英文写作指导
What Attitude Should We Take to Sth
1 社会某事物错误观念2 分析批驳错误3 出该事物建议 写作模式（批驳分析类）
1) With the of … sth is becoming more and more … 2) Affected with this trend some many people come to believe contend that (错误观念) 3) But their viewpoint belief could not arouse any echo in my mind(作者立场) 4) It is true that sth is in one’s …(步法分析) 5) On any scale of … in fact there is almost nothing heavier than sth 6) If we see sth in its true colors however it is nothing (批驳分析I) 7) (进步阐述lead one to … as can be easily seen in the cases of …(批驳分析II) 9) Therefore necessary to take a correct attitude towards sth 10) On the one hand … (正确法I) 11) On the other (正确法…… 结句)
What Attitude Should We Take to Money
1分析批驳错误2社会金钱错误观念3出正确金钱建议 Reference model
What Attitude Should We Take to Money
1) With the arrival of marketbased economy money is becoming more and more important in our life 2) Hit with this trend many people come to believe that money is above everything else in their life 3) But their belief could not arouse any echo in my mind 4) It is true that money is a key ingredient in one’s struggle towards happiness without which for example there would be no way to go to college or form a family 5) On any scale of one’s daily worry in fact there is almost nothing heavier than money 6) If we see it in its true colors however money is nothing but a means to an end 7) Money can buy us food but not appetite medicine but not health diplomas but not knowledge and days of joy but not the whole life of happiness8) And moreover laying any undue stress on money may lead one to stop at nothing in making it as can be easily seen in the cases of most corrupt officials 9) Therefore it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards money10) On the one hand money is vital to our daily life in which case it is wise of you to spend not where you may save 11) On the other money is something to be plowed into something more important so it is better to spare not where you must spend 12) In sum money means something but not everything to our life
Effects of Sth On Sb Sth Else
1分析某事物正面效应2分析某事物负面效应3出样该事物建议 写作模式（分析建议类） 1) As is known to all sth does bring a lot of benefits to sb sth else 2) First it can greatly … thereby changing …for the better(正面分析… (正面分析 it can help sb…(正面分析III)
5）But all the above does not mean follow that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects ） If… as a succession of scientific studiesthere are more chances that… (负面分析I) 7) In addition the more the worse (负面分析II) 8) And worst of all… (负面分析III) 9) Therefore a scientific approach must be (建议I) 11) On the other (建议II)
good or harm all depending on … (结句)
The Effects of Exercise on Our Health
1分析体育锻炼带益处2分析体育锻炼带坏处3出参加体育锻炼建议
Reference model
The Effects of Exercise on Our Health
1) As is known to all exercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health 2) First it can greatly strengthen our hearts lungs bones and muscles thereby changing our whole health for the better 3) Besides it can make our brains better able to react to what is going on around us 4) And best of all it can help us breed optimism about our tough life 5) But all the above does not mean that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects exercise brings about 6) If you are normally inactive and then contrary to your usual habit start a program of undue exercise as a succession of scientific studies reveals there are more chances that you have yourself injured 7) In addition the more exercise those on a fatreducing diet take the more loss of iron they will suffer and the worse their health will get8) And worst of all continual as well as excessive exercise can result in sudden death 9) Therefore a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of exercise10) On the one hand our physical exercise must be based on both progressiveness and regularity 11) On the other we must go in for physical exercise according to local as well as health conditions of our own 12) In sum exercise can do us good or harm all depending on how we make use of it
How to Do Something
1 某事物现状2 分析该事物重性(危害性／社会意义等)3 样该事物 写作模式（分析建议类） much improvement a widespread neglect of sth (议题) in society 2) According to a 佐证陈述) 3) If this current is allowed to run its course things are bound to turn for the better worse(Para 1)4) The importance to sb sth else (however) can be seen from the 分析分析above all …(分析III) 8) To sum up (纳总结)
(Para 2)now is how to… 10) In my opinion the first step should be focused upon …(建议I) 11) Then greater efforts must be made to (建议 where there is … there is …(结句) (Para 3)
How to Conduct Patriotic Education Among the Youth of Today
1 国爱国义教育现状 2 分析爱国义教育重意义3 青少年中开展爱国义教育？
1) Much to our distress these years have seen a widespread neglect of patriotic education in our society 2) According to someofficial reports many patriotic education centers have been closed down or kept open to the public for other more profitable purposes while many of our national heroes have given way to today’s pop stars in youths’ minds 3) If this current is allowed to run its course I am afraid things are bound to turn for the worse with less and
less sense of patriotism left in the youth4) The significance of patriotic education to our society however can be seen from the perspectives as follows 5) In the first place the patriotic education can make youth more aware of the glorious history and culture of our nation thus building up their sense of pride as Chinese 6) In the second the patriotic education helps youth value today’s hardearned life so as to hold dearer their golden chances of enriching themselves with knowledge in peace 7) And above all the patriotic education can push youth to draw upon more of their capabilities in order to make tomorrow’s life better than today’s and leave behind themselves more highlights for the nation’s culture 8) To sum up patriotic education is a key ingredient in the allround development of youth9) So the most pressing for us now is how to effectively inculcate patriotism in the youth of today 10) In my opinion the first step should be focused upon giving fuller play to the potentials of patriotic education centers instead of running them for the purpose of making money 11) Then greater efforts must be made to integrate the patriotic education into the curriculums throughout youth’s education 12) In one word where there is an effective patriotic education of youth there is a greater enhancement of national cohesiveness
My Way of Seeing Something
1 角度某事物2 法······(说明理)
写作模式（理陈述类） 1) Something may be many things to many people 2) Some may see it as …while others may view it as …(法举例) 3) As far as I am concerned however I would prefer to value it as … (法) (Para I)4) My insight into outlook on My understanding of sth) is bound up with three major factors5) Primarily sth is so …that …(理I) 6) …(进步阐述is also … (理II) 8) (进步阐述) (理III) 10) …(进步阐述)
(Para II)11) I have (not) much freedom option in this matter but I have never found any other way of seeing than mine 12) Thus I will leave no stone unturned during the course of … in order to pave the way for (Para III)
My Way of Seeing Life
1 角度生2 推崇法······(说明理)
My Way of Seeing Life
1) Life may be many things to many people 2) Some may see it as building up as much material wealth as possible while others may view it as enjoying to the fullest the pleasures each day offers 3) As far as I am concerned however I would prefer to value it as my sole chance to enrich myself with knowledge first then to serve the society with all my heart and finally to leave the world without any regrets4) My outlook on life is bound up with three major factors5) Primarily life is so wondrous that I am eager to explore it 6) Set your heart on a mystery and you can find something new attach more of your mind to a challenge and you can get a sense of success all of which however depends on how much knowledge you have equipped yourself with first 7) Secondly life is also short to any individual like me 8) The flower you have just kissed for the first time is now fading away while the love from others you have come to cherish more is already on the wane 9) And
most of all both wondrousness and shortness of life push me to seize every golden minute and every golden chance 10) Once I idle away the time I am supposed to grasp to study or work for the people there will be no more hope of making up for it 11) I have much option in this matter but I have never found any other way of seeing life more reasonable and acceptable than mine 12) Thus I will leave no stone unturned during the course of my college studies in order to pave the way for my meaningful and colorful life
What Causes Something New
1 年社会出现······2 导致该现象原3 分析该现象社会影响
写作模式（原分析类）
Para1 1) Believe it or notLike it or not these years have witnessed a boom in…a … 2) According to… people especially showing more and more interest in … 3) To get find that three main factors are well worth our concernshould call for more of our concern
5) In the first place 原I) 6) In the second 原II) 7) And above all 原III) 8) …Para 39) The effects of this change on 分析the other(分析II) 12) With more and more…added attached to the trend I am fully it will certainly … is bound to…in the time to comeWhat Causes a Boom in Celebrating Foreign Festivals
1 年学校园出现股洋节热2 阐明导致该现象原3 分析该现象社会影响
Para 1 1) Believe it or not these years have witnessed a boom in celebrating foreign festivals on the Chinese campus2) According to an official reportsurvey young people especially college students are showing more and more interest in such festivals as Valentine’s Day April Fools’ Day Thanksgiving Day and Christmas Day 3) To get a better sense of the boom it is necessary for us to find out its causes Para 24) A closer analysis of the phenomenon can find that three main factors are well worth our concern5) In the first place it is the product of students’ seeking after individuality and novelty for which the college campus offers an ideal climate (原I)6) In the second it is seen among the students as an ideal way of freeing themselves from stress for the time being since most college students single child of each family are subjected to the unprecedented pressures from all sides although they enjoy the abundance of material wealth (
原II)7) And above all it is an inevitable result of more and more exchanges between Western and Eastern cultures (原III)8) While the Chinese watch their children thirst for the joy derived from foreign festivals in fact the Americans are discussing whether or not to list the Chinese Spring Festival among their official holidays Para 39) The effects of this change on our college life are positive 10) On the one hand it has created more chances for students to gain a better insight into other cultures (分析I) 11) On the other it has enriched the college life thus making the campus a more pleasant place to live on (分析II) 12) With more
and more health and color added to the trend I firmly believe it will certainly bring more benefits to our campus life in the time to come
Views on Something
1 认该事物······ 理······2认该事物······3法
写作模式（抒见类） 2) But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to…(议题) (Para I)
3) Many Some people contend believe argue that… (方观点) 4) They base their contention belief argument on the grounds that… (理I) 5）out (理II) 6）Yet others react to the issue matter the other way around and hold assert (方观点) 7) From their angle of view … (理I)8) And even worse as they claim … (理that anything new including… can depending on (法) 10) On the one hand … (理I) 11) But on the other (理II) 结句)
Views on Cloning
1 认克隆技术应利弊理····2 认弊利···3 法 Reference model
Views on Cloning
1) Almost everyone would agree that the birth of Dolly as the first clone of an adult animal has opened a new way of seeing the creation of life for the world 2) But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to whether cloning will bring fortunes or misfortunes to human society3) Many contend that the merits of cloning will outrun its demerits 4) They base their contention on the grounds that cloning is the most effective method of saving the rare wild lives from dying out 5) Besides as they also point out cloning can help provide better ways to treat some serious or deadly sicknesses such as diabetes and Parkinson’s disease 6) Yet others react to the issue the other way around and hold that the opposite
is just reasonable 7) From their angle of view cloning will threaten the ecological balance by destroying the natural reproduction through the enjoyment of sexual love between the male and the female8) And even worse as they reveal cloning will bring greater disasters to human society if it is used in creation of individuals with extreme genetic qualities like terrorists desperate scoundrels and war manias9) I stick to the opinion that anything new including cloning can bring human society fortunes or misfortunes all depending on how it is exploited10) On the one hand it will be an inestimable blessing to the human world if it is applied to reproduction of best dairy cows or other choice domestic poultries 11) But on the other hand it will form a big threat to human society once it is abused in copying those hostile toward humanity 12) In short the solution to the problem is always within man’s reach
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What Attitude Should We Take to Sth
1 社会某事物错误观念2 分析批驳错误3 出该事物建议 写作模式（批驳分析类）
1) With the of … sth is becoming more and more … 2) Affected with this trend some many people come to believe contend that (错误观念) 3) But their viewpoint belief could not arouse any echo in my mind(作者立场) 4) It is true that sth is in one’s …(步法分析) 5) On any scale of … in fact there is almost nothing heavier than sth 6) If we see sth in its true colors however it is nothing (批驳分析I) 7) (进步阐述lead one to … as can be easily seen in the cases of …(批驳分析II) 9) Therefore necessary to take a correct attitude towards sth 10) On the one hand … (正确法I) 11) On the other (正确法…… 结句)
What Attitude Should We Take to Money
1分析批驳错误2社会金钱错误观念3出正确金钱建议 Reference model
What Attitude Should We Take to Money
1) With the arrival of marketbased economy money is becoming more and more important in our life 2) Hit with this trend many people come to believe that money is above everything else in their life 3) But their belief could not arouse any echo in my mind 4) It is true that money is a key ingredient in one’s struggle towards happiness without which for example there would be no way to go to college or form a family 5) On any scale of one’s daily worry in fact there is almost nothing heavier than money 6) If we see it in its true colors however money is nothing but a means to an end 7) Money can buy us food but not appetite medicine but not health diplomas but not knowledge and days of joy but not the whole life of happiness8) And moreover laying any undue stress on money may lead one to stop at nothing in making it as can be easily seen in the cases of most corrupt officials 9) Therefore it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards money10) On the one hand money is vital to our daily life in which case it is wise of you to spend not where you may save 11) On the other money is something to be plowed into something more important so it is better to spare not where you must spend 12) In sum money means something but not everything to our life
Effects of Sth On Sb Sth Else
1分析某事物正面效应2分析某事物负面效应3出样该事物建议 写作模式（分析建议类） 1) As is known to all sth does bring a lot of benefits to sb sth else 2) First it can greatly … thereby changing …for the better(正面分析… (正面分析 it can help sb…(正面分析III)
5）But all the above does not mean follow that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects ） If… as a succession of scientific studiesthere are more chances that… (负面分析I) 7) In addition the more the worse (负面分析II) 8) And worst of all… (负面分析III) 9) Therefore a scientific approach must be (建议I) 11) On the other (建议II)
good or harm all depending on … (结句)
The Effects of Exercise on Our Health
1分析体育锻炼带益处2分析体育锻炼带坏处3出参加体育锻炼建议
Reference model
The Effects of Exercise on Our Health
1) As is known to all exercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health 2) First it can greatly strengthen our hearts lungs bones and muscles thereby changing our whole health for the better 3) Besides it can make our brains better able to react to what is going on around us 4) And best of all it can help us breed optimism about our tough life 5) But all the above does not mean that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects exercise brings about 6) If you are normally inactive and then contrary to your usual habit start a program of undue exercise as a succession of scientific studies reveals there are more chances that you have yourself injured 7) In addition the more exercise those on a fatreducing diet take the more loss of iron they will suffer and the worse their health will get8) And worst of all continual as well as excessive exercise can result in sudden death 9) Therefore a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of exercise10) On the one hand our physical exercise must be based on both progressiveness and regularity 11) On the other we must go in for physical exercise according to local as well as health conditions of our own 12) In sum exercise can do us good or harm all depending on how we make use of it
How to Do Something
1 某事物现状2 分析该事物重性(危害性／社会意义等)3 样该事物 写作模式（分析建议类） much improvement a widespread neglect of sth (议题) in society 2) According to a 佐证陈述) 3) If this current is allowed to run its course things are bound to turn for the better worse(Para 1)4) The importance to sb sth else (however) can be seen from the 分析分析above all …(分析III) 8) To sum up (纳总结)
(Para 2)now is how to… 10) In my opinion the first step should be focused upon …(建议I) 11) Then greater efforts must be made to (建议 where there is … there is …(结句) (Para 3)
How to Conduct Patriotic Education Among the Youth of Today
1 国爱国义教育现状 2 分析爱国义教育重意义3 青少年中开展爱国义教育？
1) Much to our distress these years have seen a widespread neglect of patriotic education in our society 2) According to someofficial reports many patriotic education centers have been closed down or kept open to the public for other more profitable purposes while many of our national heroes have given way to today’s pop stars in youths’ minds 3) If this current is allowed to run its course I am afraid things are bound to turn for the worse with less and
less sense of patriotism left in the youth4) The significance of patriotic education to our society however can be seen from the perspectives as follows 5) In the first place the patriotic education can make youth more aware of the glorious history and culture of our nation thus building up their sense of pride as Chinese 6) In the second the patriotic education helps youth value today’s hardearned life so as to hold dearer their golden chances of enriching themselves with knowledge in peace 7) And above all the patriotic education can push youth to draw upon more of their capabilities in order to make tomorrow’s life better than today’s and leave behind themselves more highlights for the nation’s culture 8) To sum up patriotic education is a key ingredient in the allround development of youth9) So the most pressing for us now is how to effectively inculcate patriotism in the youth of today 10) In my opinion the first step should be focused upon giving fuller play to the potentials of patriotic education centers instead of running them for the purpose of making money 11) Then greater efforts must be made to integrate the patriotic education into the curriculums throughout youth’s education 12) In one word where there is an effective patriotic education of youth there is a greater enhancement of national cohesiveness
My Way of Seeing Something
1 角度某事物2 法······(说明理)
写作模式（理陈述类） 1) Something may be many things to many people 2) Some may see it as …while others may view it as …(法举例) 3) As far as I am concerned however I would prefer to value it as … (法) (Para I)4) My insight into outlook on My understanding of sth) is bound up with three major factors5) Primarily sth is so …that …(理I) 6) …(进步阐述is also … (理II) 8) (进步阐述) (理III) 10) …(进步阐述)
(Para II)11) I have (not) much freedom option in this matter but I have never found any other way of seeing than mine 12) Thus I will leave no stone unturned during the course of … in order to pave the way for (Para III)
My Way of Seeing Life
1 角度生2 推崇法······(说明理)
My Way of Seeing Life
1) Life may be many things to many people 2) Some may see it as building up as much material wealth as possible while others may view it as enjoying to the fullest the pleasures each day offers 3) As far as I am concerned however I would prefer to value it as my sole chance to enrich myself with knowledge first then to serve the society with all my heart and finally to leave the world without any regrets4) My outlook on life is bound up with three major factors5) Primarily life is so wondrous that I am eager to explore it 6) Set your heart on a mystery and you can find something new attach more of your mind to a challenge and you can get a sense of success all of which however depends on how much knowledge you have equipped yourself with first 7) Secondly life is also short to any individual like me 8) The flower you have just kissed for the first time is now fading away while the love from others you have come to cherish more is already on the wane 9) And
most of all both wondrousness and shortness of life push me to seize every golden minute and every golden chance 10) Once I idle away the time I am supposed to grasp to study or work for the people there will be no more hope of making up for it 11) I have much option in this matter but I have never found any other way of seeing life more reasonable and acceptable than mine 12) Thus I will leave no stone unturned during the course of my college studies in order to pave the way for my meaningful and colorful life
What Causes Something New
1 年社会出现······2 导致该现象原3 分析该现象社会影响
写作模式（原分析类）
Para1 1) Believe it or notLike it or not these years have witnessed a boom in…a … 2) According to… people especially showing more and more interest in … 3) To get find that three main factors are well worth our concernshould call for more of our concern
5) In the first place 原I) 6) In the second 原II) 7) And above all 原III) 8) …Para 39) The effects of this change on 分析the other(分析II) 12) With more and more…added attached to the trend I am fully it will certainly … is bound to…in the time to comeWhat Causes a Boom in Celebrating Foreign Festivals
1 年学校园出现股洋节热2 阐明导致该现象原3 分析该现象社会影响
Para 1 1) Believe it or not these years have witnessed a boom in celebrating foreign festivals on the Chinese campus2) According to an official reportsurvey young people especially college students are showing more and more interest in such festivals as Valentine’s Day April Fools’ Day Thanksgiving Day and Christmas Day 3) To get a better sense of the boom it is necessary for us to find out its causes Para 24) A closer analysis of the phenomenon can find that three main factors are well worth our concern5) In the first place it is the product of students’ seeking after individuality and novelty for which the college campus offers an ideal climate (原I)6) In the second it is seen among the students as an ideal way of freeing themselves from stress for the time being since most college students single child of each family are subjected to the unprecedented pressures from all sides although they enjoy the abundance of material wealth (
原II)7) And above all it is an inevitable result of more and more exchanges between Western and Eastern cultures (原III)8) While the Chinese watch their children thirst for the joy derived from foreign festivals in fact the Americans are discussing whether or not to list the Chinese Spring Festival among their official holidays Para 39) The effects of this change on our college life are positive 10) On the one hand it has created more chances for students to gain a better insight into other cultures (分析I) 11) On the other it has enriched the college life thus making the campus a more pleasant place to live on (分析II) 12) With more
and more health and color added to the trend I firmly believe it will certainly bring more benefits to our campus life in the time to come
Views on Something
1 认该事物······ 理······2认该事物······3法
写作模式（抒见类） 2) But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to…(议题) (Para I)
3) Many Some people contend believe argue that… (方观点) 4) They base their contention belief argument on the grounds that… (理I) 5）out (理II) 6）Yet others react to the issue matter the other way around and hold assert (方观点) 7) From their angle of view … (理I)8) And even worse as they claim … (理that anything new including… can depending on (法) 10) On the one hand … (理I) 11) But on the other (理II) 结句)
Views on Cloning
1 认克隆技术应利弊理····2 认弊利···3 法 Reference model
Views on Cloning
1) Almost everyone would agree that the birth of Dolly as the first clone of an adult animal has opened a new way of seeing the creation of life for the world 2) But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to whether cloning will bring fortunes or misfortunes to human society3) Many contend that the merits of cloning will outrun its demerits 4) They base their contention on the grounds that cloning is the most effective method of saving the rare wild lives from dying out 5) Besides as they also point out cloning can help provide better ways to treat some serious or deadly sicknesses such as diabetes and Parkinson’s disease 6) Yet others react to the issue the other way around and hold that the opposite
is just reasonable 7) From their angle of view cloning will threaten the ecological balance by destroying the natural reproduction through the enjoyment of sexual love between the male and the female8) And even worse as they reveal cloning will bring greater disasters to human society if it is used in creation of individuals with extreme genetic qualities like terrorists desperate scoundrels and war manias9) I stick to the opinion that anything new including cloning can bring human society fortunes or misfortunes all depending on how it is exploited10) On the one hand it will be an inestimable blessing to the human world if it is applied to reproduction of best dairy cows or other choice domestic poultries 11) But on the other hand it will form a big threat to human society once it is abused in copying those hostile toward humanity 12) In short the solution to the problem is always within man’s reach
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