TOEFL Writing托福写作


    Toefl Writing
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
     
    1 The most important problems affecting our society today can be solved within our lifetime
    Introduction
    Despite the fact that science and technology has made tremendous progress and indeed help human beings to tackle numerous problemswarsconflictsnatural disasters such as earthquaks tsunami and hurricanefatal diseases ranging from cancer to HIVenvironment contamination such as global warminggreen house effect soil erosion and desertificationchronic povertyenergy crisis still plague human beingsand we can not find effective solutions to these thorny issues which will make great differences to our life and societyThat’s why I hold a firm belief that some problems can not be solved on our lifetimeNumerous facts can demonstrate my idea
     
    Body1(environment)
    1 Local governmentfocus on GDPturn a blind eye to protection of environment
    Government can not allocate sufficient fund to environment project
    And can not impose severe penaty on illegal conducts
    2 Enterprise would rather sacriice the environmental to pursure profits blindly
    3 Individuals lack the awareness of environment such as abuse of plastic bags
    Body2
    Body3
    Conclusion
     
     
    2 People today can solve many important problems so they do not need help from the government
     
    We can solve many important problemsbut the importance of government can not be under estimated
    Warsunemployeementlawspublic utilities
    Public utilitiesparks theaters public toilet…
     
     
    3 We should never be impolite person
     
    Eg1paparazzi stalk the famous people wherever they go and take photos all of a sudden(celebrity be impolite to paparazzi)
    Eg2the policeman be impolite to the thieves
    Eg3the teachersparents be impolite to naughty kids(Spare the rodspoll the childcarrot and stick)
     
     
    4 It is often not a good thing to move to a new city or a new country because of the loss of old friends
    (Absence makes the heart grow fonder)
    Egpersonal experiences
     
     
    5 Two persons can not be friends if one is richer than the other
    How two person become friends
    1 mutual beliefs and dreams
    2 mutual targets birds of feather flock together
    3 mutual interests and hobbies
    Egpersonal experiences
     
     
    6 In a team those who do not accept others’ criticism can not succeed
    Egthe CEO of Kodak refuse to make a transition
     
     
    7 Young people have no influence the decisions that determine the future of the society as a whole
     
    Eg1the founder of FacebookMark Zuckerberg
    Eg2Jogn F Kennedy——the youngest American president tackled the Cuban Missile crisis and aviod potential nuclear war which will ruin the whole worldmaintaining the world peaceAsk not what your country can do for youask what you can do for your country
    Eg3Bill Gates——established Microsoft empire
    Eg4Linsanity——super star
    Eg5LangLang——play for whitehouseTIMES
     
     
     
    8 Movies and TVs have more negative effects than positive effects on young people’s behaviour
     
    1 positives
     
    Enlarge knowledge and expand horizon
     
    Alleviate work stresscartoons and comedies
     
    Instill high valuas such as sense of responsibility cultivate patriotism
     
    2 negatives
     
    Occupying students too much time will distract their attention from work and study and prevent them engaging in outdoor activities which is detrimental to their health
    Eg1soap operas
    Eg2Advertisment
     
    Individuals being addicated to films and TV programs will hinder effective communicationwill alienate family relationship
     
    Some of programs are saturated with violence and erotic…will trigger juvenile delinquency
     
     
    9 Although science and technology will continue to impovethe most significant improvement for the quality of people’s lives have already taken place
     
    (give some specific examples about science and technology)
    (use this sampleYesterday—Today—Tomorrow)
     
    Eg1Telephonemobilephoneiphone?
    Eg2Carriagecarareplanesubwayspaceship
     
    who knows what miracles science and technology can create
    Breakthroughinnovation of science and technology can continue to enhance the living standard of people ceaselessly
     
     
    10 Parents should allow their children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes
     
    (use personal experiences)
    Topic sentences
     
    1 this practice will help children to avoid making the same mistake and correct them effectively
    Compared with ……(some contary examples)
    Personal experiencescopy homeworkcheat in the examsfightbullybe absent from the classfall in love with girls
    No taking drastic measuresso…blablabla…
     
    2 children can draw the lessons and experiences from their mistakes and make rational decision when their parents…
     
    samplechildrenegoism(中心)—selfish acts—hurt others feeling—sb will be offended—no one will help you when you are in tight corner
     
    …let them know they should help others and know the importance of cooperation
    we are in one boat
     
     
    11 Young peole in today are less dependent on their parents than in the past
     
    Introduction
    Confronted with higher rate of unemployment and economy recessionyoung adults find it hard to secure decent jobs to support themselveslet alone lead a happy life(Background)In that casean increasing number of people have to rely on their parents financially and emotionallyAs a consequenseI hold a belief that young people depend more on their parents to acqure kinds of assistanc in terms of their life and work
    BODY
    1 Financially
    Young people tend to receive more financial assistance from their parents than over before
    Eg1overseas study
    Globalization which is an inevitable trend has penetrated each aspect of our daily life more and more students are inclined to choose overseas study which can lay a solid fundation for their futher career developmentBut how to raise sufficient fund for higher tuition fees and living expendituregenerally speakingthe young will seek help from their parents
    Eg2Marriageskyrocketing housing pricelook after grandchildren
    On the top of that…the hot potatothorny issue
    The young are occupied with workthey can not spare too much time taking care of their childrenTheir parents should shoulder the main responsibiity to attend to their grandchildren heart and soul(+examples and use details)
    2 Emotionally
    When you have conflict with your colleagueswhen you are fired by your bosswhen you break up with your girlfriendwhen you fail in the TOEFLSAT testwhen you start your own bussiness which go bankruptwhen……most young people are prone to (倾)seek emotional support from their parents
     
    Conclusion
    With the development of economic and force of employmentthe young will turn to their parents……BUTGod will help those who help themselveswhen we seek help from parentswe should be more selfreliance…
     
     
    12 People should know the events happening around the worldeven if it is unlikely to have influences on our daily life
     
    Gain insights into complicated society
    Make objective judgement
    Keep us on a right track
    Be acquainted with(熟悉)…
     
    EgOil spill of Mexican Gulf
       Nuclear power explosion in Janpan
     
     
     
    13 It’s better for your friends to ask you for help(suppose you are good at the subject)than to turn to a tutor when he finds it hard to pass an exam
     
    EgTOEFL EXAMS
     
    TeachersIdentify mistakes
           Experience
    FriendsFree
          Timefree
          Emotional support
     
     
    14 People now are less happy and less satisfied than people in the past
     
    Current advantages
     
    Egfinancial development
    Technology
    Education
    Awareness promotion
    More free timeto travelbe with family&friends
    More comfortable liveshouse&cars
     
    Past advantages
     
    Egenvironment
    Food
    Pressure
    Relationship
     
     
    15 Food in the past was much healthier than today
     
    Eg1Genetically modified products(转基食品)
    Eg2Abuse of chemical fertilizer and pesticide
    Eg3widespread use of additive(添加剂)and preservative(防腐剂)
    Eg4Frozen foodcanned foodconvenience foodsanckjunk foodfast food
    Eg5Environmental pollution
     
     
    16 Working at home using computer or telephone is better than working in office
    Telecommuting远程
    1)Flexibility 灵活度
    2)Remove the barries for the disabled
    3)Lower cost
     
     
     
    17 A job with more vacation time but a lower salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time
     
    Vacation time
     
    1)Trip
    The advantages of travel
    a)Relieve stressrelax oneself
    b)Have better understanding of a foreign countryLearn about a foreign countrylanguagecostumhistory
    EgIn Britain’To Let’means Rent’  Tube’means subway’
    c)Make new friends
    2)Parttime jobBabysitter—patienceSalesman—experienceTutor—money
    a)Earn money to relieve family financial burden
    b)Cumulate working or social experience
    c)Independence and adaptability
    3)PursueFuther study
     
    High salary
     
    1)Support oneselffamilyelder peoplehealth carechildreneat thingseducation
    2)Social recognitionsense of achievement
     
     
     
    18 The best way to improve the quality of education is to increase teacher’s salary
    Disagree
    In some casesincreasing teachers’ salary could improve the quality of education
    Reasons
    1)Stimulate teachers’ enthusiasmpassion
    2)Sense of responsibility
    3)Attract more talent to make teaching as their career
    How to improve the quality of education
    1)Switching testoriented education system
    2)Innovate traditional teaching methods
    3)Students’ initiative
     
    Intoduction
    It’s generally believed that education is indispensable to the personal development as well as the prosperity of societyHow to enhance the quality of education has aroused public’s wide concernsome people believe that increasing teachers’ salary is the best way to improve the quality of educationOn one handthis practice could stimulate teachers’ enthusiasm of teaching and culticiate sense of responsibilityOn the other handit can attract more talents to pursue teaching as their careerHoweverfrom my point of viewthis argument fails to take some important facts into consideration that switching testoriented education system which aims at students’ academic performance and turn a blind eye to the enhancement of comprehensive qualityteachers innovating traditional taching methods and students’ initiative can contribute to improvement of quality of education
    Body
    Switching testoriented education system to Quality education imperative that school should adjustmodify testoriented education system which kinder improvement of quality of educationThe reasons are twofoldOn the one handthis education system restain students’ imagaination and creativity which can exert sinigicant influence on students’ futureOn the other handthis education system sometimes give rise to some psychological problemsSuch as depression and even suicide and set barriers for the improvement of comprehensive quality including arts literature and sports which can cultivate aesthetic ability and lay a solid foundation for their future career development
     
     
    19 A university should focus more on its facilities such as libraries computers and labs rather than on hiring famous teachers
    A and B are both needed
    TeachersBeacon(灯塔)
    Bramdrain(流失)
     
     
    20 Some people think university professors should spend more time doing research while others think they should spend more time educating studentsWhat’s your opinion
     
    Both are needed
    Introduction
    When it comes to the roles of university professorsdifferent people hold divergent views towards this issueSome people believe that professor should educate their students heart and soulwhile others ague that university professors have the obligation to conduct will make great difference to the development of sociaty as well as personal developmentHoweverfrom my point of view they should not only educate students but also undertake scientific researchNumerous facts can demonstrate my potint
    Body1Education
    Knowledgecultivate their parctical skills such as interpersonal skills
    shapemould attitudeshape their positive attitudes such as optimismperseveranceconfidence
    ……
    Body2Research
    Numerous innovation breakthrough of science and technology which revolutionize our life and work to a very large extent derive from scientific research made be professors
    Authority(权威)
    Improve visibility(知名度)
     
     
    21 Saving money for future or Travel
     
    Why to deposit money
    In some developing countries the security system(educationmedical carehousing free)is not completedly enoughcan not be covered enoughIndividuals have to deposit money for their lifetake care of elderly peopleraise young babies
     
     
    22 The advantages of sports
     
    Sports are to human what water is to fishOn one handengaging in some sports can be benefical to our health which is an immense assert in our life
    On the other handsports can also teach us some lessons such as team     spirt(cooperationperseveranceindomitable will百折挠信念compititiontargetsambitiouspatienceRome wasn't built in one day)
     
     
    23 College should offer students more preparation before they start working
     
    Body
    How to offer preparation
    Physicallyknow the importance of healthequipmentgymswimming pool…sports events regularly
    Intellecuallyknowledgeskills
    Emotionallysense of valuaresponsibilityconfidencepatienceperseverance
     
    Introduction
    Confronted with higher rate of unemployment and economic recessionuniversity students find in hard to secure a decent joblet alone lead a happy lifeas a consquancesome people believe that university should full reparation for gradutes physically emotionally and intellecuallyFrom my own perspectivethe practice will exert profound influence on personal development and prosperiey of society
     
    Conclusion
    In shortuniversity has the obligation to assist college students to adapt themselves to complicated society and intense competition physically intelectually and emotonallyBut at the same timejust as proverb saysGod help those who help themselvesstudents should hold a firm belief that selfrelianceindependence in a key factor for their bright future
     
    24 Insist their challenging dream or focus on pratical dream
     
    Challenging dreammake big promotion for the society
    Martin Luther Kingall man are created equalceradicate racial discrimination and prejudice
    Nelson Mandela
    Mother Teresaeliminate poverty
     
     
     
    25 People are now easier to become educated than in the past
    The booming of economic
    Innovtion techonology
    The enhancement of consciousness of education
    Introduction
    In the past yearswars and natural diasters deprive individuals the rights of being educatedbut todayacceleration of science and techonology and booming of economy make it easier for individuals to receive education
    Body
    1With sufficient fundgovernment can establish more free schools which can attract more students from humble family origin to attend schools and fullfill their dreamsschool can allocate a large amount of money to updatepurchase advanced teaching facilities which can enhance the quality of educationGlobalization which is an inevitable trend has penetrated each aspect of our daily life an increasing number of students have more alternatives for their studyWith sufficient fundthey can study aboard which can enlarge their knowledgeexpand their horizen and lay a solid foundation for their future
    2Distance learningTV programmeDiscoveryNational Geographytime and space freemove off barriers for disabled
    3Parents participate in students learning
     
     
    26 Getting advice from friends who are older than you is better than getting advice from friends who are of the same age
    Same agenone experiences
            Same dream and goals
    Elder peopletell you to be more gentle and adapt the world
              Experienced
     
     
    27 It’s better to complete a project and then start another one than to do several things at the same time
    At the same time
    Eg1professor do research and educate students
    Eg2university students do parttime job while taking courses
    Living in the updating societypeople are often confronted with all kinds of projects…
     
     
    28 Professional athletes who receive high salaries deserve what they get
    Healthy problems
    Bussiness valua ’Beckham’’Kobe Bryant’
    Not all people could become a star…
     
     
    29 It’s easier for people in the past to identify which type of career or job has a secure or successful future
    Educationconsultantinformation resources
     
     
    30 The advice from the grandparents is of no use to their grandchildren because the world has changed a lot over the past 50 years
    They may think about sth today happened are ridiculousand many of their ideas are obsolete
    Useful things
    Health   Devotioncommitment Awareness of cooperation  ToleranceGenerousity   Perseverance   Patience   optimism    friendly   ambitiousgreat aim   agressive
     
     
    31 It’s easier to succeed in the past than it is today
    The key to success
    Personality
    Abilitygeneseducation
    More opportunitiesglobalizationobamaculture change
    Enhancement of awarenesscooperation  many hands make work light competition
     
     
    32 Being creative rather than planning carefully helpes people come up with the best solutions to problem
    PROBLEMSmedical caretechnological problems……
    Create and Plan
    EgGreat Depression(萧条)
    CreateNew Deal(罗斯福新政)   Plantake rectification step by step
     
     
    33 The main purpose for people who have jobs is for money rather than social status
    Money is not a pancea(钱万)
    If you regard money as your godit will plague you like the devil
    Work for
    Job satisfiction
    Money
    Social seaters
    Sense of responsibility
     
     
    34 The government should support scientific research that does not have any practical use
    Space research
    Solarwindenergy researchnew energy
    Satisfy people’s needs and promote the society’s progress
    In a long run…
    Be patient waiting…
     
    35 Better to watch serious movies than to watch amusement movies
    Serious movies
    Educationalsense of responsibilityface to the factsvalua
    Objectively judgement to the society


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