问题分析
学生文致谢写作时存问题表现三方面
1象明例
i am grateful tomy parents without their support i cannotfinish my thesis i am also thankful to all my classmates andteachers without their encouragement i cannotgetdown towriting the thesis and finally iwant to thank the foreign languagesdepartmentofxxx university forprovidingme a computer to typeand print outmy thesis
象分析该致谢提父母学老师排名先序导师(supervisor)指导字提
学生清楚致谢象应该谁
2文体混乱例
itwas really a laborious task to accomplishmy thesis manypeople gaveme support and help in the process ofwriting the paper i’d like first to givemy gratitude tomy dear teacher profxxx who generously gaveme her kind help and instructions during thewhole process ofmy paperwriting then i’d like to givemymany thanks tomy classmateswho helpedme a lotwithmy information collecting and paperpolishing
文体分析致谢混正式文体非正式文体
laborious gratitude属正式文体语言短语a lot缩合词i’d属非正式文体语言外dear teacher表示导师欠妥见学生尚未掌握致谢写作文体
3容牵强例
iwould like to thankmy supervisor mrs xxx who helpedme draw an outline of the thesis and correctmy mistakes in thethesis also iwant to thank allmy teachers i learned a lot fromthem notonly the knowledge butalso theworking attitude moreover i thankmy classmates aswell during the studywe becamegood friends and spenthappy time and finally i am grateful tomy parents without their support i cannotaccomplishmy study
容致谢第句外句子撰写文关表明学生知道致谢容实质什
二解决策
存问题分析程中笔者文致谢写作进行研究英语科研文写作概书中样指出in western academic circles there are strict conventions aboutwhat should be put in such an acknowledgementand theway in which it should be written[1]见致谢写作定规定循惯例关键解决致谢写作问题策具体策三点
1 明确致谢象
英语科研文写作概书中指出generallyspeaking thanks are rendered only to those who have helped thewriter academically…[2]具体说致谢象研究程文写作程中作者研究成文起定指导帮助支持鼓励作员[3]英语专业学士学位文致谢象应文进行指导导师时包括文提出
建议意见教师学朋友文写作提供具体帮助机构关心文作者家等
2 采致谢写作文体
毕业文学士文种研究性文( research paper)语气格调格式非正式文体……毕业文种正规作文必须遵循正规作文规范[4]英语毕业文属研究性文写作理应采正式文体致谢文体中包括宜学术性词汇采单动词单词全拼形式行句子例i also extend my sincere gratitude to professorxxx for hisconstant support throughoutmywork on this thesis and forhis informed guidance and advice
句中学术性词汇extend sincere gratitudeinformed guidance词汇致谢严谨庄重
i am most grateful to my supervisor professor xxx withoutwhose support and patience this thesiswould not have been completed
句中单动词completed意思较明确采短语动词carried out短语动词非正式语言短语动词止种含义常常难确定写专业文时意义较明确单动词代……[5]carry out实施(计划)举行(义务约定)等含义
iwould like to thank my supervisor professor xxx withoutwhosemost helpful instructions and guidance the completion ofthis thesiswould have been impossible
句中iwould like to宜缩写i’d like to英语缩写词般非正式文体[6]iwould like to express my deep gratitude to my supervisorprofessorxxx for spendingmuch time reading and improving thisthesis
iwould also like to extendmy sincere thanks tomr xxx forevaluatingmy thesis and offering valuable input
finally iwould like to give thanks tomy classmatexxx forfindingmemany valuable references in the course ofmywriting
致谢中三句子相互行结构相似均采iwould like to do sth to sb fordoing sth句子结构
带行结构句子常正式文体[7]表强调
3掌握致谢容实质
英语毕业文致谢篇幅容安排求排列序段落层次分明理实具体篇例i am most grateful to my supervisor professor xxx withoutwhosemosthelpful instructions andwarm encouragement this thesiswould nothave been finished
i am also grateful tomy classmates xxx and xxx for theirtime spentwithme discussing questions concerned
and lastly special thanks go tomy parents andmy brotherwhohave always supportedme inmy endeavors to finish this thesis
致谢象包括导师学家感谢序先导师学家符合致谢写作象排序
my sincerestgratitude goes tomy supervisorprofessorxxx
she has helped me in choosing a suitable topic and guided methroughmy thesiswriting
my special thanks also go to xxx and xxx my goodfriends they have recommended tome some usefulbooks relatedtomy thesis
finally aword of appreciation to the school offoreign languages for allowing me to use the reference room and computerroom formy research
致谢采分段感谢第段感谢导师帮助选出文合适题目指导完成文第二段感谢朋友推荐文关书籍段感谢外国语学院允许资料室计算机室进行研究致谢象成段容明确层次分明
i would like to thank my supervisor associate professorxxx who has givenme the considerable academic help and constant supportduringmy thesiswriting
iwould also like to thank my classmates xxx and xxxwho have spent time discussing questions concerned with me andofferedme kind advice about the thesis
finally iwould like to thank xxx library which has providedmewith useful reference needed inmy thesis
该致谢中感谢理完成文关具体实导师致谢文写作期间导师提供学术帮助断支持学致谢花时间讨文中关问题提出意见xxx图书馆致谢提供关文需资料
三佐证示例
致谢象具体文体正式格式规范实事求态度诚恳较符合西方英语学位文致谢写作具体求lauding one’s professors and humbling one’s own efforts are considered inappropriate[8]acknowledgementsiwould like to expressmy heartfeltgratitude tomy supervisorprofessorxxx forher encouragement
guidance and advice tomethroughout thewriting of this thesis
iwould also like to extend my sincere thanks to professorxxx forhis insightfuladvice onmy choice of topic and his helpfulsuggestions
in addition i would like to thank my classmates xxx andxxx for their time spentbrainstorming and discussingwithme
finally iwould like to give special thanks toxxx university for allowing me to use its library the staff is of great assistance
英语专业学士学位文致谢写作容异致谢写作点致述万变离宗学生明确致谢象解致谢文体掌握致谢写作实质应写作领写致谢难
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