中考作文辅导
第篇：中考作文辅导三
中考英语作文辅导三
创建文明城市
2014年娄底市申请文明城市作学生应该创建文明城市做点什？请根列英文提示英语写篇70词左右英语短文开头已写出词数计入总词数
1 respect the teachers and the old be polite and honest
2 obey the traffic rules cross the street politely
3 protect the environment don’t spit(吐痰) everywhere or throw rubbish around
4 save reasource eat up all the food on the plate
loudi applied for the cilized cityin 2014 as a middle school student what whould we do for it first we should respect the teachers and the old also it’s good for us to be polite and honest to other people second we should obey the traffic rules and cross the street politely we can only cross the road when the traffic light is green third we must protect the environment don’t spit wverywhere or throw rubbish around fourth the resources are getting fewer and fewer so we should save resources especially don’t waste water or food when we have dinner it’s best for us to eat up all the food on the plate
第二篇：2014中考作文辅导总述
2014中考作文辅导总述
2014温州卷
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惜舍分
惜阴爱惜光阴
惜老怜贫爱护老年情穷说怜贫惜老
惜墨金指写字绘画做文章笔非常慎重力求精练
惜福指珍视福气分享受
2014温州卷
春雨蒙蒙万物苏醒写满诗意夏雨初歇池蛙欢唱纸船处处飘荡秋雨点点敲残荷声声落进心里冬雨声苍白渴张开眼睛
春夏秋冬四季轮回少事雨天生动演绎少欢乐嬉戏中情绽放少温情伞默默传递少憧憬静寂中悄然孕育
雨天适合回忆联想漫溯遥想未雨天仿佛蓝色精灵赋予世界新生命
2014温州卷
请刻开始题写篇文章
求：（1）文体选（2）少600字（诗歌少20行）（3）文中出现真实名校名名等
作文复策
1容分类（作文热点）
（1）类（学生生活环境发展进步生成长体验感悟思想认识情感交流等）
（2）类（126道中考作文试题中关心类作文试题39道种离’非’莫属态势）
（3）然类（感受然亲然 欣赏然保护然）
2文体分类
选择擅长文体果形象思维发达善记叙描写选择记叙文果逻辑思维见长善说理议选择写议文果关知识较丰富长说明事物事理选择说明文
般言温州中考写记叙文记叙性散文妥两年突出强调记叙文写作倾
3题型分类
全命题作文话题作文半命题材料作文书信等应文
4注意作文点题
作文中题包含话题文题题点题指点文题点话题点题点题作文醒目明朗基方法技巧考场作文失时机点明题旨作 1
文思路清晰中心突出
点题性质分明点暗点两种
解谓明点紧扣标题话题文章中直接写出题目话题（全部题目话题中词语）谓暗点指词句标题话题没直接联系意义较含蓄点出题意直接说明释标题话题含义尤注意反面点题反面点题称暗点题角度说明点点文题话题暗点点题
点题通常篇首篇中篇末考场作文通篇点题开头结尾点题外文章中间少两次点题文章层次清晰文章题目联系紧密中心鲜明突出
复半命题作文
（）注意半命题作文补题
1．仔细审题辨清题意
真想文题填老师信父母理解学友谊等精神方面容填入书架钢琴支精美钢笔条黄纱巾等具体物质方面容
2．补题力求创意新颖
生活中补题：
填家庭学校社会——浅薄直露味嚼蜡
填集体亲友谊——正确常流般
填麻声追星族——切中时弊发警醒
填题海夹缝梦魇——喻形象深邃出彩
3．补题符合情理 第次填诸哭淘气唱歌做梦类必然令皱眉选项难界定第填进题中势必陷入伪科学泥沼变换选填印象深刻第学校登台演戏领奖水更类第难确认变运思选填说谎家工独远行入题文旨文趣会更新鲜合逻辑违情理
（二）掌握半命题作文写作技巧
重关注细节见写拥抱题少学生贪求全散文笔法写拥抱阳光拥抱梦想拥抱春天文题提示全拥抱全文没写件具体生动事文章空洞物选取生活中心动场景印象深件事受感动细节写活拥抱心理感受独特情感体验表现动情感
应考准备
整理旧作文6类分类：
1亲情类——亲
2友情类——友
3情类——陌生（物底层物）
4成长类——成长（突出精神层面精神生活重性）
5环境类——然（济发展环境保护）
6社会类——社会发展（社会进步历史怀旧）
二篇作文明确题表达种情感明白某道理题句简短明确失生动优美句子陈述题致名言名句更
三作文符合求：
场景（短时间点二三物）处穿插（现＋）情感转折（前反正）条情绪变化线索（见闻＋感）种手法种转换
作文求修改
附：记叙文模式种
两种开头：直接切入排议抒情
场景：短时间点二三物
处穿插：现＋
情感转折：前文铺垫中间转折情新
条情绪变化线索：见闻＋感（次体现）
种手法种转换：象描写修辞
种结尾：抒情议应开头
注意：真实信必须写身边发生事
四试准备筛选作文套作作文： ①幕难忘怀
②
③陌生
④难忘张脸
⑤震撼心灵
⑥忘记忆 ⑦日子
⑧路口
第三篇：中考作文辅导(1)
青春成长类话题作文写作指导例文评点
江苏省淮安市楚州区文通中学单春林
教学目标：
1．通教学教学生写关青春成长类作文技巧
2． 熟练运学方法精巧构思写篇优秀作
第课时
教学程：
话题导入：
成长伴生成长程曲折坎坷成长事丰富彩成长程航行边际海时风浪静风光秀丽时波涛汹涌暗藏危机生样世界万事万物莫关成长定话说正确面成长风风雨雨呢？中考中写成长类命题作文语文新课程标准明确指出学生形成积极生态度正确价值观需倍加关注学生成长中包括精神心灵成长
二话题阐述
青春成长路道风景青春品味理解答案赋予青春意义生活路途肩负着沉重神圣命活出亮丽独特风采活出道道亮丽风景
中考作文命题然会忽视道风景年轻目光触摸着景物时细微动作眼神句温馨鼓励劝告次意外相遇碰撞甚滴水缕春风行文字幅画面会意间砰然拨动年轻敏感心弦中考命题正手写口写心段青春新曲心灵历程真实流露
三话题演练
呱呱坠蹒跚学步步入色彩斑斓青春花季生生理心理变化年龄段值回味青春日历定记载愉悦痛苦追求失烦恼等请回味成长滋味青春足迹话题写篇600字左右文章作中学生生活阳光样阴霾相伴段青春成长足迹歪歪斜斜路坦途写出心灵悟语写出精神跋涉文体夹叙夹议记叙文佳文学素养深厚学尝试抒情笔法寓情事寓情理寓情物立意题材确定方设计题记开头结尾
1广引总收笔更表达青春感悟心灵收获增强文章容量巧妙引诗文展示正积极文采
2．修辞创意境果胸中藏着丰富细腻情感积累妨处落笔写出历次磨难坎坷助修辞法烘心中情文章开头生动形象情景交融
3．铺陈造气势心中青春千般感慨妨站立更高位置俯视青春抒发生命生思考文章开头铺陈语句增强气势
四 青春成长类命题基两点：
1．关注青春生活风采
学生活中善思考勤钻研热爱科学怕作业负担怕考试失败渴老师尊重关爱常常叛逆喜欢空间喜欢表现常常出错害怕课余生活中总生龙活虎热爱班集体常常闹闹毁坏班级荣誉伤学间气家长老师批评渴学友谊意句话动作眼神出手喜欢追求新鲜事物喜欢类做爱做事家庭生活中渴父母理解厌烦父母唠叨常常父母抗富理想遇挫折便失落怅惘中考作文命题紧紧扣住性生活作命题范围容
2．折射生命涵
成长中学会开启尘封心灵睿智面世间切预测变造坚实青春底座磨出生命光亮感受体验青春生命精彩开始思考生命价值意义演绎生精彩学会行动解读生命青春成长感悟生命涵中考作文命题味道感受成长历充满活力岁月等体现样命题导
综合青春成长类中考作文命题出两特点：
①命题核心成长初中生学课余家庭等生活中领略喜怒哀乐渴着快快长题目中常出现类似生活斑斓彩未充满希憧憬成长需磨炼成长岁月里烦恼快乐成长滋味苦辣甜等语句 ②初中生处青春成长关键期充满激情活力免苦恼脆弱处心理断乳期中心缺乏制力离家出走轻生现象时发生命题方会关注身成长帮助树立积极生价值观培养乐观健康心态 时注意两趋：
①引导身成长历回眸抒写生命性感悟体验 成长回眸值思索许心灵生命允诺许换角度思考智慧豁达许战胜困难毅者疆勇敢回眸间盘点岁月中记忆成长理解感悟定收获类命题写青春成长历出独特生感悟
②命题素材名名言名事转热点事特雪灾汶川震等然灾害面前涌现出献出青春生命拯救生命歌泣事考区作命题素材背景
特提醒家青春成长类话题涵盖面广该类素材具通性延展性命题情感类品味类心声类追求类感悟类美德类热点类青春成长类素材写做简略统计90作文命题稍微调整变换牵引写青春成长写生体验
五范文导航
昂起头走
独穿喧嚣城市目光定格座名心情事影楼前位女孩甜甜倩影跃入眼帘片醒目写着完成您心情事心动正想抬脚迈进想法回绝美丽浪漫心情事永远属靓丽女孩 丑鸭会心情事呢？意识驻足太久匆匆跑开
回家里起书歇斯底里读起眼角泪竟没理淌丑敢外边停留分钟丑敢昂首挺胸迈步丑敢留美妙瞬间丑甚敢拥心情事沉沦？该背着沉重包袱抛洒青春？知识充实智慧塑造脱颖出长相父母天注定坚信：帝关门时开扇窗扇窗便生中唯希样艰险找推开窗爬出相信窗外会片蓝蓝天空属
学校里常漂亮失失时丑必注意衣着否新潮丑必担心发型否时髦丑必少女心事秘密会全心扑书籍安慰心灵摆脱悲哀痛苦羁绊枯燥岁月化令愉快时日
然丑生活方
然丑卑会方式变成心情事白天鹅
丑女孩没什心情事真实实生活踏踏实实步伐昂起头走吧
[简评]：文写长丑烦恼丑收获然丑卑会方式变成心情事白天鹅文排句作者心情感宣泄出丑敢昂首挺胸迈步丑留美瞬间丑甚敢拥心情事
长感觉真
生厚厚书页记载着成长足迹童年场梦少年幅画青年首诗——题记
岁月风铃摇呀摇知觉已风风雨雨摇十六春秋奶奶说：天见孩子真长头高截母亲说：终长懂体谅父母辛苦老师说：长现动学认确实长已越越成熟老师什时候长呀？幼园成长档案里留稚嫩声音姿彩连环画穷乐趣时候总盼快快长时希长独立生活受父母压迫早饭父母做衣服父母穿床铺父母理然父母予许温馨感觉切渴长渴快点长
花开花落秋风秋雨秋天翩然终学四年级母亲说：已生活该理拥属天—— 间三方米屋实太令兴奋终宿生活理天
里读书便成乐趣牛虻禁难割舍骨肉亲情感动科幻说神秘世界扇动想象翅膀事情节添神秘美妙陶醉书海洋里书智慧源泉类进步阶梯伴着墨韵书香天天长
花重开日少年花季雨露润湿心扉时渐渐成熟步入初中生活门槛真正生活记刚刚住校晚兴奋夜没睡然心里觉点离家凄凉学校里仅领略然奥秘太空世界美妙学会样做伙伴情说笑拘束找飞翔翅膀钢铁样炼成锻炼更加坚强回首走日子成长道路留串歪歪斜斜足迹痛苦欢乐充实失落然童年乐园令留恋希长万卷古消永日窗昏晓送流年采撷智慧浪花断丰富充实完善美生活遐想憧憬中天快快乐乐富意义
长感觉真成长档案里写座右铭
[简评]：文章作者成长足迹贯穿全文截取成长道路三断面：童年少年青年三时期成长历仅反映成长表层样成长什样成长等方面作深层挖掘文章中心明确语言流畅富诗意运第称写成长档案里记长感觉真体验读淡淡感觉中浓浓情意
六训练题目
请成长需题目写篇文章
求：①先题目补充完整文章体验感悟抄袭②诗歌外文体限③少600字④文中出现真实名校名名⑤书写正确规范美观 范文赏析：
成长需驻足回
辛苦泥泞道路否回头张家中灯光亲切继续勇敢前？欢愉阳光道否转首凝视风雨中艰辛困苦激励冷静沉着？
成长需昂首阔步着灿烂阳需驻足回细数历片段谁幸福美谁辛酸难身处困境时清醒回头仔细观份幸福便会觉冷漠心中刹充满力量汹涌浪挡住击获成功细致转身抚摩留足迹土便会昏头脑土许贫瘠许泥泞面留血汗结晶视珍宝便明白目标更遥远方切易想什？
需轻轻转身便会奋起动力便会寻潮湿鼻息鼓起勇气转会发现成长路许路荆棘赖存活呼唤拥穷力量
成长需驻足回
许年希冀已埋藏暗灰尘埃里许年涟漪已抚波浪静寻找成长路然稚嫩双眼懵懂中掘出希冀柔弱双手翻动陈年土灰企图救出卑微呻吟中双眼尖锐双手力成熟反复咀嚼中回忆中牵出深思许青春马许童年稍透漫天迷雾顶住云端泰山压顶般稀薄空气天浑浊中找光明转头时身便应该瑰丽奇迹
成长中请驻足回温暖心笑容片竹林中擦身风
点评：文章语言凝练精美富文采展示作者深厚阅读积累扎实语言基功时行文时注意适时点题渡然流畅结尾文题应结构完整 成长需爱
说成长需空间说成长需快乐说成长需宽容更说成长需成功始终认成长需更爱亲爱老师爱学爱
亲爱
生病病重请假医院吊针躺病床心烦乱奈抱怨帝什偏偏时候生病学教室里听老师讲课医院里痛苦呻吟时候
女快起吃药感觉样点？难受？妈妈亲切问道
孙女想吃点什外婆买回业外婆关心说
快点起呀爸爸说
顿时亲间爱包围住切助抱怨瞬间消失留爱永恒变亲爱
老师爱
月考伤心语文没考拖总分腿老师失拖总分腿老师失班找谈话原会遭老师遣责
说说什次考理想见老压力样子老师说说许老师帮老师蔼说
时心失中找希想苦恼告诉老师想老师作回知心朋友什放开心老师爱
学爱
800米考试快行然考错现头晕想吐四肢力扒球台时
没事吧紧？
扶走吧样会点？
需需水
忽然切劳累舒服见环绕学关心学爱
成长道路爱需爱爱变幸福变坚强变快乐
点评：文层次分明中心明确语言流畅开头通排句形式迅速入题总领全文中间通三片断展现形式爱较表现文章旨结尾注意前呼应文章浑然体
第四篇：2014英语中考作文辅导
2014英语中考作文辅导
1手机利弊
recentlyshort messages become more and more popular with both the young and the oldpeople accept the convenient way of communication and some even cannot live without them
as to the easons why so many people are in favour of the short messagesin my opinionthere＇re three pointsfirst it can save time if you want to inform your friends of something in one or two words by sending a short messageby comparison with letters or emailshort messages are really more quick for others to receive you as the mobile phones are always with themsecondshort messages cost less than making a phone callthirdpeople who are not very familiar with each other can chat by short messages more easilythrough which more and more people can know of others and become friends joozonecom
howevernothing that is perfect exists in the worldshort messages also have some disadvantages with themsome people cheat or fool others by telling them that they have won some prizes through short messagesalsotaking advantage of people＇s ignorancesome websites charge a good deal of expenses form short messagesabove allshort message is product of the hitech nowadaysit will serve us very well if we make proper and full use of it
2关电动车
a lot of family of electric vehicles students have no knowledge of the relevant transport training do not look at traffic signs on the road marking like the electric car when the motorcycle opened often in disregard of the risk into the fast lane or speeding along in the slow as a result the road can often be seenchaos reverse cutaway line of electric vehicles the bad behavior of the traffic awareness and timely if not corrected would have an adverse impact on children at the same time each value of electric vehicles as a result of two or three thousand dollars the driver is a student easily become the target of criminals and crime easy to bring the personal safety of the students potential not long ago a student in a city electric car ride through mountain tunnels tung oil were taken away from electric cars
3关低碳
we have only one earthit’s our duty to protect our enviromentnow there is a new lifestyle called low carbow have you ever heard of it what does it mean it means low energy and no wasteas a studentwhat can we do for it it’s easyyou can walk or ride to school instead of driving to school in order to save paper you can write on both sides of paper before we left the classroom we should turn off lights and the computer …
do you have any other good ideas please tell me we should also call on the people around us to do something for low – carbon living only in this way will the earth he a good place to live on if we don’t do anythingdo remember the last drop of water on the earth may be a teardrop of us
4玉树震
1） on april 12th a big earthquake happened in yushu qinhai many people lost their family and their homes all the chinese people feel quite sada lot of people volunteer to help them some people raise money for them some people buy something for them some people go there to comfort the sad children thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes even foreign friends also give them a hand
i’m deeply moved by these people soi’ll use my pocket money to buy some
food and school things for the children there i think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together
2）学生会震倡议书
dear students
after the terrible earthquake there are lots of children out of school some of them are even homelesstheir schools and houses have destroyed they can just live in the open air they don’t have enough school things or clothes as we all know every kid has the right to go to school but now they are in trouble as a chinese we should help them as possible as we can we can raise some money and things for them and we can also write to them to encourage them i hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help
students’
union
5申请成世博会志愿者
i read your ad in the newspaper yesterday i’m writing to tell you that i’d like to work as a volunteer for the world expo
my name is li hua i’m sixteen i have many hobbies such as drawing sports singing speeches and spoken english i am proud that i won the first prize in our city’s english speech contest for middle school student in december 2014in fact i’m healthy and strong
if i am lucky enough to become a volunteer i will try my best to do this job well please reply to me soon my telephone number is 0594—1356666
yours sincerely
6回顾初中三年成长程定感受学 生活爱等方面作出评价 ( 毕业 回顾评价)
i have studied in my middle school for three years i have learned a lot i have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others i have many hobbies i like sports i often play basketball football and volleyball with my friends football is my favorite of all my subjects i do best in english and chinese but my math and physics are a little weak i think i will try my best to learn them well i hope i can study in no1 high school
7梦想未
1）梦想名医生(my dream is doctor)
i am an ordinary person i have an ordinary dream is a doctor because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain may let the human change the health at the same time i believed that will help others own also to be able to obtain joyfully therefore i hoped future i might be a doctor
2）十年生活(my life in ten years)
in ten yearsi think i ＇ll be a reporteri wiil live in an apartement with my sisterbecause i don＇t like living alone and i can play with her inth aparementso in ten yearsi willba a good reporteri will meet a lot of interesting and faous people and i willgo to another places on businessin ten yearsi will have many different pets maybe i will keep a pet turtlei think i will go shopping with my sister as long as i have timeand i will go to london on my vacation
somy life in ten years will be better and better
王彤
第五篇：中考作文辅导1
中考作文辅导
发邮件介绍学校生活学情况
假李华美国网友peter篮球时意外受伤请英文发封电子邮件容包括：1询问病情2 介绍期学校活动学情况3表达祝愿
注意：1字数控制80100词左右
2出现真实校名姓名
3开头结尾已出计入总词数
dear peter
you got injured you should have a good rest at home everything goes well here i enjoy great changes in my school on one hand the teachers make their teaching styles colorful in my science class my teacher always encourages us to think and cultivates our ability to study independently on the other hand we have plenty of time to try what we what to dowe had our school day last week there were fifferent kinds of activities such as speech contest talent show volunteering… i will send you some photos about my school day if you like
i hope you’ll be better as soon as possible
best wishes
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第篇：中考作文辅导三
中考英语作文辅导三
创建文明城市
2014年娄底市申请文明城市作学生应该创建文明城市做点什？请根列英文提示英语写篇70词左右英语短文开头已写出词数计入总词数
1 respect the teachers and the old be polite and honest
2 obey the traffic rules cross the street politely
3 protect the environment don’t spit(吐痰) everywhere or throw rubbish around
4 save reasource eat up all the food on the plate
loudi applied for the cilized cityin 2014 as a middle school student what whould we do for it first we should respect the teachers and the old also it’s good for us to be polite and honest to other people second we should obey the traffic rules and cross the street politely we can only cross the road when the traffic light is green third we must protect the environment don’t spit wverywhere or throw rubbish around fourth the resources are getting fewer and fewer so we should save resources especially don’t waste water or food when we have dinner it’s best for us to eat up all the food on the plate
第二篇：2014中考作文辅导总述
2014中考作文辅导总述
2014温州卷
现代汉语词典惜释义：①爱惜：珍～∣～寸阴∣～墨金②惜惋惜：痛～③吝惜舍：～∣～力∣～工
惜舍分
惜阴爱惜光阴
惜老怜贫爱护老年情穷说怜贫惜老
惜墨金指写字绘画做文章笔非常慎重力求精练
惜福指珍视福气分享受
2014温州卷
春雨蒙蒙万物苏醒写满诗意夏雨初歇池蛙欢唱纸船处处飘荡秋雨点点敲残荷声声落进心里冬雨声苍白渴张开眼睛
春夏秋冬四季轮回少事雨天生动演绎少欢乐嬉戏中情绽放少温情伞默默传递少憧憬静寂中悄然孕育
雨天适合回忆联想漫溯遥想未雨天仿佛蓝色精灵赋予世界新生命
2014温州卷
请刻开始题写篇文章
求：（1）文体选（2）少600字（诗歌少20行）（3）文中出现真实名校名名等
作文复策
1容分类（作文热点）
（1）类（学生生活环境发展进步生成长体验感悟思想认识情感交流等）
（2）类（126道中考作文试题中关心类作文试题39道种离’非’莫属态势）
（3）然类（感受然亲然 欣赏然保护然）
2文体分类
选择擅长文体果形象思维发达善记叙描写选择记叙文果逻辑思维见长善说理议选择写议文果关知识较丰富长说明事物事理选择说明文
般言温州中考写记叙文记叙性散文妥两年突出强调记叙文写作倾
3题型分类
全命题作文话题作文半命题材料作文书信等应文
4注意作文点题
作文中题包含话题文题题点题指点文题点话题点题点题作文醒目明朗基方法技巧考场作文失时机点明题旨作 1
文思路清晰中心突出
点题性质分明点暗点两种
解谓明点紧扣标题话题文章中直接写出题目话题（全部题目话题中词语）谓暗点指词句标题话题没直接联系意义较含蓄点出题意直接说明释标题话题含义尤注意反面点题反面点题称暗点题角度说明点点文题话题暗点点题
点题通常篇首篇中篇末考场作文通篇点题开头结尾点题外文章中间少两次点题文章层次清晰文章题目联系紧密中心鲜明突出
复半命题作文
（）注意半命题作文补题
1．仔细审题辨清题意
真想文题填老师信父母理解学友谊等精神方面容填入书架钢琴支精美钢笔条黄纱巾等具体物质方面容
2．补题力求创意新颖
生活中补题：
填家庭学校社会——浅薄直露味嚼蜡
填集体亲友谊——正确常流般
填麻声追星族——切中时弊发警醒
填题海夹缝梦魇——喻形象深邃出彩
3．补题符合情理 第次填诸哭淘气唱歌做梦类必然令皱眉选项难界定第填进题中势必陷入伪科学泥沼变换选填印象深刻第学校登台演戏领奖水更类第难确认变运思选填说谎家工独远行入题文旨文趣会更新鲜合逻辑违情理
（二）掌握半命题作文写作技巧
重关注细节见写拥抱题少学生贪求全散文笔法写拥抱阳光拥抱梦想拥抱春天文题提示全拥抱全文没写件具体生动事文章空洞物选取生活中心动场景印象深件事受感动细节写活拥抱心理感受独特情感体验表现动情感
应考准备
整理旧作文6类分类：
1亲情类——亲
2友情类——友
3情类——陌生（物底层物）
4成长类——成长（突出精神层面精神生活重性）
5环境类——然（济发展环境保护）
6社会类——社会发展（社会进步历史怀旧）
二篇作文明确题表达种情感明白某道理题句简短明确失生动优美句子陈述题致名言名句更
三作文符合求：
场景（短时间点二三物）处穿插（现＋）情感转折（前反正）条情绪变化线索（见闻＋感）种手法种转换
作文求修改
附：记叙文模式种
两种开头：直接切入排议抒情
场景：短时间点二三物
处穿插：现＋
情感转折：前文铺垫中间转折情新
条情绪变化线索：见闻＋感（次体现）
种手法种转换：象描写修辞
种结尾：抒情议应开头
注意：真实信必须写身边发生事
四试准备筛选作文套作作文： ①幕难忘怀
②
③陌生
④难忘张脸
⑤震撼心灵
⑥忘记忆 ⑦日子
⑧路口
第三篇：中考作文辅导(1)
青春成长类话题作文写作指导例文评点
江苏省淮安市楚州区文通中学单春林
教学目标：
1．通教学教学生写关青春成长类作文技巧
2． 熟练运学方法精巧构思写篇优秀作
第课时
教学程：
话题导入：
成长伴生成长程曲折坎坷成长事丰富彩成长程航行边际海时风浪静风光秀丽时波涛汹涌暗藏危机生样世界万事万物莫关成长定话说正确面成长风风雨雨呢？中考中写成长类命题作文语文新课程标准明确指出学生形成积极生态度正确价值观需倍加关注学生成长中包括精神心灵成长
二话题阐述
青春成长路道风景青春品味理解答案赋予青春意义生活路途肩负着沉重神圣命活出亮丽独特风采活出道道亮丽风景
中考作文命题然会忽视道风景年轻目光触摸着景物时细微动作眼神句温馨鼓励劝告次意外相遇碰撞甚滴水缕春风行文字幅画面会意间砰然拨动年轻敏感心弦中考命题正手写口写心段青春新曲心灵历程真实流露
三话题演练
呱呱坠蹒跚学步步入色彩斑斓青春花季生生理心理变化年龄段值回味青春日历定记载愉悦痛苦追求失烦恼等请回味成长滋味青春足迹话题写篇600字左右文章作中学生生活阳光样阴霾相伴段青春成长足迹歪歪斜斜路坦途写出心灵悟语写出精神跋涉文体夹叙夹议记叙文佳文学素养深厚学尝试抒情笔法寓情事寓情理寓情物立意题材确定方设计题记开头结尾
1广引总收笔更表达青春感悟心灵收获增强文章容量巧妙引诗文展示正积极文采
2．修辞创意境果胸中藏着丰富细腻情感积累妨处落笔写出历次磨难坎坷助修辞法烘心中情文章开头生动形象情景交融
3．铺陈造气势心中青春千般感慨妨站立更高位置俯视青春抒发生命生思考文章开头铺陈语句增强气势
四 青春成长类命题基两点：
1．关注青春生活风采
学生活中善思考勤钻研热爱科学怕作业负担怕考试失败渴老师尊重关爱常常叛逆喜欢空间喜欢表现常常出错害怕课余生活中总生龙活虎热爱班集体常常闹闹毁坏班级荣誉伤学间气家长老师批评渴学友谊意句话动作眼神出手喜欢追求新鲜事物喜欢类做爱做事家庭生活中渴父母理解厌烦父母唠叨常常父母抗富理想遇挫折便失落怅惘中考作文命题紧紧扣住性生活作命题范围容
2．折射生命涵
成长中学会开启尘封心灵睿智面世间切预测变造坚实青春底座磨出生命光亮感受体验青春生命精彩开始思考生命价值意义演绎生精彩学会行动解读生命青春成长感悟生命涵中考作文命题味道感受成长历充满活力岁月等体现样命题导
综合青春成长类中考作文命题出两特点：
①命题核心成长初中生学课余家庭等生活中领略喜怒哀乐渴着快快长题目中常出现类似生活斑斓彩未充满希憧憬成长需磨炼成长岁月里烦恼快乐成长滋味苦辣甜等语句 ②初中生处青春成长关键期充满激情活力免苦恼脆弱处心理断乳期中心缺乏制力离家出走轻生现象时发生命题方会关注身成长帮助树立积极生价值观培养乐观健康心态 时注意两趋：
①引导身成长历回眸抒写生命性感悟体验 成长回眸值思索许心灵生命允诺许换角度思考智慧豁达许战胜困难毅者疆勇敢回眸间盘点岁月中记忆成长理解感悟定收获类命题写青春成长历出独特生感悟
②命题素材名名言名事转热点事特雪灾汶川震等然灾害面前涌现出献出青春生命拯救生命歌泣事考区作命题素材背景
特提醒家青春成长类话题涵盖面广该类素材具通性延展性命题情感类品味类心声类追求类感悟类美德类热点类青春成长类素材写做简略统计90作文命题稍微调整变换牵引写青春成长写生体验
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回家里起书歇斯底里读起眼角泪竟没理淌丑敢外边停留分钟丑敢昂首挺胸迈步丑敢留美妙瞬间丑甚敢拥心情事沉沦？该背着沉重包袱抛洒青春？知识充实智慧塑造脱颖出长相父母天注定坚信：帝关门时开扇窗扇窗便生中唯希样艰险找推开窗爬出相信窗外会片蓝蓝天空属
学校里常漂亮失失时丑必注意衣着否新潮丑必担心发型否时髦丑必少女心事秘密会全心扑书籍安慰心灵摆脱悲哀痛苦羁绊枯燥岁月化令愉快时日
然丑生活方
然丑卑会方式变成心情事白天鹅
丑女孩没什心情事真实实生活踏踏实实步伐昂起头走吧
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请成长需题目写篇文章
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第四篇：2014英语中考作文辅导
2014英语中考作文辅导
1手机利弊
recentlyshort messages become more and more popular with both the young and the oldpeople accept the convenient way of communication and some even cannot live without them
as to the easons why so many people are in favour of the short messagesin my opinionthere＇re three pointsfirst it can save time if you want to inform your friends of something in one or two words by sending a short messageby comparison with letters or emailshort messages are really more quick for others to receive you as the mobile phones are always with themsecondshort messages cost less than making a phone callthirdpeople who are not very familiar with each other can chat by short messages more easilythrough which more and more people can know of others and become friends joozonecom
howevernothing that is perfect exists in the worldshort messages also have some disadvantages with themsome people cheat or fool others by telling them that they have won some prizes through short messagesalsotaking advantage of people＇s ignorancesome websites charge a good deal of expenses form short messagesabove allshort message is product of the hitech nowadaysit will serve us very well if we make proper and full use of it
2关电动车
a lot of family of electric vehicles students have no knowledge of the relevant transport training do not look at traffic signs on the road marking like the electric car when the motorcycle opened often in disregard of the risk into the fast lane or speeding along in the slow as a result the road can often be seenchaos reverse cutaway line of electric vehicles the bad behavior of the traffic awareness and timely if not corrected would have an adverse impact on children at the same time each value of electric vehicles as a result of two or three thousand dollars the driver is a student easily become the target of criminals and crime easy to bring the personal safety of the students potential not long ago a student in a city electric car ride through mountain tunnels tung oil were taken away from electric cars
3关低碳
we have only one earthit’s our duty to protect our enviromentnow there is a new lifestyle called low carbow have you ever heard of it what does it mean it means low energy and no wasteas a studentwhat can we do for it it’s easyyou can walk or ride to school instead of driving to school in order to save paper you can write on both sides of paper before we left the classroom we should turn off lights and the computer …
do you have any other good ideas please tell me we should also call on the people around us to do something for low – carbon living only in this way will the earth he a good place to live on if we don’t do anythingdo remember the last drop of water on the earth may be a teardrop of us
4玉树震
1） on april 12th a big earthquake happened in yushu qinhai many people lost their family and their homes all the chinese people feel quite sada lot of people volunteer to help them some people raise money for them some people buy something for them some people go there to comfort the sad children thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes even foreign friends also give them a hand
i’m deeply moved by these people soi’ll use my pocket money to buy some
food and school things for the children there i think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together
2）学生会震倡议书
dear students
after the terrible earthquake there are lots of children out of school some of them are even homelesstheir schools and houses have destroyed they can just live in the open air they don’t have enough school things or clothes as we all know every kid has the right to go to school but now they are in trouble as a chinese we should help them as possible as we can we can raise some money and things for them and we can also write to them to encourage them i hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help
students’
union
5申请成世博会志愿者
i read your ad in the newspaper yesterday i’m writing to tell you that i’d like to work as a volunteer for the world expo
my name is li hua i’m sixteen i have many hobbies such as drawing sports singing speeches and spoken english i am proud that i won the first prize in our city’s english speech contest for middle school student in december 2014in fact i’m healthy and strong
if i am lucky enough to become a volunteer i will try my best to do this job well please reply to me soon my telephone number is 0594—1356666
yours sincerely
6回顾初中三年成长程定感受学 生活爱等方面作出评价 ( 毕业 回顾评价)
i have studied in my middle school for three years i have learned a lot i have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others i have many hobbies i like sports i often play basketball football and volleyball with my friends football is my favorite of all my subjects i do best in english and chinese but my math and physics are a little weak i think i will try my best to learn them well i hope i can study in no1 high school
7梦想未
1）梦想名医生(my dream is doctor)
i am an ordinary person i have an ordinary dream is a doctor because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain may let the human change the health at the same time i believed that will help others own also to be able to obtain joyfully therefore i hoped future i might be a doctor
2）十年生活(my life in ten years)
in ten yearsi think i ＇ll be a reporteri wiil live in an apartement with my sisterbecause i don＇t like living alone and i can play with her inth aparementso in ten yearsi willba a good reporteri will meet a lot of interesting and faous people and i willgo to another places on businessin ten yearsi will have many different pets maybe i will keep a pet turtlei think i will go shopping with my sister as long as i have timeand i will go to london on my vacation
somy life in ten years will be better and better
王彤
第五篇：中考作文辅导1
中考作文辅导
发邮件介绍学校生活学情况
假李华美国网友peter篮球时意外受伤请英文发封电子邮件容包括：1询问病情2 介绍期学校活动学情况3表达祝愿
注意：1字数控制80100词左右
2出现真实校名姓名
3开头结尾已出计入总词数
dear peter
you got injured you should have a good rest at home everything goes well here i enjoy great changes in my school on one hand the teachers make their teaching styles colorful in my science class my teacher always encourages us to think and cultivates our ability to study independently on the other hand we have plenty of time to try what we what to dowe had our school day last week there were fifferent kinds of activities such as speech contest talent show volunteering… i will send you some photos about my school day if you like
i hope you’ll be better as soon as possible
best wishes
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