高考备考:高考英语记叙文写作技巧
记叙文讲述件事系列事情事件广义讲真实虚构事传历史新闻属记叙文写记叙文注意五方面:
1背景
记叙文开头读者提供背景资料交代文中叙述事件发生点时间等样读者容易理解文章中记叙事件
2细节选择详略
作者应该选容关表现观点细节应胡子眉毛抓读者堕烟海知云叙事根中心需确定详略表达中心详写略写作者叙事重点放细节细节笔带样疏密致浓淡相宜文章谐匀称题突出
3组织结构
记叙文中事件通常发生先次序叙述叙事时中间甚结局写起重引入胜事件开始然回头追述事开端倒叙
记叙文般开头中间结尾场景描写放开头中间部分讲述事身事讲明白叙述然然结束需增加余结尾时需增加两句话谈谈事重意义发生什事情
4叙事容
叙事容清楚完整文章结构体现五原
叙述件事情文中交代清楚五方面容时事发展英语中when where who what how叙述做果起落完整印象交代五素时力求灵活样切忌呆板例交代时间时时间状语(When we arrived there) 介词短语(on arriving there)时间 (then)副词等灵活交代素文章生动
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叙事离开写叙事记叙文中定注意写物表现出物性格特征语言思想载体文中适直接引语仅起着刻画物性格作事件发展定程度推动作写叙事记叙文时必须注意物话描写
5叙述角度
事第称叙述第三称叙述二者利弊第称叙述读者感描绘切作者亲眼见亲历读起更真实生动种叙述难反映时间点发生事情第三称叙述没局限性时更加客观妥善编排点物身发生事情件容易事
6目
讲事必定目:证明某理阐明某概念赞美某种美德谴责某种罪恶等等作者确保读者准确误领会叙述意图必须认真挑选细节精心设计事情节
记叙文中学阶段学重点
请面例子:
场生动讨
[题材]
堂语文课学围绕破仑名言想军兵兵展开讨全班分成两组讨异常激烈
[范文]
A Lively Discussion
It was a Chinese lesson Our teacher Mr Wei said to us Today we'll have a discussion Napoleon once said 'A soldier who doesn't want to be a general isn't a good soldier' Do you agree with him Every one of us was eager to express his thoughts Gradually the class was divided into two groups One was for the saying and the other against it
First a girl said she was in favor of the idea She gave several reasons for it Then I stood up with my heart beating fast I said The saying is wrong in a way The highest aim a soldier should have is to work for the people and defend the country To be a general should not be his aim Then I took Lei Feng as an example saying Lei Feng served the people heart and soul He never wanted to become a general But can you say he was not a good soldier
The group I was in won the discussion I'll never forget this lively and instructive discussion
[评析]
文章开篇点出辩题接着写辩程文中运直接引语物刻画形象生动
帮迷路英国
[题材]
天晚饭电影路遇迷路英国汤姆放弃电影送回旅馆英语介绍年发生变化汤姆谈英国情况然没成电影心里高兴帮助汤姆练英语前认真学英语容易帮汤姆
[范文]
Helping an Englishman Find His Way
One day after supper I was going to see a film when I met with a lost Englishman His name was Tom
So I sent him to the hotel where he stayed instead of going to see the film I talked a lot with him in English all the way I told him about the great changes having taken place in our hometown in the recent years and Tom told me something About England I felt very happy though I missed the film for I practised speaking English by helping Tom If I had not worked hard at English before I wouldn't have helped him so easily
[评析]
文通记述件事家说明学英语必性
守株免
宋国种田田中株树天兔子奔跑时撞树折断颈脖死(宋)放农具守树希兔子兔子没件事宋国耻笑(字数:80左右)
参考词语
耕田to plough in the fields
树桩tree stump
笑柄laugh stock
Stand by a Stump Waiting for More Suicidal Hares
A farmer of the State of Song was ploughing in he fields when a hare came dashing past and ran into a tree stump in its way It broke its neck and fell down dead Seeing this the farmer put aside his plough and went up to stand by the stump hoping to get some more hares this way
Naturally no more hares came and for this the farmer became a laughing stock all over the state
美国朋友参观
时间:11月10日星期天气:晴
提示:
(1)午8点位美国演员校参观受师生热烈欢迎
(2)8点半报告厅举行欢迎会校长位美国演员会发言
(3)演员演2幽默短剧家开心
(4)会议室交谈应邀参加互相介绍两国学生学校生活座谈5点结束送走美国朋友
(5)简写天感受
Now 10 Monday Fine
Today some American film actors and actresses came to visit our school They arrived at eight and were given a warm welcome at the school gate by the teachers and students
We had a welcoming meeting at half past eight in the lecture hall Our headmaster and an American guest spoke at the meeting
After that the American actors and actresses performed two short plays which were very humourous and cheered everybody
And then a free talk was held at the meetingroom I was asked to attend the talk They asked a lot of questions about our school life They also told us how American students spend their spare time The talk was over at five p m We saw American friends off
We had a wonderful time I'll never forget the day
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