描写文写作技巧
描写文写作技巧
里说描写指然景物社会环境动植物描写
描写生动形象语言景物形体特征性质等具体描绘出产生境睹物感受富表现力文字描绘客观事物种表现形式运描写展现域环境然景物画面绘声绘色形神展示动物植物神态
通常说描写指艺术性描写里说描写包括部分说明文里技术性描写区介绍等描写单独成文穿插体裁中记叙文中景物描写创造某种气氛烘托物性格展示事件背景等里选编单独成文描写文
描写方式
描写包含两素：象（object）二观察者（observer）前者指听说客观事物者指听般指描写文作者根二者中素处支配位描写方式分两种：
1客观性描写
客观性描写独立观察者感知感情精确记录描写象面目种真实报道目告诉亲眼见描写象读者景物真实情况作者作部相机词语实摄制真正片超然公正特点客观性描写文作者科学家工作中严格排意见感情例描写楼时写I am going upstairs直接写on the second floor反映意见涵词语例说楼陈述事实large building含感情表达a magnificent building
2印象性描写
印象性描写客观性描写截然注视描写象观察者作者心目中引起情绪情感描写象身存说读者传达信息激发读者感情感觉感情交流印象性描写首目交流程起始作者必须源真诚感情作者想描写成功仅感觉深心目中明确什感情作者解心情交流读者
二描写类型
描写文种分类方法象分类方法分类描写角度分类需言描写文容技法两方面进行分类：
描写容分描写文分方介绍然景物描写社会环境描写场面描写中类分干类
描写技法分描写分动态静态动静结合定点观察移步换景托物言志情景交融等描写
三描写文求
描写文写作程中注意点：
1考虑描写视角次序视角通常讲称第第三称目容效果描写次序指先写什写什问题般讲英语描写短文总空间序（spatial order）安排次序描写房间时先部位写起
2选择重点部位容写描写什面面俱选择体现事物特征两点作细描处理方面白描手法代
3描写叙述结合起写实际写作中描写半体裁结合起尤常叙述交织起二者难分难舍般说叙述概括显示行文进程描写具体细致描述客观事物描写总记事写状物写景紧密揉合起浑然体突出重点点面点面结合创造出种谐美
描写文写作指导
1 描写文概述
描写文种生动形象语言物景物事物等特征性质进行描述写作形式
叙述描写常常结合描写文分观描写客观描写观描写作者描述事物时法观点表达出客观描写限事事：The mountain is beautiful．（观描写）The mountain is almost 800 meters high．（客观描写）
2 描写文写作技巧
描写文写作注意突出题想象力观察力根点图表写作时注意组织语言先写衬托题容揭示题样文章结构紧凑层次感时理成章表达作者态度观点
时态常般现时般时
写作程中作者空间位置序远外前组织材料视线转移序组织材料先先写写
描写物事物景色现象面面俱作泛泛描述应该选择典型情节特征事特点事实进行重点描写
三描写文佳作欣赏
范例1
外宾学校参观请英语写篇说明学校情况介绍容包括：
（1）学校概况：建1957年现36班级100余名教师两千名学生
（2）教学情况：学生努力学积极参加项活动互相帮助互相学教师工作认真负责学生态度蔼
（3）学校年变化：新建教学楼实验楼栋现前漂亮
参考范文
Our school was built in 1957 Now there are 36 classes more than one hundred teachers and nearly two
thousand students．In our schoolwe all work hard at our lessons and take an active part in all kinds of activities（活动）．We help each other and learn from each other．The teachers are strict in teaching and very kind to us．We have built a classroom buildinga lab and a small garden in front of the No．1 Teaching Building in the past few years．Now our school is much more beautiful than before．
简评
作者简洁语言介绍学校概况教学情况年变化描写重点突出没着边际发挥 请身边熟悉动物描述象写篇描述性短文
参考范文
Yesterday my father＇s friend gave me a doga naughty pet I like him very much．The dog is about one year old．I call him Congcong because he is clever．
His two eyes are just like two big lampsboth big and bright He has long and white hairwhich makes him look like a white ball．His nose is like a triangle next to the eyes．He has a strong and cute look．
When We have mealshe looks at us and barks at us．He seems to sayWhy don＇t you give me something to eat
This morningmy father took him out．When he saw other dogshe ran after them and played with them．He was friendly to them．He showed his friendliness in a special way Maybe they were talking in their own language．
What a lovely dog I like him very much．
简评
作者极具观察力想象力写出宠物顽皮爱描写细致入微值模仿
范例3
My Hometown题写篇介绍家乡短文求写出特色写出感情
参考范文
My Hometown
My hometown is a small village not far from Shijiazhuang It is a beautiful place I like it very much
The air here is very fresh because there are no factories or cars There is a river in the village and there is a
bridge over the river Near the river there are many flowers in the green grassThe flowers smell sweet Many trees are on both banks of the river The birds in the trees sing in the daytime There are cuckoos and many other kinds of birds They sing so wonderfully
In the evening I often enjoy the quiet view of the countryside At night it is so quiet that you can hear nothing The animals are asleep Everyone is fast asleep It is really a world of quietness
What a wonderful world
简评
文先写家乡位置然写家乡美丽风景包括清新空气清澈河流美丽花草欢乐鸟写家乡宁静夜晚语言优美抒发作者家乡热爱
三学生作点评
题目求
请根实际情况My School Life题写篇100词左右英语短文介绍校园生活参考词汇：trees flowers air playground broadcast（广播） library
学生作
My School Life
I＇m a middle school student though our school is very usual① it＇s beautiful in my heart The school is covered with tall trees and beautiful flowers
The air here is very fresh In the morning lots of schoolmates②go to school early and do some exercises Usually we have breakfast after the first class All of schoolmates take exercises③on the playground after two classes Then the school broadcast begins which brings us some news about our favorite stars music and so on At the time④ someone⑤are reading in the library some students are playing and talking on the playground and some back to classrooms We have three classes in the afternoon and do some sport that we like after school and go home atabout 6∶00 Oh How colorful the school life is
名师点评
篇描述文描写学校学学校活动文章条理清楚句子连贯处需注意方：
①usual意思通常common意普通
②schoolmate指校友学通常包含文中students指全校学生
③All of schoolmates take exercises应改All students do morning exercises
④At the time说At the same time
⑤someone意思某改some students
改文章
My School Life
I＇m a middle school student though our school is very common it＇s beautiful in my heart The school is covered with tall trees and beautiful flowers
The air here is very fresh In the morning lots of students go to school early and do some exercises Usually we have breakfast after the first class All students do morning exercises on the playground after two classes Then the school broadcast begins which brings us some news about our favorite stars music and so on At the same time some students are reading in the library some students are playing and talking on the playground and some back to classrooms We have three classes in the afternoon and do some sport that we like after school and go home at about 6∶00 Oh How colorful the school life is
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描写文写作技巧
里说描写指然景物社会环境动植物描写
描写生动形象语言景物形体特征性质等具体描绘出产生境睹物感受富表现力文字描绘客观事物种表现形式运描写展现域环境然景物画面绘声绘色形神展示动物植物神态
通常说描写指艺术性描写里说描写包括部分说明文里技术性描写区介绍等描写单独成文穿插体裁中记叙文中景物描写创造某种气氛烘托物性格展示事件背景等里选编单独成文描写文
描写方式
描写包含两素：象（object）二观察者（observer）前者指听说客观事物者指听般指描写文作者根二者中素处支配位描写方式分两种：
1客观性描写
客观性描写独立观察者感知感情精确记录描写象面目种真实报道目告诉亲眼见描写象读者景物真实情况作者作部相机词语实摄制真正片超然公正特点客观性描写文作者科学家工作中严格排意见感情例描写楼时写I am going upstairs直接写on the second floor反映意见涵词语例说楼陈述事实large building含感情表达a magnificent building
2印象性描写
印象性描写客观性描写截然注视描写象观察者作者心目中引起情绪情感描写象身存说读者传达信息激发读者感情感觉感情交流印象性描写首目交流程起始作者必须源真诚感情作者想描写成功仅感觉深心目中明确什感情作者解心情交流读者
二描写类型
描写文种分类方法象分类方法分类描写角度分类需言描写文容技法两方面进行分类：
描写容分描写文分方介绍然景物描写社会环境描写场面描写中类分干类
描写技法分描写分动态静态动静结合定点观察移步换景托物言志情景交融等描写
三描写文求
描写文写作程中注意点：
1考虑描写视角次序视角通常讲称第第三称目容效果描写次序指先写什写什问题般讲英语描写短文总空间序（spatial order）安排次序描写房间时先部位写起
2选择重点部位容写描写什面面俱选择体现事物特征两点作细描处理方面白描手法代
3描写叙述结合起写实际写作中描写半体裁结合起尤常叙述交织起二者难分难舍般说叙述概括显示行文进程描写具体细致描述客观事物描写总记事写状物写景紧密揉合起浑然体突出重点点面点面结合创造出种谐美
描写文写作指导
1 描写文概述
描写文种生动形象语言物景物事物等特征性质进行描述写作形式
叙述描写常常结合描写文分观描写客观描写观描写作者描述事物时法观点表达出客观描写限事事：The mountain is beautiful．（观描写）The mountain is almost 800 meters high．（客观描写）
2 描写文写作技巧
描写文写作注意突出题想象力观察力根点图表写作时注意组织语言先写衬托题容揭示题样文章结构紧凑层次感时理成章表达作者态度观点
时态常般现时般时
写作程中作者空间位置序远外前组织材料视线转移序组织材料先先写写
描写物事物景色现象面面俱作泛泛描述应该选择典型情节特征事特点事实进行重点描写
三描写文佳作欣赏
范例1
外宾学校参观请英语写篇说明学校情况介绍容包括：
（1）学校概况：建1957年现36班级100余名教师两千名学生
（2）教学情况：学生努力学积极参加项活动互相帮助互相学教师工作认真负责学生态度蔼
（3）学校年变化：新建教学楼实验楼栋现前漂亮
参考范文
Our school was built in 1957 Now there are 36 classes more than one hundred teachers and nearly two
thousand students．In our schoolwe all work hard at our lessons and take an active part in all kinds of activities（活动）．We help each other and learn from each other．The teachers are strict in teaching and very kind to us．We have built a classroom buildinga lab and a small garden in front of the No．1 Teaching Building in the past few years．Now our school is much more beautiful than before．
简评
作者简洁语言介绍学校概况教学情况年变化描写重点突出没着边际发挥 请身边熟悉动物描述象写篇描述性短文
参考范文
Yesterday my father＇s friend gave me a doga naughty pet I like him very much．The dog is about one year old．I call him Congcong because he is clever．
His two eyes are just like two big lampsboth big and bright He has long and white hairwhich makes him look like a white ball．His nose is like a triangle next to the eyes．He has a strong and cute look．
When We have mealshe looks at us and barks at us．He seems to sayWhy don＇t you give me something to eat
This morningmy father took him out．When he saw other dogshe ran after them and played with them．He was friendly to them．He showed his friendliness in a special way Maybe they were talking in their own language．
What a lovely dog I like him very much．
简评
作者极具观察力想象力写出宠物顽皮爱描写细致入微值模仿
范例3
My Hometown题写篇介绍家乡短文求写出特色写出感情
参考范文
My Hometown
My hometown is a small village not far from Shijiazhuang It is a beautiful place I like it very much
The air here is very fresh because there are no factories or cars There is a river in the village and there is a
bridge over the river Near the river there are many flowers in the green grassThe flowers smell sweet Many trees are on both banks of the river The birds in the trees sing in the daytime There are cuckoos and many other kinds of birds They sing so wonderfully
In the evening I often enjoy the quiet view of the countryside At night it is so quiet that you can hear nothing The animals are asleep Everyone is fast asleep It is really a world of quietness
What a wonderful world
简评
文先写家乡位置然写家乡美丽风景包括清新空气清澈河流美丽花草欢乐鸟写家乡宁静夜晚语言优美抒发作者家乡热爱
三学生作点评
题目求
请根实际情况My School Life题写篇100词左右英语短文介绍校园生活参考词汇：trees flowers air playground broadcast（广播） library
学生作
My School Life
I＇m a middle school student though our school is very usual① it＇s beautiful in my heart The school is covered with tall trees and beautiful flowers
The air here is very fresh In the morning lots of schoolmates②go to school early and do some exercises Usually we have breakfast after the first class All of schoolmates take exercises③on the playground after two classes Then the school broadcast begins which brings us some news about our favorite stars music and so on At the time④ someone⑤are reading in the library some students are playing and talking on the playground and some back to classrooms We have three classes in the afternoon and do some sport that we like after school and go home atabout 6∶00 Oh How colorful the school life is
名师点评
篇描述文描写学校学学校活动文章条理清楚句子连贯处需注意方：
①usual意思通常common意普通
②schoolmate指校友学通常包含文中students指全校学生
③All of schoolmates take exercises应改All students do morning exercises
④At the time说At the same time
⑤someone意思某改some students
改文章
My School Life
I＇m a middle school student though our school is very common it＇s beautiful in my heart The school is covered with tall trees and beautiful flowers
The air here is very fresh In the morning lots of students go to school early and do some exercises Usually we have breakfast after the first class All students do morning exercises on the playground after two classes Then the school broadcast begins which brings us some news about our favorite stars music and so on At the same time some students are reading in the library some students are playing and talking on the playground and some back to classrooms We have three classes in the afternoon and do some sport that we like after school and go home at about 6∶00 Oh How colorful the school life is
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