12015·海
Guided Writing
Directions Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
学校举办读书节目前正广泛征集读书节宣传册图片假设该校学生潘阳已找三幅图片决定读书节组委会写封信推荐中幅信须包括容：
1 简单描述想推荐幅图片
2 阐述幅图片宣传读书节理
参考答案
Dear Sir Madam
Since the Reading Festival is around the corner I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading
In the picture three students are sitting at the table discussing heatedly what they have just read It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity
which needs quietness and concentration as far as I’m concerned it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well The moment you mention the book the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book To sum up the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading instead of being dull and isolating can be full of participation and common interest I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply
Yours sincerely
Pan Yang
亮点说明文结构紧凑层次分明种句式结构
运定语句a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration your classmates or best friends who turn out to have been deeply impressed as wellMy ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book
运连词 Though
运副词 deeply 修饰impressed
运宾语句discussing heatedly what they have just readIt seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal
activityI sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration
外文章量语短语not only …but also as far as I’m concerned To sum up share with 等
考点定位考查描述图片表达理
名师点睛
篇文章书写工整需条理清晰充分利种句式语法表达适记忆表达模板说总结开头结尾
22015·福建[源学科网ZXXK]
书面表达(满分25分）
请阅读面图画求英语写篇词数120左右短文
容包括：
1 描述画面
2 概述含义
3 谈谈感想
凿壁偷光
注意：
1 短文开头已出计入总词数
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 短文中出现相关信息
参考词汇：凿钻：bore
In the picture
答案
In the picture we can see a boy in worn clothessitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on itA weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading
This is a wellknown story from ancient Chinese idiomThe boy being poor couldn’t afford even a candleso he bored a hole in the wall to steal light from his neighbour s house to read at nightThe moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be
Of course things are totally different today It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that countsHard work pays offWe should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future[源学*科*网]
亮点分析
文章第段描述图片第句中动词ing形式非谓语动词做伴状语with 复合结构In the picture we can see a boy in worn clothessitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it图中见男孩穿着破旧衣服坐堆满书桌子旁边A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading丝微弱光亮墙洞穿沉静阅读中
第二段第句开始说图片题This is a wellknown story from ancient Chinese idiom众周知中国古代成语第二句分词结构表示伴状语The boy being poor couldn’t afford even a candleso he bored a hole in the wall to steal light from his neighbour s house to read at night贫穷男孩甚够买起根蜡烛墙凿洞邻居里偷光夜晚阅读第二段句no matter引导步状语句The moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be事精神遗余力获取知识困难情况轻易气馁
第三段结束Of course things are totally different today 然现完全第二句not… but
结构宾语句It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts事身事反映出东西重俗语：Hard work pays off功夫负心We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future应该带着苦通学改进未做准备[源学科网]
考点定位图说话写作
名师点睛文考查图说话写作求学生仔细描述图片发表感受篇文章书写工整需条理清晰充分利种句式语法表达适记忆表达模板说总结开头结尾丰富文章容
32015·北京
假红星中学学生李华根四幅图先序介绍传统文化进校园活动中面艺术家学捏面程A Day with a Craftsman题校刊英语角写篇英文稿件
注意：词数少60
提示词：面团a piece of dough 面dough figurine
答案
Last Tuesday our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines
When the craftsman came into the classroom we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box First he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines We stood around him and watched attentively Then we started to have a try ourselves The old man walked around and helped us patiently
Finally we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman Looking at the figurines we were all very excited
We hope we can have more activities of this kind
解析
试题分析：文然四幅图形式展现活动程年样体裁记叙文年命题未出作文开头需学生写事件概括总体感受作文章第段
亮点说明[源学科网ZXXK]
范文注意First Then Finally等衔接句子段落表示事情发生时间序作文更条理做行文连贯[源ZxxkCom]
全文适般时注意文章文时态保持致原
范文重语法知识：非谓语动词Looking at the figurines we were all very excited定语句we put the figurines we made on the table…时间状语句When the craftsman came into the classroom we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box 语法知识叙事清晰
考点定位图表类记叙文
名师点睛题考查细节手工艺教家做东西学生认真聆听教育学第二幅图重点学生找学生认真聆听环节老师教定出学生写学生听应该分点第三幅图指导重点样应指导关系幅图课时候会重点讲相家欢乐做成作品 四幅图点外重点样应指导关系写样作文定抓住细节分需注意时态词汇拼写错误复合句式体现出亮点考生切忌文章开篇犯低级语法错误尤注意时态单复数冠词正确相实性强应文说情景作文保证点齐全前提适增加长难句非谓语三句连词进行灵活运关注句式样性词准确性取该板块高分会更保障
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12015·海
Guided Writing
Directions Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
学校举办读书节目前正广泛征集读书节宣传册图片假设该校学生潘阳已找三幅图片决定读书节组委会写封信推荐中幅信须包括容：
1 简单描述想推荐幅图片
2 阐述幅图片宣传读书节理
参考答案
Dear Sir Madam
Since the Reading Festival is around the corner I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading
In the picture three students are sitting at the table discussing heatedly what they have just read It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity
which needs quietness and concentration as far as I’m concerned it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well The moment you mention the book the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book To sum up the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading instead of being dull and isolating can be full of participation and common interest I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply
Yours sincerely
Pan Yang
亮点说明文结构紧凑层次分明种句式结构
运定语句a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration your classmates or best friends who turn out to have been deeply impressed as wellMy ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book
运连词 Though
运副词 deeply 修饰impressed
运宾语句discussing heatedly what they have just readIt seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal
activityI sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration
外文章量语短语not only …but also as far as I’m concerned To sum up share with 等
考点定位考查描述图片表达理
名师点睛
篇文章书写工整需条理清晰充分利种句式语法表达适记忆表达模板说总结开头结尾
22015·福建[源学科网ZXXK]
书面表达(满分25分）
请阅读面图画求英语写篇词数120左右短文
容包括：
1 描述画面
2 概述含义
3 谈谈感想
凿壁偷光
注意：
1 短文开头已出计入总词数
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 短文中出现相关信息
参考词汇：凿钻：bore
In the picture
答案
In the picture we can see a boy in worn clothessitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on itA weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading
This is a wellknown story from ancient Chinese idiomThe boy being poor couldn’t afford even a candleso he bored a hole in the wall to steal light from his neighbour s house to read at nightThe moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be
Of course things are totally different today It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that countsHard work pays offWe should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future[源学*科*网]
亮点分析
文章第段描述图片第句中动词ing形式非谓语动词做伴状语with 复合结构In the picture we can see a boy in worn clothessitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it图中见男孩穿着破旧衣服坐堆满书桌子旁边A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading丝微弱光亮墙洞穿沉静阅读中
第二段第句开始说图片题This is a wellknown story from ancient Chinese idiom众周知中国古代成语第二句分词结构表示伴状语The boy being poor couldn’t afford even a candleso he bored a hole in the wall to steal light from his neighbour s house to read at night贫穷男孩甚够买起根蜡烛墙凿洞邻居里偷光夜晚阅读第二段句no matter引导步状语句The moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be事精神遗余力获取知识困难情况轻易气馁
第三段结束Of course things are totally different today 然现完全第二句not… but
结构宾语句It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts事身事反映出东西重俗语：Hard work pays off功夫负心We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future应该带着苦通学改进未做准备[源学科网]
考点定位图说话写作
名师点睛文考查图说话写作求学生仔细描述图片发表感受篇文章书写工整需条理清晰充分利种句式语法表达适记忆表达模板说总结开头结尾丰富文章容
32015·北京
假红星中学学生李华根四幅图先序介绍传统文化进校园活动中面艺术家学捏面程A Day with a Craftsman题校刊英语角写篇英文稿件
注意：词数少60
提示词：面团a piece of dough 面dough figurine
答案
Last Tuesday our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines
When the craftsman came into the classroom we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box First he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines We stood around him and watched attentively Then we started to have a try ourselves The old man walked around and helped us patiently
Finally we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman Looking at the figurines we were all very excited
We hope we can have more activities of this kind
解析
试题分析：文然四幅图形式展现活动程年样体裁记叙文年命题未出作文开头需学生写事件概括总体感受作文章第段
亮点说明[源学科网ZXXK]
范文注意First Then Finally等衔接句子段落表示事情发生时间序作文更条理做行文连贯[源ZxxkCom]
全文适般时注意文章文时态保持致原
范文重语法知识：非谓语动词Looking at the figurines we were all very excited定语句we put the figurines we made on the table…时间状语句When the craftsman came into the classroom we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box 语法知识叙事清晰
考点定位图表类记叙文
名师点睛题考查细节手工艺教家做东西学生认真聆听教育学第二幅图重点学生找学生认真聆听环节老师教定出学生写学生听应该分点第三幅图指导重点样应指导关系幅图课时候会重点讲相家欢乐做成作品 四幅图点外重点样应指导关系写样作文定抓住细节分需注意时态词汇拼写错误复合句式体现出亮点考生切忌文章开篇犯低级语法错误尤注意时态单复数冠词正确相实性强应文说情景作文保证点齐全前提适增加长难句非谓语三句连词进行灵活运关注句式样性词准确性取该板块高分会更保障
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