05 现代生活篇
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根相关研究预测果缺乏效干预措施 2025 年中国 5000 万超重童居世界首位假校园网名记者针问题请根面点提示写篇英语短文
提示：
1 国青少年肥胖问题日益严重
2 吃太高脂肪食品运动导致青 少年肥胖原
3 建议青少年健康饮食运动养成良 生活惯
求：
写作容必须包含提示容适发挥
80 词左右文章开头已出计入总词 数
A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if any thing isn’t done_____________________________________________________________________________
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A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if anything isn＇t done In China the problem is becoming more and more serious because most overweight children like eating fatty food and they hardly exercise
How should we solve the problem Firstly children must have healthy eating habits They should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat and junk food Secondly they should exercise often It＇ll make them healthy and feel good Finally keep some good living habits such as getting up early and going to bed early
In a word healthy eating proper exercise and good living habits can keep children from getting fatter
写作指导
健康息息相关话题学选择身作切入点详细讲述制定运动计划
（二）
假李华英国朋友Jack写封电子邮件 告知目前新型冠状病毒肺炎形势 告诉防御措施请注意防护点
1 城市控制疫情已取较成功
2注意防护减少外出带口罩外出勤洗手等
3表达战胜疫情信心
注意
1适增加细节 行文连贯
280100词开头结尾已出计入总词数
参考词汇：novel coronavirus（新型冠状病毒）口罩：mask
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Dear Jack
How is everything going Novel coronavirus has spread throughout the world Our city has achieved great success in controlling it I have some advice for you on how to prevent it
The most important thing is to stay at home try not to get together with your family and friends Second wash your hands often with soap and water It is a useful way to keep you away from the virus Third when you have to go out you must wear a mask to cover your mouth and nose and learn how to put it on take it off and throw it away correctly Remember if you have a fever or a cough you had better go to a hospital and let a doctor give you further examination All of these are helpful to keep you safe
We believe winter will finally pass and spring is sure to come We will go back to school as soon as possible
Hope everything goes well with you
Yours
Li Hua
解析
1题干解读：篇材料作文求李华身份第称英国朋友Jack写封电子邮件告知目前新型冠状病毒肺炎形势告诉防御措施书写时注意全题干提示点文句通容完整
2例文点评：例文层次分明第层讲述新型冠状病毒已传遍全球第二层讲述防范措施第三层展战胜疫情信心短文陈述中心突出层次间机联系
3高分亮点：篇例文运短语spread throughout the worldachieve great success in have some advice for you on keep you away from文中定式句式The most important thing is to stay at homeIt is a useful way to keep you away from the virustry not to get together with your family and friendsAll of these are helpful to keep you safe种复合句条件状语句if you have a fever or a cough you had better go to a hospital 宾语句We believe winter will finally pass and spring is sure to come
点睛
篇材料作文书写前认真阅读题干解题干求确定中心话题题干求分短文层次确定层次容短文起逻辑清晰建议表序副词短语表达关防御措施短文更条理
（三）
假阳光中学李华毕业学生活三年母校充满眷恋感恩想报刊发表篇英语文章描述母校请根提示写篇短文
学校
①优美学环境
②现代化操场
学
①相互学相互帮助
②积极参加课外活动提高力
老师
①切求严格
②(拟点）
感想
(拟两点）
求：
1 文中出现真实姓名校名
2 逐字翻译适发挥……部分需拟
3 词数90左右
My Mother School
I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School I have enjoyed a lot during the past three years
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I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School I have enjoyed a lot during the past three years It’s a very beautiful school which provides us with a good environment to study There is a modern playground in our school and we often play basketball there
Besides that we often learn from each other and help each other in our daily life We take an active part in afterschool activities and it improves our abilities The teachers are strict with us but they are patient enough to explain everything to us When something worries me I often ask my teacher for help
I’m proud I can study in this school and I’ll remember my mother school forever
解析
试题分析：篇该材料作文写写三年母校感想题材料较详细写作中注意学校老师学三方面进行叙述表达感想根材料容知文时态称问题较复杂注意时态时间状语搭配注意谓致问题写作中应注意描述全面性语言表述应该符合语法结构造句应该符合英语表达惯
考点：提纲类作文
点评：类作首先做认真阅读材料跑题偏题写作中注意基础写作常识犯低级错误时积累足够定获满意分数外应付考试选择背诵范文样应考时会法
（四）
根文字提示请 How to Keep Safe in School话题写篇80100词英语短文谈谈法
点1描述件发生身发生校园意外事件(结果
2提出避免种校园意外建议(少两条)
3呼吁学注意校园安全
求1文中出现真实校名姓名2短文开头已出计入总词数
提示词汇 not run in the hall ways stop… from doing pay attention to
How to Keep Safe in School
Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough For example_____
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How to Keep Safe in School
Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough For example one day two students ran after each other in the hallway Suddenly one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor Therefore he had to stay in hospital for several days So I think students should walk and do not run in the hallways And the teachers had better keep one eye on the students after class and stop them from running At last I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school
解析
题干解读：篇材料作文写三方面容：描述件发生校园里意外事件写明结果般时态提出少两条避免意外发生建议般现时呼吁学注意校园安全时注意提示词汇
例文点评：篇短文容清晰完整语言简洁正确首先举例描述发生校园里意外事件程结果接着I think引入建议I hope+句方式呼吁学生注意校园安全
高分亮点：短语：ran after each other because offell downkeep one eye onstop them from runningpay attention to
句型：had better do sth做某事I hope +句
（五）
昨天班召开次告陋走文明题班会会老师谈谈身边学变化请根表格里容写篇关王明学文章
表现
现表现
常学架(fight)
学相处融洽( be good with)
花时间玩电脑游戏(spend time doing)
积极 (active)参加项活动 (activity)
常吃垃圾食品( junk food)
健康生活惯( living habits)
课堂吃东西睡觉(eitheror)
认真听课时完成(finish)作业
考试格(fail)
门学科取成绩尤 ( especially)数学
注意1文章必须包括容点适发挥短文意思连贯语句通
2出现真实名校名名字数80左右(文章开头已出计入总字数)
Wang Ming is my classmate He had made great progress this term In the past
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Wang Ming is my classmate He had made great progress this term In the past he always fought with others He used to spend much time playing computer games And he often ate junk food In class he either ate or slept He always failed the exam
But now he changed a lot He can be good with other students He take an active part in all kinds of activities and becomes very outgoing He has healthy eating habits Also he listens to the teachers carefully in class and finishes his homework on time So he gets good grades in all subjects especially math Now we all like him
解析
题干解读：文属材料作文根班召题班会告陋走文明题班会谈谈身边学变化篇文中涉现变化文中需般时般现时态
2例文点评：篇优秀作文完成试题规定务文两段式第段介绍情况第二段现变化语言表达符合英语惯准确运时态谓致特亮点词句增强逻辑关系增加文意思连贯词准确句子通行文连贯
3高分亮点：
短语：make great progressin the pastfight witheither …or…take an active part inhealthy eating habits
句型：He used to spend much time playing computer games（used to do 句型）He take an active part in all kinds of activities and becomes very outgoing
（六）
初三学生Sandy面中考面父母老师期天堆成山作业感非常苦恼昨天时电视妈妈吵架摔门写信老师倾诉烦恼请根列提示老师Nancy身份英语写封回信
提示：
1．舒缓目前压力
2．安排天学休息
3．处理父母关系
注意：
1．必须包括点中提示容作适发挥
2．文中出现真实姓名学校名称
3．表达清楚语句通意思连贯书写规范
4．词数少90词（开头已出计入总词数）
Dear Sandy
I’m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me． Here is my advice．_____________________________________________________________________
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Yours
Nancy
满分范文
Dear Sandy
I’m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me． Here is my advice．（点题）
First it’s a good choice to take up a hobby to help you relax and reduce your pressure．高分句型Second you can make plans for your everyday life． After you study for about two hours you can take a walk outside and try to relax． Besides don’t stay up late． It’s not good for your health．Third never argue with your parents． You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them． Discuss your problems with them and tell them your ideas． They will help you find better ways to solve them．（建议）
In a word you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents．高分句型二（总结全文）
Yours
Nancy
（七）
九年级学生活繁忙中困惑泪水进步喜悦．请根面提示Our School Life in Grade Nine题写篇词数80左右短文介绍九年级学校生活提出希建议．
提示：
1． 学校：老师认真负责充满爱心学生：……（少发挥两点）
2． 周末作业：作业舍弃爱周末活动：锻炼电视
愿：……（发挥两点）
求：1． 短文须包括提示点适发挥
2． 短文中出现真实名校名名
3． 词数80左右（开头已出计入总词数）．
参考词汇：patient carefully actively stressed紧张
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Our School Life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student．高分句型 Here is what our school life is like now．（点题）
At school all of our teachers work very hard．Most of them are kind﹣hearted and patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems．As for students in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively． After classwe are busy doing our homework． We all work hard to improve ourselves．
On weekends we spend much time doing homework so we can’t spare time for our hobbies any more．I feel a little stressedso I try to play basketball or watch TV to get relaxed．I hope to work hard to make my dream come true． I also wish my classmates healthy and happy every day．（介绍学校生活）
No pains no gains．The more carefully we plan our day the more colorful our school life will be．高分句型二（总结全文）
（八）
年国校园欺凌事件屡发生遭受校园欺凌学生容易情绪抑郁焦虑敢学校甚会出现心理问题等严重果．请My opinions about school bullying题写篇英语短文谈谈法．
提示：
1．What do you think of school bullying？
2．What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied？
求：
1．提示信息应全部包括适发挥行文连贯
280 词．
参考词汇：心理问题 mental health problems．
My opinions about school bullying
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My opinions about school bullying
School bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society． Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset． Some students are afraid of going to school． School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems． So how should we stop school bullying？（校园欺凌法）
If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied I will tell the teachers or my parents at once．高分句型 It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own．高分句型二（果欺负会做）
（九）
初中生活结束三年定留美回忆．英语俱乐部征文求写篇110词左右文章描述难忘校园生活师生情学情．际说感激祝福话．文中出现真实名校名．
满分范文
How time fliesOur junior high school days are coming to an end and I＇d like to say a lot to you all who have helped me and stayed with me．高分句型（点题）
FirstlyI＇d like to thank my great teachers．They teach me not only how to learn but also how to be a man．Though they look strict and seriousthey are always kind to me．（感谢老师） SecondlyI want to thank my friendly classmates．As long as I have troublethey are always around me．I miss the happy
days when we stay with each other．I love all of you．（感谢学） FinallyI＇m going to thank my parents．They always look after me very well to keep me healthy．And they often encourage me to work hard at school．高分句型二（感谢父母）
（十）
亲爱学假 Alex 初中生活结束高中生活．疫情（epidemic situation） 原代表（represent） 初三毕业生做网络直播演讲．
请根点英语写篇演讲稿．
（1）初中三年学生活总结（少三方面）
（2）老师学父母感谢简说明原
（3）谈谈未梦想肩负社会责实现
求：1．文章语句通句式样．适增加细节行文连贯．
2．开头结尾已出计入总词数．
3．文中出现真实姓名学校班级．
4．词数：100词左右．
Dear ladies and gentlemen
That＇s all for my speech． Thank you for your attention
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Dear ladies and gentlemen
It＇s my honor to make a speech at the graduating ceremony．高分句型（点题）
It has been three years since we came to the beautiful school．Our school is very beautiful．We have colourful activities every term．Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．高分句型二
We have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years．（初中三年学生活总结）
We should thank our teachersour parents and our classmates．The first group is my classmates．We＇ve worked hard together and we＇ve even shared some difficult times together．The second group is our parents．I thank you for making a home where I feel both safe and relaxed．I also thank you for your help with my homework．The third group is our teachers．We can never pay you back for your kindnessyour patienceand gift of knowledge which you have offered us．（老师学父母感谢原）
In the future I want to be a teacher to help more people in need．I will study hard and realize this dream as soon as possible．（未梦想实现）
That＇s all for my speech． Thank you for your attention
（十）
养长陪变老．父母亲直成长默默付出成长学会感受爱回报爱．天毕业父母表达感激机会．请根点写篇英语短文．
点：
（1）生命直顾成长
（2）努力工作提供良生活教育条件
（3）拥爱心教学会……
（4）天……（发挥少两点）．
注意事项：
（1）词数80左右开头已出计入总词数
（2）文中出现真实名校名名等信息．
You bring me up I will be with you in your life You are important persons in the process of my growth __
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You bring me up I will be with you in your life You are important persons in the process of my growth．You give me life and take care of me all the time．（生命直顾成长） When I have problems with my study and lifeyou are always patient enough to help me and encourage me． 高分句型 In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good educationyou always work hard from morning till night． （努力工作提供良生活教育条件）Everyone knows you are the persons full of love．You are ready to help people in need．It is you who teach me to be a kind person．高分句型二（拥爱心教做慈爱）
Dad and mumtoday I＇ll cook dinner for you．I＇ll go for a walk with you after dinner．（天父母做两件事）I hope you will be happy and healthy forever
名师点评
高分句型
When I have problems with my study and lifeyou are always patient enough to help me and encourage me．学生活问题时总耐心帮助鼓励．
when……时候引导时间状语句adj +enough +to do sth 足够……做某事
高分句型二
It is you who teach me to be a kind person．教会做善良．
句强调句It is +强调部分+thatwho …
（十二）
初中生活马结束三年初中生活定留挥回忆请家讲值回忆事包括时间物事情事感想 (请写出真实学校名称真实姓名)
提示词语：three yearsmemoriesone ofone daythinkhappy sorry
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How time flies I have studied in my school for three years And I will graduate from middle school in a month I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you
I had so many memories in three years＇ life One of them impressed me very much I still remember when I began to learn English I found it too difficult No matter how hard I tried I still couldn＇t do well in it and almost gave it up As soon as my English teacher found my problem she had a talk with me about how to learn English well Since then she has kept helping me Little by little I＇ve become interested in English and I＇m good at it I think I am so lucky to become one of her students I＇ve learned a lot from her
I will try to help others when they are in trouble I think it is a happy thing to help others
（十三）
假Han Mei面封笔友Alice发email请根email 容写封回信交流法帮排忧解难
提示词语：listen tomother＇s lovecare aboutcommunicate withget along withsmile
写作求：
语句通书写工整
提示词语适发挥
词数6080左右
Dear Han Mei
I＇m afraid I＇ve got a big problem recently My mother talks too much to me She always tells me Be careful while crossing the streetPut on more clothesDid you do a good job at school And so on I＇m annoyed (烦恼) What shall I do
Yours
Alice
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满分范文
Dear Alice
As a teenager I met the same problem as you But now I can get along better with my mother Here
are some ideas for you
Your mother talks much because she cares about you Maybe it＇s not a good way but it shows your mother＇s love So I think you should listen to her If your opinions are different from your mother＇s you can communicate with her and tell her what you are thinking about If your mother doesn＇t take your advice just keep silent and give her a smile
I hope what I say here can help you a lot
Yours
Han Mei
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根相关研究预测果缺乏效干预措施 2025 年中国 5000 万超重童居世界首位假校园网名记者针问题请根面点提示写篇英语短文
提示：
1 国青少年肥胖问题日益严重
2 吃太高脂肪食品运动导致青 少年肥胖原
3 建议青少年健康饮食运动养成良 生活惯
求：
写作容必须包含提示容适发挥
80 词左右文章开头已出计入总词 数
A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if any thing isn’t done_____________________________________________________________________________
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满分范文
A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if anything isn＇t done In China the problem is becoming more and more serious because most overweight children like eating fatty food and they hardly exercise
How should we solve the problem Firstly children must have healthy eating habits They should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat and junk food Secondly they should exercise often It＇ll make them healthy and feel good Finally keep some good living habits such as getting up early and going to bed early
In a word healthy eating proper exercise and good living habits can keep children from getting fatter
写作指导
健康息息相关话题学选择身作切入点详细讲述制定运动计划
（二）
假李华英国朋友Jack写封电子邮件 告知目前新型冠状病毒肺炎形势 告诉防御措施请注意防护点
1 城市控制疫情已取较成功
2注意防护减少外出带口罩外出勤洗手等
3表达战胜疫情信心
注意
1适增加细节 行文连贯
280100词开头结尾已出计入总词数
参考词汇：novel coronavirus（新型冠状病毒）口罩：mask
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______________________________________________________________________________________满分范文
Dear Jack
How is everything going Novel coronavirus has spread throughout the world Our city has achieved great success in controlling it I have some advice for you on how to prevent it
The most important thing is to stay at home try not to get together with your family and friends Second wash your hands often with soap and water It is a useful way to keep you away from the virus Third when you have to go out you must wear a mask to cover your mouth and nose and learn how to put it on take it off and throw it away correctly Remember if you have a fever or a cough you had better go to a hospital and let a doctor give you further examination All of these are helpful to keep you safe
We believe winter will finally pass and spring is sure to come We will go back to school as soon as possible
Hope everything goes well with you
Yours
Li Hua
解析
1题干解读：篇材料作文求李华身份第称英国朋友Jack写封电子邮件告知目前新型冠状病毒肺炎形势告诉防御措施书写时注意全题干提示点文句通容完整
2例文点评：例文层次分明第层讲述新型冠状病毒已传遍全球第二层讲述防范措施第三层展战胜疫情信心短文陈述中心突出层次间机联系
3高分亮点：篇例文运短语spread throughout the worldachieve great success in have some advice for you on keep you away from文中定式句式The most important thing is to stay at homeIt is a useful way to keep you away from the virustry not to get together with your family and friendsAll of these are helpful to keep you safe种复合句条件状语句if you have a fever or a cough you had better go to a hospital 宾语句We believe winter will finally pass and spring is sure to come
点睛
篇材料作文书写前认真阅读题干解题干求确定中心话题题干求分短文层次确定层次容短文起逻辑清晰建议表序副词短语表达关防御措施短文更条理
（三）
假阳光中学李华毕业学生活三年母校充满眷恋感恩想报刊发表篇英语文章描述母校请根提示写篇短文
学校
①优美学环境
②现代化操场
学
①相互学相互帮助
②积极参加课外活动提高力
老师
①切求严格
②(拟点）
感想
(拟两点）
求：
1 文中出现真实姓名校名
2 逐字翻译适发挥……部分需拟
3 词数90左右
My Mother School
I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School I have enjoyed a lot during the past three years
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I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School I have enjoyed a lot during the past three years It’s a very beautiful school which provides us with a good environment to study There is a modern playground in our school and we often play basketball there
Besides that we often learn from each other and help each other in our daily life We take an active part in afterschool activities and it improves our abilities The teachers are strict with us but they are patient enough to explain everything to us When something worries me I often ask my teacher for help
I’m proud I can study in this school and I’ll remember my mother school forever
解析
试题分析：篇该材料作文写写三年母校感想题材料较详细写作中注意学校老师学三方面进行叙述表达感想根材料容知文时态称问题较复杂注意时态时间状语搭配注意谓致问题写作中应注意描述全面性语言表述应该符合语法结构造句应该符合英语表达惯
考点：提纲类作文
点评：类作首先做认真阅读材料跑题偏题写作中注意基础写作常识犯低级错误时积累足够定获满意分数外应付考试选择背诵范文样应考时会法
（四）
根文字提示请 How to Keep Safe in School话题写篇80100词英语短文谈谈法
点1描述件发生身发生校园意外事件(结果
2提出避免种校园意外建议(少两条)
3呼吁学注意校园安全
求1文中出现真实校名姓名2短文开头已出计入总词数
提示词汇 not run in the hall ways stop… from doing pay attention to
How to Keep Safe in School
Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough For example_____
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How to Keep Safe in School
Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough For example one day two students ran after each other in the hallway Suddenly one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor Therefore he had to stay in hospital for several days So I think students should walk and do not run in the hallways And the teachers had better keep one eye on the students after class and stop them from running At last I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school
解析
题干解读：篇材料作文写三方面容：描述件发生校园里意外事件写明结果般时态提出少两条避免意外发生建议般现时呼吁学注意校园安全时注意提示词汇
例文点评：篇短文容清晰完整语言简洁正确首先举例描述发生校园里意外事件程结果接着I think引入建议I hope+句方式呼吁学生注意校园安全
高分亮点：短语：ran after each other because offell downkeep one eye onstop them from runningpay attention to
句型：had better do sth做某事I hope +句
（五）
昨天班召开次告陋走文明题班会会老师谈谈身边学变化请根表格里容写篇关王明学文章
表现
现表现
常学架(fight)
学相处融洽( be good with)
花时间玩电脑游戏(spend time doing)
积极 (active)参加项活动 (activity)
常吃垃圾食品( junk food)
健康生活惯( living habits)
课堂吃东西睡觉(eitheror)
认真听课时完成(finish)作业
考试格(fail)
门学科取成绩尤 ( especially)数学
注意1文章必须包括容点适发挥短文意思连贯语句通
2出现真实名校名名字数80左右(文章开头已出计入总字数)
Wang Ming is my classmate He had made great progress this term In the past
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Wang Ming is my classmate He had made great progress this term In the past he always fought with others He used to spend much time playing computer games And he often ate junk food In class he either ate or slept He always failed the exam
But now he changed a lot He can be good with other students He take an active part in all kinds of activities and becomes very outgoing He has healthy eating habits Also he listens to the teachers carefully in class and finishes his homework on time So he gets good grades in all subjects especially math Now we all like him
解析
题干解读：文属材料作文根班召题班会告陋走文明题班会谈谈身边学变化篇文中涉现变化文中需般时般现时态
2例文点评：篇优秀作文完成试题规定务文两段式第段介绍情况第二段现变化语言表达符合英语惯准确运时态谓致特亮点词句增强逻辑关系增加文意思连贯词准确句子通行文连贯
3高分亮点：
短语：make great progressin the pastfight witheither …or…take an active part inhealthy eating habits
句型：He used to spend much time playing computer games（used to do 句型）He take an active part in all kinds of activities and becomes very outgoing
（六）
初三学生Sandy面中考面父母老师期天堆成山作业感非常苦恼昨天时电视妈妈吵架摔门写信老师倾诉烦恼请根列提示老师Nancy身份英语写封回信
提示：
1．舒缓目前压力
2．安排天学休息
3．处理父母关系
注意：
1．必须包括点中提示容作适发挥
2．文中出现真实姓名学校名称
3．表达清楚语句通意思连贯书写规范
4．词数少90词（开头已出计入总词数）
Dear Sandy
I’m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me． Here is my advice．_____________________________________________________________________
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Yours
Nancy
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Dear Sandy
I’m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me． Here is my advice．（点题）
First it’s a good choice to take up a hobby to help you relax and reduce your pressure．高分句型Second you can make plans for your everyday life． After you study for about two hours you can take a walk outside and try to relax． Besides don’t stay up late． It’s not good for your health．Third never argue with your parents． You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them． Discuss your problems with them and tell them your ideas． They will help you find better ways to solve them．（建议）
In a word you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents．高分句型二（总结全文）
Yours
Nancy
（七）
九年级学生活繁忙中困惑泪水进步喜悦．请根面提示Our School Life in Grade Nine题写篇词数80左右短文介绍九年级学校生活提出希建议．
提示：
1． 学校：老师认真负责充满爱心学生：……（少发挥两点）
2． 周末作业：作业舍弃爱周末活动：锻炼电视
愿：……（发挥两点）
求：1． 短文须包括提示点适发挥
2． 短文中出现真实名校名名
3． 词数80左右（开头已出计入总词数）．
参考词汇：patient carefully actively stressed紧张
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Our School Life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student．高分句型 Here is what our school life is like now．（点题）
At school all of our teachers work very hard．Most of them are kind﹣hearted and patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems．As for students in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively． After classwe are busy doing our homework． We all work hard to improve ourselves．
On weekends we spend much time doing homework so we can’t spare time for our hobbies any more．I feel a little stressedso I try to play basketball or watch TV to get relaxed．I hope to work hard to make my dream come true． I also wish my classmates healthy and happy every day．（介绍学校生活）
No pains no gains．The more carefully we plan our day the more colorful our school life will be．高分句型二（总结全文）
（八）
年国校园欺凌事件屡发生遭受校园欺凌学生容易情绪抑郁焦虑敢学校甚会出现心理问题等严重果．请My opinions about school bullying题写篇英语短文谈谈法．
提示：
1．What do you think of school bullying？
2．What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied？
求：
1．提示信息应全部包括适发挥行文连贯
280 词．
参考词汇：心理问题 mental health problems．
My opinions about school bullying
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My opinions about school bullying
School bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society． Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset． Some students are afraid of going to school． School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems． So how should we stop school bullying？（校园欺凌法）
If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied I will tell the teachers or my parents at once．高分句型 It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own．高分句型二（果欺负会做）
（九）
初中生活结束三年定留美回忆．英语俱乐部征文求写篇110词左右文章描述难忘校园生活师生情学情．际说感激祝福话．文中出现真实名校名．
满分范文
How time fliesOur junior high school days are coming to an end and I＇d like to say a lot to you all who have helped me and stayed with me．高分句型（点题）
FirstlyI＇d like to thank my great teachers．They teach me not only how to learn but also how to be a man．Though they look strict and seriousthey are always kind to me．（感谢老师） SecondlyI want to thank my friendly classmates．As long as I have troublethey are always around me．I miss the happy
days when we stay with each other．I love all of you．（感谢学） FinallyI＇m going to thank my parents．They always look after me very well to keep me healthy．And they often encourage me to work hard at school．高分句型二（感谢父母）
（十）
亲爱学假 Alex 初中生活结束高中生活．疫情（epidemic situation） 原代表（represent） 初三毕业生做网络直播演讲．
请根点英语写篇演讲稿．
（1）初中三年学生活总结（少三方面）
（2）老师学父母感谢简说明原
（3）谈谈未梦想肩负社会责实现
求：1．文章语句通句式样．适增加细节行文连贯．
2．开头结尾已出计入总词数．
3．文中出现真实姓名学校班级．
4．词数：100词左右．
Dear ladies and gentlemen
That＇s all for my speech． Thank you for your attention
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Dear ladies and gentlemen
It＇s my honor to make a speech at the graduating ceremony．高分句型（点题）
It has been three years since we came to the beautiful school．Our school is very beautiful．We have colourful activities every term．Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．高分句型二
We have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years．（初中三年学生活总结）
We should thank our teachersour parents and our classmates．The first group is my classmates．We＇ve worked hard together and we＇ve even shared some difficult times together．The second group is our parents．I thank you for making a home where I feel both safe and relaxed．I also thank you for your help with my homework．The third group is our teachers．We can never pay you back for your kindnessyour patienceand gift of knowledge which you have offered us．（老师学父母感谢原）
In the future I want to be a teacher to help more people in need．I will study hard and realize this dream as soon as possible．（未梦想实现）
That＇s all for my speech． Thank you for your attention
（十）
养长陪变老．父母亲直成长默默付出成长学会感受爱回报爱．天毕业父母表达感激机会．请根点写篇英语短文．
点：
（1）生命直顾成长
（2）努力工作提供良生活教育条件
（3）拥爱心教学会……
（4）天……（发挥少两点）．
注意事项：
（1）词数80左右开头已出计入总词数
（2）文中出现真实名校名名等信息．
You bring me up I will be with you in your life You are important persons in the process of my growth __
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You bring me up I will be with you in your life You are important persons in the process of my growth．You give me life and take care of me all the time．（生命直顾成长） When I have problems with my study and lifeyou are always patient enough to help me and encourage me． 高分句型 In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good educationyou always work hard from morning till night． （努力工作提供良生活教育条件）Everyone knows you are the persons full of love．You are ready to help people in need．It is you who teach me to be a kind person．高分句型二（拥爱心教做慈爱）
Dad and mumtoday I＇ll cook dinner for you．I＇ll go for a walk with you after dinner．（天父母做两件事）I hope you will be happy and healthy forever
名师点评
高分句型
When I have problems with my study and lifeyou are always patient enough to help me and encourage me．学生活问题时总耐心帮助鼓励．
when……时候引导时间状语句adj +enough +to do sth 足够……做某事
高分句型二
It is you who teach me to be a kind person．教会做善良．
句强调句It is +强调部分+thatwho …
（十二）
初中生活马结束三年初中生活定留挥回忆请家讲值回忆事包括时间物事情事感想 (请写出真实学校名称真实姓名)
提示词语：three yearsmemoriesone ofone daythinkhappy sorry
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How time flies I have studied in my school for three years And I will graduate from middle school in a month I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you
I had so many memories in three years＇ life One of them impressed me very much I still remember when I began to learn English I found it too difficult No matter how hard I tried I still couldn＇t do well in it and almost gave it up As soon as my English teacher found my problem she had a talk with me about how to learn English well Since then she has kept helping me Little by little I＇ve become interested in English and I＇m good at it I think I am so lucky to become one of her students I＇ve learned a lot from her
I will try to help others when they are in trouble I think it is a happy thing to help others
（十三）
假Han Mei面封笔友Alice发email请根email 容写封回信交流法帮排忧解难
提示词语：listen tomother＇s lovecare aboutcommunicate withget along withsmile
写作求：
语句通书写工整
提示词语适发挥
词数6080左右
Dear Han Mei
I＇m afraid I＇ve got a big problem recently My mother talks too much to me She always tells me Be careful while crossing the streetPut on more clothesDid you do a good job at school And so on I＇m annoyed (烦恼) What shall I do
Yours
Alice
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Dear Alice
As a teenager I met the same problem as you But now I can get along better with my mother Here
are some ideas for you
Your mother talks much because she cares about you Maybe it＇s not a good way but it shows your mother＇s love So I think you should listen to her If your opinions are different from your mother＇s you can communicate with her and tell her what you are thinking about If your mother doesn＇t take your advice just keep silent and give her a smile
I hope what I say here can help you a lot
Yours
Han Mei
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