写游记
写作务
假定李华班级周日组织参观市历史博物馆请写篇短文记述
次参观活动发表校英语杂志
注意：词数 100 左右
写作指导
审题定调
写作务求写篇游记游记种记述参观访问旅途见闻容记叙文
类写作应注意点：
1 参观游览序时间写
2 写出参观游览象特点
3 适表达感受法
游记类作文中时态时称第称
二谋篇布局
根提示写作务分三部分：
第部分：活动目
第二部分：参观程
第三部分：表达感受
三组织语言
第部分：活动目
普通表达 高级表达
I went to to study learn about
第二部分：参观程
To draw our attention to our class
organized a visit to
普通表达 高级表达
We arrived at the museum around Some of At around we arrived at the museum some
us took a bus while others took a subway by bus others by subway
When we went inside we saw a(n) Once we entered the museum we were
unexpectedly It gave directions and answered attracted by a(n) giving directions and
questions providing information
We were led into a room and learned about We were guided into a room where we
many people who did a lot throughout their learned about many history makers of our
life for our city city
We watched a film in the video room about We learned about some historical moments by
some historical moments in our city watching a film in the video room
It moved us to tears
It was so impressive that many of us burst
into tears
第三部分：表达感受
普通表达 高级表达
It was an unforgettable visit What an unforgettable visit it was
It relaxed me and broadened my horizon
Not only did it relax me but it also broadened
my horizon
范文展示
普通范文
My classmates and I went to the city history museum last Sunday to study our city’s history
We arrived at the museum around 9 o’clock Some of us took a bus while others took a
subway When we went inside we saw an interesting robot unexpectedly It gave directions and
answered questions Then we were led into a room and learned about many people who did a lot
throughout their life for our city At last we watched a film in the video room about some
historical moments in our city It moved us to tears
It was an unforgettable visit It relaxed me and broadened my horizon
高级范文
To draw our attention to the city’s history our class organized a visit to the city history
museum last Sunday
At around 9 o’clock we arrived at the museum some by bus others by subway Once we
entered the museum we were attracted by a robot giving directions and providing information
Then we were guided into a room where we learned about many history makers of our city At last
we learned about some historical moments by watching a film in the video room It was so
impressive that many of us burst into tears
What an unforgettable visit it was Not only did it relax me but it also broadened my
horizon
实战演练
国庆节假期家起北京天安门广场观升国旗仪式请写篇短文发
表校英文坛容包括：
1 旅游目
2 见闻
3 感受
注意：词数 100 左右
参考词汇：升旗仪式 flagraising ceremony
答案
One possible version
To experience the scene of the flagraising ceremony in the Tiananmen Square in person our
family traveled to Beijing during this National Day holiday
It is said that our national flag rises every day with the sun We got up early and hurried there
by subway Then we joined the crowd and waited After a few minutes soldiers bearing our
national flag marched out Quickly but in order they got to the flagpole and the flag was ready in
no time Then there was a minute of silence which made way for the national anthem to be played
Seeing the flag rising I was deeply moved and sang with the crowd
It was really an unforgettable experience which made me feel proud about being a Chinese
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写作务
假定李华班级周日组织参观市历史博物馆请写篇短文记述
次参观活动发表校英语杂志
注意：词数 100 左右
写作指导
审题定调
写作务求写篇游记游记种记述参观访问旅途见闻容记叙文
类写作应注意点：
1 参观游览序时间写
2 写出参观游览象特点
3 适表达感受法
游记类作文中时态时称第称
二谋篇布局
根提示写作务分三部分：
第部分：活动目
第二部分：参观程
第三部分：表达感受
三组织语言
第部分：活动目
普通表达 高级表达
I went to to study learn about
第二部分：参观程
To draw our attention to our class
organized a visit to
普通表达 高级表达
We arrived at the museum around Some of At around we arrived at the museum some
us took a bus while others took a subway by bus others by subway
When we went inside we saw a(n) Once we entered the museum we were
unexpectedly It gave directions and answered attracted by a(n) giving directions and
questions providing information
We were led into a room and learned about We were guided into a room where we
many people who did a lot throughout their learned about many history makers of our
life for our city city
We watched a film in the video room about We learned about some historical moments by
some historical moments in our city watching a film in the video room
It moved us to tears
It was so impressive that many of us burst
into tears
第三部分：表达感受
普通表达 高级表达
It was an unforgettable visit What an unforgettable visit it was
It relaxed me and broadened my horizon
Not only did it relax me but it also broadened
my horizon
范文展示
普通范文
My classmates and I went to the city history museum last Sunday to study our city’s history
We arrived at the museum around 9 o’clock Some of us took a bus while others took a
subway When we went inside we saw an interesting robot unexpectedly It gave directions and
answered questions Then we were led into a room and learned about many people who did a lot
throughout their life for our city At last we watched a film in the video room about some
historical moments in our city It moved us to tears
It was an unforgettable visit It relaxed me and broadened my horizon
高级范文
To draw our attention to the city’s history our class organized a visit to the city history
museum last Sunday
At around 9 o’clock we arrived at the museum some by bus others by subway Once we
entered the museum we were attracted by a robot giving directions and providing information
Then we were guided into a room where we learned about many history makers of our city At last
we learned about some historical moments by watching a film in the video room It was so
impressive that many of us burst into tears
What an unforgettable visit it was Not only did it relax me but it also broadened my
horizon
实战演练
国庆节假期家起北京天安门广场观升国旗仪式请写篇短文发
表校英文坛容包括：
1 旅游目
2 见闻
3 感受
注意：词数 100 左右
参考词汇：升旗仪式 flagraising ceremony
答案
One possible version
To experience the scene of the flagraising ceremony in the Tiananmen Square in person our
family traveled to Beijing during this National Day holiday
It is said that our national flag rises every day with the sun We got up early and hurried there
by subway Then we joined the crowd and waited After a few minutes soldiers bearing our
national flag marched out Quickly but in order they got to the flagpole and the flag was ready in
no time Then there was a minute of silence which made way for the national anthem to be played
Seeing the flag rising I was deeply moved and sang with the crowd
It was really an unforgettable experience which made me feel proud about being a Chinese
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《香当网》用户分享的内容，不代表《香当网》观点或立场，请自行判断内容的真实性和可靠性！
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