样写英语句子
写作20090910 1720阅读8评0字号: 中中 There be结构
考生病句:
1There are many people like to go to the movies
2There are different kinds of vegetables can be bought on the market by people
正确表达:
1There are many people who like to go to the movies
2There are different kinds of vegetables that people can buy on the market
两例句错误较普遍性历次考试中少考生正确运there be常句式种结构中there引导词没实际意义be句中作谓语时态数变化
例:
1There was no school in the village at that time (there was not a school)
注意:否定句中否定词nonot anot anynot a接单数名词not a 接复数名词no面名词单复数
2There is not a moment to be lost
3There are many people rushing into the cities every year
4There are many things we can do to prevent traffic accidents
5There is no use holding back the wheel of history
例句出句中语面接种修饰语介词短语定式短语定语句分词短语等等疑该结构增加表现力句子表达容更加丰富 运结构时考生容易犯错误there be动词作谓语句子结构出现严重错误里列举考生典型错误均属种情况写作中格外注意
二较结构
考生病句:
1Comparing with the bike the car runs much faster
2The climate in Walton is colder than other cities
正确表达:
1Compared with the bike the car runs much faster
2The climate in Walton is colder than that of other cities
评议分析:许考生作文中comparethan表示较相表达误
例1中两事物进行较句式Compared with A Bcompare分词现分词B分词逻辑语较例2中考生误天气城市进行较二者没性者改城市天气符合逻辑显然考生错误受汉语表达惯影响较结构常结构正确结构文章句式增加变化利提高写作成绩般说考生恰正确运结构写作成绩应5分
面较结构常表达方法
1级较
1)In 1998 we produced as many cars as we did in the previous five years
2)We have accomplished as much in the past three years as would have taken ten years in the past
2较级
1)Children now enjoy better medical treatment than before
2)We can live longer without food than we can (live ) without water
3高级
1)This is the most interesting book I've ever read
2)Of all his novels I like this one best
4the morethe more结构
1) The harder you work the greater progress you will make
2) The more a man knows the more he discovers his ignorance
5选择较
1) I prefer staying at home to going out
2) They prefer to work rather than (to) sit idly
3) He prefers to work alone
注意:里1)句Prefer A to B结构to介词接名词动名词2)句定式作prefer宾语3)句法2)rather than部分表达出
6
1) Motion is absolute while stagnation is relative
2) He is tired out whereas she is full of vigour
注意:while whereas均连接两意义立分句相汉语字许考生较运句式尤图表作文中
三表达原结构
考生病句:
1The real reason to our failure is not far to seek
2The reason for this is because some people want to earn plenty of money without
working hard
正确表达:
1The real reason for our failure is not far to seek
2The reason for this is that some people want to earn plenty of money without working
hard
评议分析:
两病句分引92年1月97年12月四级考试考生作文遣词造句两位考生具定写作力not far to seek plenty of moneywithout working hard等均运正确恰令遗憾第位考生知道reasonto搭配应接介词for第二位考生犯中国学生常犯错误because引起表语句because词引起表语句句中改that正确掌握表达原结构十分重写作试题求写原写原学英语四六级考试研究生入学英语考试TOEFL考试中写作文体基议文议文基模式摆事实讲道理讲道理说明原写作测试文体决定表达原结构重性
英语中表达原概念结构种as because since seeing that considering that now that not that等词组引出表示原句例:
1Now that we have seen these great achievements with our own eyes we feel more
proud than ever of our country
2Professor Liu is strict with us because he wants us to make rapid progress
3Since we live near the sea we enjoy a healthy climate
4Pollution is still a serious problem not that we don't have the ability to solve it but that
some people have not realized the consequences of the problem
助某词语简单句表达原结构例:
1The reason for this change is quite obvious
2Diligence is the key factor of success
3Idleness is the root of all evils
4He was ashamed to have made the mistake(He was ashamed that he had made the
mistake He was ashamed because he had made the mistake)
述例句外英语中易难表达原结构进行写作训练时候满足知半解讲究书面语言正确性准确性because常引导原句连词语气强表示直接原because置句首面句soas引导原句语气较弱说明原附带since表示原暗示着稍加分析推断出原
四否定结构
考生病句
1Some people think we needn't to worry about fresh water
2Nowadays many people don't like to go to the movies too
正确表达:
1Some people think we needn't worry (don't need to worry) about fresh water
2Nowadays many people don't like to go to the movies either
评议分析:
例句1选96年1月四级考生作文例句2选92年1月六级考生作文例句1 错误该考生混淆need作情态动词作普通动词法need作情态动词时否定句面动词带to needn't worry作we谓语need作实意动词时肯定句否定句疑问句don't need to worry 中to worry作don't need宾语例句2错误该考生混淆tooeither区两词表示意思英语中too also肯定句either否定句
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