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(月日年星期天气)
(标题)
TodayYesterday Iwe (事件)
In the morning we ______________ then ______________ after that______________ By the time we had a good time Finally I’ll never forget the memorable day ______________________________________ (事件)
From this activity I have learned thatI think ______________ (事件意义感想)
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Date Day of the week
Today is ______________ This afternoon I went to ______________ Then I______________ Sitting on the train I thought ______________ At the next station ______________ She looked ______________ I hesitated ______________ The old lady ______________ Seeing her smile I _______________ I will ______________
日记记录天中发生意义值记录事件日记中会事件发表议阐述态度体会日记中记录事情直接历描述事情日记种类种体裁角度分记事型日记议型日记记事型日记某种序描述某件事情发生发展程议型日记针天某事件某现象表明法态度
日记篇章结构角度入手:首先发生事件现象进行描述事件发展先序进行适添加天气景物心情描述次发表感想议针事件进行感悟议性描述文章立意未提出展推测表示决心态度观点意图希冀等
写英文日记注意点:
1 日记格式
英文日记通常书端正文两部分组成日记常第称记天生活中见闻做想事情中英文日记三格式致样英语日记书端专门写日记日期星期天气左角日期(年月日)星期右角写天天气情况:SunnyFineRainyWindySnowyCloudy等
(1)日期表达种形式年月日写时通常月日年序月份缩写日年逗号隔开例:
A)September 12017September 1st2017省略写成Sept 12017Sept 1st
2017the 1st of September in 2004(月份缩写)
B)月日:September 1September 1st(月份缩写)
C)年月:September 2004the September of 2004(月份缩写)
11st应读作the first
(2)星期省略写放日期前星期日期间标点空格星期缩写:
SaturdayOctober 22nd2004October 22nd2004 Saturday
(3)天气情况必少天气般形容词:SunnyFineRainySnowy 等表示写日期逗号隔开位日记右角:
SaturdayMarch 42017Windy1st January2017Fine
2 日记时态:日记天发生事情回顾常般时发表议感想时现完成时般时
3 日记称:日记记载亲身历应第称语言量口语化事情发生先序清楚准确连贯事情表达出
典例01
假设新华中学学生李华久前学校举办英语竞赛中获等奖校报请写篇稿件刊登英文版面介绍课外学英语验请根提示英语写篇短文:
1 参加英语角益处
2 坚持写英语日记作
3 英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)帮助
注意:
1 词数:120150
2 适增加细节 行文连贯
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思路点拨
文篇提纲类写作涉语言学类话题话题学生熟悉话题语言学学生天必缺少事情话题贴学生生活学生话写符合高考命题思想考生成文时应注意:
1采三段成文结构
2容点:A参加英语角益处B坚持写英语日记作C英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)帮助
3时态:般现时
4 称:第称
5 适连词文章流畅通
6 注意高级词汇句型文章增光添彩
范文赏析
As a high school student I consider English a very important subject In order to learn it well apart from English class I took an active part in English corner and other afterclass English activities which benefit me a lot
In the English corner I meet many friends who share the same interest with me Besides sometimes some foreigners are glad to join us By talking with them my oral English improved a lot I also find it useful to keep English diaries I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English As a saying goes practice makes perfect Only by practice will we make more progress Finally some good English study websites contribute a lot to my improvement Through these websites I can read some classic English passages poems and stories What’s more I can learn some learning skills and methodologies which play an important part in my study process
All in all every road leads to Roma but I believe hard work pays off
典例02
假设红星中学高三(1)班学生李华校报英文版正开展续写雷锋日记活动请根四幅图先序做件事日记形式记述校报投稿
注意:
1日记开头已写
2词数100左右
Saturday June 2Fine
This morning___________________________________________________________________________
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思路点拨
篇图写作四幅图做题时:1 认真读图知四幅图体现做件事2 初步构思考虑词短语句型时态3 连词成句然连句成文充分利学短语句型表述具体容4 反复审核修改错误5 注意汉语提示般说图写话中汉语提示定关时间点物等相关信息参考词汇信息握文章中心应心构思基框架考虑恰词语短语句型充分表达文章容体现身力重环然图单句子串连起串连时注意适连接词语渡性语句读者觉文章中出现跳跃现象更文更紧凑然
范文赏析
Saturday June 2Fine
This morning when I was walking on the street I saw that two travelers were reading a map looking puzzled It seemed they were lost I went up to them and asked how I could help They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No 20 which could take them there directly They appreciated my help greatly Before long the bus came We waved goodbye to each other Seeing them on the bus I felt a kind of satisfaction
Writting1
假定李华昨天参加校举办喜欢书题英语演讲赛请写篇英语日记点:
1描述时赛情况
2表现感受
注意:
1词数120左右(开头已出计入总词数)
2适增加细节行文连贯
Friday 2nd May 2014 Fine
Yesterday afternoon I attended the English speech contest held by my school The topic of it is The book I like best
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范文
Friday 2nd May 2014 Fine
Yesterday afternoon I attended the English speech contest held by my school The topic of it is The book I like best
When I knew that the first five candidates performed very well I felt a little worried At the thought of the words I can do it I became calm a lot Soon it was my turn when I said The book I like best is Three Days to See written by Helen Keller From the book I realize that it would be an excellent rule to live happily each day as if we should die tomorrow my teachers and classmates cheered for me I gained much confidence and went on to do my best Finally I won first prize
Be happy every day and try my best to do everything I’ll keep it in my mind and make it come true
Writing 2
天七月八日午班级召开梦想题班会活动位学畅欲言特介绍职业方面梦想请写篇日记记述班会情况感受
容点:
1 谈谈职业方面梦想
2 介绍梦想原
3 阐述实现梦想
注意:
1 词数100左右
2 文章开头已出计入总词数
July 8th Sunny
All the students talked about their own dreamed jobs in the future in this classmeeting
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范文
July 8th Sunny
All the students talked about their own dreamed jobs in the future in this classmeeting We all believe that our dreams will come true sooner or later
I also talked about my own dream to be a doctor And the reasons are as follows When I was in Grade Seven I was sick and often went to see doctors The doctors were very friendly and they often cheered me up With the help of them I was getting better Now I’m very healthy Since then I have hoped to become a doctor How will I make my dream come true I will study hard to get good grades I’ll read more books about medicine I believe I’ll be a good doctor in the future
Anyhow this classmeeting was indeed meaningful meanwhile I know that the dream I have calls for my efforts Helpfully I can make it
Writing 3
请日记形式写件2018年想社会做事情容必须包括:
1)做什? 2)做? 3)什做?
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Writing 4
假设红星中学高二(1)班学生李华请根四幅图先序英语写篇日记描述周日西山公园踏青程中发生事
注意:词数100左右
Sunday May 4 Fine
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Writing 5
假设2017年2月12日父亲生日面三幅图描绘父亲买完礼物坐铁回家时历件事请根图示英语写篇日记记叙件事谈谈感受
注意:
1词数少100
2适加入细节行文连贯
参考词汇:铁(列车)—— subway train
February 12th 2017
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February 12th 2017
Today is my Dad’s birthday This afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown and bought a present for him Then I took the subway train home Sitting on the train I thought my dad would be very happy when he see the present At the next station an old lady with two heavy bags got on the train and stood in front of me She looked tired I hesitated for a moment and then offered my seat to her The old lady thanked me a lot and sat down Seeing her smile I felt happy I will always be ready to help others in the future
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