
某脑海中
(1)One＇s word echoedrang out in one’s ears
(2)One’s wordsvoicesong lingeredwhispered in one’s mind head
(3)One’s head was still full of
历教训
(1)感叹句：What aan valuedusefulgreatpainful lesson sb taught mesb learned from sb
What aan enjoyable pleasant wonderful unforgettable memorable interesting valued experience sb had
(3)Down deep in one’s heart某心深处
题型专练
阅读面短文根情节进行续写构成完整事
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car moving Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried Arthur stopped and asked It looks like you’ve got a problem Arthur said
I’m afraid so I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car
Is there something I can do to help Arthur asked The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said Thanks If you’re sure it wouldn’t be too much trouble you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi
No trouble at all I’d be glad to help
The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat After placing it on the ground he turned to get the other one Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking he heard the long loud noise of an alarm
It was from the bankThere had been a robbery (抢劫)
Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank People asked each other What happened But everyone had a different answer
Arthur still carrying the suitcase turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him
She looked at the suitcase and then at him Arthur was surprised Why is she looking at me like that He thought The suitcase She thinks I’m the bank thief
Arthur looked around at the crowd of people He became frightened and without another thought he started to run
注意：
1 续写短文词数应150左右
2 应5短文中标划线关键词语
3 续写部分分两段段开头语已写
4 续写完成请划线标出关键词语
Paragraph 1
As he was running Arthur heard the young man shouting behind Stop stop
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Paragraph 2
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur
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[解题步骤]
Step 1 阅读出情节
1年轻汽车发动
2Arthur帮忙搬箱子
3银行发现盗周围片混乱
4Arthur发觉着赃物开始跑
Step 2 构思续情节
(段四五句话)
Paragraph 1
As he was running Arthur heard the young man shouting behind Stop stop
·Arthur意识男偷
·Arthur没停
·Arthur找出租车出租车出租车说警察局
·出租车快开警察局
Paragraph 2
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur
·Arthur车
·箱子警察
·讲箱子程
·偷抓
·结果闹乌龙意识做件蠢事勇敢机立断表扬
Step 3 增加细节(描写)
(1)增加细节：
1时间点(渡)
2天气道具感悟
a天气(偶尔补充)
b道具(with+n + onin one’s hand)
c感悟
i Feeling tiredhappyworriedshamed sb did sth
ii Tired as he was he felt it worthwhile for
(2)造句程中量加渡词非谓语动词适时增加直接引语情节丰富生动直接引语
[模板句型]
时间点渡sb doing sth1 did sth 2 doing sth 3 doing sth 4 doing sth 5 doing sth6 feeling looking
Step 4 成文
Paragraph 1
As he was running Arthur heard the young man shouting behind Stop stop
·Arthur意识男偷
·Arthur停
·找出租车出租车出租车说警察局
·出租车快开警察局
But just at the moment Arthur realized that the young man might be the bank chief So Arthur kept on running trying to his best to look for a taxi Soon he found a taxi parking by the road and jumped into it with the suitcase in his hand looking rather anxious Go to the police station Now The young man behind is a bank thief Arthur said to the driver in a loud voice Then the taxi raced away like the wind leaving the long loud noise of an alarm behind
Paragraph 2
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur
·Arthur车
·讲箱子程
·警察检查箱子
·告知偷早已抓
·闹乌龙意识做件蠢事勇敢机立断表扬
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur got off the taxi and rushed into the police station Arthur told the policeman what had happened to him who had already known about the bank robbery [After checking the suitcase the police man told him There is only clothes in the suitcase And I was informed the thief had been caught a few minutes ago Finally Arthur realized what a foolish thing he had done] [They opened the suitcase and found a large sum of money inside as Arthur expected Then the policeman told Arthur that the thief had been caught Eventually Arthur was awarded for his bravery and right decision]
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写作重点步骤
写作重点
1重描写(画面感)
描述程应加入更具体动作描述情感描写具体动作代抽象表达学较擅长写结性语言She felt really nervous and cold样句子然没错误直接形容词表达会导致续写指呈现抽象结没画面感
[例]天学校I go to school every day
扩写：With the sun rising from the east I together with Tom and Jerry ride to school at 600 every morning laughing and talking
2关注语言
避免句型结构单否会显种句型掌握充分应意识非谓语形容词做状语虚拟语气等
3注意衔接
清晰逻辑衔接明确时间线索承接文
4正结局
设计结局应正化险夷
八步成文法
(注意：八步固定序省略环节)
1 情绪：情绪描写 & 2 细节：进步解释描写
细节描写
实例
笑
直升机Jane高兴笑起
(1)At the sight of the helicopter Jane beamed with wild joy
(2)Seeing the helicopter Jane beamed with wild joy
(3)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter Jane’s eyesface lit up with delight
(4)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter a bright smile lit up Jane’s faceeyes
①The smile on her face shone like a diamond脸笑容钻石样闪闪发光
②A smile of understanding flashed across his face脸露出种理解微笑
③She wore a shining smile on her face脸带着灿烂笑容
高兴激动
知道考试结果时兴奋极
(1)When she knew the result of the test she felt excitedthrilled
(2)When she knew the result of the test her eyes twinkled with excitement
(3)When she knew the result of the test her heart was pounding with wild joy
(4)When she knew the result of the test a wild excitement took hold of her
(5)Knowing the result of the test she felt a surge of excitement
(6)Knowing the result of the test she was overcome with excitement
①A ripple of excitement ran through them阵激动声穿
②Laughter lingered around the room笑声房间里萦绕
③His eyes twinkled with pleasure眼睛闪烁着快乐
④A wild gaiety took hold of her种疯狂快乐控制
⑤Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile
令难忘眼睛钻石样闪闪发光嘴角保持着稳定微笑
⑥I was wild with joy欣喜狂
⑦I was pleased beyond description高兴难形容
哭
哭
(1)A lump came to her throat哽咽欲哭
(2)Her eyes were red from crying双眼哭通红
(3)Her eyes brimmed with tears眼里满含泪水
(4)Tears coursed trickledstreamed ran down her cheeks眼泪着面颊流
伤心痛哭
伤心已
(1)She felt extremely sad
(2)A sadness came over her
(3)Her heart ached tears streaming down her cheeks
(4)Numb with grief she became speechless
(5)Feeling a surge of sadness she couldn’t help crying bitterly
(6)Sadness surging within her she burst into tears
①He stood silently tears rolling down his cheeks静静站着眼泪着面颊流
②I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness漂浮悲伤海洋里
③Her hands were shaking She was on the verge of tears手颤抖快哭
④Hearing the news so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine听消息绝悲伤淹没酒里
⑤She burst into tears and ran out of the room突然哭起跑出房间
⑥ She sobbed hiding her face in her hands掩面哭泣
⑦I tried to fight back tears My eyes were filled with tears努力忍住眼泪 眼里充满泪水
⑧A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face皱起眉头
⑨They sat there with glum looks on their faces坐里带着脸忧郁
⑩The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face消息脸蒙层阴影
害怕
感害怕
(1)I felt very frightenedscaredpanicked
(2)I was in (a) panic was full of fear
(3)I stood rooted to the spot brimming with fearfilled with fear
(4) I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak
(5) I froze with terror too scared to move
(6) I was seized by a strong sense of honor my palms sweating
①He turned to me with his eyes full of horror转身眼里充满恐惧
②Fear slowly creeps upon her恐惧慢慢蔓延身
③She was struck with horror when感恐惧…
④She was choked by fear恐惧窒息
⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tonguetied脸色苍白站里舌头结
⑥A flood of fear welled up in him Fear flooded over him心中涌起阵恐惧 恐惧淹没
⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated心跳厉害窒息死
⑧She shook all over feeling like sitting on pins and needles 浑身颤抖觉坐针毡
生气愤怒
Sam感非常生气
(1)Sam felt very angry
(2)Sam stood rooted to the spot his eyes blazing with anger
(3)Sam felt so angry that he stormed out of the room slamming the door furiously behind him
(4)Boiling with rage Sam shook his fist at me
(5) fulled with fury Sam was unable to utter a single word
①I was seized by anger充满愤怒
②He was fuming with rage气发雷霆
③His anger boiled over愤怒爆发
④He could hardlyscarcely contain his rage控制住怒火
⑤He was breathing fire and fury充满着怒火
⑥His voice trembled with anger声音愤怒颤抖
⑦He gave me a look of burning anger愤怒眼
⑧He glared at me with burning eyes灼热目光怒视着
⑨He flared up at the word听字勃然怒
⑩His face clouded with anger气脸色阴沉
感动
①Touched deeplyimmensely we…深深感动…
②Tears filling her eyes she offered her heartfelt gratitude热泪盈眶表示衷心感谢
③With tears streaming down her face she 泪水着脸颊流
3 转折：努力助外界
解决途径：物然(突出谐时间成长)
解决突具体方案基：
1encouragement(某鼓励) 2comfort(某安慰) 3inspiration(突然灵机动) 4effort(努力训练)
5calm(冷静思考) 6kindness(某善良) 7courage(勇敢)
8love(爱心需move(感动)patience(耐心)等适结合) 9help(时帮助)
(然解决方案限某种种方式结合)
鼓起勇气鼓励
pluck uptakegather one’s courage (to do)
毫犹豫
(1)sb could hardly wait to do sth (2)without a second thought (3)without even thinking (4)without delay (5)without hesitation
4 转机：事情似转机抱希感欣慰
似
(1)It was like doing sth (2) It seemed as if that
希
(1)hoping that (2)seefeel a glimmer of hope (3)trying hard to do sth
欣慰
(1)breathed a sign of relief sighed with relief松口气
(2) (a wave of) relief flooded through washed over sb
(3)to one＇s relief 欣慰放心
5 失：问题未解决出现新问题
幸
(1)but bad luck for sb (2) but in vain (3) but without success (4) but no use
知道做什
(1)sb did sth wondering what to do next (2)sb did sth not knowing what to do next
(3)sb did sth unsure of what to do next (4) sb was at a loss what to do
(5)sb was in a dilemma about whether to do sth or not
6 想法：突然想法（句话说明想法）
某想明白 意
(1) It suddenly occurred to sb that + 句 It hitstruck sb that + 句It dawned on sb that+句
(2) (an idea thought) occurred came to sbcameflashed into one’s mindcrowded in one’s mind
(3)one’s mind began to race
7 结局：段时间事情转折
段时间
(1)not long after thatshortly afterwards before long
It didn’t take long before+句It took some time before +句
(2) for an instantmoment
事情转折
(1)To one’s surprise (delight) Strangely enough it turned out that +句
(2)But no second thoughts
(3)But what happened next was pure magic
8 总结：点题呼应前文
直意识
(1)倒装句：Not until+时间状语+did sb realizenotice that + 句
(2)强调句：It was only +时间状语+ that sb realized that + 句
记某话
某脑海中
(1)One＇s word echoedrang out in one’s ears
(2)One’s wordsvoicesong lingeredwhispered in one’s mind head
(3)One’s head was still full of
历教训
(1)感叹句：What aan valuedusefulgreatpainful lesson sb taught mesb learned from sb
What aan enjoyable pleasant wonderful unforgettable memorable interesting valued experience sb had
(3)Down deep in one’s heart某心深处
题型专练
阅读面短文根情节进行续写构成完整事
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car moving Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried Arthur stopped and asked It looks like you’ve got a problem Arthur said
I’m afraid so I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car
Is there something I can do to help Arthur asked The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said Thanks If you’re sure it wouldn’t be too much trouble you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi
No trouble at all I’d be glad to help
The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat After placing it on the ground he turned to get the other one Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking he heard the long loud noise of an alarm
It was from the bankThere had been a robbery (抢劫)
Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank People asked each other What happened But everyone had a different answer
Arthur still carrying the suitcase turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him
She looked at the suitcase and then at him Arthur was surprised Why is she looking at me like that He thought The suitcase She thinks I’m the bank thief
Arthur looked around at the crowd of people He became frightened and without another thought he started to run
注意：
1 续写短文词数应150左右
2 应5短文中标划线关键词语
3 续写部分分两段段开头语已写
4 续写完成请划线标出关键词语
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As he was running Arthur heard the young man shouting behind Stop stop
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Paragraph 2
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur
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[解题步骤]
Step 1 阅读出情节
1年轻汽车发动
2Arthur帮忙搬箱子
3银行发现盗周围片混乱
4Arthur发觉着赃物开始跑
Step 2 构思续情节
(段四五句话)
Paragraph 1
As he was running Arthur heard the young man shouting behind Stop stop
·Arthur意识男偷
·Arthur没停
·Arthur找出租车出租车出租车说警察局
·出租车快开警察局
Paragraph 2
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur
·Arthur车
·箱子警察
·讲箱子程
·偷抓
·结果闹乌龙意识做件蠢事勇敢机立断表扬
Step 3 增加细节(描写)
(1)增加细节：
1时间点(渡)
2天气道具感悟
a天气(偶尔补充)
b道具(with+n + onin one’s hand)
c感悟
i Feeling tiredhappyworriedshamed sb did sth
ii Tired as he was he felt it worthwhile for
(2)造句程中量加渡词非谓语动词适时增加直接引语情节丰富生动直接引语
[模板句型]
时间点渡sb doing sth1 did sth 2 doing sth 3 doing sth 4 doing sth 5 doing sth6 feeling looking
Step 4 成文
Paragraph 1
As he was running Arthur heard the young man shouting behind Stop stop
·Arthur意识男偷
·Arthur停
·找出租车出租车出租车说警察局
·出租车快开警察局
But just at the moment Arthur realized that the young man might be the bank chief So Arthur kept on running trying to his best to look for a taxi Soon he found a taxi parking by the road and jumped into it with the suitcase in his hand looking rather anxious Go to the police station Now The young man behind is a bank thief Arthur said to the driver in a loud voice Then the taxi raced away like the wind leaving the long loud noise of an alarm behind
Paragraph 2
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur
·Arthur车
·讲箱子程
·警察检查箱子
·告知偷早已抓
·闹乌龙意识做件蠢事勇敢机立断表扬
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur got off the taxi and rushed into the police station Arthur told the policeman what had happened to him who had already known about the bank robbery [After checking the suitcase the police man told him There is only clothes in the suitcase And I was informed the thief had been caught a few minutes ago Finally Arthur realized what a foolish thing he had done] [They opened the suitcase and found a large sum of money inside as Arthur expected Then the policeman told Arthur that the thief had been caught Eventually Arthur was awarded for his bravery and right decision]
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