高中英语写作系列-句子的拓展和句子的有效讲义


    句子扩展(Sentence Development)

    写作初学者善写较简单句子类句子简短力涵较少英语段落篇章写作中常话题展开叙述学者应长短句穿插灵活较长句子够起充实容展开说理文章逻辑严密作解应句子扩展知识非常重扩展句子常方法添加法列法属法
    添加法
    添加法简单句通添加修饰词短语进行扩展添加成分句中作定语状语等成分句子容更加充实具体
    1添加词汇(形容词副词)
    例:
    She gave me a gift
    送礼物
    She gave me a beautiful gift
    送漂亮礼物
    I agreed with him
    意法
    Reluctantly I agreed with him
    勉强意法
    2添加短语(定式短语分词短语介词短语)
    例:
    It took us three months
    花三月时间
    It took us three months to finish the project花三月时间完成项目
    Li Ming turned on the TV
    李明开电视
    Having finished his homework Li Ming turned on the TV
    写完作业李明开电视
    I read many English books
    读英语书
    I read many English books for the purpose of improving my English level
    提高英语水读英语书
    二列法
    列法扩展句子常两种方法运行结构添加列成分二两两简单句列连词连接副词连起构成列句
    1添加列成分
    例:
    The purposes of writing are to inform to entertain and to persuade
    写作目传递信息提供娱乐说服读者
    2构成列句
    例:
    The news made the lady sad
    消息位女士难
    Her son failed in the National College Entrance Examination so the news made the lady sad
    子高考落榜消息位女士难
    三属法
    两两位等重句子句加句方式连接起构成复合句种扩展句子方法属法属法常名词性句定语句状语句进行扩展
    例:
    What a teacher needs is an alert mind
    教师需敏捷思维
    Thanksgivingwhich falls on the fourth Thursday of November is one of the biggest American holidays感恩节十月第四星期四美国节日
    Xiao Ming went on to study at the Northwest University after he finished his secondary education明中学毕业西北学继续学业百宝箱
    较英汉句子扩展方式
    语言差异仅表现符号表现运符号描述类活动句式结构特征英文树式结构中文竹式结构前者句式会强调干作然辅枝桠英汉句子谓间句法关系差理解述差异助更目标语遣词造句
    节中介绍英语扩展句子方法面起汉语扩展句子方法
    1延伸式扩展
    延伸式扩展短语第层构成成分间关系等列没次分属种扩展形式三种:
    (1)联合短语扩展
    例:
    假山喷泉正开放三角梅
    没念书球
    (2)复指短语扩展
    例:
    国工阶级先锋战士庆油田英雄代表铁王进喜志
    唯值恐惧恐惧身——会退转前进需努力化乌
    (3)连动短语扩展
    查完病房回家躺睡觉
    吃早点买报纸坐汽车进办公室接电话喝茶
    2 连环式扩展
    例:
    闫土——闫土坐→闫土坐
    接着继续设想鸡生鸡鸡卖钱钱买母牛母牛繁殖卖牛钱钱放债······
    3加合式扩展
    例:
    非常困难处境
    爱爱


    效句子(Effective Sentence)

    句子想效起陈述事实表达思想作语篇中句子组成合逻辑整体必须具备清晰性统性连贯性强调性样性特点
    清晰性
    句子清晰性指句子表达信息清晰具体会产生歧义
    歧义般分语音歧义语义歧义句法歧义语音歧义指单词发音相相似造成歧义写作中注重避免两种歧义语义歧义句法歧义
    1语义歧义
    语义歧义指句子中某词短语理解造成歧义种歧义三类原造
    成:形音异义词义短语引起二代词指代明引起三名词格引起
    (1)形音异义词引起歧义
    例:
    Professor Johnson married Joyce
    marry词理解:……结婚······嫁出者做······证婚句话三版译文:
    约翰逊教授乔伊斯结婚
    约翰逊教授乔伊斯嫁出
    约翰逊教授乔伊斯做证婚
    避免类句子歧义需句子中增加语境表达
    句改成:
    Professor Johnson married Joyce who was his beloved daughter
    约翰逊教授心爱女乔伊斯嫁出
    (2)义短语引起歧义
    例:
    The members of the organization have come outcome out词种含义做语时意义宣布赞成反公开性恋身份句话两版译文:
    组织成员宣布赞成(反)某事
    组织成员公开性恋身份
    避免义短语引起歧义旧需句子中增加信息句意明确
    句话改成:
    The members of the organization have come out against the test
    组织成员已宣布反项测试
    者改成:
    The members of the organization have come out as gays
    组织成员已公开性恋身份
    (3)代词指代明引起歧义
    例:
    Smith and Thomas cannot be good friends
    because he is very illtempered
    句中he指Smith指Thomas
    避免义短语引起歧义需明确代词指代象
    句话改成:
    Smith and Thomas cannot be good friends
    because Thomas is very illtempered
    者改成:
    Smith and Thomas cannot be good friends
    because the latter is very illtempered
    (4)名词格引起歧义
    例:
    The memory of Uncle Tom was interesting
    介词of引出者引出象者容句话两版译文:
    汤姆叔叔回忆趣
    回忆汤姆叔叔趣事
    避免名词格引起歧义需句子中增加信息句意明确
    句话改成:
    Uncle Tom is a comedian the memory of him was interesting
    汤姆叔叔喜剧演员回忆趣事
    2 句法歧义
    句法歧义指句法结构角度分析句子存着种解释现象
    (1)形容词修饰关系明引起歧义
    种歧义体现三结构中
    ① more + adj+ n
    结构中more修饰形容词修饰名词
    例:
    We need more scientific evidence
    句话理解:需更具科学性证
    理解:需更科学证
    2 adj+ n+ n
    结构中形容词前名词构成修饰语修饰名词两名词构成名词短语形容词修饰
    例:
    The owner of the coin showed his appreciation to
    the old coin expert
    句话理解:枚钱币表达古币专家谢意
    理解:枚钱币表达年长钱币专家谢意
    3 adi+ n+ and + n
    结构中形容词修饰前名词时修饰两名词
    例:
    Edison is the associate editor and Professor of our university
    句话理解:爱迪生学副编正教授
    理解:爱迪生学副编副教授
    (2)省略造成歧义
    ①较结构简略式常常引起句法歧义
    例:
    Grandma loves me more than you
    句话理解:Grandma loves me more than she loves you
    理解:Grandma loves me more than you love me
    ②简化列结构产生歧义
    例:
    Nick thought Edgar went to China and Joyce did too
    句话理解:Nick thought Edgar went to China and Joyce thought so too
    理解:Nick thought Edgar went to China and Joyce went to China too
    (3)ing形式引起句法歧义
    英语中ing形式动词原形结合构成现分词动名词缺乏文语境情况时难判断v+ing形式现分词动名词引起歧义
    例:
    Visiting scholars can be interesting
    句话理解:拜访学者会趣
    理解:访问学者会趣
    (4)英语否定句引起歧义
    英语中较常见否定范围引起歧义英语否定范围包括两种情况:a)否定范围否定词开始句末修饰性状语前结束b)否定范围否定词起直延伸句末
    例:
    Danny didn't marry Susan because she was rich句话理解:Susan was rich so Danny didn't marry Susan
    because引导原状语句包括否定范围时句话理解:Danny married Susan but the reason is not that Susan was rich
    二统性
    句子统性指句子长短否简单句复合句应做次分明前连贯结构严谨关系致语序正确句子统性求句子语义紧密联系够表达完整意思
    句子常见统表现方面:
    1 语义统
    语义统指句子中两者两意思逻辑毫关系
    例:
    Jasmine is a responsible sister and her brother was crying
    两句语义没必然联系
    2逻辑统
    果两完全思想置句中列关系属关系表示完全破坏句子逻辑统性
    例:
    He finished his homework because he lost his book report
    丢失读书报告完成作业间没逻辑果关系
    3 语态时态统
    句子中行动词涉语态致者动作发生时间符合逻辑关系
    例:
    Peter writes well and three articles have been published by him in magazines
    前两句语态致句子题模糊
    Nicolas has been working in Xi'an several years before he started teaching magic
    前两句时态发生矛盾
    4 形式统
    形式统包括句句语单复数统
    句子谓统等
    例:
    If one wants to succeed we must learn to
    persevere
    句句语单复数统
    He like to go fishing every afternoon
    谓统
    5 语气统
    语气统指英语写作中陈述语气祈语气虚拟语气混
    例:
    Put the magic ring on and the boy still cannot play magic
    前句祈语气句陈述语气说明作者语气句子功掌握
    三连贯性
    句子连贯性指句子连接贯通衔接然句子长短应环环紧扣符合语法逻辑尤应三方面加注意:
    1 行结构
    行结构指两两意思相相位相成分中两点须加注意
    (1)相语法表达具相功句子成分运列连词andbutor等
    例:
    To avoid rust you'd better not make the iron contact with water and to keep it clean all the time(误)To avoid rustyou'd better not make the iron contact with water and keep it clean all the time(正)
    (2)正确相关连词both···andnot··butnot only···but also等
    例:
    The place was not only cold but also it is damp(误)
    The place was not only cold but also damp(正)
    2 句子语谓语意义必须关联例:
    An advantage of both the city and the village would be a good place to live(误)
    A town that can offer the best qualities of both city and village is a good place to live(正)
    3避免悬垂结构
    谓悬垂说修饰词逻辑修饰句子中修饰短语分句
    例:
    To get ready for the examination all the courses must be reviewed(误)
    To get ready for the examination I must review all the courses(正)
    四强调性
    句子中段落中篇章中时常需强调部分根需采部分强调者整句强调强调方式:短句倒装句句子片断排结构圆周句祈句感叹句重复等
    1 部分强调
    (1)句尾强调
    果强调句子中某词语者短语放句子开头者结尾
    例:
    We saw in Zhang Lu quietness and coldness an excellent interpreter
    张璐身静冷静位优秀翻译员
    China's booming smart phone market overtook the United States as the world's largest last year(弱)
    Last year China's booming smart phone market overtook the United States as the world's largest(强)
    年中国断壮智手机市场超美国成世界智机市场
    (2)倒装强调
    倒装强调通倒装句强调句子成分放句首达强调目
    例:
    Seldom have I seen her recently(强调状语)

    On the hill stood a little cottage that contained heaps of hay(强调状语)
    山立着装着草垛房子
    Increasingly enthusiastic he was about music(强调表语)
    越越热衷音乐
    (3)重复强调
    重复词者词重复意思作部分强调种方法
    例:
    The friendship among us will last from generation to generation
    间友谊会代代相传
    In the eleventh hour of the eleventh grade I suddenly realized the role of my teacher
    中学学年时刻突然意识老师作
    (4)强调句型
    强调句型结构:It+iswas+代词名词名词性句形容词状语+thatwhowhomwhichwhose+句子
    例:
    It is he who takes me home带回家It was yesterday that she bought a gift for me买礼物昨天
    2整句强调
    (1)短句
    长句表达逻辑更严密短句长句表达更力
    例:
    Just do it(体育品广告词)
    Nothing is impossible(体育品广告词)
    Time is what you make of it(手表广告词)
    Obey your thirst(饮料广告词)
    Money is not everything There's MasterCard &Visa(信卡广告词)
    (2)完整句
    完整句构成句子中某成分例:
    It's a success after years of preparation A reward they deserve
    (3)倒装句
    种特语序吸引读者注意
    例:
    He was a very smart merchant I heard
    (4)感叹句
    感叹句语气句意强调
    例:
    How hard the workers are working
    How disappointed(句末省略she is)
    (5)反问句
    反问句问答答案蕴涵中语气强烈读者强烈震撼引起鸣够启发读者深入思考
    例:
    We have so much work to dohow can I leave at this moment
    (6)重复词者短语句子
    例:
    Our government is the government of the people by the people for the people
    政府民民治民享政府
    五样性
    1 句式样性
    篇文章言句式样性缺动式动式灵活肯定句否定句交错出现正常语序倒装语序适时采简单句列句错杂体现出作者语言功力需记住样句式选择前提符合题思想表达需
    (1)动式动式
    出突出受事者表达文章客观性者出承启关联文目英语中常动式
    例:
    Police said they caught the murderer they said that they will hang him
    The murderer was caught yesterday and it is said that he will be hanged
    (2)肯定式否定式
    表达样句意时选择肯定式者否定式呈现肯定形式否定意义句子语气强调意义普通否定句更强
    例:
    I don't want to see him
    He is the last person I want to see
    He didn't win the favor of his parentsinlaw He failed to win the favor of his parentsinlaw
    (3)正常语序倒装语序
    正常语序进行客观陈述者描述倒装语序表达较强烈情感
    例:
    I did not realize the significance of PM 25 data until the heavy smog came to affect my lung
    Not until the heavy smog came to affect my lung did I realize the significance of PM 25 data
    (4)简单句列句复合句
    简单句简明扼切中害列句节奏感突出列结构复合句逻辑严密容丰富应根句式特色适时选
    例:
    I agree with the latter(简单句)
    Give him an inch and he will take a yard(列句)寸进尺
    The boy was on his first overseas study so that he felt very nervous(复合句)
    简单句列句复合句果句中进行交叉会文章更节奏感意义更丰富逻辑更严密
    例:
    ①Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities greener ②Green trees line the streets ③Aclean river winds through the cityin which a lot of fishes abound 4On the one side stand rows of willow trees5 On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers
    段文字中长句1③5短句②④长短抑扬顿挫节奏感文章流畅然生动活泼
    2 句子开头样性
    根文章需句子性质词者短语开头
    例:
    Populationresources and environmentthe factors are important to the local economics(位语开头)
    Write a thank you letter I can(行动词作含情态动词句子开头)
    My suggestion you may not take but my love you must understand(名词作宾语开头)
    In books are embalmed the greatest thoughts of all ages(介词短语作点状语开头)
    With globalization have come many problems(介词短语作伴状语开头)
    Well or sick calm or worriedDick is always restrained in his expression(形容词作状语开头)
    Pleasantly will he take your advice(副词作方式状语开头)
    To take care of the disabled mother he took her with him when he went to college(动词定式作目状语开头)
    3 状语样性
    状语英语句子成分中种类变化较状语样性增加英语语言样性重部分
    例:
    Stepping carelessly off the pavementhe was knocked down by the bus
    心离开行道公汽车撞倒(分词做状语)
    Born and bred in the countryside he was
    bewildered by the big city
    生长乡座城市感迷惑(分词做状语)
    Since her mother had fallen illthe girl had to do the housework by herself
    母亲生病女孩做家务(句做状语)
    From a bird's eye view we can see the city is like a
    chessboard(介词短语做状语)
    鸟瞰座城市发现棋盘
    4 连接词样性
    作文中简单句刚开始时候常出现情况文章成简单句堆砌便运复合句时时常选择soandthenbutorhowever等固定连接词达丰富表达方式目相反句子结构显松散呆板避免种现象通种类更等级更高连接词尤表示属关系连接词who whichthatbecause since although after as before when wheneverifunless as if等仅够丰富句型够思想表达更清楚结构更紧凑句意更连贯
    例:
    Helen is sure to get her payIt is due to herWhy does she complain
    句三简单句句式显乏味说明作者语言功底薄弱果连接词since表示步关系然语义会更连贯语言会更流畅
    Why does Helen complain since she is sure to get the pay due to her

    Every year there are millions of newlygraduated students They want to find jobs These jobs can pay them a lot of money However that is impossible
    段文字简单句表达间逻辑关系含糊清意思支离破碎果连接词单句前合形成次关系较复杂容关系表达层次清楚结构严谨
    Every year millions of newlygraduated students want to find jobs that can pay them a lot of money which is impossible though


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