作文
    第篇:作文)
    难忘抹含泪微笑
    追忆事件件流水般事浮现眼前品味昔股股暖流涌心头回首眼前浮现母亲抹含泪微笑刻母亲抹含泪微笑迷住
    难忘母亲安慰话语天空中乌云散开考试失利原母亲会发雷霆取代温柔话语心责哭告诉妈妈失定会考妈妈擦擦眼泪着募阳光般温柔微笑眼睛中增加滴晶莹液体唇角扬弧度似安慰说母亲怪次努力行滴泪水似告诉哭会心痛着母亲抹含泪微笑发现母爱爱悲伤恐惧似已抹微笑拂云散泪珠洗母亲微笑安慰带走泪水微笑难忘微笑
    难忘橙黄色灯光鼓励力量微笑考试压抑着空气阻塞心继续灯光奋战着正道题难住急躁心情更没思路手狠狠脑袋忽然感觉手什抓住偏头刺痛心母亲眼里含着泪水眼中包含着鼓励似告诉安定心急躁似泪水具魔力驱走急躁点点头告诉母亲
    会母亲绽放微笑微笑丝细雨滋润心微笑直现记忆犹新微笑泪水心痛鼓励心酸喜欢母亲啊母亲微笑真感染难忘
    难忘母亲微笑母亲含泪微笑生活富色彩考试考时会母亲眼中充满喜悦晶莹剔透宝石般晶莹泪滴已布满褶皱笑脸会弧度似祝贺碎玻璃杯刺破手指哭时会眼中充满担忧心痛泪珠双明亮眼睛面保持着花般灿烂微笑似告诉坚强哭泣抹含泪微笑时刻抽住心弦难忘
    落花易拾流年易收阳光摊开卷回忆细细咀嚼品味抹难忘含泪微笑
    第二篇:作文
    黑龙江省双城市第七学二年班 孙榕
    天星期天天气非常晴朗点微风爸爸说天正放风筝时候爸爸开着车带广场放风筝
    路心鸟样歌唱爸爸说笑快广场爸爸教放风筝方法先等起风时候风抛天空拽着线直前跑风筝飞天空越飞越高玩高兴极惜太阳快落山该回家然点舍离开爸爸舍回家
    第三篇:作文范文
    年少寂寞
    榕江县民族中学
    想说爱难说装饰着世界丰富着生活正年少寂寞
    爱痴迷底想成友正更深层解汉字魅力第次走进国度留法淡印象爱端正身姿花姿少女豪放潇洒原奔放骏马温柔情调舞台姑娘优美舞姿充满力量神情中华民族象征
    书法家笔变化端浓黑墨汁生命色彩七十二变孙悟空时候朵奇花绽放时原飞奔骏马时胜飞流千尺瀑布时条静河流流漫长岁月流进心会止永远流淌流入世界角落
    王羲笔条奔流溪流时静优美时放声高歌 颜真卿笔美女纯洁热情含蓄舒展着旋转着亭亭玉立灵动飘逸展现西施般美怀素笔奔跑野马铿锵力永屈服傲骨快乐飞奔野
    作中华文明起源重标志书写灿烂中华文
    明承载华夏文化悠久历史天独特智慧方式解决现代化信息处理问题正踏着青春步伐活跃现代生活中
    汉字想说爱难世界神奇永远猜透更想象联想年华寂寞会心走进世界
    第四篇:作文范文
    牛津初中英语8a书面表达复材料
    1理想学校早9点学午3点放学2许时间课外活动3班容量班154许书刊图书馆5天仅半时家庭作业6月公园进行次校际郊游活动
    myidealschool
    myidealschoolstartsat9 amitfinishesat3 pm sowewillhavelotsoftimeforafterschoolactivities theclassesarequitesmallthere’reabout15studentsineachclass wehaveabiglibrarywithalotofusefulbooks weonlyhavehalfanhourofhomeworkeveryday everymonthwegoonaschoolstriptoapark
    1 理想学校8点学午3点放学2喜欢体育运动电脑
    天体育课电脑课 3班容量相 班约20 4餐厅边吃边朋友聊天 5学校边公园边型超市 6许书刊图书馆7月博物馆郊游活动
    myidealschool
    my ideal school starts at 8am and finishes at 3pm i love sports and computersso we have pe and computer studies every day the classes are quite small there are about 20 studenats in eadh class there is a big dinning hall we can eat and chat with our friends at the same time there ia a park on one side of our school and a shopping mall on the other we have a big library with lots of useful books every month we go on a school trip to a museum
    通父母时代学生活等情况写篇名 my happy school life 短文字数 70-100
    my happy school life
    my parents usually teach me to study hard for the country and the people because they know how important the knowledge is and they weren't able to learn they wish us to do so
    my parents were living a poor life when they were my age they don’t have enough to eat they worked all day with the farmers but seldom went to school the teachers at that time had very little knowledge
    things are getting better and better we are now studying in a clean and bright classroom with the very excellent teachers' teaching we are able to ride to school in our new clothes every day after class we have all kinds of games to play though it's important for us to study we have time to go to the farm to work every week it's a good way to train ourselves so we all like so
    i'm living in a good age and i have a very happy school life let's study hard for our country's tomorrow
    1周星期天西湖郊游活动2准备7点校门口集合出发1
    3然长途汽车4划船感受西湖美丽 511点30铁市中心买纪念品 6约3点返回
    7想会愉快
    adayout
    we will go on a trip to the west lake next sunday we will meet at the school gate at 7am then we will go there by coach we will go boating and feel the beauty of the west lake there
    at 1130 am we take the understand to the center of the city to buy some souvenirs finally we go back home at about 3pm i think we will have a good time
    1周日黄山郊游活动2准备7点校门口集合出发
    3然长途汽车4爬山举行野餐
    511点30铁市中心买纪念品 6约3点返回
    7然累玩开心
    wewenton a trip totheyellowmountainlastsunday we met at the school gate at 7am then we went there by coach weclimbedthemountainandhadapicnicthere at 1130 am we took the understand to the center of the city to buy some souvenirs finally we went back home at about 3pm we all felt tired but wehadagoodtime
    提示星期六班西山 (west hill) 进行次野餐走西山脚休息会吃午饭吃午饭开始唱歌跳舞然爬山许漂亮花听鸟采许野果 (wild fruits) 玩开心回家里觉累高兴
    our class had a picnic last saturday we went to the beautiful west hill on foot we had a short rest after we got to the foot of west hill then we had our picnic at noon after lunch we sang and danced happily then we began to climb the hill we saw many flowers heard the birds singing and got a lot of wild fruits we had a wonderful time
    i felt very tired when i got home but i was very happy
    熊猫giantpandas
    1喜欢熊猫熊猫静安详吃竹笋竹叶
    2世界现仅约千熊猫数目越越少
    3熊猫生活方正变农田取毛皮捕猎
    世界快熊猫
    everyone likes giant pandasgiant pandas are quiet and peacefulthey eat bamboo shoots and leaves nowthere are only about a thousand giant pandas in the worldtheir number is going down their living areas are becoming farmlands also people hunt them for their fur if this continues there will soon be no giant pandas in the world

    1熊猫宝宝名希出生时重约100克天喝母奶6月时开始吃
    竹笋竹叶
    2悲熊猫野外难生存假农夫砍掉树森林熊猫生存处
    3应力保护
    the baby panda is called xi wangwhen she was bornshe weighed about 100 grams she drank her mother’s milk every daywhen she was six months oldshe started to eat
    bamboo shoots and leaves sadly it is difficult for giant pandas to survive in the wild
    if farmers cut down trees and forests giant pandas will have nowhere to live we should try our best to protect them
    tigersareindanger
    tigersarebigandstrong theyhavebeautifulfurwithblackstrips theycanrunfastandthey’regoodathuntingotheranimals theyusuallylivealone they’reindangerbecausepeoplehuntthemfortheirfurandbones peoplemakemedicinefromtheirbones
    wolvesareindanger
    wolveshavegreyfur theyalsohaveverygoodeyesight hearing andsmell they’refriendlytoeachother theyeatanimals insects snails andvegetables theyareindangerbecausepeoplecutdownforests soontheywillhavenohomeandfood
    giantpandasareindanger
    giantpandasarebeautifulblackandwhiteanimals theylooklikebears theyonlyliveinchina they’reveryquietandpeaceful theyeatbambooshootsandleaves theirnumberisgettingsmallerandsmallerbecausetheirlivingareasarebecomingfarmlands also peoplehuntthemfortheirfur
    假东北虎保护协会会员请东北虎名义写封类公开信呼吁类保护东北虎信容包括
    1 量砍伐森林食物减少居住缩
    2 量捕杀虎骨制药虎皮制衣
    3 希扩老虎保护区保护
    4 老虎类处
    注意:1 短文必须包含容 2 短文第称写
    3 词数60左右开头已出计入总词数
    you cut down lots of trees and our food is becoming less and less our living areas are getting smaller also you kill us for our bones to make medicine and use fur to make clothes our life is hard so we hope you can make tiger reserves larger and protect us and let tiger and man live peacefully together
    朋友my friend
    1学校朋友汤姆长高爱体育擅长篮球
    2汤姆慷慨愿意朋友分享东西总乐助
    3久直朋友
    my best friend at school is tom he is very tall he loves sports very much and is good at playing basketball tom is generous he is willing to share things with his friends he is always ready to help people too we have been best friends for a long time

    1米莉班学15岁朋友住家隔壁做朋友已差5年2高苗条头长发乐助3长想模特周游世界 永远朋友
    millie is my classmates she is 15 years old she is my best friend she lives next door and we have been friends for almost 5 years she is tall and slim and she has long hairshe likes to help people millie wants to be a model and travel around the world when she grows up we will always be best friends
    第五篇:作文范文
    my favorite…题写篇短文
    my favorite subject is english i like it because it is interesting i have english every day i can speak a little english i join the school english club every afternoon i go there to talk in english i can see the english movies and read english books i think it is useful for me i want to learn it well i like english very much
    my friend
    i have a good friend her name is limei she is 12 years oldher telephone number is 12345 her birthday is march 5th she is good at english and chieseshe often plays the piano she likes reading books and listening to the music her hobbies are reading and listening to music she is a nice girl we often help each other we are good friends
    my day
    i get up at six every day after breakfast i take my schoolbag and go to school i read english for twenty minutes our class begins at eight and we have four classes in the morning after lunch at 12 o’clock i take a short rest in my room we have three classes in the afternoonafter school at five i go back home i often help my mother do some housework sometimes i watch tv after dinner i begin to do my homework then i go to bed at nine thirty
    介绍
    my name is yang yifanmy birthday is december 1st i am chinese i am a student my favorite subject is english i like it because it is
    interesting i can play the piano but not very well i love swimming and i am good at it i like watching tv i study very hard my teachers all like me and i like them too
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