08 兴趣爱篇
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假贝贝远澳利亚笔友Andrew写封邮件告诉关读书周事情想解情况法．请根提问回复封英文邮件．
From： Andrew@Australia． com
To： Beibei@Suzhou． com
We will have a Reading Week next month． Every student should read a book and share it with others． I＇m not sure which book to read． I remember you like reading very much． Here are some questions I want to ask you．
Can you tell me the reasons why reading is important？
How much time do you spend reading every day？
What kind of book do you like best？ Where do you get your books？
Can you tell me something about the book you＇ve read recently and what you have learned from the book？
I hope to hear from you soon．
Yours．
Andrew
注意：1．词数90左右开头结尾已写计入总词数
2．回复须包括点适发挥．全文连贯通．
Dear Andrew
I＇m glad you will have a Reading Week．
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I hope you will find my answers useful to you． Write to me any time if you have other questions．
Best wishes
Beibei
满分范文
Dear Andrew
I′m glad you will have a Reading Week． （引出话题）I think reading is really important because it＇s really useful．高分句型（观点） It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us relaxed．（作） I usually read for an hour every day． I like reading novels best．高分句型二 And I often borrow books from the school library． （做法）I have just finished a book about Robinson． It is a novel about how Robinson successfully survived after spending many years on a little island and finally went back to his family． From him I learned that whatever we met we should never give up．（朗读书籍启示）
I hope you will find my answers useful to you． Write to me any time if you have other questions．（希）
（二）
深入贯彻总书记关弘扬中华优秀传统文化讲话精神落实立德树根务2019年7月15日定西市教育局定西市语委办联合举办首届定西中学生诗词会会成功举办定西市次掀起全民读书热潮请Grow up with reading题根思维导图提示写篇英语短文中学生导报投稿谈谈阅读法建议家读书读书
求 1 点齐全适发挥
2 句子篇章准确连贯书写规范
3 词数80100词左右
4 文中出现考生真实姓名学校相关信息
参考词汇身心body and mind
满分范文
Grow up with reading
Reading plays an important part in our life Firstreading can open up our eyes The more we read the more we know about the outside world Second reading can make us cleverer and happier We can live a healthy and happy life by learning something useful and meaningful from the book Everyone can become cleverer by reading
However some students spend most of their time on Internet games instead of reading As a result they fall behind others in their schoolwork This is harmful to them
I would like to suggest that all of us should do more reading Let＇s grow up with reading
解析
1题干解读：该题目求包含图片里容写出阅读重作建议家读书读书等分点写条理性
2例文点评：例文通图片里容写出阅读重作建议家读书读书等讲述语句通条理清晰词组短语句型等运灵活
3高分亮点：词组：plays an important partopen upa healthy and happy lifebecome clevererinstead ofAs a resultfall behind等
句型：Reading plays an important part in our lifeThe more we read the more we know about the outside world We can live a healthy and happy life by learning something useful and meaningful from the bookAs a result they fall behind others in their schoolwork
点睛
书面表达：
首先认真审题清题目中求点然根提示容列出写作点点中表达例plays an important partopen upa healthy and happy lifebecome clevererinstead ofAs a resultfall behind等然紧扣点动笔写作写作程中注意句句段段间渡必时适运表示转折果列较等关系连词文章渡稳然流畅however仔细检查单词拼写错误标点符号误等检查语法结构否合理重复啰嗦语言写否正确词数否符合求等
（三）
假定李华收英国笔友 Harry 邮件获悉机器制作赛中获奖请根邮件容回复词数 80 左右
From Harry@hotmailcom
To Lihua 2019@163com
Dear Li Hua
I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just won the first place in a robotmaking competition I love robots They bring me great fun
What do you think of robots Do you want to have your own robot Why Looking forward to hearing from you
Yours
Harry
参考词汇：congratulation
祝贺注意事项：
1 回复邮件时适发挥邮件格式已出计入总词数
2 意思清楚表达通行文连贯书写规范
3 请勿文中真实姓名校名名
Dear Harry
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Yours
Li Hua
写作思路
类观点表达原说明类作文三轮中考复中进行系统训练 学生根日常授写作模板全文容结构进行合理安排
（1）结构：开头表示祝贺提示词
（2）正文点：表达兴趣说明原少两点（热点科技科技创新兴趣生活改变医疗救援 帮助等）
写作时单词拼写句子结构时态语态应该注意统草稿时需关键词高级句式关键结构甚注意事项等简单写题目旁边量规避错误
参考范文
Dear Harry
CongratulationsHow glad I am to share your good news
I think robots are helpful in many ways And in the future they will play more important roles in our daily life Plus I am dying to have a robot of my own I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home You see my grandparents are old and cannot move easily It can help them do some housework such as cooking cleaning the house and so on
Hoping you will make greater progress
Yours
Li Hua
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文娱体育户外等丰富彩课外活动生活增添生机活力请Afterclass Activities Make My Life Colorful题校园专栏写篇英文稿件
容包括：
1 简描述参加项课外活动
2 该课外活动带收获感受(交朋友放松)
写作求：
1 词数80词左右开头已写计入总词数
2 文章出现真实学校名称姓名
Afterclass Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays afterclass activities are becoming more and more important ________________________
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写作思路
篇话题作文写篇关Afterclass Activities Make My Life Colorful英文稿件鼓励学积极参加课外活动需发挥英语思维提供信息英语完整流畅表达出写作需第称注意种时态交运容点包括：简描述参加项课外活动时态般时参加课外活动带收获感受时态般现时般时总结心体会
参考范文
Afterclass Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays afterschool activities are becoming more and more important There are many different kinds of activities for example arts and sports I joined a volleyball club last year I am used to playing volleyball after school
In the volleyball club I＇ve made lots of friends We often play volleyball after school Whether it is hot or cold we never stop playing it I feel happy while playing volleyball And it is also a good way to relax myself I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future
All in all afterschool activities make my life more colorful and meaningful
名师点评
高分句型：I am used to playing volleyball after school 惯放学排球be used to doing sth惯做某事
高分句型二：And it is also a good way to relax myself 放松方法动词定式to relax myself作置定语
高分句型三：All in all afterschool activities make my life more colorful and meaningful 总课外活动生活更加丰富彩更意义
more colorful and meaningful作my life宾语补足语
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李华想参加China Daily 举办梦想职业体验题2019年夏令营活动请办Mr Smith写封介绍情况申请邮件容包括：1信息兴趣爱2梦想职业计划
写作求1词数90词左右开头结尾已出计入总词数
2 文中出现真实学校名称姓名
Dear Mr Smith
It＇s my pleasure to introduce myself to you ______________________________________________________________________________________
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I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply
Best wishes
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
写作思路
文属申请信办史密斯先生写封介绍情况申请邮件包含信息兴趣爱梦想职业计划根表达容确定准确运时态文意思连贯符合逻辑适增加容
参考范文
Dear Mr Smith
It＇s my pleasure to introduce myself to you．
My name is Li Hua．I like reading and writing．I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school．And I have a habit of keeping a dairy．I want to be a writer when I grow up．So After knowing your summer campI feel very excited because it＇s about dream job experience．If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream jobI will cherish this chance．After workI will spend more time making a summary．
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
名师点评
篇优秀作文完成试题规定务语言表达符合英语惯准确运时态谓致特亮点词句like doing spend+时间+doing sth keep a diary grow upIf I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream jobI will cherish this chance中if引导条件句般现时句般时增强逻辑关系增加文意思连贯词准确句子通行文连贯
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假设李华校英语报正喜欢天题中学生开展征文活动请根容提示英语写篇短文该报社投稿
1 喜欢星期五
2 原：
(1)天喜欢音乐课(喜欢音乐音乐老师音乐课趣)
(2) ……
求：
(1)写容必须包括点行补充点
(2)文中出现真实姓名校名
(3)容连贯进行合理拓展
(4)100词左右题目已写计入总词数
My Favorite Day
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写作思路
文篇材料作文求喜欢天题根出容提示写篇英语短文根材料知时态般现时称第称写作中注意理点防止漏写注意表达条理性连贯性注意犯语法句法搭配性错误握句式单词词汇句式丰富样避免句式单时注意语言表述应该符合语法结构造句应该符合英语表达惯细心复核检查确保正确误
参考范文
My Favorite Day
Everyone has their favorite day． My name is Li Hua．Now let me introduce my favorite day．My favorite day is Friday．Because it has my favorite music class．I have loved music since childhood．I also like my music teacher． Her music class is very interesting．There＇s a P．E． class on Fridays．I like playing football in PE class．I think it＇s good for my health．We can also develop friendship through sports．This is also a time which I can spend together with my parents．So I think this is the best day of the week and I love it best．
点睛
首先认真审题清题目中求点然根提示容列出写作点点中表达然紧扣点动笔写作写作程中注意句句段段间渡必时适运表示转折果列较等关系连词文章渡稳然流畅
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假设李华英国笔友Jack想结交更中国朋友请英文写封邮件男学陈东介绍容包括：
年龄外表
16岁高健壮
兴趣爱
喜欢运动阅读听音乐喜欢科目英语
性格
风趣幽默乐助容易相处
注意：
1 词数70左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 邮件开头结尾部分已出计入总词数
4 文中出现真实名校名
参考词汇：
高健壮tall and strong 运动do sports 听音乐listen to music
喜欢科目favourite subject 风趣幽默funny and humorous
乐做某事be ready to do sth 相处get on with
Dear Jack
How is everything going Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you
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I＇m sure you＇d like to have such a person as your friend With my best wishes
Yours
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jack
How is everything going Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you
Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you．He is a 16yearold boy．He has round face black hair and bright eyes．He is tall and strong．He likes smiling very much．（高分句型）（点介绍男学外貌特征．）He likes doingh sports．reading and listening to music．His favourite subject is English ．because he thinks it is very interesting．He is humorous and funny．He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others． 点二介绍学性格．He likes doing sports．reading and listening to music．His favourite subject is English．because he thinks it is very interesting．He also spends much time taking part in afterschool activities．（高分句型二） He likes winter very much because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun thingssuch as skating making snowman and so on．点三介绍学喜． His dream is becoming an English teacherbecause he wants his students to get good grades．点四介绍学理想． I＇m sure you＇d like to have such a person as your friend．With my best wishes（点五美祝愿．）
Yours
Li Hua
名师点评
高分句型
He likes smiling very much．句般现时陈述句．运短语like doing sth 喜欢做某事短语very much 非常．句翻译喜欢笑．
注意like加doing
高分句型二
He also spends much time taking part in afterschool activities．句般现时陈述句．运短语spend
some time （in）doing sth 花时间做某事．短语take part in 参加．句翻译花量时间参加课外活动．
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毕业学校学组开展初中阶段评组评活动假设Rainbow组组长zhangHong请组员Li Ming 进行综合素质评价写份素质报告
容包括：1 爱
2 优点(两条)
3 缺点存问题
4 建议(两条)
求：1 表达清楚语法正确文连贯
2 点必须包括相关信息适发挥出现真实班级姓名等
3 词数：少80 词 (容计入总词数)
Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow
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参考范文
Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow． Generally speaking he is a warm hearted and outgoing boy． He can also get on well with teachers and classmates． In his spare time he likes reading books on history． So he knows a lot of knowledge about history．（爱优点）
But as a famous saying goes Every coin has two sides sometimes he doesn＇t work hard enough on his lessons．（缺点存问题）
I advise him to spend more time on the subjects from now on．What＇s more he had better answer questions in class actively so that he can make great progress．高分句型（建议）
I＇m sure if he can try hard to improve himself who will be an excellent student soon．高分句型二（总结全文）
名师点评
高分句型
What＇s more he had better answer questions in class actively so that he can make great progress．更重课堂积极回答问题样取进步．
had better do sth做某事so that引导目状语句．
高分句型二
I＇m sure if he can try hard to improve himself who will be an excellent student soon．相信果努力提高快会成名优秀学生．if引导条件状语句．
（九）
第四届丝绸路宁夏国际马拉松赛2020年5月举行假定李华想成届马拉松赛名志愿者请英语组委会写封申请信容包括：
1优势：擅长英语性格开朗做事认真爱运动（少补充两点）
2承诺：力提供优质服务
注意：
1词数80左右（开头结尾已出计入总词数）
2适增加细节行文连贯
参考词汇：volunteer志愿者
Dear SirMadam
My name is Li Hua I＇m very glad that the 4hSilk Road International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May2020 _____________________________________________________________________________________
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I＇m looking forward to your early reply
Yours truly
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear SirMadam
My name is Li Hua．I＇m very glad that the 4h Silk Road International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May2020．I＇d like to be a volunteer．
I＇m a girl of 15a middle school student．First of allI do well in English．高分句型I＇m outgoing．I take everything seriously．BesidesI am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before．高分句型二What＇s moreI＇m always ready to help others and good at working with people．（优势）I promise I＇ll try to offer my best service during the race．I will be very happy if I can be chosen as a volunteer．（承诺）
I＇m looking forward to your early reply．
Yours truly
Li Hua
名师点评
高分句型
First of allI do well in English．首先英语．
First of all首先
do well in……某方面干
高分句型二
BesidesI am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before．外体育感兴趣名志愿者．
be interested in …兴趣
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假李华想参加China Daily 举办梦想职业体验题2019年夏令营活动请办Mr Smith写封介绍情况申请邮件
容包括：1 信息兴趣爱
2 梦想职业计划
写作求：1 词数90词左右开头结尾已出计入总词数
2 文中出现真实学校名称姓名
Dear Mr Smith
It＇s my pleasure to introduce myself to you ______________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．
Best wishes
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Mr Smith
It＇s my pleasure to introduce myself to you（开篇点明题意）
My name is Li Hua I like reading and writing I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school （高分句型）．And I have a habit of keeping a dairy．I want to be a writer when I grow up．So After knowing your summer camp I feel very excited because it＇s about dream job experience．If I have this kind of oppotunity to experience my dream jobI will cherish this chance（高分句型二）．After workI will spend more time making a summary．（信息兴趣爱出发进行介绍）
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．（结尾出期）
Best wishes
（十）
假设李华英国笔友Jack想结交更中国朋友请英文写封邮件男学陈东介绍容包括：
年龄外表
16岁高健壮
兴趣爱
喜欢运动阅读听音乐喜欢科目英语
性格
风趣幽默乐助容易相处
注意：
1 词数70左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 邮件开头结尾部分已出计入总词数
4 文中出现真实名校名
参考词汇：
高健壮tall and strong 运动do sports 听音乐listen to music
喜欢科目favorite subject 风趣幽默funny and humorous
乐做某事be ready to do sth 相处get on with
Dear Jack
How is everything going Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I＇m sure you＇d like to have such a person as your friend With my best wishes
Yours
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jack
How is everything going？Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you He is a 16yearold boy He has round face black hair and bright eyes He is tall and strong He likes smiling very much（高分句型）（点介绍男学外貌特征）He likes doing sports reading and listening to music His favorite subject is English because he thinks it is very interesting He is humorous and funny He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others 点二介绍学性格 He likes doing sports reading and listening to music His favorite subject is English because he thinks it is very interesting He also spends much time taking part in afterschool activities（高分句型二） He likes winter very much because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun thingssuch as skating making snowman and so on点三介绍学喜 His dream is becoming an English teacher because he wants his students to get good grades 点四介绍学理想 I＇m sure you＇d like to have such a person as your friend．With my best wishes（点五美祝愿）
Yours
Li Hua
名师点评
高分句型
He likes smiling very much．句般现时陈述句．运短语like doing sth 喜欢做某事短语very much 非常．句翻译喜欢笑
注意like加doing
高分句型二
He also spends much time taking part in afterschool activities．句般现时陈述句运短语spend some time （in）doing sth 花时间做某事短语take part in 参加句翻译花量时间参加课外活动
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假贝贝远澳利亚笔友Andrew写封邮件告诉关读书周事情想解情况法．请根提问回复封英文邮件．
From： Andrew@Australia． com
To： Beibei@Suzhou． com
We will have a Reading Week next month． Every student should read a book and share it with others． I＇m not sure which book to read． I remember you like reading very much． Here are some questions I want to ask you．
Can you tell me the reasons why reading is important？
How much time do you spend reading every day？
What kind of book do you like best？ Where do you get your books？
Can you tell me something about the book you＇ve read recently and what you have learned from the book？
I hope to hear from you soon．
Yours．
Andrew
注意：1．词数90左右开头结尾已写计入总词数
2．回复须包括点适发挥．全文连贯通．
Dear Andrew
I＇m glad you will have a Reading Week．
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I hope you will find my answers useful to you． Write to me any time if you have other questions．
Best wishes
Beibei
满分范文
Dear Andrew
I′m glad you will have a Reading Week． （引出话题）I think reading is really important because it＇s really useful．高分句型（观点） It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us relaxed．（作） I usually read for an hour every day． I like reading novels best．高分句型二 And I often borrow books from the school library． （做法）I have just finished a book about Robinson． It is a novel about how Robinson successfully survived after spending many years on a little island and finally went back to his family． From him I learned that whatever we met we should never give up．（朗读书籍启示）
I hope you will find my answers useful to you． Write to me any time if you have other questions．（希）
（二）
深入贯彻总书记关弘扬中华优秀传统文化讲话精神落实立德树根务2019年7月15日定西市教育局定西市语委办联合举办首届定西中学生诗词会会成功举办定西市次掀起全民读书热潮请Grow up with reading题根思维导图提示写篇英语短文中学生导报投稿谈谈阅读法建议家读书读书
求 1 点齐全适发挥
2 句子篇章准确连贯书写规范
3 词数80100词左右
4 文中出现考生真实姓名学校相关信息
参考词汇身心body and mind
满分范文
Grow up with reading
Reading plays an important part in our life Firstreading can open up our eyes The more we read the more we know about the outside world Second reading can make us cleverer and happier We can live a healthy and happy life by learning something useful and meaningful from the book Everyone can become cleverer by reading
However some students spend most of their time on Internet games instead of reading As a result they fall behind others in their schoolwork This is harmful to them
I would like to suggest that all of us should do more reading Let＇s grow up with reading
解析
1题干解读：该题目求包含图片里容写出阅读重作建议家读书读书等分点写条理性
2例文点评：例文通图片里容写出阅读重作建议家读书读书等讲述语句通条理清晰词组短语句型等运灵活
3高分亮点：词组：plays an important partopen upa healthy and happy lifebecome clevererinstead ofAs a resultfall behind等
句型：Reading plays an important part in our lifeThe more we read the more we know about the outside world We can live a healthy and happy life by learning something useful and meaningful from the bookAs a result they fall behind others in their schoolwork
点睛
书面表达：
首先认真审题清题目中求点然根提示容列出写作点点中表达例plays an important partopen upa healthy and happy lifebecome clevererinstead ofAs a resultfall behind等然紧扣点动笔写作写作程中注意句句段段间渡必时适运表示转折果列较等关系连词文章渡稳然流畅however仔细检查单词拼写错误标点符号误等检查语法结构否合理重复啰嗦语言写否正确词数否符合求等
（三）
假定李华收英国笔友 Harry 邮件获悉机器制作赛中获奖请根邮件容回复词数 80 左右
From Harry@hotmailcom
To Lihua 2019@163com
Dear Li Hua
I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just won the first place in a robotmaking competition I love robots They bring me great fun
What do you think of robots Do you want to have your own robot Why Looking forward to hearing from you
Yours
Harry
参考词汇：congratulation
祝贺注意事项：
1 回复邮件时适发挥邮件格式已出计入总词数
2 意思清楚表达通行文连贯书写规范
3 请勿文中真实姓名校名名
Dear Harry
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Yours
Li Hua
写作思路
类观点表达原说明类作文三轮中考复中进行系统训练 学生根日常授写作模板全文容结构进行合理安排
（1）结构：开头表示祝贺提示词
（2）正文点：表达兴趣说明原少两点（热点科技科技创新兴趣生活改变医疗救援 帮助等）
写作时单词拼写句子结构时态语态应该注意统草稿时需关键词高级句式关键结构甚注意事项等简单写题目旁边量规避错误
参考范文
Dear Harry
CongratulationsHow glad I am to share your good news
I think robots are helpful in many ways And in the future they will play more important roles in our daily life Plus I am dying to have a robot of my own I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home You see my grandparents are old and cannot move easily It can help them do some housework such as cooking cleaning the house and so on
Hoping you will make greater progress
Yours
Li Hua
（四）
文娱体育户外等丰富彩课外活动生活增添生机活力请Afterclass Activities Make My Life Colorful题校园专栏写篇英文稿件
容包括：
1 简描述参加项课外活动
2 该课外活动带收获感受(交朋友放松)
写作求：
1 词数80词左右开头已写计入总词数
2 文章出现真实学校名称姓名
Afterclass Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays afterclass activities are becoming more and more important ________________________
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写作思路
篇话题作文写篇关Afterclass Activities Make My Life Colorful英文稿件鼓励学积极参加课外活动需发挥英语思维提供信息英语完整流畅表达出写作需第称注意种时态交运容点包括：简描述参加项课外活动时态般时参加课外活动带收获感受时态般现时般时总结心体会
参考范文
Afterclass Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays afterschool activities are becoming more and more important There are many different kinds of activities for example arts and sports I joined a volleyball club last year I am used to playing volleyball after school
In the volleyball club I＇ve made lots of friends We often play volleyball after school Whether it is hot or cold we never stop playing it I feel happy while playing volleyball And it is also a good way to relax myself I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future
All in all afterschool activities make my life more colorful and meaningful
名师点评
高分句型：I am used to playing volleyball after school 惯放学排球be used to doing sth惯做某事
高分句型二：And it is also a good way to relax myself 放松方法动词定式to relax myself作置定语
高分句型三：All in all afterschool activities make my life more colorful and meaningful 总课外活动生活更加丰富彩更意义
more colorful and meaningful作my life宾语补足语
（五）
李华想参加China Daily 举办梦想职业体验题2019年夏令营活动请办Mr Smith写封介绍情况申请邮件容包括：1信息兴趣爱2梦想职业计划
写作求1词数90词左右开头结尾已出计入总词数
2 文中出现真实学校名称姓名
Dear Mr Smith
It＇s my pleasure to introduce myself to you ______________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply
Best wishes
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
写作思路
文属申请信办史密斯先生写封介绍情况申请邮件包含信息兴趣爱梦想职业计划根表达容确定准确运时态文意思连贯符合逻辑适增加容
参考范文
Dear Mr Smith
It＇s my pleasure to introduce myself to you．
My name is Li Hua．I like reading and writing．I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school．And I have a habit of keeping a dairy．I want to be a writer when I grow up．So After knowing your summer campI feel very excited because it＇s about dream job experience．If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream jobI will cherish this chance．After workI will spend more time making a summary．
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
名师点评
篇优秀作文完成试题规定务语言表达符合英语惯准确运时态谓致特亮点词句like doing spend+时间+doing sth keep a diary grow upIf I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream jobI will cherish this chance中if引导条件句般现时句般时增强逻辑关系增加文意思连贯词准确句子通行文连贯
（六）
假设李华校英语报正喜欢天题中学生开展征文活动请根容提示英语写篇短文该报社投稿
1 喜欢星期五
2 原：
(1)天喜欢音乐课(喜欢音乐音乐老师音乐课趣)
(2) ……
求：
(1)写容必须包括点行补充点
(2)文中出现真实姓名校名
(3)容连贯进行合理拓展
(4)100词左右题目已写计入总词数
My Favorite Day
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写作思路
文篇材料作文求喜欢天题根出容提示写篇英语短文根材料知时态般现时称第称写作中注意理点防止漏写注意表达条理性连贯性注意犯语法句法搭配性错误握句式单词词汇句式丰富样避免句式单时注意语言表述应该符合语法结构造句应该符合英语表达惯细心复核检查确保正确误
参考范文
My Favorite Day
Everyone has their favorite day． My name is Li Hua．Now let me introduce my favorite day．My favorite day is Friday．Because it has my favorite music class．I have loved music since childhood．I also like my music teacher． Her music class is very interesting．There＇s a P．E． class on Fridays．I like playing football in PE class．I think it＇s good for my health．We can also develop friendship through sports．This is also a time which I can spend together with my parents．So I think this is the best day of the week and I love it best．
点睛
首先认真审题清题目中求点然根提示容列出写作点点中表达然紧扣点动笔写作写作程中注意句句段段间渡必时适运表示转折果列较等关系连词文章渡稳然流畅
（七）
假设李华英国笔友Jack想结交更中国朋友请英文写封邮件男学陈东介绍容包括：
年龄外表
16岁高健壮
兴趣爱
喜欢运动阅读听音乐喜欢科目英语
性格
风趣幽默乐助容易相处
注意：
1 词数70左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 邮件开头结尾部分已出计入总词数
4 文中出现真实名校名
参考词汇：
高健壮tall and strong 运动do sports 听音乐listen to music
喜欢科目favourite subject 风趣幽默funny and humorous
乐做某事be ready to do sth 相处get on with
Dear Jack
How is everything going Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I＇m sure you＇d like to have such a person as your friend With my best wishes
Yours
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jack
How is everything going Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you
Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you．He is a 16yearold boy．He has round face black hair and bright eyes．He is tall and strong．He likes smiling very much．（高分句型）（点介绍男学外貌特征．）He likes doingh sports．reading and listening to music．His favourite subject is English ．because he thinks it is very interesting．He is humorous and funny．He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others． 点二介绍学性格．He likes doing sports．reading and listening to music．His favourite subject is English．because he thinks it is very interesting．He also spends much time taking part in afterschool activities．（高分句型二） He likes winter very much because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun thingssuch as skating making snowman and so on．点三介绍学喜． His dream is becoming an English teacherbecause he wants his students to get good grades．点四介绍学理想． I＇m sure you＇d like to have such a person as your friend．With my best wishes（点五美祝愿．）
Yours
Li Hua
名师点评
高分句型
He likes smiling very much．句般现时陈述句．运短语like doing sth 喜欢做某事短语very much 非常．句翻译喜欢笑．
注意like加doing
高分句型二
He also spends much time taking part in afterschool activities．句般现时陈述句．运短语spend
some time （in）doing sth 花时间做某事．短语take part in 参加．句翻译花量时间参加课外活动．
（八）
毕业学校学组开展初中阶段评组评活动假设Rainbow组组长zhangHong请组员Li Ming 进行综合素质评价写份素质报告
容包括：1 爱
2 优点(两条)
3 缺点存问题
4 建议(两条)
求：1 表达清楚语法正确文连贯
2 点必须包括相关信息适发挥出现真实班级姓名等
3 词数：少80 词 (容计入总词数)
Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow
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参考范文
Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow． Generally speaking he is a warm hearted and outgoing boy． He can also get on well with teachers and classmates． In his spare time he likes reading books on history． So he knows a lot of knowledge about history．（爱优点）
But as a famous saying goes Every coin has two sides sometimes he doesn＇t work hard enough on his lessons．（缺点存问题）
I advise him to spend more time on the subjects from now on．What＇s more he had better answer questions in class actively so that he can make great progress．高分句型（建议）
I＇m sure if he can try hard to improve himself who will be an excellent student soon．高分句型二（总结全文）
名师点评
高分句型
What＇s more he had better answer questions in class actively so that he can make great progress．更重课堂积极回答问题样取进步．
had better do sth做某事so that引导目状语句．
高分句型二
I＇m sure if he can try hard to improve himself who will be an excellent student soon．相信果努力提高快会成名优秀学生．if引导条件状语句．
（九）
第四届丝绸路宁夏国际马拉松赛2020年5月举行假定李华想成届马拉松赛名志愿者请英语组委会写封申请信容包括：
1优势：擅长英语性格开朗做事认真爱运动（少补充两点）
2承诺：力提供优质服务
注意：
1词数80左右（开头结尾已出计入总词数）
2适增加细节行文连贯
参考词汇：volunteer志愿者
Dear SirMadam
My name is Li Hua I＇m very glad that the 4hSilk Road International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May2020 _____________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________
I＇m looking forward to your early reply
Yours truly
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear SirMadam
My name is Li Hua．I＇m very glad that the 4h Silk Road International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May2020．I＇d like to be a volunteer．
I＇m a girl of 15a middle school student．First of allI do well in English．高分句型I＇m outgoing．I take everything seriously．BesidesI am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before．高分句型二What＇s moreI＇m always ready to help others and good at working with people．（优势）I promise I＇ll try to offer my best service during the race．I will be very happy if I can be chosen as a volunteer．（承诺）
I＇m looking forward to your early reply．
Yours truly
Li Hua
名师点评
高分句型
First of allI do well in English．首先英语．
First of all首先
do well in……某方面干
高分句型二
BesidesI am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before．外体育感兴趣名志愿者．
be interested in …兴趣
（十）
假李华想参加China Daily 举办梦想职业体验题2019年夏令营活动请办Mr Smith写封介绍情况申请邮件
容包括：1 信息兴趣爱
2 梦想职业计划
写作求：1 词数90词左右开头结尾已出计入总词数
2 文中出现真实学校名称姓名
Dear Mr Smith
It＇s my pleasure to introduce myself to you ______________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．
Best wishes
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Mr Smith
It＇s my pleasure to introduce myself to you（开篇点明题意）
My name is Li Hua I like reading and writing I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school （高分句型）．And I have a habit of keeping a dairy．I want to be a writer when I grow up．So After knowing your summer camp I feel very excited because it＇s about dream job experience．If I have this kind of oppotunity to experience my dream jobI will cherish this chance（高分句型二）．After workI will spend more time making a summary．（信息兴趣爱出发进行介绍）
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．（结尾出期）
Best wishes
（十）
假设李华英国笔友Jack想结交更中国朋友请英文写封邮件男学陈东介绍容包括：
年龄外表
16岁高健壮
兴趣爱
喜欢运动阅读听音乐喜欢科目英语
性格
风趣幽默乐助容易相处
注意：
1 词数70左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
3 邮件开头结尾部分已出计入总词数
4 文中出现真实名校名
参考词汇：
高健壮tall and strong 运动do sports 听音乐listen to music
喜欢科目favorite subject 风趣幽默funny and humorous
乐做某事be ready to do sth 相处get on with
Dear Jack
How is everything going Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I＇m sure you＇d like to have such a person as your friend With my best wishes
Yours
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jack
How is everything going？Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you He is a 16yearold boy He has round face black hair and bright eyes He is tall and strong He likes smiling very much（高分句型）（点介绍男学外貌特征）He likes doing sports reading and listening to music His favorite subject is English because he thinks it is very interesting He is humorous and funny He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others 点二介绍学性格 He likes doing sports reading and listening to music His favorite subject is English because he thinks it is very interesting He also spends much time taking part in afterschool activities（高分句型二） He likes winter very much because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun thingssuch as skating making snowman and so on点三介绍学喜 His dream is becoming an English teacher because he wants his students to get good grades 点四介绍学理想 I＇m sure you＇d like to have such a person as your friend．With my best wishes（点五美祝愿）
Yours
Li Hua
名师点评
高分句型
He likes smiling very much．句般现时陈述句．运短语like doing sth 喜欢做某事短语very much 非常．句翻译喜欢笑
注意like加doing
高分句型二
He also spends much time taking part in afterschool activities．句般现时陈述句运短语spend some time （in）doing sth 花时间做某事短语take part in 参加句翻译花量时间参加课外活动
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