04 素质教育篇
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根中文英文提示完成篇少50词文段写作文中已出容计入总词数提示词语仅供选请写出校名姓名
假李华学校正开展安全月宣传活动倡议家制作关安全教育题海报班交换生Peter发邮件询问相关事情请英语回复封邮件告诉海报交时间分享设计海报想法
提示词语：designsafety rulecarefulprotectpicture
提示问题：When should you hand in the poster
What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster
Dear Peter
I＇m glad to receive your email ______________________________________________________________________________________
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If there is anything more that I can help with please let me know
Yours
Li Hua
写作思路
篇作文求李华身份Peter写封邮件告诉关制作关安全教育题海报相关事宜题目中出提示问题知短文中应包括容：首先告诉Peter海报交时间然分享设计海报想法第二容应该短文体题目中没规定具体写作容学生应联系实际生活展开合理想象容补充完整正确英语表达出写作中难点短文应般现时第二称叙述写作时应注意：首先合理安排短文容叙述应层次条理表示先序词短语First Second Last but not least等等题目中出提示词应该短文中次应注意文章表达英语句式结构汉语根汉语思维逐词翻译应该句式整体考虑先确定干结构然添加修饰成分提升作文档次应注意高级词汇短语复合句非谓语动词等复杂结构时语句间恰连接成分文意连贯表达流畅
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Dear Peter
I＇m glad to receive your email As it is requiredyou are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday
Being your close friendI am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you First and foremostthe basic safety rules are of great importancewhich should be included in your poster In the second placefollowing the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school Last but by no means leastif I were youI would add a few suggestions about safety awarenessconsidering that better safe than sorry In additionit is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable
If there is anything more that I can help with please let me know
Yours
Li Hua
名师点评
篇优秀作文短文作者根题目求Peter写邮件告诉制作题海报事情短文优点：首先文章容完整结构清晰符合题目求题目中出开头结尾短文包括两容：第段句话告诉Peter交海报时间文章中心重点放第二段段中作者Peter分享制作海报想法四方面进行阐述容非常详实First and foremost In the second place Last but by no means least In addition等短语分清段层次叙述非常条理次短文中正确时态称语法规范词准确较复杂句式结构表现作者较强语言运力短文中较句型：Being your close friendI am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with youIn the second placefollowing the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of schoolIn additionit is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable等
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日前某校进行题压力谁说问卷调查（结果图）请根求写篇英语短文参加该校征文活动
老师倾诉 朋友倾诉 家长倾诉 说
容包括：1 简描述调查结果
2 喜欢谁倾诉压力？什？
3 提出2条缓解压力建议
求：1 文章必须包括点逐条翻译进行适拓展
2 书写规范80—100词开头已出计入总词数
3 文中出现真实校名名
When teens have stress they will talk about their stress to different people Here are the results about our survey ______________________________________________________________________
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When teens have stress they will talk about their stress to different people Here are the results about our survey Thirtyfive percent of students will talk about their stress to their teachers forty percent of students will talk to their friends only fifteen percent of students talk to their parents but only ten percent of students talk to nobody For me I like to tell my friends about the pressure because we are all the same age they sometimes feel the same as us and we can communicate with and understand each other easily But as a student we should learn to relieve stress
First of all we should properly face the pressure Stress is everywhere in our daily life so we can＇t be afraid of them and try our best to deal with them Secondly we can listen to light music or do some proper sports which can let us relax Finally believe in yourself We should believe in ourselves We can deal with any trouble with the help of ourselves or others
Stress is everywhere and we must face the pressure properly
解析
1 题干解读：篇文章属话题性＋图表型作文根图表容说明压力诉说象情况文中会较数字说明做然阐述压力喜欢谁说原提出该缓解压力条建议建议身实际出发时缓解压力起分享
2 例文点评：文章采取三段式第段图表容进行阐述阐述喜欢谁诉说压力什？第二段出缓解压力建议第三段做总结概括压力处正视压力文章结构完整段落衔接语言表达清晰准确语句简单易懂
3 高分亮点：
短语：talk aboutthe same ascommunicate withdeal withbe afraid of
句型：so引导列句because引导原状语句
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席呼吁：呵护孩子眼睛拥光明未学校 广播站邀请写篇关保护视力倡议书请根信息写篇文章：
现 状 1 越越孩子带眼镜2 超 70初中生视3 父母老师担忧
原 1 学2 电子产品3 缺少睡眠
建 议 1 天少做两次眼保健操
2 进行户外运动
3 健康饮食
……
视力差：have poor eyesight
求：
1 写容必须包括表格提供信息适发挥
2 文章少 90 词开头已出计入总词数
3 语意通意思连贯条理清楚书写规范
4 文中出现真实姓名校名等信息
Poor eyesight is a serious problem among the youth of our country It’s amazing that the situation is going from bad to worse It is time that we take the problem seriously
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Poor eyesight is a serious problem among the youth of our country It’s amazing that the situation is going from bad to worse It is time that we take the problem seriously
At present more and more students wear glasses over 70 of the middle school students have poor eyesight Both parents and teachers are worried about it
Here are some main causes First some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest Second some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long timeThird some students may not have enough sleep
In order to have good eyesight we should do eye exercises at least twice a day We can also try to do more sports in our spare time We had better eat healthy food Of course it is important to have a good habit of using our eyes For example we shouldn’t read in the sun or in bed
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them
解析
题干分析：篇求写篇关保护视力倡议书响应席呼吁：呵护孩子眼睛拥光明未观察提示表格写作容包括目前现产生问题原已提出相关建议
例文点评：篇优秀例文完成试题规定务语言表达符合英语惯准确运时态例文中运般现时例文第段首先提出目前国青少年视力良社会问题第二段详细介绍产生问题三点原第三段提出效建议号召保护视力例文亮点词句增强逻辑关系增加文意思连贯词准确句子通行文连贯
高分亮点：
短语：At present目前more and more越越be worried about担心too much太like to do sth喜欢做某事In order to sth做某事at least少try one’s best to do sth某努力做某事eye exercises眼保健操in one’s spare time某空闲时间
句型：（1）First some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest Sb spend time (in) doing sth某花费时间做某事（2）Of course it is important to have a good habit of using our eyes It is +adj (for sb) to do sth(某说)做某事时样
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假李华表妹Lily面期末考试压力天甚出现失眠状况请写封电子邮件帮助快调整状态迎接考试
提示词： relaxed music exercise believe in
求 1 参考提示词适发挥
2 语句通意思连贯书写工整
3 文中出现真实信息(姓名校名名等)
4 词数：少70词(开头结尾已出计入总词数)
Dear Lily
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Yours
Li Hua
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Dear Lily
I＇m sorry that I heard from you I think proper pressure is normal because exams are important for us This happened to me Let me tell you about my advice You can do something you like to relax yourself For example I like to listen to music because some soft music can help us relax I exercise regularly to increase my ability to work under pressure We have to learn to believe in ourselves If you think these suggestions is good for you you can have a try I hope my suggestions can help you
Yours
Li Hua
解析
1题干解读：该题目属信件写作求根信写回信信件容应该完整出相关建议帮助快调整状态迎接考试适副词连词等增加亮点写时阅读遍减少语法错误犯单词拼写错误
2例文点评：篇优秀例文完整出相关缓解考试压力建议避免出现累赘例文结构清晰行文连贯恰运副词连词等渡增强整篇文章逻辑关系
3高分亮点：词组：heard fromproper pressuremy advicerelax yourselfsoft musicexercise regularlybelieve in ourselvesis good for等
句型： I think proper pressure is normal because exams are important for us Let me tell you about my adviceFor example I like to listen to music because some soft music can help us relax If you think these suggestions is good for you you can have a try I hope my suggestions can help you
点睛
书面表达：
首先认真审题清题目中求点然根提示容列出写作点点中表达例heard fromproper pressuremy advicerelax yourselfsoft musicexercise regularlybelieve in ourselves等然紧扣点动笔写作写作程中注意句句段段间渡必时适运表示转折果列较等关系连词文章渡稳然流畅however仔细检查单词拼写错误标点符号误等检查语法结构否合理重复啰嗦语言写否正确词数否符合求等
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年3月5号学雷锋纪念日校组织志愿者夕阳红敬老院开展学雷锋送温暖活动假学生张华请活动情况介绍美国笔友Ben分享次美历
活动时间
3月5日
活动点
夕阳红敬老院（Xiyanghong Nursing Home)
参加员
学校志愿者
活动容
1 送鲜花水果 2帮助扫卫生 3……
活动感想
1关爱尊重老 2 ……
求：
(1)表达清楚语法正确文连贯
(2)必须包括表格中信息求适发挥
(3)词数：100左右（开头结尾已出计入总词数）
(4)真实姓名校名名等
Dear Ben
Thank you for your last email Let me tell you what we did in our school on March 5
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I＇d like to hear about volunteering work in your school
Best wishes
Zhang Hua
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Dear Ben
Thank you for your last email Let me tell you what we did in our school on March 5
As soon as we got to Xiyanghong Nursing Home people there gave us a warm welcome The elderly people were very excited to see us We brought some flowers and fruits to them
Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them After that some of us took a walk with them chatted with each other and some of us played chess with them When it was time for us volunteers to leave they were thankful for our kindness and they felt somewhat sad
I promise to myself that I will go to see them whenever I＇m free We should care for the elderly people and respect them
I＇d like to hear about volunteering work in your school
Best wishes
Zhang Hua
解析
1题干解读：文篇书信作文校组织志愿者夕阳红敬老院开展学雷锋送温暖活动假学生张华请活动情况介绍美国笔友Ben分享次美历首先认真审题根提示容列出写作点点中表达然紧扣点动笔写作
2例文点评：文时态般时态称第称文章紧扣题目点容完整表述准确语言表述符合语法结构造句符合英语表达惯
3高分亮点：
短语：as soon as get togive sb a warm welcomebring sth to sbtake a walk with sbbe thankful for…
句型：As soon as we got to Xiyanghong Nursing Home people there gave us a warm welcomeWhen it was time for us volunteers to leave they were thankful for our kindness and they felt somewhat sad
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寒假定寒假计划吧？校英语俱乐部开展My plan for the winter holiday题征文活动请根面思维导图写篇英语短文英语俱乐部投稿
寒假计划
学
1功课（作业复）
2阅读（类型原）
兴趣
1运动
2艺术
1旅游
2
求：1）表达清楚语法正确文连贯
2）必须包括…中点容适发挥
3）词数：100 词左右（开头已出计入总词数）
4）真实姓名校名名等
My plan for the winter holiday
Winter holiday is coming Here is my plan for the winter holiday
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My plan for the winter holiday
Winter holiday is coming Here is my plan for the winter holiday First I’ll keep on doing some sports such as playing PingPong and running I think they are good for my health Next I hope to relax by reading some books and watching TV What’s more I must finish the exercises left by teachers because I will go to see my grandparents with mom and dad I miss them very much So do they Finally I would like to travel somewhere interesting with my parents Probably I’ll go to Hainan I want to enjoy the beautiful beaches there
This is my plan for the winter holiday I’m looking forward to my happy winter holiday
解析
题干解读：题列出详细思维导图根篇思维导图完成文章思维导图形式分段文写寒假计划时态注意时
例文点评：文序详细描述寒假计划渡词时态根作者需作出适变化条理清晰文笔流畅
高分亮点：
短语：keep ongood forWhat’s morewould like to
句型：I miss them very much So do they
Finally I would like to travel somewhere interesting with my parents
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Write at least 60 words on the topicWeekend or Not？according to the information given．（阅读容
汤姆周末？题写篇少 60 词短文标点符号占格．）
孩子父母安排没周末图中 Tom请分析图中种现象谈谈法 Weekend or Not？题写篇少 60 词英语短文 Parents 杂志投稿父母通阅读文章启发．
求：
1．简单描述Tom周末状态提出具体想法出建议
2．短文中出现Tom外名校名相关信息否予评分．
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Weekend or Not？
Tom has to attend lots of classes at weekends． He has little time for his favorite sport﹣soccer． Still his parents are pushing him to do more math exercises which worries him a lot．（点汤姆周末）Nowadays many students are under much pressure like Tom． Their parents believe it is necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible（高分句型）．
As a result some students are stressed out and therefore lose interest in learning anything．（高分句型二） What is worsethey may not be able to learn to manage their own life．（点二数孩子周末） I do hope all the children can have the freedom to choose what they like to do and enjoy their weekends． （点三观点）
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抗击新型冠状病毒（NCP）次寒假必须呆家里假Alice作九年级1班班长请班学写封信．建议烦躁家做放松活动保证身心健康针网课期间取更进步予建议．
写作点：
1． 焦虑快重返校园．
2． 家进行放松活动：
（1）阅读听音乐棋．
（2）室活动（做眼保健操）．
3． 针网课期间取更进步予学建议．
写作求：
（1）真实姓名学校名．
（2）适加入细节容充实行文连贯．
（3）字迹工整语言精练表达准确条理清晰．
（4）少80词．
Dear classmates
How is everything going
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Best wishes
Yours
Alice
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Dear classmates
How is everything going？ Don＇t worry． It＇s a special winter holiday because of NCP． Everyone must stay at home to prevent it．We will go back to school as soon as possible．（焦虑快重返校园）
I think reading listening to music or playing chess can make you relax if you feel depressed and bored． 高分句型Spending some time doing indoor exercise is necessary such as doing eye exercises．（家进行放松活动）
In the special period online teaching is carried out every day． You are supposed to be on time on weekdays． It is necessary for you to have a quiet learning environment．高分句型二Clean up any distraction on the table before class． During the class write down the key points of the knowledge and the difficult parts that you don＇t understand． You can ask for advice through Wechat QQ or other ways as soon as possible． While studying hard don＇t forget to exercise． Stretching your body is also useful．（针网课期间取更进步予学建议）
We believe winter will finally pass and spring is sure to come． I＇m looking forward to seeing you soon．
Best wishes
Yours
Alice
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日某校开展志愿者日活动鼓励学利周末走出校园社区做力事情机100名学发放调查问卷图调查问卷统计结果
go to old people home
visit sick children in the hospital
clean up the parks in the community
请两段话写篇短文第段简说明图表容第二段图表中选出符合实际项结合历谈谈志愿者日度
求：1．词数少80词
2．开头已出计入总词数
Recently a survey was done among 100 students in a school about how students spent the Volunteer Day on weekends．
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Recently a survey was done among 100 students in a school about how students spent the Volunteer Day on weekends． Here is the result． 25 of the students chose to help clean up the parks in the community． 30 of the students spent their weekends visiting sick children in the hospital． （高分句型）Nearly half of the students went to old people’s home to visit the old people there．（简说明图标容）
Last Sunday I went to old people’s home with my friends Lucy and Sam． We cleaned the rooms for the old people and told them many interesting things in our school． They told us stories about the past and how things used to be． Lucy and I are both good at singing so we sang for them． They were so happy and sang along with us． An old grandpa also taught us how to play kung fu．（高分句型二） Sam likes telling jokes and his jokes made the old people laugh happily． It was a really meaningful Sunday．（结合敬老院历）
In a word volunteering is really a great experience for us． We can get such a strong feeling of satisfaction from helping others．（总结心）
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某校正开展走进新时代争合格中学生演讲赛请We actwe improve题写篇演讲稿谈谈中学生学课知识外应该做什？ 演讲稿应包括容：
（1）学会立诚实友善举止文明
（2）培养惯发展兴趣断创新
（3）关心谐相处懂感恩
（4）……
求：（1）点齐全适发挥
（2）文中出现真实姓名校名
（3）卷面整洁书写美观适加 2﹣3 分
（4）词数：90 词左右．开头部分已出计入总词数．
Ladies and gentlemen
We have entered a new area．As students______________________________________
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Ladies and gentlemen
We have entered a new area． As students it’s our duty to study hard． But to be a qualified middle school student I think we have a lot of things to do．（点题）
First we should learn to be independent and honest． We’re supposed to be friendly to others and behave politely in public．高分句型 Second we should have good habits． Habits play an important role in our life． We’d better develop our interests and the ability to create． 高分句型二Third we should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us． Value the time we spend with our family and friends in our daily life． Last but not least I think we should exercise more to keep healthy．（应该做什）
In a word the more we act the better we will improve．（总结全文）
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中学生课活动丰富彩喜欢什请选择中项根提示An afterschool activity题写篇 80 词左右短文学分享
点：1．喜欢课活动什课活动时间点
2．谈谈带益处
3．建议
求：1．容必须包括点适发挥增加细节行文连贯
2．语篇完整语句通语法正确书写规范
3．文中出现名校名名否予评分
An afterschool activity
There are many afterschool activities． I like _______________________________________
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An afterschool activity
Students in middle schools have many kinds of after﹣school activities．Maybe they do sportsgo hikingwatch TV or surf on the Internet．Even some students put all their free time into studying the textbook knowledge．But my favorite after﹣school activity is collecting stamps．Let me tell you the reason．（喜欢课外活动）
FirstI can learn a lot from the stamps．There are many Chinese cultures in the stamps高分句型．When I collect themI can learn more about my motherland高分句型二．SecondI can make more friends．Many students love collecting stamps．Because of the same hobbies and interestswe can talk and do the same things．Then we can be good friends．（带益处）
In a wordafterschool activities can make us relax．You can take up a hobby that you like． Why not join in it？（建议）
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根中文英文提示完成篇少50词文段写作文中已出容计入总词数提示词语仅供选请写出校名姓名
假李华学校正开展安全月宣传活动倡议家制作关安全教育题海报班交换生Peter发邮件询问相关事情请英语回复封邮件告诉海报交时间分享设计海报想法
提示词语：designsafety rulecarefulprotectpicture
提示问题：When should you hand in the poster
What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster
Dear Peter
I＇m glad to receive your email ______________________________________________________________________________________
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If there is anything more that I can help with please let me know
Yours
Li Hua
写作思路
篇作文求李华身份Peter写封邮件告诉关制作关安全教育题海报相关事宜题目中出提示问题知短文中应包括容：首先告诉Peter海报交时间然分享设计海报想法第二容应该短文体题目中没规定具体写作容学生应联系实际生活展开合理想象容补充完整正确英语表达出写作中难点短文应般现时第二称叙述写作时应注意：首先合理安排短文容叙述应层次条理表示先序词短语First Second Last but not least等等题目中出提示词应该短文中次应注意文章表达英语句式结构汉语根汉语思维逐词翻译应该句式整体考虑先确定干结构然添加修饰成分提升作文档次应注意高级词汇短语复合句非谓语动词等复杂结构时语句间恰连接成分文意连贯表达流畅
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Dear Peter
I＇m glad to receive your email As it is requiredyou are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday
Being your close friendI am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you First and foremostthe basic safety rules are of great importancewhich should be included in your poster In the second placefollowing the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school Last but by no means leastif I were youI would add a few suggestions about safety awarenessconsidering that better safe than sorry In additionit is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable
If there is anything more that I can help with please let me know
Yours
Li Hua
名师点评
篇优秀作文短文作者根题目求Peter写邮件告诉制作题海报事情短文优点：首先文章容完整结构清晰符合题目求题目中出开头结尾短文包括两容：第段句话告诉Peter交海报时间文章中心重点放第二段段中作者Peter分享制作海报想法四方面进行阐述容非常详实First and foremost In the second place Last but by no means least In addition等短语分清段层次叙述非常条理次短文中正确时态称语法规范词准确较复杂句式结构表现作者较强语言运力短文中较句型：Being your close friendI am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with youIn the second placefollowing the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of schoolIn additionit is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable等
（二）
日前某校进行题压力谁说问卷调查（结果图）请根求写篇英语短文参加该校征文活动
老师倾诉 朋友倾诉 家长倾诉 说
容包括：1 简描述调查结果
2 喜欢谁倾诉压力？什？
3 提出2条缓解压力建议
求：1 文章必须包括点逐条翻译进行适拓展
2 书写规范80—100词开头已出计入总词数
3 文中出现真实校名名
When teens have stress they will talk about their stress to different people Here are the results about our survey ______________________________________________________________________
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When teens have stress they will talk about their stress to different people Here are the results about our survey Thirtyfive percent of students will talk about their stress to their teachers forty percent of students will talk to their friends only fifteen percent of students talk to their parents but only ten percent of students talk to nobody For me I like to tell my friends about the pressure because we are all the same age they sometimes feel the same as us and we can communicate with and understand each other easily But as a student we should learn to relieve stress
First of all we should properly face the pressure Stress is everywhere in our daily life so we can＇t be afraid of them and try our best to deal with them Secondly we can listen to light music or do some proper sports which can let us relax Finally believe in yourself We should believe in ourselves We can deal with any trouble with the help of ourselves or others
Stress is everywhere and we must face the pressure properly
解析
1 题干解读：篇文章属话题性＋图表型作文根图表容说明压力诉说象情况文中会较数字说明做然阐述压力喜欢谁说原提出该缓解压力条建议建议身实际出发时缓解压力起分享
2 例文点评：文章采取三段式第段图表容进行阐述阐述喜欢谁诉说压力什？第二段出缓解压力建议第三段做总结概括压力处正视压力文章结构完整段落衔接语言表达清晰准确语句简单易懂
3 高分亮点：
短语：talk aboutthe same ascommunicate withdeal withbe afraid of
句型：so引导列句because引导原状语句
（三）
席呼吁：呵护孩子眼睛拥光明未学校 广播站邀请写篇关保护视力倡议书请根信息写篇文章：
现 状 1 越越孩子带眼镜2 超 70初中生视3 父母老师担忧
原 1 学2 电子产品3 缺少睡眠
建 议 1 天少做两次眼保健操
2 进行户外运动
3 健康饮食
……
视力差：have poor eyesight
求：
1 写容必须包括表格提供信息适发挥
2 文章少 90 词开头已出计入总词数
3 语意通意思连贯条理清楚书写规范
4 文中出现真实姓名校名等信息
Poor eyesight is a serious problem among the youth of our country It’s amazing that the situation is going from bad to worse It is time that we take the problem seriously
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Poor eyesight is a serious problem among the youth of our country It’s amazing that the situation is going from bad to worse It is time that we take the problem seriously
At present more and more students wear glasses over 70 of the middle school students have poor eyesight Both parents and teachers are worried about it
Here are some main causes First some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest Second some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long timeThird some students may not have enough sleep
In order to have good eyesight we should do eye exercises at least twice a day We can also try to do more sports in our spare time We had better eat healthy food Of course it is important to have a good habit of using our eyes For example we shouldn’t read in the sun or in bed
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them
解析
题干分析：篇求写篇关保护视力倡议书响应席呼吁：呵护孩子眼睛拥光明未观察提示表格写作容包括目前现产生问题原已提出相关建议
例文点评：篇优秀例文完成试题规定务语言表达符合英语惯准确运时态例文中运般现时例文第段首先提出目前国青少年视力良社会问题第二段详细介绍产生问题三点原第三段提出效建议号召保护视力例文亮点词句增强逻辑关系增加文意思连贯词准确句子通行文连贯
高分亮点：
短语：At present目前more and more越越be worried about担心too much太like to do sth喜欢做某事In order to sth做某事at least少try one’s best to do sth某努力做某事eye exercises眼保健操in one’s spare time某空闲时间
句型：（1）First some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest Sb spend time (in) doing sth某花费时间做某事（2）Of course it is important to have a good habit of using our eyes It is +adj (for sb) to do sth(某说)做某事时样
（四）
假李华表妹Lily面期末考试压力天甚出现失眠状况请写封电子邮件帮助快调整状态迎接考试
提示词： relaxed music exercise believe in
求 1 参考提示词适发挥
2 语句通意思连贯书写工整
3 文中出现真实信息(姓名校名名等)
4 词数：少70词(开头结尾已出计入总词数)
Dear Lily
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Yours
Li Hua
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Dear Lily
I＇m sorry that I heard from you I think proper pressure is normal because exams are important for us This happened to me Let me tell you about my advice You can do something you like to relax yourself For example I like to listen to music because some soft music can help us relax I exercise regularly to increase my ability to work under pressure We have to learn to believe in ourselves If you think these suggestions is good for you you can have a try I hope my suggestions can help you
Yours
Li Hua
解析
1题干解读：该题目属信件写作求根信写回信信件容应该完整出相关建议帮助快调整状态迎接考试适副词连词等增加亮点写时阅读遍减少语法错误犯单词拼写错误
2例文点评：篇优秀例文完整出相关缓解考试压力建议避免出现累赘例文结构清晰行文连贯恰运副词连词等渡增强整篇文章逻辑关系
3高分亮点：词组：heard fromproper pressuremy advicerelax yourselfsoft musicexercise regularlybelieve in ourselvesis good for等
句型： I think proper pressure is normal because exams are important for us Let me tell you about my adviceFor example I like to listen to music because some soft music can help us relax If you think these suggestions is good for you you can have a try I hope my suggestions can help you
点睛
书面表达：
首先认真审题清题目中求点然根提示容列出写作点点中表达例heard fromproper pressuremy advicerelax yourselfsoft musicexercise regularlybelieve in ourselves等然紧扣点动笔写作写作程中注意句句段段间渡必时适运表示转折果列较等关系连词文章渡稳然流畅however仔细检查单词拼写错误标点符号误等检查语法结构否合理重复啰嗦语言写否正确词数否符合求等
（五）
年3月5号学雷锋纪念日校组织志愿者夕阳红敬老院开展学雷锋送温暖活动假学生张华请活动情况介绍美国笔友Ben分享次美历
活动时间
3月5日
活动点
夕阳红敬老院（Xiyanghong Nursing Home)
参加员
学校志愿者
活动容
1 送鲜花水果 2帮助扫卫生 3……
活动感想
1关爱尊重老 2 ……
求：
(1)表达清楚语法正确文连贯
(2)必须包括表格中信息求适发挥
(3)词数：100左右（开头结尾已出计入总词数）
(4)真实姓名校名名等
Dear Ben
Thank you for your last email Let me tell you what we did in our school on March 5
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I＇d like to hear about volunteering work in your school
Best wishes
Zhang Hua
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Dear Ben
Thank you for your last email Let me tell you what we did in our school on March 5
As soon as we got to Xiyanghong Nursing Home people there gave us a warm welcome The elderly people were very excited to see us We brought some flowers and fruits to them
Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them After that some of us took a walk with them chatted with each other and some of us played chess with them When it was time for us volunteers to leave they were thankful for our kindness and they felt somewhat sad
I promise to myself that I will go to see them whenever I＇m free We should care for the elderly people and respect them
I＇d like to hear about volunteering work in your school
Best wishes
Zhang Hua
解析
1题干解读：文篇书信作文校组织志愿者夕阳红敬老院开展学雷锋送温暖活动假学生张华请活动情况介绍美国笔友Ben分享次美历首先认真审题根提示容列出写作点点中表达然紧扣点动笔写作
2例文点评：文时态般时态称第称文章紧扣题目点容完整表述准确语言表述符合语法结构造句符合英语表达惯
3高分亮点：
短语：as soon as get togive sb a warm welcomebring sth to sbtake a walk with sbbe thankful for…
句型：As soon as we got to Xiyanghong Nursing Home people there gave us a warm welcomeWhen it was time for us volunteers to leave they were thankful for our kindness and they felt somewhat sad
（六）
寒假定寒假计划吧？校英语俱乐部开展My plan for the winter holiday题征文活动请根面思维导图写篇英语短文英语俱乐部投稿
寒假计划
学
1功课（作业复）
2阅读（类型原）
兴趣
1运动
2艺术
1旅游
2
求：1）表达清楚语法正确文连贯
2）必须包括…中点容适发挥
3）词数：100 词左右（开头已出计入总词数）
4）真实姓名校名名等
My plan for the winter holiday
Winter holiday is coming Here is my plan for the winter holiday
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My plan for the winter holiday
Winter holiday is coming Here is my plan for the winter holiday First I’ll keep on doing some sports such as playing PingPong and running I think they are good for my health Next I hope to relax by reading some books and watching TV What’s more I must finish the exercises left by teachers because I will go to see my grandparents with mom and dad I miss them very much So do they Finally I would like to travel somewhere interesting with my parents Probably I’ll go to Hainan I want to enjoy the beautiful beaches there
This is my plan for the winter holiday I’m looking forward to my happy winter holiday
解析
题干解读：题列出详细思维导图根篇思维导图完成文章思维导图形式分段文写寒假计划时态注意时
例文点评：文序详细描述寒假计划渡词时态根作者需作出适变化条理清晰文笔流畅
高分亮点：
短语：keep ongood forWhat’s morewould like to
句型：I miss them very much So do they
Finally I would like to travel somewhere interesting with my parents
（七）
Write at least 60 words on the topicWeekend or Not？according to the information given．（阅读容
汤姆周末？题写篇少 60 词短文标点符号占格．）
孩子父母安排没周末图中 Tom请分析图中种现象谈谈法 Weekend or Not？题写篇少 60 词英语短文 Parents 杂志投稿父母通阅读文章启发．
求：
1．简单描述Tom周末状态提出具体想法出建议
2．短文中出现Tom外名校名相关信息否予评分．
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Weekend or Not？
Tom has to attend lots of classes at weekends． He has little time for his favorite sport﹣soccer． Still his parents are pushing him to do more math exercises which worries him a lot．（点汤姆周末）Nowadays many students are under much pressure like Tom． Their parents believe it is necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible（高分句型）．
As a result some students are stressed out and therefore lose interest in learning anything．（高分句型二） What is worsethey may not be able to learn to manage their own life．（点二数孩子周末） I do hope all the children can have the freedom to choose what they like to do and enjoy their weekends． （点三观点）
（八）
抗击新型冠状病毒（NCP）次寒假必须呆家里假Alice作九年级1班班长请班学写封信．建议烦躁家做放松活动保证身心健康针网课期间取更进步予建议．
写作点：
1． 焦虑快重返校园．
2． 家进行放松活动：
（1）阅读听音乐棋．
（2）室活动（做眼保健操）．
3． 针网课期间取更进步予学建议．
写作求：
（1）真实姓名学校名．
（2）适加入细节容充实行文连贯．
（3）字迹工整语言精练表达准确条理清晰．
（4）少80词．
Dear classmates
How is everything going
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Best wishes
Yours
Alice
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Dear classmates
How is everything going？ Don＇t worry． It＇s a special winter holiday because of NCP． Everyone must stay at home to prevent it．We will go back to school as soon as possible．（焦虑快重返校园）
I think reading listening to music or playing chess can make you relax if you feel depressed and bored． 高分句型Spending some time doing indoor exercise is necessary such as doing eye exercises．（家进行放松活动）
In the special period online teaching is carried out every day． You are supposed to be on time on weekdays． It is necessary for you to have a quiet learning environment．高分句型二Clean up any distraction on the table before class． During the class write down the key points of the knowledge and the difficult parts that you don＇t understand． You can ask for advice through Wechat QQ or other ways as soon as possible． While studying hard don＇t forget to exercise． Stretching your body is also useful．（针网课期间取更进步予学建议）
We believe winter will finally pass and spring is sure to come． I＇m looking forward to seeing you soon．
Best wishes
Yours
Alice
（九）
日某校开展志愿者日活动鼓励学利周末走出校园社区做力事情机100名学发放调查问卷图调查问卷统计结果
go to old people home
visit sick children in the hospital
clean up the parks in the community
请两段话写篇短文第段简说明图表容第二段图表中选出符合实际项结合历谈谈志愿者日度
求：1．词数少80词
2．开头已出计入总词数
Recently a survey was done among 100 students in a school about how students spent the Volunteer Day on weekends．
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Recently a survey was done among 100 students in a school about how students spent the Volunteer Day on weekends． Here is the result． 25 of the students chose to help clean up the parks in the community． 30 of the students spent their weekends visiting sick children in the hospital． （高分句型）Nearly half of the students went to old people’s home to visit the old people there．（简说明图标容）
Last Sunday I went to old people’s home with my friends Lucy and Sam． We cleaned the rooms for the old people and told them many interesting things in our school． They told us stories about the past and how things used to be． Lucy and I are both good at singing so we sang for them． They were so happy and sang along with us． An old grandpa also taught us how to play kung fu．（高分句型二） Sam likes telling jokes and his jokes made the old people laugh happily． It was a really meaningful Sunday．（结合敬老院历）
In a word volunteering is really a great experience for us． We can get such a strong feeling of satisfaction from helping others．（总结心）
（十）
某校正开展走进新时代争合格中学生演讲赛请We actwe improve题写篇演讲稿谈谈中学生学课知识外应该做什？ 演讲稿应包括容：
（1）学会立诚实友善举止文明
（2）培养惯发展兴趣断创新
（3）关心谐相处懂感恩
（4）……
求：（1）点齐全适发挥
（2）文中出现真实姓名校名
（3）卷面整洁书写美观适加 2﹣3 分
（4）词数：90 词左右．开头部分已出计入总词数．
Ladies and gentlemen
We have entered a new area．As students______________________________________
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Ladies and gentlemen
We have entered a new area． As students it’s our duty to study hard． But to be a qualified middle school student I think we have a lot of things to do．（点题）
First we should learn to be independent and honest． We’re supposed to be friendly to others and behave politely in public．高分句型 Second we should have good habits． Habits play an important role in our life． We’d better develop our interests and the ability to create． 高分句型二Third we should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us． Value the time we spend with our family and friends in our daily life． Last but not least I think we should exercise more to keep healthy．（应该做什）
In a word the more we act the better we will improve．（总结全文）
（十）
中学生课活动丰富彩喜欢什请选择中项根提示An afterschool activity题写篇 80 词左右短文学分享
点：1．喜欢课活动什课活动时间点
2．谈谈带益处
3．建议
求：1．容必须包括点适发挥增加细节行文连贯
2．语篇完整语句通语法正确书写规范
3．文中出现名校名名否予评分
An afterschool activity
There are many afterschool activities． I like _______________________________________
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An afterschool activity
Students in middle schools have many kinds of after﹣school activities．Maybe they do sportsgo hikingwatch TV or surf on the Internet．Even some students put all their free time into studying the textbook knowledge．But my favorite after﹣school activity is collecting stamps．Let me tell you the reason．（喜欢课外活动）
FirstI can learn a lot from the stamps．There are many Chinese cultures in the stamps高分句型．When I collect themI can learn more about my motherland高分句型二．SecondI can make more friends．Many students love collecting stamps．Because of the same hobbies and interestswe can talk and do the same things．Then we can be good friends．（带益处）
In a wordafterschool activities can make us relax．You can take up a hobby that you like． Why not join in it？（建议）
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