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信息化时代英语已成生活缺部分作中学生更应该学英语请 My English Learning题写篇短文
容包括:1学英语重性
2谈谈学英语历
3谈谈感悟
写作求:1词数80左右开头结尾已出计入总词数
2文中出现真实校名姓名
关键词:important subject progress listen to take notes practice take part in
My English learning
English is widely used in the world
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If we do like these I think we can become a good English learner
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English is widely used in the world I think it’s important for us to learn it well
English is one of my subjects It plays an important part in my daily study But at the beginning I was not good at it and I felt worried My English teacher told me not to give it up And she also gave me some suggestions on how to learn English well I made much progress in English later
I think it’s important for us to listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes so that I can go over my lessons later I also try to catch every chance to practice listening and speaking Reading more books is also a good way If we do like these I think we can become a good English learner
解析
篇材料作文介绍学英语重性谈谈学英语历感悟结合材料知文考查般现时般时称第三称注意谓致问题句子结构系表结构注意常见句式应:
English is……I think……My English teacher told……I also try to……等句式应写作中注意运代词注意种句式交运写作中注意叙述序符合逻辑关系
点睛
文结构紧凑语言简练开头介绍学英语非常重接介绍学英语历认成名优秀英语学者处at the beginning be good at give up make progress take notes practice doing sth等词组运文章增色少
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假张华外学朋友王伟发电子邮件请教学英语.请根点提示英语回封电子邮件.
点提示:1.英语电影听英语歌曲猜测生词意思
2.外教交谈
3.单词写纸条利纸条记单词.
求:1.语言通点齐全意思连贯条理清楚书写规范
2.词数:100左右开头结尾已出计入总词数.
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Dear Wang Wei
I received your email yesterday. In the email you asked me how to improve your English. Now I'd like to give you some advice.高分句型(引出话题)
First watching English films and listening to English songs are great ways to learn English Watch and listen several times and guess the meaning of the new words.
Second having a conversation with a foreign teacher is also a good way. You'd better start it with greetings or a question.高分句型二 Also smile before you speak and do not feel shy.
Third write four or five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in your room. Read the words when you see them and try to use them. (具体介绍学英语建议)
These are my suggestions. I hope they are useful to you.(希)
Yours
Zhang Hua
(三)
越越年轻沉迷网络游戏.请根面表格里容提示How to Beat the Computer Game Addiction (沉迷瘾)题写篇英文短文谈谈网络游戏危害出解决问题建议.
①网络游戏危害
浪费时间
危害健康
危害
②解决问题建议
缩短线时间
增加阅读
散步
听音乐
参加活动
建议
求: 1.词数: 80﹣100 (开头结尾已出容计入总词数)
2.短文中应包括:①网络游戏危害部分全部提示容②解决问题建议部分少三项提示容.出现真实名名.
3.文章条理清楚意思连贯语句通卷面书写工整句式规范标点符号正确.
How to Beat the Computer Game Addiction
Nowadays many young people like computer games. Some of them are even addicted to playing the games.
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All in all getting rid of this bad habit and leading a healthy life do help young people to enjoy more.
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How to Beat the Computer Game Addiction
Nowadays many young people like computer games. Some of them are even addicted to playing the games.(点题)
It not only wastes time but also does harm to health.高分句型Some students spend a lot of money on games.Some students even borrow money to play games.This has brought financial hardship to families.(危害)
Here are some advice to solve the problem.In your free time listen to music or go for a walk.It's very relaxing.Take part in some meaningful activities such as reading activities speech contests volunteer work and so on.Besides I think parents should spend more time with their children.高分句型二(建议)
All in all getting rid of this bad habit and leading a healthy life do help young people to enjoy more.(总结全文)
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请仔细观察面图片根提示求写篇短文.
提示:(1)What are the man and the boy doing?
(2)What kind of influence does using mobile phones may bring?
(3)What is your attitude (态度) towards this behavior?
求:(1)短文须包括提示容适发挥
(2)短文中出现真实名校名名
(3)词数80左右(开头已出计入总词数).
参考词汇:secretly technology natural convenient focus on (集中注意力……)
We can see a man and a boy in the picture. The man is ________.
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We can see a man and a boy in the picture. The man is teaching a class. The boy is having a class but he is playing with his mobile phone secretly.(介绍图中干什)
With the fast development of technology it is natural for students to have mobile phones in hand.高分句型 They can use their mobile phones to do something they like at any time in any place. It seems very convenient. But the mobile phones also bring some bad influences on their study and life. They can't focus on their study. They lose themselves in their own life and don't want to communicate with others.高分句型二(手机危害)
As students I think we should pay attention to what our teacher says instead of playing with the phones. What's more we can't spend too much time playing with the phones in our free time.(态度)
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年史长寒假学寻常体验﹣﹣空中课堂居家学居家运动等.逍遥纠结迷惘心改变……请根图提示结合身历 写篇英语短文分享心路历程发表观点.
At first
I felt
later
I started to…
Now
I…
Fact
Opinion: I realize that I've changed. …
注意:1. 文中出现真实名校名
2. 词数110词左右开头已出计入总词数.
My winter holiday has come to an end this year and it has brought me an unforgettable experience.
At first_________________________________________________________________________
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My winter holiday has come to an end this year and it has brought me an unforgettable experience.(点题)
At first I didn't use to online classes. I felt so upset because I could only stay at home. 高分句型Later I began to study online at home.I gradually got used to this kind of life.Now I keep up having online classes every day.(心情变化)In factonline classes are more convenient because we don't have to go to school.It can improve students' learning abilities. It's good for students to communicate with excellent teachers online.高分句型二 The teachers and students can share better educational resources.(事实)
I realize that I've changed a lot.I think online classes are not only interesting but also improve students' learning ability. (观点)
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南京阳光中学年接特世界交流学生更南京学生活校学生会面全体学生招募阳光志愿者假李明请根面招募广告英文写封荐信
Volunteers Wanted
Required Qualifications
Good English and Chinese
Helpful patient outgoing
Good knowledge of Chinese culture
Duties
Teach Chinese&introduce Chinese culture
Show exchange students around Nanjing
Working hours
400 pm500 pm Wednesday 800 am1200 am Sunday
Contact Info
Ms Yang Email iindayang@163com
Join us
注意:
1 点逐陈述适发挥
2 词数80左右荐信开头结尾已出计入总词数.
3 文中提关考生身份信息校名名等.
Dear Ms Yang
I would to be a sunshine volunteer _____________________________________________________
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I will be very happy if I am chosen to be a volunteer I'm really looking forward to your reply
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
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Dear Ms Yang
I would like to be sunshine volunteerFirst I am good at both English and ChineseAnd I am sure I can teach exchange students Chinese wellI am also helpful and I am always ready to help those in needBesidesI am patient enough everything in detaili have such a good knowledge of the Chinese culture that can help them know the beauty of itI can make good plans for their trips because I know Nanjing wellI am outgoing and I think it’s easy for me to make friends with themI am free from 400pm to 500pm on WednesdayI can teach them Chinese during this timeI can also spend the whole Sunday morning showing them around Nanjing
I will be very happy if I am chosen to be a volunteerIam really looking forward to your reply
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
解析
篇书面表达写封作学校阳光志愿者荐信篇材料作文招募广告写作容考生否满足招募求入手写作时首先选择熟悉短语者句型力范围选择句式时赋予变化样更驾驭时选择合适连接词点组织成完整整体
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现学智手机(smart phone)智手机学生活带便利时 产生许影响身边越越学成低头族(phubbers)假 李华 校英语园正征文请投稿谈谈智手机法 正确智手机
提示词语:advantages convenient proper study
提示问题:
What do you think of smart phones
What do you do with your own smart phone
Refuse to be phubbers
More and more people are using smartphones nowadays _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Refuse to be phubbers
More and more people are using smart phones Smartphones are helpful to our lives We can use them to read news shop online and so on It is very useful and convenient In fact smartphones make our life colorful
However every coin has two sides Sometimes some of us spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams It has caused bad effects on us. Phubbers can be seen here and there One Sunday morning I was looking at my smartphone while walking A car nearly hit me How terrible I won't do it any more
So I think we should use our smartphones properly and don't use them too much We should pay more attention to our schoolwork I will use my smart phone wisely and try not to be phubbers
解析
题干分析:阅读题干求谈谈智手机法正确智手机智手机学生活带便利时会产生许影响写作文时仅写出弊写出利时表达观点
例文点评:例文采取三段式写作手法第段首先阐述目前手机状况点明手机利弊第二段重点写手机造成坏处写观点法例文中运般现时时亮点词句增强逻辑关系增加文意思连贯词准确句子通行文连贯
高分亮点:
短语:be helpful to……帮助here and there处not any morepay more attention to注意try to do sth努力做某事
句型:(1)In factsmartphones make our life colorful.事实智手机生活丰富彩in fact事实 make +n.+adj. make our life colorful生活丰富彩(2)Sometimes some of us spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams.时中花太时间智手机玩游戏考试结果糟糕and连接两列谓语spend some time doing sth 花时间做某事
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疫情防控全国中学迫延迟开学.线教学应运生学生助网络台开启精彩纷呈网学旅.新型学方式更发挥效教育部某英文报纸合作开设专栏鼓励学话教育部长形式目前线教学问题展抒见.假设李华请写封信教育部长谈谈线学感受容包括:
1.简介绍说明写信意图
2.线教学处
3.线教学存问题原提出建议.
作文求:
1.抄原文 作文中出现学校真实名称学生真实姓名.
2.语句连贯词数 80 左右.
Dear Minister
I hope this email finds you in good health._____________________________________________
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I am looking forward to your reply.
Best regards
Li Hua
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Dear Minister
I hope this email finds you in good health.Schools and colleges across the country have been forced to delay the start of classes because of controlling the outbreak. Online teaching has been more popular.Here I would like to express my opinion.(写信意图)Online teaching has many advantages.First students don't have to go to school.They can take lessons at home on computers or mobile phones.Secondly students can repeat what they don't understand.In addition online teaching costs less because both teachers and students can share resources.高分句型(处)There are also problems with online teaching.Some students play games on the Internet instead of studying.Besides online teaching can't communicate face to face.(问题)I hope parents pay more attention to their children to prevent them from spending time playing computer games.高分句型二I also hope to improve online teaching so that teachers and students can communicate better.(建议)
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best regards
Li Hua
(九)
2020 年新年伊始受新型冠状病毒(novel coronavirus)影响全国 民家中进行学工作.作初三历生里第 次学校线学课程.线学已持续两月时间段时 间里肯定深感悟.期英语学报邀请英文写篇文章介绍 线学认识.
容:1.线学校学
2.推荐线学方法
求:1.容完整语言流畅书写规范.
2.短文中出现真实姓名校名.100 词左右.
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Affected by a novel coronavirusonline teaching has been more popular.But there are some differences between online learning and school learning.(点题)Online learning is through a computer or mobile phone.Teachers and students communicate through computers or mobile phones.In school teachers and students are taught and learned face to face.They each have their advantages and disadvantages.(线学校学)When students study online they had better save videos of the class so that they can review what they don't understand.高分句型Besidesstudents from different areas or schools can share learning resources.(推荐线学方法)
I hope parents pay more attention to their children to prevent them from spending time playing computer games.高分句型二I also hope to improve online teaching so that teachers and students can communicate better.(希)
(十)
假贝贝远澳利亚笔友Andrew写封邮件告诉关读书周事情想解情况法.请根提问回复封英文邮件.
From: Andrew@Australia. com
To: Beibei@Suzhou. com
We will have a Reading Week next month. Every student should read a book and share it with others. I'm not sure which book to read. I remember you like reading very much. Here are some questions I want to ask you.
Can you tell me the reasons why reading is important?
How much time do you spend reading every day?
What kind of book do you like best? Where do you get your books?
Can you tell me something about the book you've read recently and what you have learned from the book
?
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours.
Andrew
注意:1.词数90左右开头结尾已写计入总词数
2.回复须包括点适发挥.全文连贯通.
Dear Andrew
I'm glad you will have a Reading Week.
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I hope you will find my answers useful to you. Write to me any time if you have other questions.
Best wishes
Beibei
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Dear Andrew
I′m glad you will have a Reading Week. (引出话题)I think reading is really important because it's really useful.高分句型(观点) It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us relaxed.(作) I usually read for an hour every day. I like reading novels best.高分句型二 And I often borrow books from the school library. (做法)I have just finished a book about Robinson. It is a novel about how Robinson successfully survived after spending many years on a little island and finally went back to his family. From him I learned that whatever we met we should never give up.(朗读书籍启示)
I hope you will find my answers useful to you. Write to me any time if you have other questions.(希)
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初中三年生活学中定取少进步生活技获学方法掌握良惯养成.请选中方面结合身历谈谈样取进步.容求:
(1)字数80﹣100字.开头已出.计入字数.
(2)文中出现真实姓名.
How time flies I have made great progress in my past three years.
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How time flies I have made great progress in my past three years.I used to be lazy and wasn't interested in English.(懒惰英语敢兴趣) Last yearmy new EnglishMrs Liuhad a long conversation with me. She gave me great help and encouraged me not to give up.高分句型She taught me some good ways of learning English.(老师帮助交方法)So I made a decision to study hard at English. For exampleI take notes in class. I watch English movies as often as possible.高分句型二I spent much time learning English every day.(老师教方法努力学英语)
Now I'm glad that I have made some progress and caught up with others in my class.(取进步班学)
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