高考英语备考：巧思维导图搭建续写支架
读续写求考生阅读350词左右短文读完理清物关系抓住物特征梳理事情节预测事结局考场限时间合理清晰丰富展开思路考生言极具挑战思维导图考生提供帮助结合2020年7月新高考全国Ⅰ卷中读续写展示思维导图妙
原题：
阅读面材料 根容段落开头语续写两段 构成篇完整短文
The Meredith family lived in a small community As the economy was in decline some people in the town had lost their jobs Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet People were trying to help each other meet the challenges
Mrs Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor She knew they had problems and they needed all kinds of help When she had time she would bring food and medicine to them
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before There was a man sick in bed his wife who took care of him and could not go out to work and their little boy The little boyhis name was Bernardhad interested her very much
I wish you could see himshe said to her own children John Harry and ClaraHe is such a help to his mother He wants very much to earn some money but I don’t see what he can do
After their mother left the room the children sat thinking about BernardI wish we could help him to earn money said ClaraHis family is suffering so much
So do Isaid HarryWe really should do something to assist them
For some moments John said nothing but suddenly he sprang to his feet and criedI have a great ideaI have a solution that we can all help accomplish（完成）
The other children also jumped up all attention When John had an idea it was sure to be a good oneI tell you what we can dosaid JohnYou know that big box of com Uncle John sent us？Well we can make popcorn（爆米花） and put it into paper bags and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it
注意：
1 续写词数应150左右
2 请格式答题卡相应位置作答
When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea she thought it was a good one too _______________________________________
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With everything ready Bernard started out on his new business ________________________________________________
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事分析：
文介绍Mrs Meredith乐助三孩子John Harry Clara心中播种爱善良种子孩子讲述Bernard男孩家情况三孩子非常渴帮助确实想出意——家里玉米做成爆米花Bernard社区售卖接两段已出开头考生续写
段首句分析：
段首句续写起点帮助考生预测容考生定仔细分析两句话避免偏离原文天马行空想象
第段首句When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea she thought it was a good one too 表明Mrs Meredith认孩子想法然接Mrs Meredith应该会鼓励支持孩子孩子分工合作步步采取行动John想法变成现实
第二段首句With everything ready Bernard started out on his new business 句话起着承启作前半句呼应段准备工作完成半句提示段应该写Bernard卖爆米花John等分享快乐表达谢意适总结升华事外值注意段段首说Bernard开始卖东西段应该写事情告诉Bernard
续写方法指导：
续写分两步先想情节语言输出情节支架搭支架笔者认分三步走：
理清物关系抓住物特征
物事灵魂基物正确解读合理预测会做什做续写部分物特征前文保持致文中涉物较考生思维图画出物关系列出物性格特征：（考试时快速手绘）
二探究情节发展罗列动词
文难点物动作根物特征进行动作分配条理描写动作思维导图帮理清思路
首先考生提取头脑中关键动词绘制流程图：
样做磨刀误砍柴工思路清晰容遗漏 前矛盾节约写作时间边写边想边想边改
三适补充细节容更丰富
事线索理清适补充细节事饱满前流程图物动作动作更细致生动考生补充物神情状态语言描写前流程图基础补充关键词
Meridith encourage 补充smileadvise等丰富动作
With a smile she encouraged them to do it and advised them to make a careful plan
Bernard sell补充语言描写物更鲜活
Carrying a big bag of pop corns he began to sell them by yelling10 cents a bag tasty but not expensive
足够支架写作文水渠成事笔者篇水作文：
When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea she thought it was a good one too With a smile she encouraged them to do it and advised them to make a careful plan John the smart boy arranged everyone’s task right away As planned John began to make popcorns by preparing corns and heating the stove At the same time Carla dashed to buy some attractive paper bags To inform Bernard Harry rode his bike to Bernard’s home to invite him Not surprisingly Bernard was amazed at this great project and couldn’t wait to come After Bernard and Harry came back they packed the sweet popcorns in the colorful paper bags together Laughter and happiness filled this house
With everything ready Bernard started out on his new business Carrying a big bag of pop corns he began to sell them by yelling10 cents a bag tasty but not expensiveHearing this many people gathered around Bernard to buy pop corns One hour later all the pop corns were sold out which meant Bernard earned 2 dollars So excited was he that he shared this happy news with the Meredith family immediatelyThank you so much Without you I can never earn moneyMrs Meredith held his hands respondingNo big deal boy We are so delighted that we can help
点评：
1 容逻辑清晰情节序動作具体细节丰富动作没went种笼统词更加具体词dashed rushed rode bike to等sell动作carrying a big bag yell 等丰富动作细节
2 语言表达方面介词短语非谓语短语句等丰富句式
见利思维导图学生续写搭建信息支架思维支架支架越扎实越细致写作难度越低
读续写作新高考新题型考查核心素养培养核心素养学生言挑战机遇学生应该克服畏难情绪思维导图开写作思路逐步提高读续写力
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读续写求考生阅读350词左右短文读完理清物关系抓住物特征梳理事情节预测事结局考场限时间合理清晰丰富展开思路考生言极具挑战思维导图考生提供帮助结合2020年7月新高考全国Ⅰ卷中读续写展示思维导图妙
原题：
阅读面材料 根容段落开头语续写两段 构成篇完整短文
The Meredith family lived in a small community As the economy was in decline some people in the town had lost their jobs Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet People were trying to help each other meet the challenges
Mrs Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor She knew they had problems and they needed all kinds of help When she had time she would bring food and medicine to them
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before There was a man sick in bed his wife who took care of him and could not go out to work and their little boy The little boyhis name was Bernardhad interested her very much
I wish you could see himshe said to her own children John Harry and ClaraHe is such a help to his mother He wants very much to earn some money but I don’t see what he can do
After their mother left the room the children sat thinking about BernardI wish we could help him to earn money said ClaraHis family is suffering so much
So do Isaid HarryWe really should do something to assist them
For some moments John said nothing but suddenly he sprang to his feet and criedI have a great ideaI have a solution that we can all help accomplish（完成）
The other children also jumped up all attention When John had an idea it was sure to be a good oneI tell you what we can dosaid JohnYou know that big box of com Uncle John sent us？Well we can make popcorn（爆米花） and put it into paper bags and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it
注意：
1 续写词数应150左右
2 请格式答题卡相应位置作答
When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea she thought it was a good one too _______________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
With everything ready Bernard started out on his new business ________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
事分析：
文介绍Mrs Meredith乐助三孩子John Harry Clara心中播种爱善良种子孩子讲述Bernard男孩家情况三孩子非常渴帮助确实想出意——家里玉米做成爆米花Bernard社区售卖接两段已出开头考生续写
段首句分析：
段首句续写起点帮助考生预测容考生定仔细分析两句话避免偏离原文天马行空想象
第段首句When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea she thought it was a good one too 表明Mrs Meredith认孩子想法然接Mrs Meredith应该会鼓励支持孩子孩子分工合作步步采取行动John想法变成现实
第二段首句With everything ready Bernard started out on his new business 句话起着承启作前半句呼应段准备工作完成半句提示段应该写Bernard卖爆米花John等分享快乐表达谢意适总结升华事外值注意段段首说Bernard开始卖东西段应该写事情告诉Bernard
续写方法指导：
续写分两步先想情节语言输出情节支架搭支架笔者认分三步走：
理清物关系抓住物特征
物事灵魂基物正确解读合理预测会做什做续写部分物特征前文保持致文中涉物较考生思维图画出物关系列出物性格特征：（考试时快速手绘）
二探究情节发展罗列动词
文难点物动作根物特征进行动作分配条理描写动作思维导图帮理清思路
首先考生提取头脑中关键动词绘制流程图：
样做磨刀误砍柴工思路清晰容遗漏 前矛盾节约写作时间边写边想边想边改
三适补充细节容更丰富
事线索理清适补充细节事饱满前流程图物动作动作更细致生动考生补充物神情状态语言描写前流程图基础补充关键词
Meridith encourage 补充smileadvise等丰富动作
With a smile she encouraged them to do it and advised them to make a careful plan
Bernard sell补充语言描写物更鲜活
Carrying a big bag of pop corns he began to sell them by yelling10 cents a bag tasty but not expensive
足够支架写作文水渠成事笔者篇水作文：
When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea she thought it was a good one too With a smile she encouraged them to do it and advised them to make a careful plan John the smart boy arranged everyone’s task right away As planned John began to make popcorns by preparing corns and heating the stove At the same time Carla dashed to buy some attractive paper bags To inform Bernard Harry rode his bike to Bernard’s home to invite him Not surprisingly Bernard was amazed at this great project and couldn’t wait to come After Bernard and Harry came back they packed the sweet popcorns in the colorful paper bags together Laughter and happiness filled this house
With everything ready Bernard started out on his new business Carrying a big bag of pop corns he began to sell them by yelling10 cents a bag tasty but not expensiveHearing this many people gathered around Bernard to buy pop corns One hour later all the pop corns were sold out which meant Bernard earned 2 dollars So excited was he that he shared this happy news with the Meredith family immediatelyThank you so much Without you I can never earn moneyMrs Meredith held his hands respondingNo big deal boy We are so delighted that we can help
点评：
1 容逻辑清晰情节序動作具体细节丰富动作没went种笼统词更加具体词dashed rushed rode bike to等sell动作carrying a big bag yell 等丰富动作细节
2 语言表达方面介词短语非谓语短语句等丰富句式
见利思维导图学生续写搭建信息支架思维支架支架越扎实越细致写作难度越低
读续写作新高考新题型考查核心素养培养核心素养学生言挑战机遇学生应该克服畏难情绪思维导图开写作思路逐步提高读续写力
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