谋篇布局:审题构思
第段:开头23句交代写信目
第二段:体34句交代信件容
第三段:结尾重申希+期回复祝福
语言细节
词汇:精准体
句式:简洁长短句结合(非谓语定语句动语态)
衔接:恰渡词
书写:新高考应文写作求80词左右
1 行10字左右80作文写8行
2 行原直线原(笔直力度)曲线原(饱满圆润)
3 整洁涂改
第段:开头23句
果较熟识朋友问候必介绍How is everything going (with you)
果熟识介绍问候I’m Li Hua a high school student currently studying in China I’m Li Hua chairman of the Students’ Union
2 说明写信背景(某事事)目
Delighted to know that… I’m writing to高兴知(某事)…
KnowingLearningHearing that you I’d like to
I’m sorry to tell you to knowto learnto hear that you …遗憾告诉知(某事)…
I feel honoredprivileged (to do sth) 做某事荣幸
I’m writing to extend my warmest welcome to you(表达热烈欢迎)
I’m writing to give you my full support (全力支持)
I’m writing to warmly invite you (to join usto join in it)(热情邀请起做参加…)
I’m writing to inform you of some relevant detailsinformation (告知相关细节)
I’m writing to inquire about some relevant information (询问相关信息)
I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you(for your) (表达感谢)
I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you on (your doing)(表示祝贺)
I’m writing to give you my sincere apology for (my failing to do sth) (…表达真情道歉)
I’m writing to share with you some advice about the problem(告知关问题建议)
I’m writing to recommend to you (推荐…)
I’m writing to seek some guidance on how to (寻求关做…指导)
I’m writing to ask forseek some helpask a favor of you (寻求帮助)
I’m writing to apply for the positionpost as a (申请做…工作)
I’m writing to expressextend my comfort to you (安慰)
I’m writing to complain about (the book I bought) (投诉…)
承启(果需)
Here are some suggestions for you Here are some relevant details about it Some details about it are as follows The reasons are as follows
第二段 正文45句
1 点具体细节容1) 活动目容
句:The activity is aimed at giving us an opportunity to do旨做…
inspire the students’ creativity 鼓励学生创造力 raise the awareness of 提高…意识
enrich the school life 丰富学校生活 have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture 更解中国传统文化 encourage the students’ to take outdoor exercises 鼓励学生参加户外活动
句二:To offer a platform to the students to do sth our school will organize various activities ranging from (doing) sth to (doing) sth
学生提供做某事台学校组织种活动… …
句三:Aimed at arousing students’ enthusiasm for traditional Chinese culture a competition is scheduledplanned to be organized in the school lecture hall 激发学生中国传统文化热情计划学校报告厅组织次赛
Aimed at doing sth various activities will be arranged ranging fromto
2) 安排计划时间点
句:活动名称 is( scheduled) to be held 点+时间 句二:it will start 时间点 and last for 时间
To begin with as scheduled the activity will take placebe held in the Students’ Club from 8 pm to 9 pm next Sunday
首先计划活动星期天晚8时9时学校俱乐部举行
The exhibition whose theme is will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 1
展览会6月1日午2时5时校厅举行题…
If it is convenient for you let’s meet at outside the school gate If not let me know what time suits you best
2 表示建议推荐容理列举
To begin with you’d better do sth
SecondlyIn addition to that it is required that sb (should) do sth 求应该做
BesidesMore importantly (Doing) is an excellent way to做方法
It would be a good idea if you 果…错意
3 意义处
Not only can you introduce China to them but also you can know more about other countries as well
介绍中国更解国家
Not only will it be a golden opportunity for you to do but also you can which is of great significance importance for you to do sth
做某事说仅机会做…做…重
学更解enable us to learn more about 提供…机会provide us with a good chance to do sth
培养…兴趣develop one’s interest in 体验独特文化享受种美食experience unique cultures and enjoy various delicious food
带快乐 bring us great pleasure 促进友谊promote friendship 促进相互解improve mutual understanding
放松减少学压力give us relaxation and relieve stress from school work
I’m sureconvinced that it can leave a wonderful impression on youyou will benefit a lot from this activity you will have a good time
相信会留印象相信会中受益相信会玩开心
Those who are interested are welcome to participate in it欢迎兴趣参加
If you are interested please sign up (for it) on our school website before日期 感兴趣请…前校网报名
第三段:结尾2句
I 01建议信I hope you will take my suggestion into consideration
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account
02介绍信If you have any questions do not hesitate to ask me
Please let me know if you have any suggestions on how to …
Please reply to me as soon as possible for more detailed information
03感谢信 I hope you will come to visit China in the future and I can return your kindness
Without your help the performance couldn’t have been so successful
Your favorable consideration will be highly appreciated
04祝贺信 I hope your future will be promising(前途)
Sincere congratulations to you again
I wish you greater success in the future
05申请信 I do hope that I can meet your requirements
I am sure that I can live up to your expectations
I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration
I sincerely hope that my application can be favorably considered
06邀请信 I sincerely hope you can accept our invitation and look forward to your arrival
I would appreciate it if you could come I’m looking forward to your early reply
If you’re interested in it please reply to me as soon as possible I am sure you’ll have a good time with us
07道歉信 I sincerely apologize again for my mistake fault
I am sorry again for the sudden change of the plan
Anyhow I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for …
08推()荐信 I strongly recommend her as the very person (who is fit) for this position
I believe I am able to do the job if my application is accepted
And I will be available for an interview anytime at your convenience
09询问信 I’m looking forward to your early reply
I would be grateful if you could inform me of more details
10投诉信Could you change a new one for me or return my money give a full refund
Your attention and reply will be highly appreciated
Taking into account all the factors above I request a replacement as soon as possible
11安慰信 Please convey my sympathy to you and your family
We are all hoping you will be back soon and we can help you catch up with your lessons
II 表示祝愿Best wishes I wish you all the best I wish you good luckgreat success in the future
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