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2021 年高考英语满分作文汇总
2021 年新课标全国卷I
试题回顾
假定李华新西兰朋友 Terry 中国朋友家做客发邮件询问相关俗请回复邮件容包括：
1达时间
2合适礼物
3餐桌礼仪
注意：
1词数 100 左右
2够适增加细节行文连贯
试题分析
书面表达具强开放性选择性予考生畅欲言空间摆脱单方法答案思维模式展示彩思维活动时真正考查考生语言水文化意识思维品质学水考生感受英语学趣味魅力突出英语学科独特征
2021 年全国卷 I 书面表达体裁应文电子邮件容回复外国朋友 Terry 邮件介绍中国家庭做客方面相关俗求文中涵盖试题出三方面容点达时间合适礼物餐桌礼仪该题型容设计紧密联系考生实际餐桌礼仪普通普通日常节反生活中中学生忽略果没跨文化凝练出思维品格文化素养意识学生难短时间写出中国老百姓餐桌礼仪文化
例受邀赴宴客够准时达切忌早达外客带礼物常见体现客特色物品注意传统中国收礼物般会着客面开中国餐桌圆桌正门位置座般长者位置中国特尊敬长辈餐时需等长辈先动筷子吃饭时发出声响强调食语寝言等中国域广文化差异予思维发散考生提供充分表达空间机会
宣传中国俗文化时考生跨文化意识思维品质提出更高求鼓励考生站外国角度讲中国俗特色积极
调动语言阐明事实表明差异
思路点拨
文篇电子邮件类应文写作餐桌礼仪考生较熟悉话题成文时注意点：
容点齐全：
1．达时间 2．合适礼物 3．餐桌礼仪
二时态：
般现时时
三称：
第二三称
四注意恰高级词汇短语句型提升作文水
五适连接词插入语文章表达然流畅
1浏览信息点
2三务点第段容：问候方马表现方涉话题拜访中国家庭做客时间求忌讳 第二段容：做客
拜访合适礼物够适延展初次拜访亲密朋友间拜访二次拜访家庭情况适合礼物通礼物等第三段： table manners 够描述两三通常中国餐桌礼节忌讳方
鲜明特色处句表达祝愿
3时态方建议说明般现时描述风俗礼仪客观规律性东西般现时
4头脑风暴短语句型结构开始草稿
5行文
6检查拼写语法
满分作文
Dear Terry
How are you doing Learning that you are about to pay
a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs I am writing to put forward some advice
Firstly I would 1ike to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier which is common in Chinese traditional
culture Secondly if I were you I would bring some
appropriate gifts with me such as souvenirs from my own country Besides table manners are also what you should pay attention to For example you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food Instead laying them on your dish is
a smart choice
If you have any other problems please don
’t hesitate to contact me
素材积累
做客礼：
1先定便方事先作安排果事先已定遵守定准达需提早十分二十分
接受免等候太早免未作准基礼
2果属域文化特色礼物果朋友家点烟酒茶叶老家保健品等果朋友家孩点童玩具箱牛奶然加点茶叶送梨等西吉祥
3会客入座席入座客旁入座侯椅子左入中餐束筷子整放碗右桌等客放筷子示意离席方离开吃完放筷子走
做没礼貌表
常句子
准： on timepunctually
餐桌礼： table manners
合适恰： appropriate
拜： pay a visit to
You are supposedexpectedrequired to do ⋯
It＇ s a good idea to ⋯
It＇ s appropriatesuitable to do ⋯
It＇ s sensiblereasonableadvisable to do ⋯
It＇ s good manners to do ⋯
It＇ s noteworthy that ⋯
I think it would be more helpful if you could do ⋯
It would be wise of you to ⋯
It＇ s desirable to do ⋯
I t＇ s inappropriate to do ⋯
It＇ s impolite to do ⋯
It＇ s unwiseinadvisable to do ⋯
Never （助 系 情） +⋯
It＇ s not suitable for you to do ⋯in such a situation
二 2021 年新全国卷II
回
受学生会委托校宣英天写通知家部英短
片 Growing Together 容包括：
1短片容：学校展
2放映点
3迎短片提出意注
意：
1数 100 左右
2适增加行文分析
2021 年高考英面表达体裁通知学校英天邀学生英文短片 Growing together 2021 年 2021 年 2021 年三年考信件理解写信全国二卷考文中
典型体裁容邀请电影相关时间点通知学生该题材
容熟悉词汇求相基础
观全国II 卷英语书面表达题材讲2021 年考查记叙文十年中九年均考查应文应文占90考生高考英语写作准备中理应重心放应文熟练掌握英语应文写作相关专项熟识高考英语基础词汇
2021—— 2021 年高考英语新课标卷II书面表达
写作点拨
英语书面通知时态应该般时动语态
简单句通知中理应度较复杂词语读起拗口句
子
第二注意点：层次定清晰层次表达件事情
起目然
满分范文
Notice
Boys and girls
May I have your attention please Recently an
outstanding movie will be shown in our campus Welcome to
join us end enjoy it Here are some relevant details about it
To begin with the name of the movie is Growing together
which is about the development of our beloved school as a
result it will be not only meaningful but also interesting
Besides it will be in the library from 2：00 to 4：00 in the afternoon on June 9th What’s more everyone of you will be
welcome to take part in it enjoying the movie having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments
Hopefully you would make it to our activity I have the confidence that you will have a great time
The Student Union
三 2021 年新课标全国卷III
试题回顾
假定李华英国朋友 Peter 信询问校学生体育运动情况请回信容包括：
1学校体育场馆
2运动项目
3喜欢项目
注意：
1词数 100 左右：
2够适增加细节行文连贯
思路点拨
题作文提纲式作文形式然书信英国朋友 Peter 介绍学校体育运动情况属学校生活话题话题贴合学生生活
实际学生陌生话说
首先够介绍学校体育场馆场馆位置开放时间等等然简介绍学校开设体育项目挑选两做
详细介绍学生活动时间活动形式类活动处等
次简分析喜欢体育项目什简单分析喜欢原
中益处等文章采般现时态第称
方式写
满分范文
Dear Peter
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you You
asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our
school and the following information may give you a rough
sketch
To begin with a fabulous new stadium has been built up
which has become the new landmark in our school Moreover
with the stadium set up a wide range of sports events are able
to be held of which pingpong football as well as
running competitions enjoy great popularity As for me I ’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me
strength to confront the challenges in my life
All in all I sincerely invite you to come to our school
and see for yourself
Yours
Li Hua
四 2021 年浙江卷
试题回顾
第节应文写作
假定李华校英语协会招聘志愿者接访国外中学生请写信应聘容包括：
1口语水：
2相关验
3应聘目
注意：
1词数 80 左右
2够适增加细节行文连贯
思路点拨
篇书面表达属应文求写应聘信
第步：根提示知学校英语协会招聘志愿者接访
国外中学生求写封应聘信容包括： 1 口语水： 2 相关验
3应聘目
第二步：根写作求确定关键词（组）
第三步：根提示关键词（组）实行遣词造句注意谓致
时态问题
第四步：连句成文注意恰连词实行句子间衔接
渡书写定规范清晰保持整洁美观卷面非常重
文容完整语言规范语篇连贯词数适外全文中没中国
式英语句式显示极驾驭英语水
范文
Dear Sir or Madam
My name is Li Hua And I am writing to apply for being a
volunteer of our school English association
I have a good command of English and have been to the
USA twice So I can communicate well with native speakers of
English What＇s more I am kind and friendly to other people
So I can easily get along with foreign students
I＇ m particularly interested in this job because I want
to further improve my oral English capabilities and
interpersonal communication skills Hopefully I can receive
your acceptance
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
试题回顾
第二节读续写（满分25 分）
阅读面短文根情节实行续写构成完整事
It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before He decided to take me on a trip
to the Wild West
We took a plane to Albuquerque a big city in the state of New Mexico We reached Albuquerque in the late afermoon
Uncle Paul my dad＇s friend picked us up from the airport and drove me up to his farm in Pecos
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle My dad and I spent the night in
the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and
water rolling down the river nearby Very early in the morning Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast The day starts at
dawn on my farm he said After breakfast I went to help
Aunt Tina feed the chickens while my dad went with
Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze ( 吃草 ) I was
impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses They
looked really cool
In the afternoon I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a
horse ride and he said yes as long as my dad went with me I
wasn＇t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway So my dad
and I put on our new cowboy hats got on our horses and
headed slowly towards the mountains Don＇t be late for
supper Uncle Paul cried and keep to the track so that you
don＇t get lost OK my dad cried back After a while Uncle
Paul and his farm house were out of sight It was so peaceful
and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks the deep green
pine trees and the late aftermoon sunmixed to create a magic
scene It looked like a beautiful woven ( 编织) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us
注意：
1续写短文词数应 150 左右
2少 5 短文中标划线关键词语
3续写部分分两段段开头语已写
4续写完成请划线标出关键词语
思路点拨
读续写求考生首先读懂已信息读懂字面含义
理清文章脉络续篇篇短文时考生搞清楚事发展进
程前果理位置物思想情感变化等基础考
生着文章思路根线索发挥想象情节实行合理
预测语言表达出
通阅读文章知父亲带子西部荒野朋友家体验
农场生活见父亲叔叔骑马子想骑亲马体验
根第段首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in
front of my horse 句事发展转折点 rabbit 出现带反应扩展开够写马反应够写反应注意第二段首句相呼应第二段首句 We had no idea where we were
and it was getting dark 句呼应前文 Uncle Paul 叮嘱——误吃晚饭寻路返回农场写
续写时注意 5 短文中标划线关键词语
熟悉划线词语恰时候加注意续写短文词数应 150 左右续写完成划线标出关键词语
满分范文
Suddenly a lttle rabbit jumped out in front of my horse
My horse turned to the 1eft to avoid the ittle rabbit as I held on
tightly and tried not to fall Then my dad turned around and
shouted Hoid on All of a sudden the horse began to run My
dad tried to keep up behind us For a few minutes my horse
slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river I
looked around and realized that we were way off the track
We had no idea where we were and it got dark Luckily
the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were
looking for the way to the farm house After what must have
been several hours we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in
the distance My dad and I both rode our horses towards the
sound of the sheep As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with
a flashlight waving us over What a night
五 2021 年天津卷
试题回顾
假设晨光中学机器兴趣组组长李津美国朋友Chris 读天津某国际学校机器技竞赛中获奖算邀请加入团队参加 7 月底天津举行世界青少年机器技竞赛请根提示代表兴趣组写封电子邮件
（1）赛时间点
（2）邀请原
（3）训练计划发送邮箱请提出建议
注意：
（1）词数 100
（2）适加入细节容充实行文连贯
（3）开头结尾已出计入总词
数参考词汇：
世界青少年机器技竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris
I have good news to tell you
I＇m looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Jin
思路点拨
篇书面求写封邀请信写作时候注意点：
动笔前定认真分析点理解点表达含义
遗漏点跑题偏题容点包括：
1代表兴趣组发出邀请
2介绍赛时间点等安排
3说明邀请原包括 Chris 机器技竞赛中获奖
4告诉训练计划发送邮箱请提出建议
二写作时注意准确时态文说般时文意思连贯符合逻辑关系量熟悉单词句式时注意高级词汇高级句型文章显更档次
容点
1代表兴趣组发出邀请
2介绍赛时间点等安排
3说明邀请原包括 Chris 机器技竞赛中获奖
4告诉训练计划发送邮箱请提出建议
满分范文
Dear Chris
I have good news to tell you The World Adolescent
Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of
July Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills
Competition and won an award I on behalf of the Robotics
Hobby Group intend to invite you to join our team in the
coming competition I am sure that your involvement will not
only help us in winning the award but also enhance the
friendship between our two schools
With this email I also send you our training plan
about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us We sincerely hope that we can
participate in the competition as team partners
I＇ m looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Jin
五 2021 年北京卷
试题回顾
第节（15 分）
假设红星中学高三学生李华英国朋友Jim 邮件中提中国文化感兴趣计划明年北京学咨询
相关信息请回邮件容包括：
1表示欢迎
2推荐学
3建议做准备工作
注意： 1 词数 50
2开头结尾已出计入总词数
Dear Jim
Yours
Li Hua
思路点拨
文提纲式作文文章求写推荐信英国朋友介绍北京学首先够介绍写作背景（ Jim 中国文化感兴趣中国学）表达欢迎然推荐学简介绍推荐原（
学特色够学什等）次简单介绍应该做方面准备
够提前学汉语读点相关中国传统文化书解中国俗
更适合中国生活文章采般现时称够
第二称
满分范文
Dear Jim
I＇ m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing
in your last letter First I would like to express my warmest
welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most
unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture I suggest
you apply for Peking University one of the best universities in
China Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where
you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history
and rich culture As for preparation some reading in advance in
needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses
of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the
Chinese language environment
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it
’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes
If you have further questions please feel free to let me
know
Yours
Li Hua
试题回顾
第二节（ 20 分）
假设红星中学高三学生李华请根四幅图先序写篇英文周记记述周接外国学生带领体验中国茶文化程
注意：词数60
思路点拨
文图片介绍类作文类作文根出幅幅图画提供信息写短文类题体裁较广泛够记叙文说明文够议文文求知写篇记叙文
1认真读图握中心
根提示知容带领外国学生体验中国茶文化全程介绍茶具泡茶沏茶品茶程组图画表达
中心
2初步构思考虑词短语句型时态
握文章中心应心构思基框架考虑恰词语短语句型充分表达文章容文讲
述周发生事情时态时称第称
充分利学短语句型表述具体容体现身水
重环
3连词成句然连句成文
适单词短语准确表达图意思然图单句子串连起串连时注意适连接词语渡性语句读者觉文章中出现跳跃现象更文更紧凑然
4反复审核修改错误
篇文章写应实行检查短文中否错拼写词时态语态表达方面错误 5 宜详详该略略细节方面容果文章必少写作程中忽略果细节视具体情况实行增删读图时定注意阅读图中细节容否影响文章容
满分范文
Last week we took the foreign students in our school
to experience the authentic tea culture which turned out be
to extremely rewarding
On arriving at the tea house the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups I gave them
a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture including
its profound history its rich variety and the exquisite
craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly
sparked I then began to teach them how to make tea
In order to deliver a clear presentation I slowly
explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail Absorbed in every move of mine the foreign students were
once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn ’t help taking pictures from time to time
Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves Washing the tea pots adding tea leaves and pouring water into the cups they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us
At the end of the activity holding the tea bags in our hands we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world
亮点明
巧妙定句提升文章档次：
Last week we took the foreign students in our school
to experience the authentic tea culture which turned out be
to extremely rewarding
非句子表达更：
On arriving at the tea house⋯
I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of
tea culture including its profound history its rich variety Absorbed in every move of mine the foreign
students were once again amazed by this unique culture holding the tea bags in our hands we took a picture
to memorize the unforgettable day
倒装句突出重点
Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves
it做形式语表达更道
It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea
culture was of great charm and huge value
六 2021 年江苏卷
试题回顾
书面表达 ( 满分 25 分)
请阅读面文字求英语写篇150 词左右文章
写作容
1 约 30 词概括述利排名 ( ratings)实行消费现象
2谈谈消费排名然 23 理支撑法
写作求
1写作程中直接引原文语句
2作文中出现真实姓名学校名称
3必写标题
评分标准
容完整语言规范语篇连贯词数适
思路点拨
年作文然读写作文先 30 词概括阅读材料然针
材料中话题写篇议文谈法首先认真阅读两段相关消费排名
现象观点纯文字材料然实行较分析表明态度作出价值
判断
文章首段简介绍两段材料第段材料* 买旅行箱网评结果买回旅行箱质量第二段材料帮
餐馆吃饭online rating结果饭菜吃凸显出online rating谱
然写 online rating 法表明观点注意23 支撑法
文章属议文注意题句点间注意条理
文章采般现时第三称写
满分范文
Possible version one：
As a major channel of consumption information the
rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in
our own consumption Interestingly the same rating may have
different influences on different consumers
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend
completely on the ratings in consumption The advantages
and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related It is
necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings
Possible version two：
Nowadays most commodities or services are rated through
certain channels These ratings easy to access are playing
an increasingly important role in customers＇ purchase decision However results are sometimes unsatisfactory
There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers but they are often misleading and unreliable As we all know most of the ratings are based on others ’ judgment on the product or service concerned Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state Apparently blindly following others＇ advice will
affect our own judgment Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers It has become a common practice for some to pay
for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales
Therefore we should give a second thought to
these ratings whenever we go shopping
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2021 年高考英语满分作文汇总
2021 年新课标全国卷I
试题回顾
假定李华新西兰朋友 Terry 中国朋友家做客发邮件询问相关俗请回复邮件容包括：
1达时间
2合适礼物
3餐桌礼仪
注意：
1词数 100 左右
2够适增加细节行文连贯
试题分析
书面表达具强开放性选择性予考生畅欲言空间摆脱单方法答案思维模式展示彩思维活动时真正考查考生语言水文化意识思维品质学水考生感受英语学趣味魅力突出英语学科独特征
2021 年全国卷 I 书面表达体裁应文电子邮件容回复外国朋友 Terry 邮件介绍中国家庭做客方面相关俗求文中涵盖试题出三方面容点达时间合适礼物餐桌礼仪该题型容设计紧密联系考生实际餐桌礼仪普通普通日常节反生活中中学生忽略果没跨文化凝练出思维品格文化素养意识学生难短时间写出中国老百姓餐桌礼仪文化
例受邀赴宴客够准时达切忌早达外客带礼物常见体现客特色物品注意传统中国收礼物般会着客面开中国餐桌圆桌正门位置座般长者位置中国特尊敬长辈餐时需等长辈先动筷子吃饭时发出声响强调食语寝言等中国域广文化差异予思维发散考生提供充分表达空间机会
宣传中国俗文化时考生跨文化意识思维品质提出更高求鼓励考生站外国角度讲中国俗特色积极
调动语言阐明事实表明差异
思路点拨
文篇电子邮件类应文写作餐桌礼仪考生较熟悉话题成文时注意点：
容点齐全：
1．达时间 2．合适礼物 3．餐桌礼仪
二时态：
般现时时
三称：
第二三称
四注意恰高级词汇短语句型提升作文水
五适连接词插入语文章表达然流畅
1浏览信息点
2三务点第段容：问候方马表现方涉话题拜访中国家庭做客时间求忌讳 第二段容：做客
拜访合适礼物够适延展初次拜访亲密朋友间拜访二次拜访家庭情况适合礼物通礼物等第三段： table manners 够描述两三通常中国餐桌礼节忌讳方
鲜明特色处句表达祝愿
3时态方建议说明般现时描述风俗礼仪客观规律性东西般现时
4头脑风暴短语句型结构开始草稿
5行文
6检查拼写语法
满分作文
Dear Terry
How are you doing Learning that you are about to pay
a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs I am writing to put forward some advice
Firstly I would 1ike to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier which is common in Chinese traditional
culture Secondly if I were you I would bring some
appropriate gifts with me such as souvenirs from my own country Besides table manners are also what you should pay attention to For example you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food Instead laying them on your dish is
a smart choice
If you have any other problems please don
’t hesitate to contact me
素材积累
做客礼：
1先定便方事先作安排果事先已定遵守定准达需提早十分二十分
接受免等候太早免未作准基礼
2果属域文化特色礼物果朋友家点烟酒茶叶老家保健品等果朋友家孩点童玩具箱牛奶然加点茶叶送梨等西吉祥
3会客入座席入座客旁入座侯椅子左入中餐束筷子整放碗右桌等客放筷子示意离席方离开吃完放筷子走
做没礼貌表
常句子
准： on timepunctually
餐桌礼： table manners
合适恰： appropriate
拜： pay a visit to
You are supposedexpectedrequired to do ⋯
It＇ s a good idea to ⋯
It＇ s appropriatesuitable to do ⋯
It＇ s sensiblereasonableadvisable to do ⋯
It＇ s good manners to do ⋯
It＇ s noteworthy that ⋯
I think it would be more helpful if you could do ⋯
It would be wise of you to ⋯
It＇ s desirable to do ⋯
I t＇ s inappropriate to do ⋯
It＇ s impolite to do ⋯
It＇ s unwiseinadvisable to do ⋯
Never （助 系 情） +⋯
It＇ s not suitable for you to do ⋯in such a situation
二 2021 年新全国卷II
回
受学生会委托校宣英天写通知家部英短
片 Growing Together 容包括：
1短片容：学校展
2放映点
3迎短片提出意注
意：
1数 100 左右
2适增加行文分析
2021 年高考英面表达体裁通知学校英天邀学生英文短片 Growing together 2021 年 2021 年 2021 年三年考信件理解写信全国二卷考文中
典型体裁容邀请电影相关时间点通知学生该题材
容熟悉词汇求相基础
观全国II 卷英语书面表达题材讲2021 年考查记叙文十年中九年均考查应文应文占90考生高考英语写作准备中理应重心放应文熟练掌握英语应文写作相关专项熟识高考英语基础词汇
2021—— 2021 年高考英语新课标卷II书面表达
写作点拨
英语书面通知时态应该般时动语态
简单句通知中理应度较复杂词语读起拗口句
子
第二注意点：层次定清晰层次表达件事情
起目然
满分范文
Notice
Boys and girls
May I have your attention please Recently an
outstanding movie will be shown in our campus Welcome to
join us end enjoy it Here are some relevant details about it
To begin with the name of the movie is Growing together
which is about the development of our beloved school as a
result it will be not only meaningful but also interesting
Besides it will be in the library from 2：00 to 4：00 in the afternoon on June 9th What’s more everyone of you will be
welcome to take part in it enjoying the movie having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments
Hopefully you would make it to our activity I have the confidence that you will have a great time
The Student Union
三 2021 年新课标全国卷III
试题回顾
假定李华英国朋友 Peter 信询问校学生体育运动情况请回信容包括：
1学校体育场馆
2运动项目
3喜欢项目
注意：
1词数 100 左右：
2够适增加细节行文连贯
思路点拨
题作文提纲式作文形式然书信英国朋友 Peter 介绍学校体育运动情况属学校生活话题话题贴合学生生活
实际学生陌生话说
首先够介绍学校体育场馆场馆位置开放时间等等然简介绍学校开设体育项目挑选两做
详细介绍学生活动时间活动形式类活动处等
次简分析喜欢体育项目什简单分析喜欢原
中益处等文章采般现时态第称
方式写
满分范文
Dear Peter
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you You
asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our
school and the following information may give you a rough
sketch
To begin with a fabulous new stadium has been built up
which has become the new landmark in our school Moreover
with the stadium set up a wide range of sports events are able
to be held of which pingpong football as well as
running competitions enjoy great popularity As for me I ’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me
strength to confront the challenges in my life
All in all I sincerely invite you to come to our school
and see for yourself
Yours
Li Hua
四 2021 年浙江卷
试题回顾
第节应文写作
假定李华校英语协会招聘志愿者接访国外中学生请写信应聘容包括：
1口语水：
2相关验
3应聘目
注意：
1词数 80 左右
2够适增加细节行文连贯
思路点拨
篇书面表达属应文求写应聘信
第步：根提示知学校英语协会招聘志愿者接访
国外中学生求写封应聘信容包括： 1 口语水： 2 相关验
3应聘目
第二步：根写作求确定关键词（组）
第三步：根提示关键词（组）实行遣词造句注意谓致
时态问题
第四步：连句成文注意恰连词实行句子间衔接
渡书写定规范清晰保持整洁美观卷面非常重
文容完整语言规范语篇连贯词数适外全文中没中国
式英语句式显示极驾驭英语水
范文
Dear Sir or Madam
My name is Li Hua And I am writing to apply for being a
volunteer of our school English association
I have a good command of English and have been to the
USA twice So I can communicate well with native speakers of
English What＇s more I am kind and friendly to other people
So I can easily get along with foreign students
I＇ m particularly interested in this job because I want
to further improve my oral English capabilities and
interpersonal communication skills Hopefully I can receive
your acceptance
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
试题回顾
第二节读续写（满分25 分）
阅读面短文根情节实行续写构成完整事
It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before He decided to take me on a trip
to the Wild West
We took a plane to Albuquerque a big city in the state of New Mexico We reached Albuquerque in the late afermoon
Uncle Paul my dad＇s friend picked us up from the airport and drove me up to his farm in Pecos
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle My dad and I spent the night in
the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and
water rolling down the river nearby Very early in the morning Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast The day starts at
dawn on my farm he said After breakfast I went to help
Aunt Tina feed the chickens while my dad went with
Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze ( 吃草 ) I was
impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses They
looked really cool
In the afternoon I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a
horse ride and he said yes as long as my dad went with me I
wasn＇t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway So my dad
and I put on our new cowboy hats got on our horses and
headed slowly towards the mountains Don＇t be late for
supper Uncle Paul cried and keep to the track so that you
don＇t get lost OK my dad cried back After a while Uncle
Paul and his farm house were out of sight It was so peaceful
and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks the deep green
pine trees and the late aftermoon sunmixed to create a magic
scene It looked like a beautiful woven ( 编织) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us
注意：
1续写短文词数应 150 左右
2少 5 短文中标划线关键词语
3续写部分分两段段开头语已写
4续写完成请划线标出关键词语
思路点拨
读续写求考生首先读懂已信息读懂字面含义
理清文章脉络续篇篇短文时考生搞清楚事发展进
程前果理位置物思想情感变化等基础考
生着文章思路根线索发挥想象情节实行合理
预测语言表达出
通阅读文章知父亲带子西部荒野朋友家体验
农场生活见父亲叔叔骑马子想骑亲马体验
根第段首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in
front of my horse 句事发展转折点 rabbit 出现带反应扩展开够写马反应够写反应注意第二段首句相呼应第二段首句 We had no idea where we were
and it was getting dark 句呼应前文 Uncle Paul 叮嘱——误吃晚饭寻路返回农场写
续写时注意 5 短文中标划线关键词语
熟悉划线词语恰时候加注意续写短文词数应 150 左右续写完成划线标出关键词语
满分范文
Suddenly a lttle rabbit jumped out in front of my horse
My horse turned to the 1eft to avoid the ittle rabbit as I held on
tightly and tried not to fall Then my dad turned around and
shouted Hoid on All of a sudden the horse began to run My
dad tried to keep up behind us For a few minutes my horse
slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river I
looked around and realized that we were way off the track
We had no idea where we were and it got dark Luckily
the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were
looking for the way to the farm house After what must have
been several hours we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in
the distance My dad and I both rode our horses towards the
sound of the sheep As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with
a flashlight waving us over What a night
五 2021 年天津卷
试题回顾
假设晨光中学机器兴趣组组长李津美国朋友Chris 读天津某国际学校机器技竞赛中获奖算邀请加入团队参加 7 月底天津举行世界青少年机器技竞赛请根提示代表兴趣组写封电子邮件
（1）赛时间点
（2）邀请原
（3）训练计划发送邮箱请提出建议
注意：
（1）词数 100
（2）适加入细节容充实行文连贯
（3）开头结尾已出计入总词
数参考词汇：
世界青少年机器技竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris
I have good news to tell you
I＇m looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Jin
思路点拨
篇书面求写封邀请信写作时候注意点：
动笔前定认真分析点理解点表达含义
遗漏点跑题偏题容点包括：
1代表兴趣组发出邀请
2介绍赛时间点等安排
3说明邀请原包括 Chris 机器技竞赛中获奖
4告诉训练计划发送邮箱请提出建议
二写作时注意准确时态文说般时文意思连贯符合逻辑关系量熟悉单词句式时注意高级词汇高级句型文章显更档次
容点
1代表兴趣组发出邀请
2介绍赛时间点等安排
3说明邀请原包括 Chris 机器技竞赛中获奖
4告诉训练计划发送邮箱请提出建议
满分范文
Dear Chris
I have good news to tell you The World Adolescent
Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of
July Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills
Competition and won an award I on behalf of the Robotics
Hobby Group intend to invite you to join our team in the
coming competition I am sure that your involvement will not
only help us in winning the award but also enhance the
friendship between our two schools
With this email I also send you our training plan
about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us We sincerely hope that we can
participate in the competition as team partners
I＇ m looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Jin
五 2021 年北京卷
试题回顾
第节（15 分）
假设红星中学高三学生李华英国朋友Jim 邮件中提中国文化感兴趣计划明年北京学咨询
相关信息请回邮件容包括：
1表示欢迎
2推荐学
3建议做准备工作
注意： 1 词数 50
2开头结尾已出计入总词数
Dear Jim
Yours
Li Hua
思路点拨
文提纲式作文文章求写推荐信英国朋友介绍北京学首先够介绍写作背景（ Jim 中国文化感兴趣中国学）表达欢迎然推荐学简介绍推荐原（
学特色够学什等）次简单介绍应该做方面准备
够提前学汉语读点相关中国传统文化书解中国俗
更适合中国生活文章采般现时称够
第二称
满分范文
Dear Jim
I＇ m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing
in your last letter First I would like to express my warmest
welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most
unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture I suggest
you apply for Peking University one of the best universities in
China Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where
you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history
and rich culture As for preparation some reading in advance in
needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses
of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the
Chinese language environment
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it
’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes
If you have further questions please feel free to let me
know
Yours
Li Hua
试题回顾
第二节（ 20 分）
假设红星中学高三学生李华请根四幅图先序写篇英文周记记述周接外国学生带领体验中国茶文化程
注意：词数60
思路点拨
文图片介绍类作文类作文根出幅幅图画提供信息写短文类题体裁较广泛够记叙文说明文够议文文求知写篇记叙文
1认真读图握中心
根提示知容带领外国学生体验中国茶文化全程介绍茶具泡茶沏茶品茶程组图画表达
中心
2初步构思考虑词短语句型时态
握文章中心应心构思基框架考虑恰词语短语句型充分表达文章容文讲
述周发生事情时态时称第称
充分利学短语句型表述具体容体现身水
重环
3连词成句然连句成文
适单词短语准确表达图意思然图单句子串连起串连时注意适连接词语渡性语句读者觉文章中出现跳跃现象更文更紧凑然
4反复审核修改错误
篇文章写应实行检查短文中否错拼写词时态语态表达方面错误 5 宜详详该略略细节方面容果文章必少写作程中忽略果细节视具体情况实行增删读图时定注意阅读图中细节容否影响文章容
满分范文
Last week we took the foreign students in our school
to experience the authentic tea culture which turned out be
to extremely rewarding
On arriving at the tea house the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups I gave them
a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture including
its profound history its rich variety and the exquisite
craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly
sparked I then began to teach them how to make tea
In order to deliver a clear presentation I slowly
explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail Absorbed in every move of mine the foreign students were
once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn ’t help taking pictures from time to time
Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves Washing the tea pots adding tea leaves and pouring water into the cups they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us
At the end of the activity holding the tea bags in our hands we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world
亮点明
巧妙定句提升文章档次：
Last week we took the foreign students in our school
to experience the authentic tea culture which turned out be
to extremely rewarding
非句子表达更：
On arriving at the tea house⋯
I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of
tea culture including its profound history its rich variety Absorbed in every move of mine the foreign
students were once again amazed by this unique culture holding the tea bags in our hands we took a picture
to memorize the unforgettable day
倒装句突出重点
Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves
it做形式语表达更道
It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea
culture was of great charm and huge value
六 2021 年江苏卷
试题回顾
书面表达 ( 满分 25 分)
请阅读面文字求英语写篇150 词左右文章
写作容
1 约 30 词概括述利排名 ( ratings)实行消费现象
2谈谈消费排名然 23 理支撑法
写作求
1写作程中直接引原文语句
2作文中出现真实姓名学校名称
3必写标题
评分标准
容完整语言规范语篇连贯词数适
思路点拨
年作文然读写作文先 30 词概括阅读材料然针
材料中话题写篇议文谈法首先认真阅读两段相关消费排名
现象观点纯文字材料然实行较分析表明态度作出价值
判断
文章首段简介绍两段材料第段材料* 买旅行箱网评结果买回旅行箱质量第二段材料帮
餐馆吃饭online rating结果饭菜吃凸显出online rating谱
然写 online rating 法表明观点注意23 支撑法
文章属议文注意题句点间注意条理
文章采般现时第三称写
满分范文
Possible version one：
As a major channel of consumption information the
rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in
our own consumption Interestingly the same rating may have
different influences on different consumers
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend
completely on the ratings in consumption The advantages
and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related It is
necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings
Possible version two：
Nowadays most commodities or services are rated through
certain channels These ratings easy to access are playing
an increasingly important role in customers＇ purchase decision However results are sometimes unsatisfactory
There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers but they are often misleading and unreliable As we all know most of the ratings are based on others ’ judgment on the product or service concerned Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state Apparently blindly following others＇ advice will
affect our own judgment Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers It has become a common practice for some to pay
for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales
Therefore we should give a second thought to
these ratings whenever we go shopping
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