小学英语六年级作文范文-节假日旅行计划或回忆


    In the park It is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many trees and flowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He is reading a book carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. It’s a poor mouse. 【要领点评】 写法:这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的活动还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的景色。 时态:这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态,由于本单元的语法项目是现在进行时,因此,描述的重点要放在现在进行时态上。 句型:一般现在时:主语+谓语+其他 现在进行时:(1)What +be (am,is ,are)+主语+v.-ing+其他? (2)主语+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。 Last Weekend I had a happy weekend last week. On Saturday morning, I watched TV and helped my mother wash clothes. In the afternoon, I cleaned three bedrooms in my house-- mine, my parents’ and my brother’s. On Sunday, I played football in the park. Then I went to my grandparents’ house. Grandpa played the piano! The whole family was so happy. Later, we wanted to swim. But it was too cold. This was last weekend. This is my classroom , it is very nice. I like my classroom very much . Do you have a nice classroom, too ? Let’s have a nice day It’s Sunday tomorrow .I’m going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow morning .We are going to look for some good books .We all like reading books .We are going to eat our lunch at the restaurant. I like chicken, beef and vegetables .After lunch, we are going to the Summer Palace by bus. We are going to play near the Kunming Lake. Maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake .Wow, that will be relaxing. We are coming back at 5pm. 【要领点评】 怎样才称得上是“美好的一天”?有两点不能忘记,一是安排得充实,二是安排得有意义。这两点小作者无疑都想到了,上午去书店看书买书,中午在饭店吃饭,下午去颐和园玩耍、划船,丰富多彩!文章以时间为线索,叙述清楚,文笔也很优美。 小朋友们在写这种叙事的文章时,要尽量给读者交代好时间、地点、人物和活动等,使文章有血有肉。要看好是写过去发生的事情,还是现在正在做的事情,或计划、打算要做的事情,以选择适当的句型。如果是写将来的事情,那么就要注意在表述时多用“be going to+动词原形”这种句型。还有一点也很重要,那就是故事的线索要交代好,让读者在阅读时对整个过程一目了然。 根据给出的材料,写一写Mike这个周末的活动计划。 Saturday Sunday read a magazine go to the zoo Buy a book Learn kongfu watch TV Mike is a student. He is my good friend. He is busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is going to learn Kungfu this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening. My Birthday Party Every year, when it’s birthday, my parents hold a party for me. They invite my friend to come to my house to celebrate my birthday. I can get many beautiful gifts every year. In my party, we can do many things: 1. Light the candles. 2. Sing a “Happy Birthday” song. 3. Make a wish. 4. Blow out the candles. 5. Cut off the cake. 6. Eat the cake. 7. Open the presents. 8. Sing and dance. 9. Watch videos or play other games. 10. Say goodbye with each other. That’s my birthday party, is it interesting? 【要领点评】 写法:这篇习作是按活动的顺序来写的,记叙了生日晚会的各项具体活动,比较全面。比较以前几个单元的写作写法,这个短文按活动顺序比较合适。 时态:这篇短文可以用三种时态来写: 1、一般将来时:主要说明生日晚会份的各项计划,都将如何进行。 2、一般现在时:主要说明习惯上如何度过每个生日。 3、一般过去时:主要说明你的生日晚会是如何进行的。 句型:invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事 注意:由于这篇短文很有局限性,所表达的大体上都基本相同,所以在书写的时候要注意结合自己的实际活动与真情实感去写。另外注意一些短语和单词的书写不要发生错误: eg.“吹蜡烛”要写成“blow out the candles”而不能写成“blow candles”。 My Days of the week I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”,小作者没有说一些空话,而是从自己的亲身经历写起,叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为,并特别强调了星期天的喜好,写得自然、流畅。 小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化,要依据提示,结合自己的实际,写自己身边熟悉的事情。 MY HAPPY WEEKEND OK, let me tell you something about my weekend. I am going to do many things and be very busy on the weekend. So I do my homework on Saturday morning. In the afternoon, I am going to do housework with my mother. Because I am a good girl, I am helpful at home. On Sunday morning, I am going to visit my grandparents with my parents. In the afternoon, we are going to the park together. Because there is a kite show. And my grandparents likes making kites. I think, we can see many beautiful kites there. And we are going to buy some beautiful kites, too. Then, we are going to fly the new kites, that’s fun. In the evening, we are going to have a big dinner. We are going to have fish for dinner. Because my grandparents likes eating fish. And my grandma cooks fish well. After dinner, we are going to watch TV together. We are going to be very happy. This is my happy weekend. I like my weekend very much. What about your weekend? Can you tell me? My holiday My holiday was good. I stayed at home for sometime. I went to Tianyi Square and bought same games. But one day, my monther, my younger brother and I went to Tianyi digital square to buy games. And I bought a new uniform in the evening. I'd like to have a glass of apple juice my monther bought it for me. I says, “ Thanks a lot. “ I bought some shoes. I want a pair of sports shoes. In the shop, the wonderful song added tour pleasure. I see the black shoes. my monther says, “ There are beautiful !“ My weekend There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time. 【要领点评】 写法:这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动,记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即:周六上午:舞蹈课→下午:做作业和帮妈妈做清洁→周日上午:看望祖父母→下午:阅读→晚上:看电视,与父母交流→感受:高兴和愉快。我们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写,先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事,有什么感受。再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚,最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。 时态:这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时(主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的);b.一般现在时(主要描述你经常怎样度过周末);c.一般将来时(主要描述你要怎样过周末)。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的,所以采用一般现在时来写。 注意:活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识,eg.(例)起床get up,和新知识,eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句,eg. “I often watch TV with my parents.”不要写成 “I often with my parents watch TV .” 词量上控制在50 ~ 80 之间。 My winter holiday Winter holiday is coming. I am so excited. In this winter holiday, I am going to take a trip with my parents by plane.We are going to Beijing. Then, I am going to go ice skating there. I am going to see the snow. I will play with the snow. I am going to make a snowman with my sister. Then we are going to visit the Great wall. At last, we are going to go back home by plane. That will be fun in the winter holiday! I can’t wait! 寒假很快就要到了,请你为你的寒假写一个计划。快点把你的计划写出来吧! My Winter Holiday It’s January. My winter holiday is coming. I am going to go to Thailand. I will go there by plane. I like the food in Thailand. It’s spicy and tasty. In the winter holiday, I am going to play basketball. I am going to paint pictures, too. I will help my mother do some housework. I will be very happy in my winter holiday. Tom’s Holiday Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday. 【要领点评】 写法:这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期里的活动,记叙了假期里去北京做了哪些活动以及对活动的感受。 时态:这篇文章可采用两种时态来写。由于本单元主要讲述的是一般过去时的用法,所以这里大部分我们采用一般过去时比较合适。 句型:主语+动词过去式+其他…… 主语+will+动词原形+其他…… 注意:活动的相关表达法可采用旧知识和新知识相结合去写,但要注意动词过去式的变化规则。例:eat 的过去式为ate,为不规则变化。 During the National Day, my parents took me to the Beidai River. It was my first time to see the sea.[中国^@教*%育出#版网] The blue waves beat on the rocks along the seashore and turned into spray(浪花). I couldn′t tell the sea from the sky, because they were so far away from us. When we sat on the seashore, the waves came and stroked(轻抚) our bodies. Then my father and I swam in the sea together, but my mother couldn′t swim at all. She stood there and watched us swimming. Suddenly, a hill-like wave(一股小山般的海浪) came over us. And I swallowed(吞下) a mouthful(一满口) of sea water. It was salty and bitter(苦的), but I was glad to taste real sea water for the first time.[来^&%源:中教网@~] Now I often think of the sea. How lovely the sea is! I hope I can go there again. 习作点评: 小作者写了自己去北戴河游玩的有趣经历。通过细节描写来展现海洋的特点:变幻无穷,充满险境。这也正是人们痴迷于海洋的地方。 写作练兵场:[中&国教育*%出#@版网] 请以“A travelling for sea/lake/river”为题,写一篇关于游玩江河湖海经历的英语作文。要求:50词左右。  The vacation 写一篇关于自己旅行的作文。 Have a trip! I travelled to Hainan island this summer holiday.[来~源:%中国教*@育出#版网] It was so beautiful there. The blue sea was around us. It′s very wide and very nice. The coconut milk was delicious. I liked it so much. I also liked to swim there. I was happy and I looked like a fish. I will also come here for another trip the next summer holiday, because it is a nice place with a beautiful scenery and deliciouss food. 词汇: swim, summer holiday(暑假), delicious(美味的)[来源:zzst#~e@p^&.com] 习作点评:[来源~:@中国^#教%育出版网] 文章描绘了海南岛的风景美食,以及自己愉快的心情,不愧是一篇美文。 佳作赏析:[中国教育出版^&@网*#] A visit to Beijing This summer vacation, I went to Beijing. It was a very great city! We went to the Great Wall first. Like its name, it was very great. We could see many mountains around and many foreigners. Then we went to visit Tian'anmen Square. It was also fantastic. There were so many people on the square, some were flying kites, some were taking photos. We lived in a small house in Beijing. It was a traditional Beijing building called “Four-Section Compound”. I enjoyed myself a lot during the summer vacation in Beijing. It was a great memory! 作文点评: 本篇作文详细叙述了自己去北京游玩的全过程。先是北京的the Great Wall,再去了Tian'anmen Square,最后又描述了Four-Section Compound,把读者带进了一场快乐的北京旅途,充满趣味 Visiting the Museum It was fine for traveling last Sunday . I showed Ann round the museum . she was surprised to see many old things , and she was interested in the King’s hat . She wanted to buy one. I told her it wasn ’t real . Ann kept asking me some other things. When she saw a thing with three legs and a strange top , she stopped to point at in and asked me , “ What is that ? ” “ It is a cup . ” I told her . Zoom’s Weekend Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired. 【要领点评】 写法:这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了Zoom的周末活动。 时态:这篇文章可以用三种时态来写,由于本单元主要讲的是一般过去时态,所以我们采用一般过去时态比较合适。 句型:主语+动词过去式+过去时间。 注意:活动的相关表达法采用新旧知识结合的方法,但要注意动词过去式的拼写。 我的假期 I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship. Then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast. At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth. This is a good holiday on the sun. I was happy that day, because I went to Tianyi Square and had a lot of fum. A Bad Cold I’m not feeling well today. I think I have a bad cold. I have a headache. I have a fever. My nose hurts. My throat is sore. I have to take some medicine and stay in bed. My parents will take me to the hospital. What a bad cold! I hope I can be better soon. And I want to go to school. 【要领点评】 写法:这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙了得病、病的症状、服药及治疗的全过程。写出了小作者希望快点康复,好去上学的愿望。 时态:这篇文章可以采用一般现在时来写。如果主语是第三人称单数,动词别忘加s。 句型:要用feel 加形容词,和表示“患某种疾病“的用法have+表示的疾病的单词。 注意:在表示疾病时,可以使用-ache,hurt 和sore。不要只用一个单词,以避免枯燥。要写出得病后的简单治疗及心情,不能只写得病的情况。常见病句:My nose is hurt。因为be后面要加形容词,而hurt是动词,因此应使用sore;东西放在床上要用on the bed。生病,是卧床不起,应该说stay in bed。 表示吃药时,通过用take some medicine,不用eat。 词汇量要控制在40~60之间。 A Farewell Party It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class There have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party. Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing. Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts fot her. And they will take a picture together. 【要领点评】 写法:这篇习作记叙了一个告别晚会。记叙了学年末的告别晚会上大家都表演了什么节目,以及晚会后大家要去看望刘芸的故事。 时态:这篇习作可采用三种时态来写。由于本单元主要出现的时态是一般将来时和现在进行时,所以这里我们才用一般现在时,现在进行时和一般将来时来写。 句型:一般现在时:主语+动词原形+其他。 现在进行时:主语+现在分词+其他。 一般将来时:主语+ be going to / will +动词原形+其他。 注意:由于本篇文章中所涉及的时态比较多,所以要注意一下时态的变化。学生们都在表演什么节目可以用现在进行时,将要去做什么,要用将来时。另外还要注意,一般现在时在肯定句中,主语是第三人称单数,谓语动词也要用第三人称单数。 A Field Trip It is a nice day. Our class will have a field trip today. The classmates are very excited. Look! Here we are. There’re a lot of activities to do. Amy is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some of the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food to eat. Oh, who’s that over there? It’s Miss White. What is she doing? She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I’ll never forget this field trip. 【要领点评】 写法:这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描述的,记叙了同学们分别在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。 时态:这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时,所以,这里我们采用现在进行时比较合适。 句型:××. is/are doing sth. She /He is doing sth. They’re doing sth. 注意:活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转换、描写感受时用一般现在时。 看图写作文。 题目:A Happy Day in Spring 提示:下图是Mr. Black 一家人在春天的某一天在野外游玩的场景。请用一般现在时描写图中所呈现出的内容。可作适当的想象和发挥。 要求: B条理清晰,意思明确、连贯,句子通顺,标点正确,书写工整、规范。 不少于70个单词。 A Happy Day in Spring It’s spring. It’s sunny and cloudy today. There are many big trees in the park. Mr. Black’s family has a picnic in a park. They bring much food there. They bring fruit, drink and bread. Mr. Black and Mrs. Black talk with each other. They talk very happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom likes flying a kite. The kite flies very well. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are very happy. Birthday My birthday is on Sunday. My parents are going to have a birthday party at home. I invite my friends to come to the party. At the party. They give me many small presents. Such as cards, picture books, pens. They sing Happy Birthday to me. My mother makes a big cake for me. I cut the cake into small pieces and give them out. we sing and dance. We have a good time at the party. Happy day Today I'm very happy,after I have breakfast,I go to park. It's a sunny day ,the bird is singing,I'm singing too.When I get to park,I see some girls are playing games ,so I join them.We play very happy.Then I have lunch with my friends.We both have a good time.what a happy day! 本文档由香当网(https://www.xiangdang.net)用户上传

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