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mynameisjinjiahongandmyenglishnameiskacii’m14yearsold37kgilikeenglishandbooksredorangepinkblueshuttlecockwaternmelonappleandbananasyesterdayiwenttozhejianguniversitytolearnenglishohhereisbeautifulimakeafriendhernameismayunsheisfromhangzhoushe’s10yearsoldandlikesapples
todayi’mveryhappy
班评语：verygoodkeepstudyinghardandibelieveyoucanlearnalothere
mychinesenameis范昀myenglishnameiskatebrownmyfamilynameisbrownmyfirstnameiskatei’m12yearsoldiamchinesei’mfromhuzhouihavemanyhobbiesilikeplayingfootballandplayingcomputerilikebluebestihaveafriendhernameis蒋姣姣shelookshappysheislovelyilikeherverymuchshelikeswatchingtvandsingingthereisthreepeopleinmyfamilymyfathermotherandmemyfatherisadoctormymotherisadoctortooilikethemverymuchiamhappyeverydaymytelephonenumberis********welcometomyhome
班评语：verygoodyourhandwrithingisverynice
todayisthefirstdayofthesummercampicouldn’tsleepwellyesterdayeveningmaybeifeltalittleuncomfortableiseldomlivewithothersandthebedroomisdifferentformhomebutimetthreenewfriendsherethey’refriendlyandlovely
afterthebeginningceremonyihadanexamthefirstpassagewasalittledifficultformesomewordsihaven’tlearnbeforeispentsomeminutesonitanywayithoughtipassedit
intheafternoonisawtheforeignteacherhernameisjaneabeautifulfirlwhocomesfromusasheisnotoldjust22butshehadbeentoeuropebeijingsheletusplaysomegamesbecauseshewantedustoknoweachtherquicklybutithinkthegamesisnotinterestingsosomestudentsdon’tputtheirheartsinthegamealsotheteacherspokesoquicklythaticouldn’tunderstandher
班评语：beautifulhandwritingexceptforsomegrammermistakesthisdairycouldbeperfectasfortheclassithink
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mynameisjinjiahongandmyenglishnameiskacii’m14yearsold37kgilikeenglishandbooksredorangepinkblueshuttlecockwaternmelonappleandbananasyesterdayiwenttozhejianguniversitytolearnenglishohhereisbeautifulimakeafriendhernameismayunsheisfromhangzhoushe’s10yearsoldandlikesapples
todayi’mveryhappy
班评语：verygoodkeepstudyinghardandibelieveyoucanlearnalothere
mychinesenameis范昀myenglishnameiskatebrownmyfamilynameisbrownmyfirstnameiskatei’m12yearsoldiamchinesei’mfromhuzhouihavemanyhobbiesilikeplayingfootballandplayingcomputerilikebluebestihaveafriendhernameis蒋姣姣shelookshappysheislovelyilikeherverymuchshelikeswatchingtvandsingingthereisthreepeopleinmyfamilymyfathermotherandmemyfatherisadoctormymotherisadoctortooilikethemverymuchiamhappyeverydaymytelephonenumberis********welcometomyhome
班评语：verygoodyourhandwrithingisverynice
todayisthefirstdayofthesummercampicouldn’tsleepwellyesterdayeveningmaybeifeltalittleuncomfortableiseldomlivewithothersandthebedroomisdifferentformhomebutimetthreenewfriendsherethey’refriendlyandlovely
afterthebeginningceremonyihadanexamthefirstpassagewasalittledifficultformesomewordsihaven’tlearnbeforeispentsomeminutesonitanywayithoughtipassedit
intheafternoonisawtheforeignteacherhernameisjaneabeautifulfirlwhocomesfromusasheisnotoldjust22butshehadbeentoeuropebeijingsheletusplaysomegamesbecauseshewantedustoknoweachtherquicklybutithinkthegamesisnotinterestingsosomestudentsdon’tputtheirheartsinthegamealsotheteacherspokesoquicklythaticouldn’tunderstandher
班评语：beautifulhandwritingexceptforsomegrammermistakesthisdairycouldbeperfectasfortheclassithink
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