第篇:初中英语作文入门叙事篇
初中英语作文入门
叙事篇
go for a walk
yesterday evening i went out for a walk with my mother on the roadwe met a foreigner he asked me the way to the hot spring hotel i told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the leftthen he could see the hotel he thanked me very much for my help i was happy that i could help him
to visit
it was fine last sunday we went to visit a modern car factory it was eight o’clock when we arrived there by bus pingping’s uncle who was an engineer there showed us around the factory first we followed him to some workshopsand then he told us something about the different kinds of cars after hearing what he saidwe all knew the cars they produced were both cheap and beautiful what’s morethey are very popular with people
summer holidays
summer holidays are coming during the holidaysthe first thing i do is to get relaxed i’ll do morning exercises every day as i did at school and in the afternoonif i’m freei will go
fishing in the park i like readingso i’d like to spend some time reading books i will also try to study mathsfor i’m not good enough at it during the holidays i’ll help my parents do housework as much as possiblei also want to visit some of my friends and relatives i’m sure i will have a pleasant time this summer
a trip
i went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer it was a good trip at the beginning but something unexpected happened on the half way one of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn’t move any further nobody knew what to do one girl tried to call her mum with her mobile phone but there was no signal in the mountain area luckily we brought a tent with us we put it up and let him rest in it he took some medicine then he drank some water and ate some food after a whilehe felt much better and we walked on we all enjoyed ourselves on the top of the mountain
a football game
yeserday we had a football game against the team from class four their players were good we really felt a little afraid of
them but zhang xinthe leader of our class teamsaidalthough they are good playerstheir team is weakzhang xin is about 168 meters tall and his number is twelve he can kick two or three goals every match then he told usremember that we are a team and we’ll win the game
at the beginning of the matcha player from class four ran with the ball zhang xin ran over quickly to stop him he got the ball and kicked the goal he kept on passing the ball to other players we passed the ball to each other like him the players from class four were getting anxious they were angry with us but we continued to pass the ball
at last we kicked four goals and they kicked two we won the game we were very happy
a woman and a boy
one daya boy bought a pair of new shoes he was so happy that he rode his bike very fast suddenly he saw a woman in front he quickly stopped his bikebut it was too late the woman was hit and nearly fell down but the boy quickly got on the bike and rode his bike away in a hurry about half an hour later the boy found his shoes missing he thought the woman had gone awayso he went back to look for his new
shoes to his surprise he found the woman standing there with the shoes she said to himhere are your shoesyoung mani am oktake good care of yourself
the boy’s face got red at once
第二篇:初中优秀叙事作文:青春期叛逆事
青春期叛逆事
泉州市安溪三中吴两褀课时候舒语站棵硕法国梧桐树呆呆出神两蚂蚁争抢米粒食物架
麦子跑说:语躲里干什?舒语吭声麦子吞吞吐吐问:刚wc听见议说昨天放学时苏阳牵手着真?舒语忽然恼什时候变样八卦?真样?真样?麦子脸红问问罢牵牵手干?转身教室跑舒语脑瞬间片空白明白样急躁易怒朋友
午舒语没心思听课担心麦子会理容易挨放学想找麦子道歉刚刚走教室门口语文老师朱志住舒语全班学作文没交舒语嘟囔句:写出写出根没写?舒语漫心说:想写?备考作文八股文体现出华想时间浪费谓事情
朱志老师彻底恼家长舒语瞅着暴怒中年老男展颜笑抱歉负责传话电话家长
走出教室身立刻响起片窃窃私语舒语眼泪便急急
精品教学资源:
滑落脸根没想老师峙话出口控制
午没课舒语坐钢琴边弹琴首绿岛夜曲弹支离破碎
老妈外房间里喊语弹什啊?乱七八糟知知道次送钢琴课花少钱?
舒语嚯钢琴边站起没气说:花钱领情想学呢逼学学遗传基成舞蹈家成钢琴家老家省省吧
舒语母亲前直沟通进入青春期舒语知道天开始忽然变成株仙掌谁接谁会刺
老妈愤怒进丫头说没良心话真白疼领情算学舒语摔门出书城二楼抱着喜欢书直天黑
出书城心然没宁静会样呢?意叛逆青春期前期题刺伤时会刺伤擦肩群备感孤单知道流年总会外站青春远处微笑相
指导老师:李晔华
精品教学资源:
第三篇:夹筷子里幸福 初中家庭类叙事作文精选
夹筷子里幸福
线总支点支撑生命全部始终变关心呵护永远追逐幸福
——题记
哎终回家刚踏进家门手书包乱扔回快洗手开饭拖着疲倦堪身子厨房磨蹭吃点营养见妈妈妈筷子菜堆堆夹碗里真吃饱妈夹没食欲没气说着禁想起前
时会筷子吃饭妈妈握着手教夹菜时妈妈总会夹菜放碗里许妈妈厌烦终学会筷子天妈妈碗里夹点菜记妈妈时笑甜开心
年学天回家吃饭妈妈总会夹菜放碗里总津津味吃着时会妈妈烧菜加赞赏番然妈妈总欣慰笑着:吃吃点爱吃说着夹夹填满碗谢谢妈妈边吃边笑着
现十岁啦见妈妈菜夹碗里会特反感常常妈妈说:夹吃会夹夹菜烦烦呀听见话妈妈便夹然餐会惯性重复动作
仰天问:幸福什里?实:众里寻千百度幕然回首灯火阑珊处幸福着轨迹传递心里傻傻紧紧关已心扉拒门外终幕然回首发现忽略夹筷子里幸福成丢失幸福怜
事错永远忽略份幸福怕夹筷子里份幸福坚信:份执着幸福支撑生命里全部泪水痛楚
突然撒娇道:妈快夹菜碗里没菜
家庭记事作文(2)
读懂亲情
原意间事情
——题记
时候会怨
见面总匆匆匆匆听说话总必须走次见会意许年幼知者常记时候某天幼园里朋友讽刺着问:妈妈什总接呢?会想情禁
说着句话时哭着抱着质问什接?松开手说忙走次哭伤心孩子吧哭什记起
日子样着呢日复日年复年
懂事会怪
时孩子样母亲身边长发觉想象中样幸福生活知道胆结石直没作什知道底疼终住进消毒水处处方手术躺病床说话眼泪仿佛快流强忍着哭问疼疼虚弱着旧回答说呢?说定疼吧出院直说身体样样差严重时会责怪说:保重身体吧连顾顾宝贝女呢
现会爱
现终读懂亲情爱方满满爱果没会怜悲孩子决定爱爱样容易必须爱着暖暖阳光懒懒爬进窗恍然身旁笑容星星样明亮真
妈妈实知道?直想亲口说:实容易吧问代价直想亲口感谢直力量惧怕胆怯
妈妈实爱没认真说
做妈妈开心事妈妈开心时妈妈说:妈妈爱
家庭记事(谐)作文(3)
谐家
温馨美家庭家尤家里爸
爸妈妈称霸方真谓三国
()莎士亚国
啧啧恐怕光名字够回味三天吧充满文学馨香国度走见处书山书海床边摆放着横七坚八书想想然老爸领哟爱书爸爸时真坏记次正捧着崭新徐志摩散文集洋洋意性急妈妈声呼喊:喂买盐然充耳闻直
妈妈出家庭暴力爸爸满撇撇嘴步三晃悠出门岂料复返妈妈三番掘三尺追踪发现爸爸正躲屋细读呢唉瞧莎士亚国国气笑
(二)轴心国
嗯错错国号赐妈妈真谓愧说妈妈 真百分百纯正家庭妇屋里爸爸工资扫卫生事情全治理家里变井井条
妈妈典型刀子嘴豆腐心次语文考特理想便声斥责阵暴风雨掉金豆妈妈二话说转身子偷偷瞄分明发现眼眶充盈着晶莹泪珠
啊轴心国国——严厉慈爱妈妈永远爱
(三)野魔王国
嘻嘻富风格国号然啦然身男孩子野贪玩呢?啊国号适合
笑表面文质彬彬居然迷恋武术天放学回家总伸出双手施展绝世武功着屋梁门檐左右开弓会龙爪手已前伸出久天山折梅手倏出开房门天山六阳掌早迅雷掩耳势出突然发觉啊?妈妈已妈妈手中饭菜已然翻船顿时晴天变成阴天唉呀三十六计走计快跑
呵呵调皮野魔王国国——
尾声
便家快乐三国三国家表面分裂实睦呢
互相互相欢笑起乐融融赞叹句吧:爱家
关谐作文(1)
谐
谐处朋友亲样时身边社会中学校中家庭中然中处美丽身影……总爱捉迷藏需眼睛发现心感受……
社会谐镜头:
形形色色社会中处处发现谐亲身历……
记时候妈妈教育定尊老爱幼公汽车遇老果没座位定动胆座位点点头牢牢妈妈话记心里面没碰直天……
妈妈带坐公汽车出车空位便坐没长时间位满头银发拄着拐杖矮子老奶奶蹒跚公汽车恰巧车没空位想:正乐助机会嘛妈妈转头着眼神告诉说:妈妈相信做站起容走老奶奶身边温柔说:老奶奶您样站着危险座位您您坐吧姑娘…谢谢啦谢谢应该微笑着说感做完事快乐啊社会增添谐增添美丽……开心笑……
学校谐镜头:
道题会拜托讲啦笑着说没问题没问题什题啊?女侠帮解决学顽皮说唔……道题讲啦撒娇说讲啊认真听哦听懂直说讲题应该首先……然…………学认真讲着认真听着听懂?学问嗯嗯明白啦谢谢啦高兴说谢朋友嘛朋友间着客气学客气说感心里暖暖学间种谐样温馨……
老师学生非常谐数学老师工作两年年轻特孩子气特合爱开玩笑玩介意开玩笑次考完试会帮分析错题老班总数学老师起辅导班里学较落学老师学生种谐美丽……
家庭谐镜头:
家中爸爸妈妈朋友样话谈次餐桌总热闹时候会天里新鲜事说出快乐事家起分享烦恼事家起解决……种时光总快乐常起娱乐:牌五子棋电视……常做事次爸爸妈妈起总温馨
爸爸妈妈牌常玩次总沉浸笑声中老爸总老末外号末末
家里乌龟鱼鱼蝈蝈家庭员享受着样快乐生活听音乐电视吃说美味……空时爸爸妈妈会宝贝玩
家中总乐融融……
然谐镜头:
现原现保护环境保护动物意识猎越越少够身边事做起保护环境种植绿色植令欣慰啊稀野生动物保护会濒灭绝够生息繁衍……类进步幅幅美丽篇章感动……然种谐球变美丽……
谐处处皆谐容易做时谐需创造维护
第四篇:初中语文作文起步题讲义叙事:记叙文筋骨
初中语文作文起步题讲义叙事:记叙文筋骨
佳作示例
珍品
6月太阳太毒太毒清晨热受
母亲吃早饭提着菜篮出走时交串钥匙会箱子中衣服出晒免生虫子
洗手钥匙开箱子
啪声脆响手中衣服里滑样东西
低头木盒
古老木盒盒身油漆已脱落许翻背面竟然挂着锁心中顿时惊:听王奶奶说母亲套极珍贵首饰端详阵心盒子开
揭开里面东西想象中样美里面安静躺着张画片抽出原张极普通生日贺卡背面落款:亲爱女利送母亲?感惊奇会猛然想起
前年刚初中时班位学挺听说13岁生日便花5毛钱买张生日卡准备送知搞闹翻然省张生日卡闲着聊便背面写字送母亲记母亲时高兴生日卡抱胸前连连问花钱告诉贵时连连嘱咐乱花钱现然清楚记母亲时笑甜甜偷偷笑笑母亲气笑母亲迂然张卡片次出现眼前
着发黄生日卡呆3年没想母亲收藏着郑重收藏着眼睛雾气遮住时股惭愧涌心头
末心翼翼生日卡重新装进信封蓦见信封背面写着两娟秀毛笔字:珍品
呆久流泪更愧意阵阵袭心头
[评析]
作者记叙件似常事通叙事揭示博深沉母爱女原准备送学张贺卡意送母亲成母亲珍贵保存珍品文章事发展叙事:晾晒衣服发现贺卡回忆母亲贺卡深刻感受母爱分量作者明白流泪惭愧理成章详略适倒数第二段贺卡字应题目揭示中心值揣摩学处
白日梦
晌午正躺床做着美梦忽听声喝:快起课接着迷迷糊糊洗脸梳头迷迷糊糊夹课爬四楼继迷迷糊糊坐座位长长出口气唉总算想事
晌午睡觉梦见什着?——正家中做题摞摞直顶天花板突然天空中忽悠忽悠飘张纸片手起便傻眼面赫然印着黑字:李丽娜学××学入学考试成绩合格特录取妈呀真喜天降
课钟声响丝毫理会着?听阵唢呐声远远传出门家伙浩浩荡荡群敲锣鼓真气派呀意识咽口唾沫咦领头位官模样径直走面前行礼道:新科状元李
丽娜速速进京面见皇容细想厮便七手八脚扶匹披红挂绿高头骏马
着阵噔噔噔皮鞋响老师走讲台沉浸美梦中:面骑马走程突然见路边妇女围成堆正指着嘀嘀咕咕说什竖起耳朵仔细听——哎呀呀复读三年该考考丢现眼呢听说眼
睛2.0读0.2嘛二饼啤酒瓶底样厚唉呀难情死慌忙摘眼镜放入衣袋里眼前片模糊行戴
模模糊糊见女老师黑板写龙飞凤舞字:圆锥曲线悦耳女高音丝毫没引起耳膜振动继续思维正走着突然注意前面孩吹唢呐唢呐没响倒累气喘嘘嘘浑身汗赶忙住:喂兄弟年纪学干苦差事?孩眼泪汪汪说:爹赚钱念完年级念正说着阵噼里啪啦鞭炮响仰头哇座金碧辉煌楼阁呈现眼前莫非莫非皇宫?面见皇升官享福哈哈
正想意处李丽娜惊谁?时桌肘碰眼睛讲台瞄瞄见老师气怒目圆睁满脸通红弹簧似座位跳起唉乐极生悲低头认罪吧老师发话回字漏传入耳朵:班学课思想集中想明年考学校简直白日做梦
[评析]
文章记梦精彩文章题目文末应题目概写文章容文末画龙点睛笔文章形象告诉读者道理:学生应该脚踏实学果想入非非切实际白天做梦样永远会成现实文章叙事讲究写梦写实穿插进行实显波澜真实浪漫体现作者叙事功力
写作百宝箱
行文求简
欧阳修翰林院职时次院三属出游见路旁匹飞驰马踩死狗欧阳修提议:请分记叙事见率先说道:黄犬卧道马惊奔逸蹄死接着说:黄犬卧通衢逸马蹄杀第三说:犬卧通衢遭毙欧阳修听笑道:样修史万卷写完三连忙请教:说呢?欧阳修道:逸马杀犬道’六字足矣三听脸红相互笑起冗赘深欧阳修文简洁折服
安插物疏密高低衣褶裙带手指足步紧笔细肿手跏(jiā)脚
——[清]曹雪芹
开卷处奇句夺目见惊敢弃终篇际媚语摄魂执卷流连难遽收场局勾魂摄魄具数月犹觉声音耳情形目者全亏撒娇作秋波转
——[清]李渔
认写作规:思路清晰文字简练
——[法]斯汤达
里(指说)江河形成列车线路样音乐堂里锣鼓声音气象台预告雨台风消息画箱里盘浓化开颜色没弦形成交响没阳光生气没调配法绘出生活处远景印象枯燥烦嚣缺乏境界原艺术手法薄弱基生活足
——孙犁
牛刀试
1时候喜欢听事学喜欢读事实生活中天演绎着种样事听着读着感受着事沉思着成长着
请事话题命题写篇600字左右记叙文
[思路点拨]
写前认真阅读前面引语提示选材范围写听事读事然更写生活中事需注意听读事
重新组织创造搬原事生活中事叙写时注意技巧引开头发展中波澜巧妙渡应等
2生活中会出现样情景:偶然情况目睹种物听句话件事忽然会引起久已逝事回忆切清晰出现脑海里
请_______引起事回忆题写篇600字左右记叙文求:先横线题目补充完整然写作文
[思路点拨]
篇半命题作文根求先题目补充完整完成步注意两点:补充容词语:书包红叶铃声短语:话眼前幕书中红叶二补写容原容机结合通意识中成病句重材料安排题目决定叙事序必须倒叙眼前回忆回现实事情眼前事物密切联系相互游离事选择意义值回忆价值
第五篇:初中语文作文起步题讲义叙事:娓娓道筋骨
初中语文作文起步题讲义叙事:娓娓道筋骨
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