样写英语作文
(渠县清溪中学严畅)
通教接触英语试题英语写作水考查表现更注重交际情景设置体裁求等然客观存种种复杂原学生作文走进误区走出作文误区呢?需针误区采取相应措施 误区:匆忙笔准备足
学生作文时匆匆眼写想里写里心欲结果条理清杂乱章尤写错单词句子时勾勾划划卷面整直接影响分 应策略:正确步骤构思般步骤:
1. 认真审题审题包括点格式词数表达中心注意事项等信息斟酌否会导致偏题离题
2. 确定文体时态书信日记图写作事先明确文体求格式写法会时确定作文时态
3. 草稿修改然抄写样保证错误减少保证卷面整洁 误区二:表达畅语法错误
包括单词拼写时态非谓语动词动词搭配谓致介词等方面错误面篇作:
① Today was Friday My brother and I went to Central park
② There was many people there
③ Some were playing volleyball others were swimming and chatting
④ When we are going to play football we saw a little girl was crying under a tree ⑤ We walked there and ask her why do she cry She said she was lost
⑥ We tried to find her address
⑦ We sent her home
⑧ We both are very happy
语法错误修改方法:
句①中时态错误was 应该is 句②中系动词错误根 many people 句中was 应该were 句④中句时态错误are 应该were句中句型结构错误根see sb Doing sth 知 was 应该删掉句⑤中宾语句中语序时态错误Why do she cry 应该why she cried 句⑥⑦中and then 连接应该效果会更句⑧中时态错误are 应该were
应策略:
1. 时单词关尤易混单词短语找间处处帮助记忆
2. 语法根写作具体求具体分析运千万死板情况时态语态确定文民实根加强语法知识掌握时掌握扎实写起作文运
误区三:中心明切题准
英语写作中文写作样求文章旨明确定中心事件体现定中心学生英语作文结构松散言物表现典型流水帐 原学生动手写作前缺乏必审题环节写作容文章体现旨等认识足考生语言功底错语言表达流畅切题够准确捕捉信息够全面导致高分
应策略:
准确审题明确中心写足字数目写出中心事件突出情感态度2008年达州市中考英语求A Letter to the Children in Wenchuan 题作文首先明确文体求letter书信格式写次容求 关心情支持鼓励中心写作
误区四:忽略文化差异张冠李戴
学生忽视中西方文化差异生硬汉语惯表达出现明显中式倾降低作文质量中考作文中常见错误请面例子:
① Hang Zhou is a beautiful city
② I and my father like playing basketball
③ He studied not very hard
④ In the shop the people are very friendly
简析:句①犯错误清楚英语中名拼写边起句② 犯错误知道英语中列语位置关系(应My father and I)句③not运错误应改didn’t study 句 ④错误出介词短语 In the shop 位置应放句尾
应策略:
注意中西方文化差异表达方法找二者表达方式表达序规律意识运减少类错误
误区五:想象成分太冗长罗嗦
学生写作中担心文章长度够加作文求中适增减细节字字翻译误解毫边际想象致离题万里乱题
应策略:
字字实示学生简单译非翻译学生理解写作示甚翻译点间加简练恰必关联词关联句握点甚细节稍加充实
误区六:忽视细节谓失分
学生作文重视方面分点忽视诸书写标点段落安排写等细节分点
应策略:
1. 写开头结尾般开头写太啰嗦找恰切入点快带入题简洁明快结尾样拖泥带水适评表达感情写出点晴笔
2. 标点符号写安排段落
3. 书写清楚整洁规范
总明确作文中常出现错误采取相应策写英语作文保证分点高攀事
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