小学英语六年级作文范文-事物介绍或叙事


    My Classroom My classroom is nice and big . There are forty desks and chairs in the classroom. There are two black boards on the walls. And there are two pictures, too. My classroom has eleven lights and twelve fans. What colour are the fans ? They are blue. At the coner, there is a shelf , many books are in the shelf. I like the books very much. My Doll Today is Sunday. I took out the nice doll again. Two years ago, my mother bought her for me on my birthday. It is a girl. I like to call her “Yuan Yuan“, because she has a round face, a round head and round eyes. Her nose and mouth are round too. Yuan Yuan is wearing a red and white dress, a red hat and red shoes. There is a long pigtail behind her head. I can see a smile on her face when I come back home. How lovely she is! Yuan Yuan and I are good friends.She looks like my little sister. I usually play games with her. She often listens to me when I tell her a story. I go to bed with her. I think I can't sleep without her. I like yuanyan very much I think She likes me too! My Pet My pet is a toy bear. His name is Small White. He is white. He has blue eyes and blue ears. His hands and feet are blue too. He is naughty. He likes to make fun of me. He likes reading. When I am unhappy, he accompanies me. He is my good friend. My Room I have my own room. It is big and nice. There is a bed, a desk and a shelf. The doll is on the bad. The lamp is on the desk. The books are on the shelf. The trash bin is behind the door. The clothes are in the closet. There is a air-conditioner over the closet. Look! There are many pictures on the wall. I love my room very much. My School My school is very beautiful. It is Nanhai Experimental School. There are three tall buildings in our school. They all have five floors. In the teaching building, the P.E.room is on the first floor. The library is on the second floor. The science rooms are on the third floor. The computer rooms are on the third floor and the fourth floor. The music rooms are on the third floor and the fourth floor. My class room is on the fifth floor. I am in Class9, Grade 6. There are five gardens in our school. In the gardens there are many beautiful flowers, grass and trees. There is a big playground in my school. I like my school, because my school is very beautiful! My Teacher's House My English teacher has a big house. It has a living room, a big dining room, two bedrooms, a study, two bathrooms and a big kitchen. In the living room, there is a big picture, four brown sofas, white fans and blue walls. The TV set is big. There is a big Chinese knot on the wall. There are lanterns below the lights. I like them. This is my English teacher’s house. My Village My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village! 【要领点评】 本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山,使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时,可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点,尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。 Planting Trees It’s spring. It’s time to plant trees. I want to plant a tree in our garden. Dad and Mum are very happy. They like green. Dad helps me plant the tree. First, we dig the soil. Then I put a little tree into the soil. Next I water it. I am so excited and I wait for the tree to grow. Two weeks later, my tree has some little leaves. I water it every day. Now it has lots of leaves. It grows fast. We should plant more trees. They make our world beautiful. 【要领点评】 小作者写了一次植树的经历,但他并没有单纯拘泥于植树的过程。既有过程,也有感觉,能使文章打动读者,给人以启发。作文的最后一段就非常好,两句话胜似千言万语。我们可以学习一下这种写法。 既描述过程,又适时提自己的看法或想法的写法,在作文中叫做“夹叙夹议”,描述过程为了提出一种思想服务,提出看法或想法使原本平实的描述有了意义。我们在以后的写作中也可以试一试。 Save Earth This is the earth. The green part is land. The blue part is sea. The white part is clouds. Our earth is very beautiful and interesting. There are rivers, streams, seas and lakes. There are hills and mountains. There are woods, jungles and forests. There are many countries and cities. There are many people live in them. Do you think the earth is very wonderful? Many years ago, the earth is very clean. But nowadays there is much pollution on the earth. There is air pollution, land pollution and water pollution。People are cutting down the forests. Many wild animals, birds and insects lose their homes. People are killing animals for their food and their skins. It’s very cruel. People are polluting the land, the water and the air. People must stop doing this. We must save the earth. Spring Rain Spring comes.lt's getting warmer and warmer.Everything is dry, trees, fields and even the air. Just then, it rains. lt's as soft as silk. lt washes the dirty of the earth and waters the plants and the fields. lt also waters people's hears. Farmers stand in the spring rain and smile. Spring rain is as dear as oil They seem to see the harvest time in autumn. Spring rain brings water to the air. It also brings hope to people. The bird and cat Once upon a time. There was a house. Beside the house there was a the bird cage. The bird cage fell down to the ground knocking the bird cage's door open. The bird then flew away. So the cat started to chase the bird and the dog chased the cat. However the bird flew on top of the tree. So the cat started to climb the tree and the dog barked at the cat. Before the cat could reach the bird, the bird flew away. this caused the cat to fall out of the tree. The dog then ran away, The bird quickly flew back into his cage and the man from the house carried him safely home. The Colour of Autumn Autumn comes , it gets cooler and cooler. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. You would say autumn is blue and white. Look ! Birds are flying from the north to the south. The leaves are yellow. Some are hanging on the trees, some are on the ground ,some are dancing in the wind. Someone would say autumn is yellow. There are so many fruits in autumn in Xinxing . Pears ,peaches. Mangos, oranges and so on. They’re fresh and healthy. Oh! I see. Autumn is a harvest season. Autumn is colourful. What a beautiful season ! The fun picture Let me say something about the picture. There are two tall trees in it. Under the tree there is a long chair. And there is an old man reading about swimming. Near the old man, there is a boy painting. I think he loves painting very much. Next to the painting boy, there are two boys playing football. They are happy. But the football is in the river. Near the river, there are three children fishing. They go fishing about twice a week and they always go to the People’s Park. They like fishing. In the river, there is clear water and some fish swimming in it. The sky is clear, the sun is shining brightly, the weather is warm.. There are two birds flying in the sky, they are happy. Wow, that is a fun picture! Dear friends, can you draw the picture? What is family ? Everybody has his own family. What is family? I don’t think everyone really knows. There are six letters in the word “ FAMILY ”. I think “ F ” means “father”, “A” means “and”, “ M ” means “mother” , “ I ” means“ I”, “ L” means “ love” and “ Y ” means “you”. So “ FAMILY ” is the short form of “ Father and mother , I love you.” Don’t you think so ? Father and mother love us , and we love father and mother . That’s a happy family. 我的小兔子 One day, my mother bought two little rabbits for me. I’m very happy. From that on, the two little rabbits became my good friends. They have two little ears, red eyes, with white and fat body. They’re marvellous. Everyday, they play with each other happily. One day, I couldn’t find them. I asked my mother: ”Where are they? ” My mother told me that She didn’t know. At last, I found them in the grass. They were very dirty. I was angry, but when I looked at their lovely faces, I was happy again. I love my little rabbits, and they love me. They are my good friends forever. My Family I have a happy family. My father is doctor. He works in a hospital. He likes listening to music and playing football.my mother is a teacher .She works in a school. She likes reading books and watching TV. She goes to work by bus. I am a student.I like doing sports.We often go hiking on the weekends together. My Family My name is Amy .This is a picture of my family. This is my father.He is an engineer. He likes reading newspapers. This is my mother. She is a teacher. She likes going shopping.This is my brother and this is me. We are students. We like swimming and watching TV. Mike’s Day My good friend is Mike. He’s a boy. He’s 12 years old. He’s a pupil. He goes to school from Monday to Friday. Every morning, He gets up at 6:40. He eats breakfast at 7:00. He goes to school at 7:30. His class begins at 8:00. He eats lunch at 12:00. He does sports at 4:30. He goes home at 5:30. He eats dinner at 6:30. He does homework at 7:30. He goes to bed at 9:30. A library A library used to be only a building with a lot of books and a very quiet place to me. I had never wanted to enter a traditional library because it was a boring place for a child. Since I became a senior high school student, I have more homework that requires me to find the latest information on a topic or some good ideas. So I got into the habit of going to the library, and I can't tell you how wonderful it is! There are so many interesting books I've never read, including novels and books about science and computers. Most important of all, there are even a lot of famous classic films, which are very popular. Now I also have something else to do when I'm in a library: studying. Studying together with a lot of people is a good experience. Now I'm never bored when I'm in a library. Do you want to see how much fun it is? Come with me to a library today! Cartoons There are many television programs in Taiwan today, from TV aeries, quiz shows, soap operas, movies to cartoons. Of all the programs, I like to watch cartoons the best, like Cartoon network, Disney and many others. I like to watch cartoons because they are funny and very interesting, especially when I am sad, tired or bored. I also like cartoon characters. They are so cute and vivid. We must use our imagination when we watch cartoons. Because they are often exaggerated, so you need to have a sense of humor. Don’t be against the traffic rules I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow,I know I can’t cross the road ,so I wait. If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never against the traffic rules. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”,小作者没有说一些空话,而是从自己的经历写起,叙述自己以什么方式去上学,在上学的路上是怎么做的,很形象。 小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大,那样很容易使文章显得空洞,而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。 Four Seasons There are four seasons in a year. They are spring、summer、fall and winter. I like spring. It is warm. It often rains. I can plant trees and flowers in spring. The spring is green. Summer is very hot. I can swim in the river. Fall is a good season. It is nice. I can fly kites in fall. I can eat many apples too. Winter is cold. I wish I can play snow and make a snowman in Beijing someday. Because it does not snow in Xinxing. I love all the seasons, because they are nice. How to be a Model Student I want to be a model student. What shall I do? I should be polite. I should study hard. I should capful and helpful. I should walk in the corridors. I should throw rubbish in the bin. I should be quiet in the library. I shouldn’t walk and run on the grass. I shouldn’t throw rubbish on the floor. I shouldn’t run in the corridors. I shouldn’t fight. I shouldn’t be noisy in the library. How to get to the science museum We are going to the science museum tomorrow. There is an old thing show in the Museum. Do you know how we can get to the science museum? The science museum is next to the People’s Park. It’s isn’t far from our school. So we can go there on foot .Walk straight to the west from our school, next turn left at the post office and walk for about 5 minutes, then turn right at traffic lights. You can find the People’s Park on the right . Walk straight, and you’ll see the science museum. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“怎样去科学博物馆”。怎样才算是一篇好作文呢?通过你的叙述,能让别人很容易找到博物馆,这应是最基本的要求。小作者在文中告诉我们什么呢?首先他写了去博物馆的位置,最后浓墨重彩,指明从学校去博物馆的具体路线,这条路线够清晰吧! 小朋友们在写这类作文的时候,总有些无从下手的感觉,不知从何说起。其实介绍路线,无非就是告诉他人某段路的起点和终点,还有就是如何从起点走到终点。要给他人说清楚,你自己首先得清楚,然后再通过自己的叙述,将路线清清楚楚得呈现出来。一定要注意行文中一些关键的地方,如在哪儿转弯,向哪儿转,经过哪些重要的交通标志或显眼的标志建筑等。这样,你就能说清,别人也能弄明白。 I can help do housework I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too? 【要领点评】 本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”,作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情,介绍自己的名字,所在年级及在家能做的家务,很详细,到位。 小朋友们在写作时,应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情,这样会避免在作文时显得太空,因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。 In The Kitchen This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里,作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉,有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等,以及妈妈在做饭,非常真实。 小朋友们,可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起,利用所学的句子,描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。 本文档由香当网(https://www.xiangdang.net)用户上传

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