第篇:游记作文
游记作文
六年级1651
第二篇:游记作文
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样怀着舍心情结束次意义森林旅留深刻美回忆
第三篇:游记作文
游记
学法摘:
游记散文种作者写游览途中见闻感想文章游记偏重描绘某方山川景物名胜古迹珍贵物产风土情者政治生活社会风尚等优秀游记作品具景物实性情感真挚性称性寓意社会性等特点
二游记写作求:
1清楚交代游踪带领读者着游山玩水领略感受美然写作程中注意行踪进展转换文章段落层次安排机结合起点层景段行文井然序层次分明
2确定中心思想表现作者描写客观事物态度写游记游览中见闻毫目描绘出写文章样然中心思想集中鲜明表现中心见景物分次详略完全描绘出精心进行选材抓住吸引读者景点富特色景物特征作重点描写
3游记写景状物方面生动逼真历历绘游记作者亲历时数读者未读者带着感受间接验态度读游记优秀游记作品真实传达作者见闻感想仅写出景物形貌色彩声音气势变化作者游历程中感受美传达读者读者阅读程中产生身境心感觉
4游记应寓情景创造出情景交融令遐想意境般写游记热衷记叙游历程实际游记仅传播相应旅游知识传播作者情感游记果仅仅客观写程传播效果太理想游记写作中注意记山水时感受表达出般说谈感受文章思想升华更发挥游记宣传教育作谈感受时候注意两条:水渠成感想源游览具体容作者肺腑言二画龙点睛恰处表现题
5运轻松愉快笔调千姿百态山光水色花鸟草虫然变化等描摹栩栩生文章产生强烈感染力
四课作文题解
课作文求写篇游记篇非命题作文提供写作选材范围定选材框架课文编者作者提出五条写作求具体容:
1游览程交代清楚
2写出景点特色重点描写吸引景物周庄水韵着重写水巴东三峡突出写山
3描写景物时融入感情力求做情景交融
4需介绍景点关知识简明扼
5学运课文中写景表现手法
难出述五条求前面学法指列游记般写作求基吻合实际反映游记写作般规律作者写作前必备写作知识
五写法指导:写篇作文呢?面条供学参考
1必须游览亲身历文写作成功必须具备生活积累俗语巧妇难米炊说游记游记先游记没游基础记属米炊写般情况学会游览历写作前必须回忆游览作写作生活基础点需说明时正准备出游基础写作情形会更果说游览没考虑写作素显较盲目现出游目性显非常明确更容更目注意观察记录思考
2做选材工作精选游览程中亮点游览特色景点写作象写出景物特点然景物相身特点认真回味游览时见感选取印象深刻特色景物作具体描写重点部分进行生动细致刻画运联想采喻拟等方法景物特点写出景物形象逼真读者宛亲眼见般选材程中作者善选择表现特色容种特色容表现文章题水乡柔妩媚高原粗犷豪放
3游览序写交代清楚游踪参观游览方时着时间推移空间转移进行必须游览线索先次记述游览程中见景物样读者会游览方清晰全面印象
4分清次详略写游记时面繁千姿百态景点美丽令回味山水写什呢必须根文章中心确定次详略具代表性激动令难忘景物作容进行详细描述景物样美样奇游样感叹凝着什展开样想象等次景物略写写样重点突出游记生动
5融入真情实感 思考游览程中面景物产生联想情感力求做情景交融普通游览程升品位情感体验中成语触景生情说意思般说景物身特殊意义种然客观现象罢游览者眼中观思考赋予理性意义傲雪冬梅虚心翠竹出淤泥染荷花温柔清新姑娘般碧水等描写景物程中思想感情融进文章字里行间做见闻思感样丰富文章涵深化作题文章更具感染力
6找相相题材文章作写作参考初期接受写法模仿较成熟原创单元四篇课文范例值学鉴网查相关资料现国许门户网站设旅游栏里面提供般旅游资讯景点介绍吃住行等更游记类帖子文章亲历者见闻思感文笔相优美供写作者学
7提供两种文章结构
(1)单结构特点景种文章选材较单容复杂描述象较集中篇幅太长较适合初学者作文水中等学生写作
(2)复式结构特点景景种文章选材较复杂描述象较牵涉联想情感较丰富文章题目列标题序号二三表示较适合作文水较学写作
8拟恰标题面题目仅供参考
(1)×游散记(2)××——心目中圣(3)游览××(4)走进××
六写作训练:写篇游记
求:1.游览程交代清楚 2.写出景色特色重点描写吸引游景物3.描写景物时融入感情力求做情景交融 4.需介绍景点关知识简明扼 5.学运课文中写景表现手法6题目拟
第四篇:游记作文
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先换游泳衣乖乖回妈妈身边换衣穿游泳衣高兴跑 水想起:哦旱鸭子’海呢?妈妈手里起 游泳圈鼓作勇气嘭声跳海里子着游泳圈漂海面 朵朵浪花卷游泳圈水里直转转呼两手两脚水中 停胡乱扑腾狼狈堪问妈妈游呀?妈妈告诉:游泳时脚 拍海水两手力左右划动背着海浪防止呛水哦学游泳 简单?勇敢妈妈教方法学会声欢呼起学会 游泳开始努力深水处游游啊游周围高鼻子肥胖俄国 女着嗳嗳逗着笑呢突然远处巨浪潮涌侧面 劈头盖脸闷水里嗷嗷啊呜啊呜声音中鼻里口中呛进 海水游泳圈股浪潮推送安全水面点晕头转鼻子发 酸嘴里直吐起苦涩咸海水吐完似难受极妈妈急忙矿泉 水漱口边嗔边怪说:骄傲吧幸灾乐祸吧连忙架倒沙滩 歇歇 晒晒太阳 沙子覆盖住全身 处跑 惹憋难受 妈妈注意 套着游泳圈跑进海水里 妈妈旁边 免喝海水 老老实实浅水中风浪里游玩起 时间真快太阳偏西喧闹海水渐渐恢复静游泳 三三两两离午泡海水里学会游泳真舒服开心呀
第五篇:游记作文
游记
the great wall
i have ever been to the great walli am interested in its name the great wall is called ten thousand—ligreat wall in chinese but in fact it is more than 6000 kilometerslong from west to eastit goes till it reaches the sea at last it looks like a large dragon sleeping on our mother land it is one of the wonders in the world we took some photos there
i like the great wall very muchi want to go there again
the great wall is the most interesting place i have ever been to last year i went there by car with my parents we saw many people on the great wall some were flying kites some were climbing hills others were taking photos my mother and i are interested in going shopping so we bought many souvenirs of course we took many beautiful photos we enjoyed ourselves a lot i want to go there again
i have been to a lot of places but the yuntai mountain is the
most interesting place i have ever seen
last summer i went there with my parents we saw trees
and flowers everywhere and there are many waterfalls they
are very beautiful we flew our kites and had a picnic in it i
took photos of my parents and bought many souvenirs for my
friends
i think we had a good time
last summer mary went to hong kong with her parents they went
there by plane they visited many places there were people
everywhere it was very sunny and hot so they went to the beaches
and swam in the sea they are interested in playing in the water at
night they ate local food the food was very delicious but a little
expensive mary liked going shopping in hong kong best because
the goods were very nice and cheap they stayed there for 7 days
and they had a fantastic time
hello i’m betty i went to los angeles with my parents two years
ago it took us nine hours to get there by plane my aunt and uncle
met us at the airport first we went to disneyland then we went to
hollywood we saw the homes of the movie stars and finally we
went swimming a lot we had a great time there
last winter holiday lisa went to england with her parents they
went there by plane they visited the big ben it was so great they
bought three umbrellas because it was rainy and foggy all the time
lisa liked going shopping in england best at night they ate local
food the food was very delicious but a little expensive they also
drank english tea they stayed there for 7 days it was really a
wonderful holiday
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