Integrated skills 1
Encouraging a friend to work out regularly
I学目标
By the end of this section students will be able to
1 acquire expressions of giving suggestions
2 discuss various exercises which can be fitted into a tight schedule
II导读导学
1 Watch the video and finish the exercise
2 Analyze the structure and writing techniques of the email on page 23
III问题分层:
写封建议信——鼓励朋友定期锻炼
[写作指津]
1.基概念:建议信作者关问题进行分析针问题提出法建议
2.写作象:
①写遇某问题提出法观点
②写某组织机构改进服务提出建议忠告
3.注意事项:
①建议信写出写信原建议容提出建议理提出理合情合理语气定礼貌先建议信写简明扼目明确具合理性说服力
②建议角度样化避免重复政治济文化伦理法律等角度出建议
③符合英文信件基格式
④基时态般现时般时
[词句助力]
写作常词汇
1. n. 建议
2.advisesuggest vt 建议
3.beneficial adj 益
4.benefit n 益处
v 受益受益
5.following adj
6.practical adj 实
7. 某
8.ask for sb's advice 征求某建议
9. 某方面某提建议
10.have troubledifficulty with sth 某方面困难
11.
做某事困难
12. 某方面问题
13. 某认
14. 提出建议
15. 接受某建议
第步:审题谋篇
审题
称:第称第二称
时态:般现时般时
谋篇
基框架:
开头(beginning)——开门见山方陈述观点 (state your idea)
体(body)——提出问题进行分析说明理接着提出建议(reasons and evidence)
结尾(ending)——呼应开头重申观点(restate your opinion)
语言
篇语气定礼貌先写简明扼目明确具合理性说服力
二写作常句式(注意黑体表达)
()精彩开头句
1.SinceNow that you are worried about the cultural differences I'm writing toI'd like to offer some suggestions onabout how to
您担心文化差异写信想……提建议
2.I am sorry to learnknowhear that you are now having troubledifficulty communicating with others and that you may often feel lonely
知道听说现您交流方面麻烦困难常感孤独难
3.I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on
高兴收您……征求建议信
4.Here areis some tipssuggestionsadvice to help you
里帮助您建议
5.I think you can make it if you follow the following advicethe advice below
果您听建议认您会做
第二步:点翻译
1.忙累写信保持健康建议(动名词短语作状语)
I'm writing to give you some advice on how to keep healthy
2.保持均衡饮食重吃蔬菜水果吃垃圾食品(It is+形容词+ to do sth句型结构)
_such as having more vegetable and fruit and no junk food
3.增强体质基础
It is the basis of
4.外应该工作休息时间制订适时间表(in addition)
_you should make proper schedules for the time of working and resting
5.足够睡眠精力工作 (if条件状语句)
you can have energy in your work
6.更重锻炼保持健康心情方法球类运动跑步散步等等(what's more a good way of keep)
What's more taking exercise is and a good mood like ball games running walking and so on
7.健康戒烟戒酒明智选择(for the sake of )
At last _it is a wise choice to quit smoking and drinking
8.希着幸福健康生活
I do hope you will
(三)结束点睛句
1.I hope you will find these ideas usefulpracticalhelpful
希您会发现办法实帮助
2.As time goes on people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the advice above
果您遵建议着时间推移会更加解您会愿意您交朋友
3.I am certain that if you follow my advice you'll get along well with your classmates
相信果您听建议您会学相处
4.I believe with your effort you can manage to get overovercome these difficulties
相信通您努力您会成功克服困难
5.The situation is easy to change if you takefollowaccept my advice
果您采纳建议改变种处境容易
[时演练]
假Rachel朋友Jason信说次重考试前会出现焦虑症状睡眠记忆力减退请写封回信提建议帮助调整状态点包括:
1.考前制订复计划
2.适锻炼身体
3.熬夜休息
注意:1词数80左右
2.适增加细节行文连贯
3.信件格式已出
Dear Jason
I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them
All the best
Rachel
V课堂总结
1 问题总结(错题集)
错题
题号
错分析
基础知识
基技(方法)
易错点分析
审题答题规范性
学法指导
2 学报告(思维导图)
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