高班英语写作材料
写作检核表
1 关标题
否标题?标题否符合文章容?标题否太太空?标题写法否正确?
2 关文体
否口语化?书信该口语体时否太正规书面语?
3 关结构
结构否合理?全文否止段?否完整包括开头正文结尾?全文逻辑否清晰?相全文言开头结尾否太长?
4 关段落
段否topic sentence?否实现unity(统性)段讲容? 文章coherence(连贯性)?否运transition(渡)手段?
段落中否包含相关?段中支持该段题句?安排否定维度层级结构?
5 关表达
句子形式否样化?文中否学阶段单词短语?否偶尔强调句倒装句谚语名名言修辞手法?时态称数否致?拼写语法方面否错误?写标点方面否错误?
避免低级错误
文中夹杂汉字顿号书名号句子中间处点Take sth as an example逗号Because句单独阿拉伯数字年代写写信时日期写信尾采中国式写法call 110120等中国特号码 祈句误激励书名电影名未斜体
写作中维度层级结构(Hierarchy)
Renumber the sentences to arrange them in what you think is the best order
The controlling idea Since I began living in an apartment and going to school my biggest problem has been the housework
(1) Cooking my food is a bigger problem
(2) The worst problem is doing my laundry
(3) Cleaning the apartment is not too bad although it takes time away from my studies at least
when I finsh the apartment looks nice
(4) Sometimes the food is burnedsometimes it is not cooked enough and sometimes I have not
measured correctly so the food tastes terrible
(5) Shopping for my food is more difficult because I don’t know the English names of many
foods and often I have to spend extra time asking for help
(6) The laundromat is far from my apartment and I waste much valuable time
(7) I have never had to cook before and usually the results are discouraging
(8) Mostly I am embrassed as I sit in the laundromat with all the womenand so I wait until all my
clothes are dirty before I do this terrible task
(9) I also have trouble with the complicted instructionsso occasionally I ended up with pink
socks or a shirt that is too small
What kind of titles are good
concise more often noun phrases rather than long sentences clear
beautiful and refined
complete not partial governing the whole text rather than a part
eyecatching
The Writing of Titles
Write the following titles in the proper form
1 where I lived and what I lived for
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2 are transgenic crops safe
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3 wellknown dramatist of the ming dynasty
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4 a day to remember
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5 approaches to teaching english as a foreign language
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6 criticisms on the ending of mark twain’s adventures of Huckleberry finn
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