09交友亲情篇
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初中生活结束三年定留美回忆．英语俱乐部征文求写篇110词左右文章描述难忘校园生活师生情学情．际说感激祝福话．文中出现真实名校名．
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How time fliesOur junior high school days are coming to an end and I＇d like to say a lot to you all who have helped me and stayed with me．高分句型（点题）FirstlyI＇d like to thank my great teachers．They teach me not only how to learn but also how to be a man．Though they look strict and seriousthey are always kind to me．（感谢老师） SecondlyI want to thank my friendly classmates．As long as I have troublethey are always around me．I miss the happy days when we stay with each other．I love all of you．（感谢学）
FinallyI＇m going to thank my parents．They always look after me very well to keep me healthy．And they often encourage me to work hard at school．高分句型二（感谢父母）
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初三学生Sandy面中考面父母老师期天堆成山作业感非常苦恼昨天时电视妈妈吵架摔门写信老师倾诉烦恼请根列提示老师Nancy身份英语写封回信
提示：
1．舒缓目前压力
2．安排天学休息
3．处理父母关系
注意：
1．必须包括点中提示容作适发挥
2．文中出现真实姓名学校名称
3．表达清楚语句通意思连贯书写规范
4．词数少90词（开头已出计入总词数）
Dear Sandy
I’m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me． Here is my advice．____________________________________________________________________________
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Yours
Nancy
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Dear Sandy
I’m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me． Here is my advice．（点题）
First it’s a good choice to take up a hobby to help you relax and reduce your pressure．高分句型Second you can make plans for your everyday life． After you study for about two hours you can take a walk outside and try to relax． Besides don’t stay up late． It’s not good for your health．Third never argue with your parents． You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them． Discuss your problems with them and tell them your ideas． They will help you find better ways to solve them．（建议）
In a word you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents．高分句型二（总结全文）
Yours
Nancy
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假英语校报编辑徐玲．校报收初新生Ben信提出面两问题．请根Ben信问题结合历提出建议陈述理．
Dear Xu Ling
My name is Ben． I’m a Grade 7 student． Recently I feel worried because I have trouble getting used to life in middle school．
I always feel lonely because I have few friends．
Also I have problem remembering new English words．
Can you give me some suggestions to help me？ Thank you．
Best wishes
Ben
注意：（1）回信应包括点
（2）词数90左右（信开头结尾已出计入词数）
（3）透露学校姓名等信息否予评分．
Dear Ben
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school． In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends． I think ___________________________．
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Good luck with everything．
Yours
Xu Ling
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Dear Ben
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school．（表示理解） In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends． I think it is a good choice to join some clubs． In this way you can make more friends who share the same interest with you．高分句型 I used to go to the tennis club every day and that brought me good health as well as many good friends． What’s more you’d better be friendly to others． A smile costs nothing but gives much．Also you found it difficult to remember English words．
Reading more English stories can help you learn English words． Our English teacher once encouraged us to see English films to help us remember words． If you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day it will be helpful．高分句型二（问题建议）
I hope you will find these useful suggestions．（希）
Good luck with everything．
Yours
Xu Ling
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根图画英语写篇80词左右短文．求完整叙述图画容．
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Last week my parents and I decided to go to visit my grandmother． We went to a shop at half past nine and bought some gifts．（商店买礼物）We went there by bus． It took us forty minutes to get to my grandmother＇s house．（坐汽车）As soon as we arrived there my grandmother and my uncle went out to meet us．高分句型（外婆舅舅出接） My uncle prepared lunch for us． （舅舅准备午餐）At noon we had a wonderful lunch together． （聚餐）In the evening after we said goodbye to my grandmother and my uncle we went home．（告回家）
What a happy day we had高分句型二I hope we can visit them as often as possible．（感受）
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假Paul第中学九年级学生年夏天毕业．初中三年变化请根表格容英语写篇短文记录成长程谈谈暑假计划．
1．性格敢前讲话．
2．学感兴趣成绩．
3．爱运动沉迷电脑游戏．
现
1．乐分享学相处．
2．科成绩优异…（举例）
3．积极参加类活动…（举例）
暑假计划
…（两点）
求：1）词数100左右文章开头已计入总词数．
2）短文需包括表格中点适发挥．
3）字迹工整条理清楚行文连贯．
4）文中请勿提真实姓名学校．
I＇m Paula Grade 9 student in No1 Middle School．I＇ll graduate this summer．I＇ve changed a lot during the last three years．______________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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I＇m Paula Grade 9 student in No1 Middle School．I＇ll graduate this summer．I＇ve changed a lot during the last three years．
In the pastI was too shy to speak in front of others．高分句型（性格敢前讲话）I wasn＇t interested in studyso I was weak in all my subjects（学感兴趣成绩）．What＇s moreI didn＇t like sports．InsteadI was crazy about computer games．（爱运动沉迷电脑游戏）
HoweverI＇ve changed greatly now．I＇m willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．（乐分享学相处）I study so well that I＇m a top student in our class now．高分句型（科成绩优异）MoreoverI take an active part in all kinds of school activities．（积极参加类活动）Last termI even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holidayI＇ll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．高分句型（暑假计划）
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百善孝先孝敬父母中华民族传统美德某英语报社正举办弘扬中华传统文化题征文活动请We should honor our parents题写篇短文参加征文活动容包括
What do you often do for your parents
Why should we honor our parents
How should we honor our parents
求： 1）表达清楚语法正确文连贯
2）必须包括表格中相关信息适发挥
3）词数：100词左右（开头已出计入总词数）
4）真实姓名校名名等
We should honor our parents
As we know honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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We should honor our parents
As we know honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of ChinaI honor my parentsI often help my parents do housework in my spare timeI think it＇s our duty to honor our parentsOur parents take much effort to raise us so it＇s important for us to honor themThey love us so we should love and respect them
First of all we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of usThen we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after workingNext we should respect them and never talk to them rudelyWe＇d better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinionsIt＇s also important to tell our parents we love them
解析
题求考生应该尊敬父母题结合容点写篇作文篇材料作文容点已考生围绕着点进行写作遗漏然序适调整篇作文句型亮点例：As we know…众周知I think it＇s our duty to do sth等等次文章结构较清晰例第二段衔接词First of allThenNext简单恰
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阳光雨露里已长高长壮全部长应包括什？关心帮助学？体贴理解父母？感恩回报亲朋友？……成长点点滴滴久久忘记请I am not a child anymore题记叙学生活中历事表明已孩子
（注意：短文中出现名校名相关信息否予评分）
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I am not a child any more
I am a 16yearold girl now I used to be weak and thin But now I am stronger and as tall as my mother The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others It was a Saturday evening My mother is ill so I cooked the meal My mother said the meal was very delicious although it tasted salty After supper my mother said Dear you have grown up I realized I was not a child any more
解析
1题干解读：文属话题作文写作点改变生活中历件事展开描述
2例文点评：例文采第称描述时态般时准确运时态保持谓致围绕题展开作文逻辑性强句子通
3高分亮点：used to do sth 常常做某事as…as ……样My mother said the meal was very delicious although it tasted salty句型中although引导步状语句
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请根面五问题容回答结合提示How Can We Protect Ourselves at School题写篇80100词英语短文文中出现真实校名名
提示：
1 谨慎交友
2 参架斗殴
3 面校园欺凌样保护
参考词汇：1 selfprotection（保护） 2 bully(nv欺凌）
3 personal safety（身安全）4 have violent behaviors(架斗殴）
How Can We Protect Ourselves at School
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写作思路
篇话题作文How Can We Protect Ourselves at School题写篇80100词英语短文文称第称时态般现时仔细阅读材料认真审题确定题确定点根点适发挥列出提纲短文必须包含提示容字数80100词运合适连接词渡词文章具连贯性根提示点列出文写作提纲写完注意读遍单词拼写标点语法错误（时态谓致等）
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How Can We Protect Ourselves at School
School bullies happen in almost every school In my school we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school
We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it For example we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies Firstly we will learn how to have a selfprotection because our personal safety is the most important Secondly we should be peaceful with others at all times and can＇t have any violent behavior Finally obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies
I＇m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future do you think so
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学校英语社团正组织题My Family征文活动假李明请根容提示英语完成征文
容点：
1 三口家家庭幸福邻里睦
2 父母教师校深受欢迎
3 分担家务周末户外活动
4 相互陪伴常交流良家规助成长
5 请补充说明两点家庭相关情况
注意：
1．文中透露姓名学校名称
2．词数：60 – 80
3．容连贯逐条翻译
4．标题开头已出计入总词数
参考词汇： popular adj 受欢迎 activity n 活动 rule n．规矩
My Family
I’m Li Ming ______________________________________________________________________________________
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写作思路
文属材料作文介绍家庭根表达容确定准确运时态文意思连贯符合逻辑适增加容
写作时方面做起：
认真审题审题写书面表达关键审题时注意试题求抓住点词数符合求
构思提纲提纲根提纲题确定相关写作材料通常书面表达出话题开放具体容求学生发挥选择恰素材短文中心突出明确关键
初写短文切准备绪动笔写作写作程中注意句子准确性连贯性简洁性词语短语句型量握词时注意恰连词句子衔接然
修改润色修改润色获取高分必步骤步检查短文种错误外检查语法结构否合理重复啰嗦语言写否正确格式否正确词数否符合求等
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My Family
I’m Li Ming I have a happy family There are three people in it They are my father my mother and me My parents are teachers they are popular among students We get along well with our neighbors At home I try my best to do some housework On weekends we often go out for outdoor activities We accompany with each other communicate with each other Good family rules help me grow up I study hard all the teachers and classmates like me My home is a warm place
名师点评
篇优秀作文完成试题规定务语言表达符合英语惯准确运时态谓致特亮点词句get along well with try one’s best to do accompany with communicate with help sb do
grow up增强逻辑关系增加文意思连贯词准确句子通行文连贯
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假定李收意利朋友Linda电子邮件邮件部分请阅读回复词数80左右
Subject
From Linda
To Li Ping
I’m really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer I can show him around the city Please tell me something about him How old is he What does he look like What kind of person is he and what’s he interested in
Hope to hear from you soon
Love
Linda
Subject
From Li Ping
To Linda
Dear Linda
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Yours
Li Ping
写作思路
篇作文求Linda电子邮件进行回复写作前应先阅读Linda信解信中想知道事情然针性进行介绍审题知Linda信中提想解哥哥情况提出三问题
什样子样兴趣回信中应Linda提问进行回答根表达需补充细节容文章更加充实丰富短文应般现时第三称叙述注意谓语动词正确形式写作时应注意：首先容应符合题目求叙述注意层次结构次应注意英语表达问题应符合英文句式特点表达惯写汉语式英语简单句结构穿插列句复合句复杂句式结构提升作文档次时语句间恰连接成分文意连贯然
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Dear Linda
Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome Now let me tell you something about my brother He is thirteen years old easygoing and humorouswe get along really well He loves different cultures He is interested in museums and likes trying local food
My brother is also cute He’s of medium height with short straight black hair He is good at Chinese kungfu and usually wears Tshirts and jeans
Thanks again for your help
Yours
Li Ping
名师点评
篇优秀作文短文中作者李身份Linda写回信介绍哥哥情况首先短文容符合题目求Linda信中提问介绍哥哥年龄外貌兴趣爱等信息次短文正确时态称文章般现时第三称单数叙述符合题目求尤注意谓语动词第三称单数形式变化学生学中难点句式结构完整符合英语表达惯短文中简单句列句复合句非谓语动词动词定式现分词等文章中较句型短语：Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around RomeHe is thirteen years old easygoing and humorouswe get along really well He is interested in museums and likes trying local foodHe’s of medium height with short straight black hair He is good at Chinese kungfu and usually wears Tshirts and jeans等等
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假设李华班学请根提示求英语写篇题 My Classmate短文
提示：1 子高长相英俊成绩优秀擅长运动
2 乐助（举例子）
3 评价
求：1 文中出现真实姓名校名
2 词数80左右
My Classmate
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My Classmate
Li Hua is my classmate and my good friend．He is tall and handsome．His grades are excellent and he always does well in exams．He is also good at sports because he thinks health is very important．高分句型（外貌特长）He is ready to help others．He often helps me with my English． Last year he helped a ten﹣year﹣old boy who lost his way find his mother．（乐助）I think Li Hua is a kind person．Everybody in my class likes him very much． （评价）I hope we will be good friends forever．高分句型二（愿）
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假设李华英国笔友Jack想结交更中国朋友请英文写封邮件男学陈东介绍容包括：
年龄外表
16岁高健壮
兴趣爱
喜欢运动阅读听音乐喜欢科目英语
性格
风趣幽默乐助容易相处
注意：
1 词数70左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 邮件开头结尾部分已出计入总词数
4 文中出现真实名校名
参考词汇：
高健壮tall and strong 运动do sports 听音乐listen to music
喜欢科目favorite subject 风趣幽默funny and humorous
乐做某事be ready to do sth 相处get on with
Dear Jack
How is everything going Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you
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I＇m sure you＇d like to have such a person as your friend With my best wishes
Yours
Li Hua
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Dear Jack
How is everything going？Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you He is a 16yearold boy He has round face black hair and bright eyes He is tall and strong He likes smiling very much（高分句型）（点介绍男学外貌特征）He likes doing sports reading and listening to music His favorite subject is English because he thinks it is very interesting He is humorous and funny He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others 点二介绍学性格 He likes doing sports reading and listening to music His favorite subject is English because he thinks it is very interesting He also spends much time taking part in afterschool activities（高分句型二） He likes winter very much because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun thingssuch as skating making snowman and so on点三介绍学喜 His dream is becoming an English teacher because he wants his students to get good grades 点四介绍学理想 I＇m sure you＇d like to have such a person as your friend．With my best wishes（点五美祝愿）
Yours
Li Hua
名师点评
高分句型
He likes smiling very much．句般现时陈述句．运短语like doing sth 喜欢做某事短语very much 非常．句翻译喜欢笑
注意like加doing
高分句型二
He also spends much time taking part in afterschool activities．句般现时陈述句运短语spend some time （in）doing sth 花时间做某事短语take part in 参加句翻译花量时间参加课外活动
（十三）
假定苏华澳利亚笔友Nathan犯错误倍感懊恼写封邮件诉说帮助排解困感请根邮件容结合身历．英语回信开导
To：subua@chinacom
From：nathanaustraliacom
Subjects： Learning from mistakes
Dear Su Hue
I＇m unhappy that I＇ve made some mistakes recently They＇re troubling me a lot these days I really need your help Would you please share your experience with me
Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes
Can you tell me one of your mistakes
How did you deal with your problem
What have you learned from the mistake
I＇m looking forward to hearing from you soon
All the best
Nathan
注意：
l 词数90左右开头结尾已写计入总词量
2 回复须包括点适发挥短文连贯通
3 文中提真实名校名等相关信息
Dear Nathan
I＇m sorry to know that you are not happy these days ______________________________________________________________________________________
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I hope my experience can help you out
Best wishes
Su Hua
写作思路
书面表达题汉译英意发挥作文求规定材料容整理展开思维考查运学英语知识准确表达意思力考生遗漏点量熟悉单词短语句式高级词汇较复杂句式结构便较高分数
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Dear Nathan
I＇m sorry to know that you are not happy these days You needn＇t worry too much It＇s true that everyone makes mistakes
Take me for example One day I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies
It doesn＇t matter whether or not you make mistakes What matters most is to correct and learn from them In this way others will understand you Then you will feel much better
I hope my experience can help you out
Best wishes
Su Hua
名师点评
篇短文量固定句式短语文章增色少too muchmake mistakesfor exampleso muchspend time doingforgot to dosay sorry sbbetween andwhether or notlearn fromin this wayfeel much better等固定句型I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbiesIt＇s true that everyone makes mistakes It doesn＇t matter whether or not you make mistakes I hope my experience can help you out等复杂句结构运丰富短文容表达样化文亮点学中注意总结牢记固定句式短语写作时适引文章表达更逻辑性更富条理
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美国笔友Tony学交中遇烦恼写邮件寻求帮助请李华身份写封邮件——提出建议
建议容包括：遇问题倾诉分享情绪尊重善诚实守信……
求：l．词数6080开头结尾出计入总词数
2．适增加细节行文连贯
3．文中出现真实姓名学校等信息
参考词汇：share solve respect friendly be honest to
Dear Tony
I＇m sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates I＇m glad to help you __________________
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I hope everything will go well with you soon
Yours
Li Hua
写作思路
文写作求封电子邮件首先朋友交友程中遇难题表示歉意情态动词提建议希交朋友然分步骤出外四建议处理学关系希切会起
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Dear Tony
I＇m sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates I＇m glad to help you Here are some suggestions for you
First when you have difficulties you should talk to your parents your teachers or your friends and share your sadness and happiness with them They will help you solve the problem
Second when you get along with your friends you are supposed to respect them
Third you should be friendly to people around you You can help each other
Last but not least you have to be honest to your friends Then you will make more friends
I hope everything will go well with you soon
Yours
Li Hua
名师点评
文学交中遇问题提出建议分四步出合理建议指出朋友诚实希够交更朋友短语：share sth with sbget along with……相处be supposed to do应该做某事Last but not least等文章丰富彩长短句搭配合理
（十五）
My best friend
My best friend is Jack He is 15 years old We are both in the same class He works very hard He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons He is always ready to help others My math is very poor so he often helps me with my math after class
His parents are both teachers They are very busy so he often helps do the housework at home
He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong He likes playing football very much at school We often play football together and he plays it pretty well He gets on well with us so everyone in our class likes him
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初中生活结束三年定留美回忆．英语俱乐部征文求写篇110词左右文章描述难忘校园生活师生情学情．际说感激祝福话．文中出现真实名校名．
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How time fliesOur junior high school days are coming to an end and I＇d like to say a lot to you all who have helped me and stayed with me．高分句型（点题）FirstlyI＇d like to thank my great teachers．They teach me not only how to learn but also how to be a man．Though they look strict and seriousthey are always kind to me．（感谢老师） SecondlyI want to thank my friendly classmates．As long as I have troublethey are always around me．I miss the happy days when we stay with each other．I love all of you．（感谢学）
FinallyI＇m going to thank my parents．They always look after me very well to keep me healthy．And they often encourage me to work hard at school．高分句型二（感谢父母）
（二）
初三学生Sandy面中考面父母老师期天堆成山作业感非常苦恼昨天时电视妈妈吵架摔门写信老师倾诉烦恼请根列提示老师Nancy身份英语写封回信
提示：
1．舒缓目前压力
2．安排天学休息
3．处理父母关系
注意：
1．必须包括点中提示容作适发挥
2．文中出现真实姓名学校名称
3．表达清楚语句通意思连贯书写规范
4．词数少90词（开头已出计入总词数）
Dear Sandy
I’m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me． Here is my advice．____________________________________________________________________________
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Yours
Nancy
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Dear Sandy
I’m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me． Here is my advice．（点题）
First it’s a good choice to take up a hobby to help you relax and reduce your pressure．高分句型Second you can make plans for your everyday life． After you study for about two hours you can take a walk outside and try to relax． Besides don’t stay up late． It’s not good for your health．Third never argue with your parents． You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them． Discuss your problems with them and tell them your ideas． They will help you find better ways to solve them．（建议）
In a word you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents．高分句型二（总结全文）
Yours
Nancy
（三）
假英语校报编辑徐玲．校报收初新生Ben信提出面两问题．请根Ben信问题结合历提出建议陈述理．
Dear Xu Ling
My name is Ben． I’m a Grade 7 student． Recently I feel worried because I have trouble getting used to life in middle school．
I always feel lonely because I have few friends．
Also I have problem remembering new English words．
Can you give me some suggestions to help me？ Thank you．
Best wishes
Ben
注意：（1）回信应包括点
（2）词数90左右（信开头结尾已出计入词数）
（3）透露学校姓名等信息否予评分．
Dear Ben
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school． In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends． I think ___________________________．
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck with everything．
Yours
Xu Ling
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Dear Ben
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school．（表示理解） In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends． I think it is a good choice to join some clubs． In this way you can make more friends who share the same interest with you．高分句型 I used to go to the tennis club every day and that brought me good health as well as many good friends． What’s more you’d better be friendly to others． A smile costs nothing but gives much．Also you found it difficult to remember English words．
Reading more English stories can help you learn English words． Our English teacher once encouraged us to see English films to help us remember words． If you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day it will be helpful．高分句型二（问题建议）
I hope you will find these useful suggestions．（希）
Good luck with everything．
Yours
Xu Ling
（四）
根图画英语写篇80词左右短文．求完整叙述图画容．
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Last week my parents and I decided to go to visit my grandmother． We went to a shop at half past nine and bought some gifts．（商店买礼物）We went there by bus． It took us forty minutes to get to my grandmother＇s house．（坐汽车）As soon as we arrived there my grandmother and my uncle went out to meet us．高分句型（外婆舅舅出接） My uncle prepared lunch for us． （舅舅准备午餐）At noon we had a wonderful lunch together． （聚餐）In the evening after we said goodbye to my grandmother and my uncle we went home．（告回家）
What a happy day we had高分句型二I hope we can visit them as often as possible．（感受）
（五）
假Paul第中学九年级学生年夏天毕业．初中三年变化请根表格容英语写篇短文记录成长程谈谈暑假计划．
1．性格敢前讲话．
2．学感兴趣成绩．
3．爱运动沉迷电脑游戏．
现
1．乐分享学相处．
2．科成绩优异…（举例）
3．积极参加类活动…（举例）
暑假计划
…（两点）
求：1）词数100左右文章开头已计入总词数．
2）短文需包括表格中点适发挥．
3）字迹工整条理清楚行文连贯．
4）文中请勿提真实姓名学校．
I＇m Paula Grade 9 student in No1 Middle School．I＇ll graduate this summer．I＇ve changed a lot during the last three years．______________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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I＇m Paula Grade 9 student in No1 Middle School．I＇ll graduate this summer．I＇ve changed a lot during the last three years．
In the pastI was too shy to speak in front of others．高分句型（性格敢前讲话）I wasn＇t interested in studyso I was weak in all my subjects（学感兴趣成绩）．What＇s moreI didn＇t like sports．InsteadI was crazy about computer games．（爱运动沉迷电脑游戏）
HoweverI＇ve changed greatly now．I＇m willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．（乐分享学相处）I study so well that I＇m a top student in our class now．高分句型（科成绩优异）MoreoverI take an active part in all kinds of school activities．（积极参加类活动）Last termI even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holidayI＇ll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．高分句型（暑假计划）
（六）
百善孝先孝敬父母中华民族传统美德某英语报社正举办弘扬中华传统文化题征文活动请We should honor our parents题写篇短文参加征文活动容包括
What do you often do for your parents
Why should we honor our parents
How should we honor our parents
求： 1）表达清楚语法正确文连贯
2）必须包括表格中相关信息适发挥
3）词数：100词左右（开头已出计入总词数）
4）真实姓名校名名等
We should honor our parents
As we know honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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We should honor our parents
As we know honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of ChinaI honor my parentsI often help my parents do housework in my spare timeI think it＇s our duty to honor our parentsOur parents take much effort to raise us so it＇s important for us to honor themThey love us so we should love and respect them
First of all we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of usThen we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after workingNext we should respect them and never talk to them rudelyWe＇d better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinionsIt＇s also important to tell our parents we love them
解析
题求考生应该尊敬父母题结合容点写篇作文篇材料作文容点已考生围绕着点进行写作遗漏然序适调整篇作文句型亮点例：As we know…众周知I think it＇s our duty to do sth等等次文章结构较清晰例第二段衔接词First of allThenNext简单恰
（七）
阳光雨露里已长高长壮全部长应包括什？关心帮助学？体贴理解父母？感恩回报亲朋友？……成长点点滴滴久久忘记请I am not a child anymore题记叙学生活中历事表明已孩子
（注意：短文中出现名校名相关信息否予评分）
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I am not a child any more
I am a 16yearold girl now I used to be weak and thin But now I am stronger and as tall as my mother The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others It was a Saturday evening My mother is ill so I cooked the meal My mother said the meal was very delicious although it tasted salty After supper my mother said Dear you have grown up I realized I was not a child any more
解析
1题干解读：文属话题作文写作点改变生活中历件事展开描述
2例文点评：例文采第称描述时态般时准确运时态保持谓致围绕题展开作文逻辑性强句子通
3高分亮点：used to do sth 常常做某事as…as ……样My mother said the meal was very delicious although it tasted salty句型中although引导步状语句
（八）
请根面五问题容回答结合提示How Can We Protect Ourselves at School题写篇80100词英语短文文中出现真实校名名
提示：
1 谨慎交友
2 参架斗殴
3 面校园欺凌样保护
参考词汇：1 selfprotection（保护） 2 bully(nv欺凌）
3 personal safety（身安全）4 have violent behaviors(架斗殴）
How Can We Protect Ourselves at School
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写作思路
篇话题作文How Can We Protect Ourselves at School题写篇80100词英语短文文称第称时态般现时仔细阅读材料认真审题确定题确定点根点适发挥列出提纲短文必须包含提示容字数80100词运合适连接词渡词文章具连贯性根提示点列出文写作提纲写完注意读遍单词拼写标点语法错误（时态谓致等）
满分范文
How Can We Protect Ourselves at School
School bullies happen in almost every school In my school we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school
We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it For example we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies Firstly we will learn how to have a selfprotection because our personal safety is the most important Secondly we should be peaceful with others at all times and can＇t have any violent behavior Finally obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies
I＇m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future do you think so
（九）
学校英语社团正组织题My Family征文活动假李明请根容提示英语完成征文
容点：
1 三口家家庭幸福邻里睦
2 父母教师校深受欢迎
3 分担家务周末户外活动
4 相互陪伴常交流良家规助成长
5 请补充说明两点家庭相关情况
注意：
1．文中透露姓名学校名称
2．词数：60 – 80
3．容连贯逐条翻译
4．标题开头已出计入总词数
参考词汇： popular adj 受欢迎 activity n 活动 rule n．规矩
My Family
I’m Li Ming ______________________________________________________________________________________
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写作思路
文属材料作文介绍家庭根表达容确定准确运时态文意思连贯符合逻辑适增加容
写作时方面做起：
认真审题审题写书面表达关键审题时注意试题求抓住点词数符合求
构思提纲提纲根提纲题确定相关写作材料通常书面表达出话题开放具体容求学生发挥选择恰素材短文中心突出明确关键
初写短文切准备绪动笔写作写作程中注意句子准确性连贯性简洁性词语短语句型量握词时注意恰连词句子衔接然
修改润色修改润色获取高分必步骤步检查短文种错误外检查语法结构否合理重复啰嗦语言写否正确格式否正确词数否符合求等
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My Family
I’m Li Ming I have a happy family There are three people in it They are my father my mother and me My parents are teachers they are popular among students We get along well with our neighbors At home I try my best to do some housework On weekends we often go out for outdoor activities We accompany with each other communicate with each other Good family rules help me grow up I study hard all the teachers and classmates like me My home is a warm place
名师点评
篇优秀作文完成试题规定务语言表达符合英语惯准确运时态谓致特亮点词句get along well with try one’s best to do accompany with communicate with help sb do
grow up增强逻辑关系增加文意思连贯词准确句子通行文连贯
（十）
假定李收意利朋友Linda电子邮件邮件部分请阅读回复词数80左右
Subject
From Linda
To Li Ping
I’m really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer I can show him around the city Please tell me something about him How old is he What does he look like What kind of person is he and what’s he interested in
Hope to hear from you soon
Love
Linda
Subject
From Li Ping
To Linda
Dear Linda
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Yours
Li Ping
写作思路
篇作文求Linda电子邮件进行回复写作前应先阅读Linda信解信中想知道事情然针性进行介绍审题知Linda信中提想解哥哥情况提出三问题
什样子样兴趣回信中应Linda提问进行回答根表达需补充细节容文章更加充实丰富短文应般现时第三称叙述注意谓语动词正确形式写作时应注意：首先容应符合题目求叙述注意层次结构次应注意英语表达问题应符合英文句式特点表达惯写汉语式英语简单句结构穿插列句复合句复杂句式结构提升作文档次时语句间恰连接成分文意连贯然
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Dear Linda
Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome Now let me tell you something about my brother He is thirteen years old easygoing and humorouswe get along really well He loves different cultures He is interested in museums and likes trying local food
My brother is also cute He’s of medium height with short straight black hair He is good at Chinese kungfu and usually wears Tshirts and jeans
Thanks again for your help
Yours
Li Ping
名师点评
篇优秀作文短文中作者李身份Linda写回信介绍哥哥情况首先短文容符合题目求Linda信中提问介绍哥哥年龄外貌兴趣爱等信息次短文正确时态称文章般现时第三称单数叙述符合题目求尤注意谓语动词第三称单数形式变化学生学中难点句式结构完整符合英语表达惯短文中简单句列句复合句非谓语动词动词定式现分词等文章中较句型短语：Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around RomeHe is thirteen years old easygoing and humorouswe get along really well He is interested in museums and likes trying local foodHe’s of medium height with short straight black hair He is good at Chinese kungfu and usually wears Tshirts and jeans等等
（十）
假设李华班学请根提示求英语写篇题 My Classmate短文
提示：1 子高长相英俊成绩优秀擅长运动
2 乐助（举例子）
3 评价
求：1 文中出现真实姓名校名
2 词数80左右
My Classmate
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My Classmate
Li Hua is my classmate and my good friend．He is tall and handsome．His grades are excellent and he always does well in exams．He is also good at sports because he thinks health is very important．高分句型（外貌特长）He is ready to help others．He often helps me with my English． Last year he helped a ten﹣year﹣old boy who lost his way find his mother．（乐助）I think Li Hua is a kind person．Everybody in my class likes him very much． （评价）I hope we will be good friends forever．高分句型二（愿）
（十二）
假设李华英国笔友Jack想结交更中国朋友请英文写封邮件男学陈东介绍容包括：
年龄外表
16岁高健壮
兴趣爱
喜欢运动阅读听音乐喜欢科目英语
性格
风趣幽默乐助容易相处
注意：
1 词数70左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 邮件开头结尾部分已出计入总词数
4 文中出现真实名校名
参考词汇：
高健壮tall and strong 运动do sports 听音乐listen to music
喜欢科目favorite subject 风趣幽默funny and humorous
乐做某事be ready to do sth 相处get on with
Dear Jack
How is everything going Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you
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I＇m sure you＇d like to have such a person as your friend With my best wishes
Yours
Li Hua
满分范文
Dear Jack
How is everything going？Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you He is a 16yearold boy He has round face black hair and bright eyes He is tall and strong He likes smiling very much（高分句型）（点介绍男学外貌特征）He likes doing sports reading and listening to music His favorite subject is English because he thinks it is very interesting He is humorous and funny He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others 点二介绍学性格 He likes doing sports reading and listening to music His favorite subject is English because he thinks it is very interesting He also spends much time taking part in afterschool activities（高分句型二） He likes winter very much because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun thingssuch as skating making snowman and so on点三介绍学喜 His dream is becoming an English teacher because he wants his students to get good grades 点四介绍学理想 I＇m sure you＇d like to have such a person as your friend．With my best wishes（点五美祝愿）
Yours
Li Hua
名师点评
高分句型
He likes smiling very much．句般现时陈述句．运短语like doing sth 喜欢做某事短语very much 非常．句翻译喜欢笑
注意like加doing
高分句型二
He also spends much time taking part in afterschool activities．句般现时陈述句运短语spend some time （in）doing sth 花时间做某事短语take part in 参加句翻译花量时间参加课外活动
（十三）
假定苏华澳利亚笔友Nathan犯错误倍感懊恼写封邮件诉说帮助排解困感请根邮件容结合身历．英语回信开导
To：subua@chinacom
From：nathanaustraliacom
Subjects： Learning from mistakes
Dear Su Hue
I＇m unhappy that I＇ve made some mistakes recently They＇re troubling me a lot these days I really need your help Would you please share your experience with me
Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes
Can you tell me one of your mistakes
How did you deal with your problem
What have you learned from the mistake
I＇m looking forward to hearing from you soon
All the best
Nathan
注意：
l 词数90左右开头结尾已写计入总词量
2 回复须包括点适发挥短文连贯通
3 文中提真实名校名等相关信息
Dear Nathan
I＇m sorry to know that you are not happy these days ______________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my experience can help you out
Best wishes
Su Hua
写作思路
书面表达题汉译英意发挥作文求规定材料容整理展开思维考查运学英语知识准确表达意思力考生遗漏点量熟悉单词短语句式高级词汇较复杂句式结构便较高分数
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Dear Nathan
I＇m sorry to know that you are not happy these days You needn＇t worry too much It＇s true that everyone makes mistakes
Take me for example One day I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies
It doesn＇t matter whether or not you make mistakes What matters most is to correct and learn from them In this way others will understand you Then you will feel much better
I hope my experience can help you out
Best wishes
Su Hua
名师点评
篇短文量固定句式短语文章增色少too muchmake mistakesfor exampleso muchspend time doingforgot to dosay sorry sbbetween andwhether or notlearn fromin this wayfeel much better等固定句型I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbiesIt＇s true that everyone makes mistakes It doesn＇t matter whether or not you make mistakes I hope my experience can help you out等复杂句结构运丰富短文容表达样化文亮点学中注意总结牢记固定句式短语写作时适引文章表达更逻辑性更富条理
（十四）
美国笔友Tony学交中遇烦恼写邮件寻求帮助请李华身份写封邮件——提出建议
建议容包括：遇问题倾诉分享情绪尊重善诚实守信……
求：l．词数6080开头结尾出计入总词数
2．适增加细节行文连贯
3．文中出现真实姓名学校等信息
参考词汇：share solve respect friendly be honest to
Dear Tony
I＇m sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates I＇m glad to help you __________________
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I hope everything will go well with you soon
Yours
Li Hua
写作思路
文写作求封电子邮件首先朋友交友程中遇难题表示歉意情态动词提建议希交朋友然分步骤出外四建议处理学关系希切会起
满分范文
Dear Tony
I＇m sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates I＇m glad to help you Here are some suggestions for you
First when you have difficulties you should talk to your parents your teachers or your friends and share your sadness and happiness with them They will help you solve the problem
Second when you get along with your friends you are supposed to respect them
Third you should be friendly to people around you You can help each other
Last but not least you have to be honest to your friends Then you will make more friends
I hope everything will go well with you soon
Yours
Li Hua
名师点评
文学交中遇问题提出建议分四步出合理建议指出朋友诚实希够交更朋友短语：share sth with sbget along with……相处be supposed to do应该做某事Last but not least等文章丰富彩长短句搭配合理
（十五）
My best friend
My best friend is Jack He is 15 years old We are both in the same class He works very hard He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons He is always ready to help others My math is very poor so he often helps me with my math after class
His parents are both teachers They are very busy so he often helps do the housework at home
He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong He likes playing football very much at school We often play football together and he plays it pretty well He gets on well with us so everyone in our class likes him
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